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** When Makoto was about to summon a new member for [XXI: Universe], Alice recites the Summoning Incantation from ''LightNovel/FateZero''
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** When Makoto was about to summon a new member for [XXI: Universe], Alice recites the Summoning Incantation from ''LightNovel/FateZero''''Literature/FateZero''
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* InnocentCohabitation: Makoto lived with Izanami and Alice under the same roof before and even slept together in the same bed. Nothing happened between them.
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* InnocentCohabitation: [[spoiler: Lavenza]] is currently living with Makoto in an apartment.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Lily and Sandora both doesn't appreciate Alice's teasing of Jin. Alice milks it for all its worth.
** Elizabeth also doesn't appreciate the fact Makoto was in an InnocentCohabitation with Alice and Izanami.
** Elizabeth also doesn't appreciate the fact Makoto was in an InnocentCohabitation with Alice and Izanami.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: ClingyJealousGirl:
** Lily and Sandora both doesn't appreciate Alice's teasing of Jin. Alice milks it for all its worth.
** Elizabeth also doesn't appreciate the fact Makotowas in an InnocentCohabitation lived with Alice and Izanami.
** Lily and Sandora both doesn't appreciate Alice's teasing of Jin. Alice milks it for all its worth.
** Elizabeth also doesn't appreciate the fact Makoto
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12816337/1/Garden-s-Universe Garden's Universe]]'' is a ''VideoGame/Persona3'' and ''LightNovel/ProblemChildrenAreComingFromAnotherWorldArentThey'' crossover fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7748142/Yuuki-Itsuka Yuuki-Itsuka]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12816337/1/Garden-s-Universe Garden's Universe]]'' is a ''VideoGame/Persona3'' and ''LightNovel/ProblemChildrenAreComingFromAnotherWorldArentThey'' ''Literature/ProblemChildrenAreComingFromAnotherWorldArentThey'' crossover fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7748142/Yuuki-Itsuka Yuuki-Itsuka]]
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** Queen Halloween appears in Chapter 01. She doesn't make a proper appearance in the novels until ''[[LightNovel/ProblemChildrenAreComingFromAnotherWorldArentThey Mondaiji]]'s'' sequel, ''Last Embryo''
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** Queen Halloween appears in Chapter 01. She doesn't make a proper appearance in the novels until ''[[LightNovel/ProblemChildrenAreComingFromAnotherWorldArentThey ''[[Literature/ProblemChildrenAreComingFromAnotherWorldArentThey Mondaiji]]'s'' sequel, ''Last Embryo''
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** Cana and Makoto plays the same game that [[Manga/BungouStrayDogs A and Fydor]] played.
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** Cana and Makoto plays the same game that [[Manga/BungouStrayDogs [[Manga/BungoStrayDogs A and Fydor]] played.
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Ambiguity Index wick cleaning.
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* MismatchedEyes: Makoto is noted to have a gray left eye while his right eye is green. The green eye is apparently because of Cana.
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* Arc Villain:
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* Arc Villain: ArcVillain:
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* Arc Villain:
** Arc 1: [Hamelin]/Bakunawa
** Arc 2: Izanagi
** Arc 1: [Hamelin]/Bakunawa
** Arc 2: Izanagi
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* AttentionWhore: Kamoshida. He believes that he's the king of Shujin and doesn't like the fact that Makoto (Yuuki) is being admired by both students and teachers alike.
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* GiantFlyer: [[spoiler: Bakunawa is described as one. With an immesurable body and wings capable of blocking out the sky.]]
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* GiantFlyer: [[spoiler: Bakunawa is described as one. With an immesurable body and wings capable of blocking out the sky. Funnily enough, its human form is a 14 year old child.]]
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!!This work contains examples of:
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* InnocentCohabitation: [[spoiler: Lavenza]] is currently living with Makoto in an apartment.
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* GiantFlyer: [[spoiler: Bakunawa is described as one. With an immesurable body and wings capable of blocking out the sky.]]
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!!''Fragment Journey'' contains examples of:
* CoolTeacher: Makoto is described as such by Sadayo.
* OneSteveLimit: {{Averted}}. Both Nijima and Yuuki share the same first name: Makoto. Makoto (Yuuki) [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it.
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Has a side story called ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13628343/1/Fragment-Journey Fragment Journey]]'' which details Makoto's missing memories.
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* BathtubBonding: Shirayuki and Makoto have one in Chapter 11.
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** Chapter 10:
---> [[spoiler: If Yuuki Makoto becomes a [Last Embryo], then there is no stopping Little Garden's destruction.]]
---> [[spoiler: If Yuuki Makoto becomes a [Last Embryo], then there is no stopping Little Garden's destruction.]]
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* HonorBeforeReason: Makoto could've defeated Apolaki quite easily if he nulified his flames but refused to do so because it would disrespect his opponent.
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* CasanovaWannabe: Arsene though it can be noted that girls such as the female shopkeeper do get charmed, he moves on to flirting with other girls too quickly.
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* CasanovaWannabe: Arsene though it can be noted that girls such as the female shopkeeper do get charmed, it's just because he moves on to flirting with other girls too quickly.
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** Elizabeth also doesn't appreciate the fact Makoto was in an InnocentCohabitation with Alice and Izanami.
