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* AdultFear:
** Misato finding her ward Shinji brutally beaten when she was at work.
** Chapter 9 has Misato watching over the video screen as Asuka climbs into bed with Shinji, after she admitted to beating and raping him, and realizing that that's the only thing that can calm him down in the state he's in.
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* BabiesEverAfter: In the final chapter, [[spoiler: Shinji and Asuka officially renew their relationship and have at least two children together]].


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* BrokenPedestal: Played with. Shinji's friends find out that he's not really the hero they thought he was, but they try to give him the benefit of the doubt anyway.


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* PetTheDog: Deconstructed. It’s revealed that Asuka would sometimes try to smooth things over with Shinji by getting him treats when she felt especially bad about her treatment of him. She later admits that it never actually improved their relationship or caused her to let up her usual behavior.

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* VillainRespect: While he's too AxCrazy for this to actually protect anyone, Dimitri admits that Shinji has balls.
** Gendo goes "SoProudOfYou" for Shinji for the first time after being informed of what happened.

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* CompanionCube: With a twist. During Shinji’s stay at the hospital, Asuka does whatever she can to simulate his presence; from using his SDAT player, sleeping in his bed, and keeping his used clothes.




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* LetsWaitAWhile: Chapter 14 has a scene where Asuka gets into Shinji's bed and offers to have sex with him. He refuses, but lets her spend the night.


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* PrecisionFStrike: While meeting Ritsuko in the hospital, Shinji lets his emotions slip and openly calls his father Gendo a bastard.
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-->Terror, she was paralyzed in fear, her worn out brain darkened in utter fear; fear of herself, of what she was capable of. In her state of restless hysteria, the abused subconscious of the redhead activated it's most primitive defense mechanism. She attacked.\\

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-->Terror, she was paralyzed in fear, her worn out brain darkened in utter fear; fear of herself, of what she was capable of. In her state of restless hysteria, the abused subconscious of the redhead activated it's its most primitive defense mechanism. She attacked.\\



** Hikari shows signs of PTSD after [[spoiler:being nearly raped by one of the mercenaries that kidnapped she, Toji, and Kensuke]].

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** Hikari shows signs of PTSD after [[spoiler:being nearly raped by one of the mercenaries that kidnapped she, her, Toji, and Kensuke]].



* CrazyJealousGuy: Shinji suffers a nightmare where he sees Asuka kissing another boy. He gets utterly distraught and feels the impulse to kill both them. At the same time it severely disturbs him to feel so jealous and possessive.

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* CrazyJealousGuy: Shinji suffers a nightmare where he sees Asuka kissing another boy. He gets utterly distraught and feels the impulse to kill both of them. At the same time it severely disturbs him to feel so jealous and possessive.



** After masturbating over Asuka's comatose body Shinji was so sickened and disgusted with himself than he just want to die. He sat in some place and prayed for someone coming along and killing him.

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** After masturbating over Asuka's comatose body Shinji was so sickened and disgusted with himself than that he just want to die. He sat in some place and prayed for someone coming along and killing him.



** Deconstructed with Misato. She is NERV's Sub-commander now, and she hates it. Every day she has to deal with politicians, army officers, civil servants and mass media, attend mind-numbing meetings, stay late at work, oversee Tokyo-3's rebuilding...and because it she missed what was happening to her wards. She is sick of the feeling of being loaded with all troubles of the world, of being unable to relax in her own home and of having her wards physically and mentally wrecked.

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** Deconstructed with Misato. She is NERV's Sub-commander now, and she hates it. Every day she has to deal with politicians, army officers, civil servants and mass media, attend mind-numbing meetings, stay late at work, oversee Tokyo-3's rebuilding...and because of it she missed what was happening to her wards. She is sick of the feeling of being loaded with all troubles of the world, of being unable to relax in her own home and of having her wards physically and mentally wrecked.



* PlaguedByNightmares: [[OfficialCouple Shinji and Asuka]] had been suffering from awful nightmares during the series. Then [[DespairEventHorizon the]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt events]] of the movie happened and their nightmares got way, WAY worse. Shinji's nightmares consisted of him letting Asuka die and getting the whole of humanity killed. Asuka's nightmares features her mother's insanity and suicide, her MindRape, her extremely bloody death, and later the abuse that she heaped on Shinji after Third Impact.

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* PlaguedByNightmares: [[OfficialCouple Shinji and Asuka]] had been suffering from awful nightmares during the series. Then [[DespairEventHorizon the]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt events]] of the movie happened and their nightmares got way, WAY worse. Shinji's nightmares consisted of him letting Asuka die and getting the whole of humanity killed. Asuka's nightmares features feature her mother's insanity and suicide, her MindRape, her extremely bloody death, and later the abuse that she heaped on Shinji after Third Impact.



* {{Tsundere}}: Asuka becomes a a Type B during this story.

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* {{Tsundere}}: Asuka becomes a a Type B during this story.



* UnresolvedSexualTension: Shinji and Asuka loved each other but their psyches were so damaged they were seemed to be unable to open up to each other. Shinji thought Asuka hated him and Asuka thought he never cared about her and he just used her because she was convenient. At the same they were so codependent on each other neither of them would ever think of leaving and breaking off their relationship.

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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Shinji and Asuka loved each other but their psyches were so damaged they were seemed deemed to be unable to open up to each other. Shinji thought Asuka hated him and Asuka thought he never cared about her and he just used her because she was convenient. At the same they were so codependent on each other neither of them would ever think of leaving and breaking off their relationship.



** Shinji. Calling Asuka names is enough to make him losing control of himself. And when he does he is very frightening. Misato compared him once with a wolf defending his mate.

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** Shinji. Calling Asuka names is enough to make him losing lose control of himself. And when he does he is very frightening. Misato compared him once with a wolf defending his mate.



** After Third Impact Asuka spent most of time looking angry, depressed or sneering. When she smiled, though, Shinji thought that she was the most beautiful girl in the world.

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** After Third Impact Asuka spent most of her time looking angry, depressed or sneering. When she smiled, though, Shinji thought that she was the most beautiful girl in the world.
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* ReformedButRejected: Despite Asuka genuinely trying to change herself for the better, most of the cast sees her as an evil, abusive *** that enjoyed torturing Shinji, and at one point Asuka wonders if she has to almost die for her friends giving her a second chance. [[spoiler:Rei]] on particular refuses to believe that Asuka cares for Shinji, and it took some time for Misato to be convinced that she genuinely wants to change.

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* ReformedButRejected: Despite Asuka genuinely trying to change herself for the better, most of the cast sees her as an evil, abusive *** bitch that enjoyed torturing Shinji, and at one point Asuka wonders if she has to almost die for her friends giving her a second chance. [[spoiler:Rei]] on particular refuses to believe that Asuka cares for Shinji, and it took some time for Misato to be convinced that she genuinely wants to change.
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* ReformedButRejected: Despite Asuka genuinely trying to change herself for the better, most of the cast sees her as an evil, abusive bitch that enjoyed torturing Shinji, and at one point Asuka wonders if she has to almost die for her friends giving her a second chance. [[spoiler:Rei]] on particular refuses to believe that Asuka cares for Shinji, and it took some time for Misato to be convinced that she genuinely wants to change.

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* ReformedButRejected: Despite Asuka genuinely trying to change herself for the better, most of the cast sees her as an evil, abusive bitch *** that enjoyed torturing Shinji, and at one point Asuka wonders if she has to almost die for her friends giving her a second chance. [[spoiler:Rei]] on particular refuses to believe that Asuka cares for Shinji, and it took some time for Misato to be convinced that she genuinely wants to change.
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In late September 2018, the final chapter of the story was posted, bringing the main story of''Scar Tissue'' to a close. And in mid-2021, the entire story was revised by Deathbringer374 with the help of Richitzer and MisterHalt, correcting typos and improving story flow. Additionally, Deathbringer374 has announced he is working on an epilogue to the story, due to be released around Christmas 2021.

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In late September 2018, the final chapter of the story was posted, bringing the main story of''Scar Tissue'' to a close. And in mid-2021, the entire story was revised by Deathbringer374 with the help of Richitzer and MisterHalt, correcting typos and improving story flow. Additionally, Deathbringer374 has announced he is working on an epilogue to the story, due to be released around Christmas 2021.
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** As much as Shinji hates thinking about it, he and Gendo are not very different. Both were willing to unleash TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt after losing the woman that they loved.
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In late September 2018, the final chapter of the story was posted, bringing ''Scar Tissue'' to a close.

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In late September 2018, the final chapter of the story was posted, bringing ''Scar the main story of''Scar Tissue'' to a close.
close. And in mid-2021, the entire story was revised by Deathbringer374 with the help of Richitzer and MisterHalt, correcting typos and improving story flow. Additionally, Deathbringer374 has announced he is working on an epilogue to the story, due to be released around Christmas 2021.
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* ObliviousToLove: Asuka does not get why Shinji puts up with her despite all she has done to him. Shinji has convinced himself that Asuka hates him because pf all he has done to her. Misato wonders how both kids can be so dense.

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* ObliviousToLove: Asuka does not get why Shinji puts up with her despite all she has done to him. Shinji has convinced himself that Asuka hates him because pf of all he has done to her. Misato wonders how both kids can be so dense.
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The final chapter confirms that it was Kyoko that was Dimitri's boss, not Yui.


** Former NERV higher-ups like Ritsuko, and later [[spoiler:Gendo]] and possibly [[spoiler:Yui]] are working to make sure that the pilots can led happy lives in the future as a way of expiation.

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** Former NERV higher-ups like Ritsuko, and later [[spoiler:Gendo]] and possibly [[spoiler:Yui]] even [[spoiler:Kyoko]] are working to make sure that the pilots can led happy lives in the future as a way of expiation.
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* UnfamiliarCeiling: Lampshaded in chapter 1. At the beginning Shinji did not recognize the hospital's ceiling, but after so many months and fights he has become so familiarized with it that he is sick of seeing it.
-->Uhhg... This ceiling again...
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* PlaguedByNightmares: [[OfficialCouple Shinji and Asuka]] had been suffering from awful nightmares during the series. Then [[DespairEventHorizon the]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt events]] of the movie happened and their nightmares got way, WAY worse. Shinji's nightmares consisted of him letting Asuka dying and getting the whole of humanity killed. Asuka's nightmares features her mother's insanity and suicide, her MindRape, her extremely bloody death, and later the abuse that she heaped on Shinji after Third Impact.

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* PlaguedByNightmares: [[OfficialCouple Shinji and Asuka]] had been suffering from awful nightmares during the series. Then [[DespairEventHorizon the]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt events]] of the movie happened and their nightmares got way, WAY worse. Shinji's nightmares consisted of him letting Asuka dying die and getting the whole of humanity killed. Asuka's nightmares features her mother's insanity and suicide, her MindRape, her extremely bloody death, and later the abuse that she heaped on Shinji after Third Impact.
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* PlaguedByNightmares: [[OfficialCouple Shinji and Asuka]] had been suffering from awful nightmares during the series. Then [[DespairEventHorizon the]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt events]] of the movie happened and their nightmares got way, WAY worse. Shinji's nightmares consisted of him letting Asuka dying and getting the whole of humanity killed. Asuka's nightmares features her mother's insanity and suicide, her MindRape, her extremely bloody death, and later the abuse that she heaped on Shinji after Third Impact.
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misuse of this trope, moving to a TRS draft of a more fitting trope


* BadDreams: [[OfficialCouple Shinji and Asuka]] had been suffering from awful nightmares during the series. Then [[DespairEventHorizon the]] [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt events]] of the movie happened and their nightmares got way, WAY worse. Shinji's nightmares consisted of him letting Asuka dying and getting the whole of humanity killed. Asuka's nightmares features her mother's insanity and suicide, her MindRape, her extremely bloody death, and later the abuse that she heaped on Shinji after Third Impact.
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* NeverLiveItDown: Asuka's verbal abuses of Shinji during the eight months prior to her hospitalizing him include constantly rubbing his past actions and inactions in his face, with [[DudeShesLikeInAComa him masturbating over her]] as a prominent example.


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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Asuka's verbal abuses of Shinji during the eight months prior to her hospitalizing him include constantly rubbing his past actions and inactions in his face, with [[DudeShesLikeInAComa him masturbating over her]] as a prominent example.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Asuka makes it clear throughout the fic that she is not going to share Shinji with anyone, and even admits to feeling jealous towards their guardian Misato.

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* DopeSlap: In ch. 12 Asuka bops Shinji on the head after he ruins a bonding moment [[DeadpanSnarker Shinji with a smartass comment]].
* EarnYourHappyEnding: This fic is very dark, with several characters doing awful things or making grave judgement lapses and then regretting them and seeking atonement and expiation for them. However it looks like if there will be a light at the end of the tunnel.

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* DopeSlap: In ch. 12 Chapter 12, Asuka bops Shinji on the head after he ruins a bonding moment [[DeadpanSnarker Shinji with a smartass comment]].
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: The narrative makes a point of completely averting this trope, as Asuka's sexual abuse of Shinji is a source of angst for the both of them.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: This fic is very dark, with several characters doing awful things or making grave judgement lapses and then regretting them and seeking atonement and expiation for them. However it looks like if However, there will be a light at the end of the tunnel.
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* {{WAFF}}: In spite of how dark the story is, it has plenty of heart-warming parts. They are the best parts of the fic, actually.
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* AGodIAm: Deconstructed. The conscience inside Unit 02 ate the MP-Evas as well as the [[EldritchAbomination Lilith/Adam fusion]] to increase her power, and tried to talk Asuka into merging with her and becoming a god so she would never again feel pain. Then Shinji showed her his memories during Third Impact and Instrumentality when he had been given godly power, causing her excruciating pain. After realizing what being a god was like, she stopped wishing for it.

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* AGodIAm: AGodAmI: Deconstructed. The conscience inside Unit 02 ate the MP-Evas as well as the [[EldritchAbomination Lilith/Adam fusion]] to increase her power, and tried to talk Asuka into merging with her and becoming a god so she would never again feel pain. Then Shinji showed her his memories during Third Impact and Instrumentality when he had been given godly power, causing her excruciating pain. After realizing what being a god was like, she stopped wishing for it.
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* SupremeChef: Everyone loves Shinji's cooking and praise his skills.

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* CanonDiscontinuity: Maybe it is due to the long time between updates, but there are several continuity errors. For example, when [[spoiler:Gendo]] returns he knows that Shinji and Asuka have also returned, but two chapters later he is shocked to hear that Asuka is alive.



* DisContinuity: Maybe it is due to the long time between updates, but there are several continuity errors. For example, when [[spoiler:Gendo]] returns he knows that Shinji and Asuka have also returned, but two chapters later he is shocked to hear that Asuka is alive.

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'''Warning:''' The author can take a long time between updates (sometimes more than a year) so avoid declaring it dead.

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'''Warning:''' The author can take In late September 2018, the final chapter of the story was posted, bringing ''Scar Tissue'' to a long time between updates (sometimes more than a year) so avoid declaring it dead.
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* HeroicSacrifice: In the final chapter, [[spoiler:Unit 02, inhabited by the pseudo-Asuka in the core, sacrifices herself to send Shinji & Asuka away to safety while it uses every last ounce of power it has to shield the city from a 40-megaton thermonuclear explosion, saving the city and its people but being reduced to a petrified statue that then crumbles away to ashes]].
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Asuka's abuse of Shinji wasn't treated as funny as the series grew darker. Her tantrum in the movie's dream sequence is treated as terrifying and Shinji at this point has become frustrated with her mixed messages regarding her true feelings for him


* DomesticAbuse: [[PlayedForLaughs Unlike the original series]] the issue is treated seriously and explored in different ways.

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* DomesticAbuse: [[PlayedForLaughs Unlike the original series]] the The issue is treated seriously and explored in different ways.
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* BioAugmentation: Dmitri is a genetically engineered SuperSoldier.
* BlackBugRoom: Shinji's a dark void where he's mind-raped and tortured with visions of the Third Impact by his split personality every night.


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* CanNotSpitItOut: Shinji doesn’t dare to confess his feelings for a long while because Asuka seems to hate him. Asuka keeps quiet about her own feelings because she thinks she doesn’t deserve him.


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* ConvenientComa: Shinji's in a coma at the beginning of the story, courtesy of Asuka.
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* DefaceOfTheMoon: The Moon was permanently stained with blood during Third Impact... to Shinji's despair, since it means every future generation will remember his actions.
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* ForcefulKiss: A flashback in Chapter 10 shows Asuka giving Shinji a rough kiss after forcing him to masturbate to her.
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* FanDisservice: Chapter 8's description of Asuka pressuring Shinji into sex.
--> She had done that, licked his ear hungrily with a repulsive feeling of self satisfaction as he always recoiled in utter fear and self-disgust. She always did the same, make him feel helpless, insult him, claw at his skin and moan and sweat and ''bleed'' on top of him, without letting him so much as move.
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* DevotedToYou: As Misato puts it, Shinji is fine accepting a life of accepting Asuka's hatred, just so long as she's in it.

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