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* FellAsleepCrying: After Rarity tells her that [[spoiler: she doesn’t return her feelings]] and that she can’t stay with her, Applejack breaks down crying and falls asleep while Rarity hugs her and hums a comforting lullaby.

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* FellAsleepCrying: After Rarity tells her that [[spoiler: she doesn’t return her feelings]] feelings and that she can’t stay with her, her,]] Applejack breaks down crying and falls asleep while Rarity hugs her and hums a comforting lullaby.

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* SatelliteLoveInterest: [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer's entire role in the story is to head off criticism of the author after the central gay relationship doesn't work and Applejack ends the story married to a man and pregnant.]]



* SpiritedCompetitor: The minute she’s introduced to Rarity and Sweetie Belle, Rainbow Dash is incredibly eager to have a swimming race with them.

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* SpiritedCompetitor: The minute she’s introduced to Rarity and Sweetie Belle, Rainbow Dash is incredibly eager to have a swimming race with them.them.
* StrongerThanTheyLook: Though less dramatic than most instances of this trope, when Sweetie Belle attacks Applejack at their first meeting her punches are a joke, so she switches to using the full strength of her tail to lunge and becomes a problem.
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* AbsenteeActor: Pinkie Pie and Twilight are completely absent from the story.
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->It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping.\\
Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Some''one''.\\
What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.

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->It's ->''It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping.\\
Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Some''one''.\\
What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.
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-->-- The official description
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* GodivaHair: Invoked, when Applejack first sees Rarity's bare breasts after she starts examining her features, she covers them up with the mermaid's hair.

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* GodivaHair: Invoked, when When Applejack first sees Rarity's bare breasts after she starts examining her features, she covers them up with the mermaid's hair.
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Bittersweet? Yeah, right.


* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Applejack accepts that [[DidNotGetTheGirl she and Rarity can never be together]] and lets her return to the ocean. Years later, she and Rarity have friendly visits, Applejack is now married with a child on the way and Rarity is in a relationship with another mermaid: Sunset Shimmer]].

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* SpiritedCompetitor: The minute she’s introduced to Rarity and Sweetie Belle, Rainbow Dash is incredibly eager to have a swimming race with them.
* WhamLine: Delivered by both Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash in Chapter 6.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' Applejack…
--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' [[spoiler:Rarity can’t replace your parents.]]

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* SpiritedCompetitor: The minute she’s introduced to Rarity and Sweetie Belle, Rainbow Dash is incredibly eager to have a swimming race with them.
* WhamLine: Delivered by both Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash in Chapter 6.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' Applejack…
--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' [[spoiler:Rarity can’t replace your parents.]]
them.
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* ForegoneConclusion: With a title like ''Guppy Love'', it’s quite clear that [[spoiler:Applejack’s crush on Rarity wasn’t meant to be.]]
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* SlashFic: [[spoiler:Subverted, as it's nothing more a puppy love crush and Rarity doesn't feel the same way towards Applejack.]]

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* SlashFic: [[spoiler:Subverted, as it's nothing more a puppy love The fic centers around Applejack's crush and on Rarity. [[spoiler: [[DidntGetTheGirl But in the end]] it turns out Rarity doesn't feel the same way towards Applejack.reciprocate.]]

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we can't copy the fic's description for our description!! that's plagiarism!!


A humanized ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Shipping}} AlternateUniverseFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111840/PaulAsaran PaulAsaran]].

It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping.

Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Some''one''.

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A humanized ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Shipping}} AlternateUniverseFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111840/PaulAsaran PaulAsaran]].

It's
->It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping.

helping.\\
Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Some''one''.
Some''one''.\\



The now-completed story can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/456743/guppy-love here]].

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The now-completed story can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/456743/guppy-love here]].
Guppy Love]] is a humanized ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Shipping}} AlternateUniverseFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111840/PaulAsaran PaulAsaran]].
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* GodivaHair: Rarity, being a mermaid.

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* GodivaHair: Rarity, being a mermaid.Invoked, when Applejack first sees Rarity's bare breasts after she starts examining her features, she covers them up with the mermaid's hair.
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* SlashFic: Applejack develops a crush on Rarity. [[spoiler:Rarity doesn't feel the same way as it's a puppy love crush and Applejack's just clinging onto her as a coping mechanism for her dead parents.]]

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* SlashFic: Applejack develops [[spoiler:Subverted, as it's nothing more a puppy love crush on Rarity. [[spoiler:Rarity and Rarity doesn't feel the same way as it's a puppy love crush and Applejack's just clinging onto her as a coping mechanism for her dead parents.towards Applejack.]]
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* SlashFic: Applejack develops a crush on Rarity. [[spoiler:Rarity doesn't feel the same way as it's a puppy love crush and Applejack's just clinging onto her as a coping mechanism for her dead parents.]]
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* InnocentFanserviceGirl: Neither Rarity or Sweetie Belle wear bras. When learning to speak English, Applejack gets particularly flustered when Rarity asks about the word “breasts” and the purpose of clothing.

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* InnocentFanserviceGirl: Neither Rarity or Sweetie Belle wear bras. When learning to speak English, Applejack gets particularly flustered when Rarity curiously asks about the word “breasts” and the purpose of clothing.clothing. She tries not to stare as Rarity lifts and lowers her own while practicing saying the word. And fails.



* RoadsideSurgery: To keep Rarity and Sweetie Belle from being discovered by other humans, Fluttershy performs the surgery on Rarity’s injured tail on a rock near the lake the two mermaids hide in.

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* RoadsideSurgery: To keep Rarity and Sweetie Belle from being discovered by other humans, Fluttershy performs the surgery on Rarity’s injured tail Rarity lays on a rock near the lake the two mermaids hide in.in while Fluttershy performs the surgery on her injured tail.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: There are quite a few hints throughout the story that [[spoiler:Applejack’s crush is more shallow than genuine love.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: There are quite a few hints throughout the story that [[spoiler:Applejack’s crush is more shallow than genuine love.love]] and [[spoiler:Rarity doesn't feel the same way about her.]]
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* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: Unlike the myths and [[Film/Splash a certain famous mermaid movie]], neither Rarity nor Sweetie Belle’s tails turn into human legs when they’re out of the water, further negating Applejack’s desire for Rarity to stay.

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* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: Unlike the myths and [[Film/Splash a certain famous mermaid movie]], the movie ''{{Film/Splash}}'', neither Rarity nor Sweetie Belle’s tails turn into human legs when they’re out of the water, further negating Applejack’s desire for Rarity to stay.
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* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: Unlike the myths, neither Rarity nor Sweetie Belle’s tails turn into human legs when they’re out of the water, further negating Applejack’s desire for Rarity to stay.

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* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: Unlike the myths, myths and [[Film/Splash a certain famous mermaid movie]], neither Rarity nor Sweetie Belle’s tails turn into human legs when they’re out of the water, further negating Applejack’s desire for Rarity to stay.

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A humanized ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111840/PaulAsaran PaulAsaran]].

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A humanized ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Shipping}} AlternateUniverseFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111840/PaulAsaran PaulAsaran]].



* BittersweetEnding: Applejack accepts that [[DidNotGetTheGirl she and Rarity can never be together]] and lets her return to the ocean. Years later, she and Rarity have friendly visits, Applejack is now married with a child on the way and Rarity is in a relationship with another mermaid: [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer]].
* BrutalHonesty: Fluttershy and Rainbow force Applejack to accept the truth that Rarity can’t stay with her and that’s she’s unhealthily clinging onto her as a replacement for her deceased parents.

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* BittersweetEnding: Applejack [[spoiler:Applejack accepts that [[DidNotGetTheGirl she and Rarity can never be together]] and lets her return to the ocean. Years later, she and Rarity have friendly visits, Applejack is now married with a child on the way and Rarity is in a relationship with another mermaid: [[spoiler:Sunset Sunset Shimmer]].
* BrutalHonesty: Fluttershy and Rainbow [[spoiler: force Applejack to accept the truth that Rarity can’t stay with her and that’s she’s unhealthily clinging onto her as a replacement for her deceased parents.]]



* FellAsleepCrying: After Rarity tells her that she doesn’t return her feelings and that she can’t stay with her, Applejack breaks down crying and falls asleep while Rarity hugs her and hums a comforting lullaby.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: Applejack goes through all five stages in Chapter 6 when Fluttershy and Rainbow confront her about her puppy love crush on Rarity, forcing her to face the fact that she’ll have to leave once her injury’s healed.

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* FellAsleepCrying: After Rarity tells her that [[spoiler: she doesn’t return her feelings feelings]] and that she can’t stay with her, Applejack breaks down crying and falls asleep while Rarity hugs her and hums a comforting lullaby.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: Applejack goes through all five stages in Chapter 6 when [[spoiler: Fluttershy and Rainbow confront her about her puppy love crush on Rarity, forcing her to face the fact that she’ll have to leave once her injury’s healed.]]



* ForegoneConclusion: With a [[Pun punny]] title like ''Guppy Love'', it’s quite clear that Applejack’s crush on Rarity wasn’t meant to be.
* Foreshadowing: There are quite a few hints throughout the story that Applejack’s crush is more shallow than genuine love.

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* ForegoneConclusion: With a [[Pun punny]] title like ''Guppy Love'', it’s quite clear that Applejack’s [[spoiler:Applejack’s crush on Rarity wasn’t meant to be.
be.]]
* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: There are quite a few hints throughout the story that Applejack’s [[spoiler:Applejack’s crush is more shallow than genuine love.]]



* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: Unlike the myths and movies, neither Rarity nor Sweetie Belle’s tails turn into human legs when they’re out of the water, further negating Applejack’s desire for Rarity to stay.

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* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: Unlike the myths and movies, myths, neither Rarity nor Sweetie Belle’s tails turn into human legs when they’re out of the water, further negating Applejack’s desire for Rarity to stay.stay.
* RoadsideSurgery: To keep Rarity and Sweetie Belle from being discovered by other humans, Fluttershy performs the surgery on Rarity’s injured tail on a rock near the lake the two mermaids hide in.
* SpiritedCompetitor: The minute she’s introduced to Rarity and Sweetie Belle, Rainbow Dash is incredibly eager to have a swimming race with them.
* WhamLine: Delivered by both Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash in Chapter 6.
--> '''Fluttershy:''' Applejack…
--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' [[spoiler:Rarity can’t replace your parents.]]
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A humanized ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111840/PaulAsaran PaulAsaran]].

It's been a year since a tragic accident took Applejack's parents. A year, and she still doesn't know what to do with herself. Encouraged by friends and family, she decides to spend the summer vacation at Fluttershy's beach house on Splendora Island. She's not sure if it's helping.

Then, one night, she finds something injured on the beach. No, not something. Some''one''.

What starts as good intentions steadily grows into something else. Whether that something else is good for Applejack is another matter entirely.

The now-completed story can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/456743/guppy-love here]].

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!!This fic provides examples of:

* AbsenteeActor: Pinkie Pie and Twilight are completely absent from the story.
* BathtubMermaid: After finding her, Applejack places Rarity in one inside an abandoned aquarium.
* BittersweetEnding: Applejack accepts that [[DidNotGetTheGirl she and Rarity can never be together]] and lets her return to the ocean. Years later, she and Rarity have friendly visits, Applejack is now married with a child on the way and Rarity is in a relationship with another mermaid: [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer]].
* BrutalHonesty: Fluttershy and Rainbow force Applejack to accept the truth that Rarity can’t stay with her and that’s she’s unhealthily clinging onto her as a replacement for her deceased parents.
* TheCameo: [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer]] at the end as Rarity’s new girlfriend.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Applejack’s parents which leads to her travelling to Splendora Island to visit Fluttershy for the summer.
* FellAsleepCrying: After Rarity tells her that she doesn’t return her feelings and that she can’t stay with her, Applejack breaks down crying and falls asleep while Rarity hugs her and hums a comforting lullaby.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: Applejack goes through all five stages in Chapter 6 when Fluttershy and Rainbow confront her about her puppy love crush on Rarity, forcing her to face the fact that she’ll have to leave once her injury’s healed.
* FlorenceNightingaleEffect: The main story kicks off with Applejack finding Rarity unconscious on the beach with her tail injured from an orca attack and decides to take care of her.
* ForegoneConclusion: With a [[Pun punny]] title like ''Guppy Love'', it’s quite clear that Applejack’s crush on Rarity wasn’t meant to be.
* Foreshadowing: There are quite a few hints throughout the story that Applejack’s crush is more shallow than genuine love.
* GodivaHair: Rarity, being a mermaid.
* InnocentFanserviceGirl: Neither Rarity or Sweetie Belle wear bras. When learning to speak English, Applejack gets particularly flustered when Rarity asks about the word “breasts” and the purpose of clothing.
* LikeBrotherAndSister: Rarity and Sweetie Belle are not related in this story, rather they share a sibling-like bond with each other, having travelled together their whole lives.
* MySisterIsOffLimits: Sweetie Belle to Rarity.
* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: Unlike the myths and movies, neither Rarity nor Sweetie Belle’s tails turn into human legs when they’re out of the water, further negating Applejack’s desire for Rarity to stay.

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