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* WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld: Oddly enough, they've only been shown going to school in the first few chapters. After that, it's off to go power up the Mew Mew Tank, into space, into the past, and a [[SarcasmMode buttload of other things that are more important than school]].
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Many of the tropes that apply to ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'' also apply to this story. [[spoiler:[[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE]]!]] [[spoiler:AND IN THE PAST!]] [[spoiler:AND [[OverlyLongGag IN THE OCEAAANNN!]]~]]
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Many of the tropes that apply to ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'' also apply to this story. [[spoiler:[[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE]]!]] [[spoiler:AND IN THE PAST!]] [[spoiler:AND [[OverlyLongGag IN THE OCEAAANNN!]]~]]\n
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* AnimalStereotypes
* AnimalTalk: Almost every animal (and alien/predisite/chimera anima) can talk... and no one finds it weird at all.
** In one chapter, Pudding talks to a monkey, and the author explicitly states that the monkey doesn't reply "because it is a monkey". The monkey talks later in the chapter anyway.
* AnimeThemeSong: The author rewrote the original opening (badly), and it was actually sung for the Youtube parody.
* AnimalTalk: Almost every animal (and alien/predisite/chimera anima) can talk... and no one finds it weird at all.
** In one chapter, Pudding talks to a monkey, and the author explicitly states that the monkey doesn't reply "because it is a monkey". The monkey talks later in the chapter anyway.
* AnimeThemeSong: The author rewrote the original opening (badly), and it was actually sung for the Youtube parody.
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* AnimalTalk: Almost every animal (and alien/predisite/chimera anima) can talk... and no one finds it weird at
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* AnimeThemeSong: The author rewrote the original
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* ArrangedMarriage: Lord Uzumaki tries to force Nhu into one and almost succeeds.
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* AuthorCatchPhrase: "And it was true".
** Also, both in and out of the story, "ok" (which has been uttered an untold amount of times by different characters throughout the fic).
** Also, both in and out of the story, "ok" (which has been uttered an untold amount of times by different characters throughout the fic).
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* AuthorCatchPhrase: AuthorCatchPhrase:
** "And it was true".
**Also, both Both in and out of the story, "ok" (which has been uttered an untold amount of times by different characters throughout the fic).
** "And it was true".
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* AwesomeMcCoolName: Let me introduce you to Ciel Bloodhaven.
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* AwesomeMcCoolName: Let me introduce you to AwesomeMcCoolName:
** Ciel Bloodhaven.
** Ciel Bloodhaven.
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** Most of the Mew Mews have names that would be strange in their stated countries of origin.
*** A few particularly odd examples would be a pirate girl named Ant Farmer, a "beach" girl named Staplers, an Australian girl named Didgerydoo, a country girl named Sandwitch, a moon crab named Moon Crab, and a robot girl named Gutter.
*** A few particularly odd examples would be a pirate girl named Ant Farmer, a "beach" girl named Staplers, an Australian girl named Didgerydoo, a country girl named Sandwitch, a moon crab named Moon Crab, and a robot girl named Gutter.
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** Most of the Mew Mews have names that would be strange in their stated countries of origin.
***origin. A few particularly odd examples would be a pirate girl named Ant Farmer, a "beach" girl named Staplers, an Australian girl named Didgerydoo, a country girl named Sandwitch, a moon crab named Moon Crab, and a robot girl named Gutter.
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* BeachEpisode: Chapter 5.
* BeigeProse: Randomly.
* BeigeProse: Randomly.
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* {{Bishonen}}: Pretty much every guy but Tart.
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* CheerfulChild: Pudding.
* CluelessChickMagnet: Otachi.
** Ciel has the [[HoYay opposite problem]]...
* CluelessChickMagnet: Otachi.
** Ciel has the [[HoYay opposite problem]]...
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** Ciel has the [[HoYay opposite problem]]...
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* ShrinkingViolet: Lettuce.
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* SoHappyTogether: Mint and Big D.
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* SomethingWeForgot
* StagesOfMonsterGrief: Ciel skips most of these.
* StagesOfMonsterGrief: Ciel skips most of these.
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* TheAlcoholic: Ciel.
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* UnusualEars
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* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma
* [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse What Happened to the Mouse:]] Suprisingly, for the most apart, averted. Some plot elements seemed to just dissolve over time, the most jarring of which being [[spoiler: Ichigo]]'s disappearance, though time will tell if this is ever directly brought up and resolved.
** Surprisingly, it was.
** [[ItMakesSenseinContext Bob the hamster]] seems to stick around for quite awhile, which is a feat given the writer's [[AttentionDeficitCreatorDisorder seemingly short attention span]].
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Hell, Author?]] In Chapter 30, the author said that Lettuce had to dress as a waitress, and was nervous because she had never waited on people before; though if anybody knows ANYTHING about ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'', they would know that the girls are, indeed, waitresses.
* [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse What Happened to the Mouse:]] Suprisingly, for the most apart, averted. Some plot elements seemed to just dissolve over time, the most jarring of which being [[spoiler: Ichigo]]'s disappearance, though time will tell if this is ever directly brought up and resolved.
** Surprisingly, it was.
** [[ItMakesSenseinContext Bob the hamster]] seems to stick around for quite awhile, which is a feat given the writer's [[AttentionDeficitCreatorDisorder seemingly short attention span]].
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Hell, Author?]] In Chapter 30, the author said that Lettuce had to dress as a waitress, and was nervous because she had never waited on people before; though if anybody knows ANYTHING about ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'', they would know that the girls are, indeed, waitresses.
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* [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse What Happened to the Mouse:]] Suprisingly, for the most apart, averted. Some plot elements seemed to just dissolve over time, the most jarring of which being [[spoiler: Ichigo]]'s disappearance, though time will tell if this is ever directly brought up and resolved.
** Surprisingly, it was.
** [[ItMakesSenseinContext Bob the hamster]] seems to stick around for quite awhile, which is a feat given the writer's [[AttentionDeficitCreatorDisorder seemingly short attention span]].
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Hell, Author?]] In Chapter 30, the author said that Lettuce had to dress as a waitress, and was nervous because she had never waited on people before; though if anybody knows ANYTHING about ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'', they would know that the girls are, indeed, waitresses.
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* [[WritersCannotDoMath You Fail Math Forever]]: In Ciel's backstory special, he starts as a 14 year old. "400 years later he was almost 401." Technically, he should be 414. To add to that, in another chapter he tells Pudding that he's currently 401. At that point, Otachi is 16, and when Otachi's mom was pregnant with him, that's when the special says Ciel's 401.. so he really should be 430 by the time he tells Pudding his age.
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* [[WritersCannotDoMath You Fail Math Forever]]: WritersCannotDoMath:
** In Ciel's backstory special, he starts as a 14 year old. "400 years later he was almost 401." Technically, he should be 414. To add to that, in another chapter he tells Pudding that he's currently 401. At that point, Otachi is 16, and when Otachi's mom was pregnant with him, that's when the special says Ciel's 401.. so he really should be 430 by the time he tells Pudding his age.
** In Ciel's backstory special, he starts as a 14 year old. "400 years later he was almost 401." Technically, he should be 414. To add to that, in another chapter he tells Pudding that he's currently 401. At that point, Otachi is 16, and when Otachi's mom was pregnant with him, that's when the special says Ciel's 401.. so he really should be 430 by the time he tells Pudding his age.
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* ComedicLolicon: Ciel tries to marry Pudding, and Nhu was still probably 8 or 9 when she was with Big D. However, the nature of the fic makes neither of these cases able to be taken seriously.
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** "Otachi's outfit was black silk with red and gold trim and it had fire on it's sleeves and golden bridges up the front. It was fitting and showed off his muscled physique, he had on black combat boots and marshall art gloves. His pants were black and had chains on them. His eyes were brown and his hair was black and his eues were red."
** "Ichigo had on a black cat suit and otachi had on a black wolf suit with chains and red lining and fingerless gloves."
** "Ichigo was wearing a bright pink one piece bathing suit with watermelons on it and a cute white miniskirt and black and white sandals. Her hair was up in white ribbons. Mint was wearing a blue ballgown over her skimpy navi two piece. She had lots of frills and bows and her hair was down. Mikey was in her black purse and wearing a matching bow. Lettuce was wearing jeans and a tshirt. And a big sun hat with sunflowers on it."
** "Ichigo had on a black cat suit and otachi had on a black wolf suit with chains and red lining and fingerless gloves."
** "Ichigo was wearing a bright pink one piece bathing suit with watermelons on it and a cute white miniskirt and black and white sandals. Her hair was up in white ribbons. Mint was wearing a blue ballgown over her skimpy navi two piece. She had lots of frills and bows and her hair was down. Mikey was in her black purse and wearing a matching bow. Lettuce was wearing jeans and a tshirt. And a big sun hat with sunflowers on it."
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** [[spoiler: Masaya, technically. He died in the early chapters from a roller coaster fall, and was found as a different-but-same guy in the past. He was then brought back to the future and regained his memories.
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** [[spoiler: Masaya, [[spoiler:Masaya, technically. He died in the early chapters from a roller coaster fall, and was found as a different-but-same guy in the past. He was then brought back to the future and regained his memories.
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* Lolicon: Ciel tries to marry Pudding.
** I'm not the only one who noticed that Nhu was still probably 8 or 9 when she was with Big D, am I..?
** I'm not the only one who noticed that Nhu was still probably 8 or 9 when she was with Big D, am I..?
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* LoveHurts
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* MagicalGirl
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* StrawberryShorthand
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* TokyoIsTheCenterOfTheUniverse
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* TokyoIsTheCenterOfTheUniverseThemeNaming: Averted; the fic doesn't seem aware of canonical theme naming (ColourfulThemeNaming for all heroes, with Mew Mews also having EdibleThemeNaming), thus there are multiple oddities like Mew Waterfall and Mew Scarab.
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* Tsundere: Ciel is a textbook example of this in chapter 41..
** Ciel said "I didn't do it to help you. Its not like were friends or anything"
** Ciel said "I didn't do it to help you. Its not like were friends or anything"
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* Tsundere: {{Tsundere}}: Ciel is a textbook example of this in chapter 41..
** Ciel said "I -->"I didn't do it to help you. Its not like were friends or anything"
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* ParentalAbandonment: No one's parents seem to show up or be involved in the children's lives.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted; the Sakura in this fic has no relation to Sakura Momomiya, Ichigo's mother.
* ParentalAbandonment: No one's parents seem to show up or be involved in the children'slives.lives, not even Ichigo's canonical ones.
* ParentalAbandonment: No one's parents seem to show up or be involved in the children's
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* TenWaysToRewriteAShow
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* AttentionDeficitCreatorDisorder: see What HappenedToTheMouse, below
* AuthorAppeal
* AuthorAppeal
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* OdangoHair: Mint. [[spoiler: Also when she was known as Nhu. She wore it because it signified that she was a servant, supposedly.]]
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Hoslin". What the heck is hoslin?!
** [[http://www.hoslin.com/ The Healthcare Linen Professionals]], apparently.
** [[http://www.hoslin.com/ The Healthcare Linen Professionals]], apparently.
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** [[http://www.hoslin.com/ The Healthcare Linen Professionals]], apparently.
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** Also, both in and out of the story, “ok” (which has been uttered an untold amount of times by different characters throughout the fic).
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** Also, both in and out of the story, “ok” "ok" (which has been uttered an untold amount of times by different characters throughout the fic).
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** “sigh” ichigo sighed. “It’s so nice nice outside today so why am I stuck inside this endangered animal exhibit with Masaya. There is a new student going to school today and I want to see who it is so I must go from here to school to see who it is”
** “yawn” ichigo yawned. “I’m exhausted and tired” ichigo said.
** “wow I never noticed that building” ichigo said as she noticed a cool building.
** “yawn” ichigo yawned. “I’m exhausted and tired” ichigo said.
** “wow I never noticed that building” ichigo said as she noticed a cool building.
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** “sigh” "sigh" ichigo sighed. “It’s "It's so nice nice outside today so why am I stuck inside this endangered animal exhibit with Masaya. There is a new student going to school today and I want to see who it is so I must go from here to school to see who it is”
is"
**“yawn” "yawn" ichigo yawned. “I’m "I'm exhausted and tired” tired" ichigo said.
**“wow "wow I never noticed that building” building" ichigo said as she noticed a cool building.
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** Ichigo and mint fought overwho sat next to otachi but in the end otachi sat next to lettuce because she was scared afraid of the roller coaster. “now hold on to me if you get scared afraid” said otachi. "ok I’ll hold on to you if I get scared” said lettuce.
** “I think it maybe true we need to keep an eye on her”...So they agreed to keep an eye on her.
** So they decided to go to the zoo because that’s where the mew mew was going to be at the zoo.
** “I think it maybe true we need to keep an eye on her”...So they agreed to keep an eye on her.
** So they decided to go to the zoo because that’s where the mew mew was going to be at the zoo.
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** Ichigo and mint fought overwho sat next to otachi but in the end otachi sat next to lettuce because she was scared afraid of the roller coaster. “now "now hold on to me if you get scared afraid” afraid" said otachi. "ok I’ll I'll hold on to you if I get scared” scared" said lettuce.
**“I "I think it maybe true we need to keep an eye on her”...her"...So they agreed to keep an eye on her.
** So they decided to go to the zoo becausethat’s that's where the mew mew was going to be at the zoo.
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** So they decided to go to the zoo because
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** It was written in blood. The letter said “I will kill all of you” and was writtenin blood
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** It was written in blood. The letter said “I "I will kill all of you” you" and was writtenin blood
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** “I am Ciel and I am friends of vampires. I am the prince of vampires. The prince of all vampires.”
** What had happened was bob said to ryou that “heres how it went”
** “coco the monkey” said micky and evetyone laughed and micky barked. Micky
** “OH NO MICKY” said mint “OH NO MICKY” said otachi
** What had happened was bob said to ryou that “heres how it went”
** “coco the monkey” said micky and evetyone laughed and micky barked. Micky
** “OH NO MICKY” said mint “OH NO MICKY” said otachi
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** “I "I am Ciel and I am friends of vampires. I am the prince of vampires. The prince of all vampires.”
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** What had happened was bob said to ryou that“heres "heres how it went”
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**“coco "coco the monkey” monkey" said micky and evetyone laughed and micky barked. Micky
**“OH "OH NO MICKY” MICKY" said mint “OH "OH NO MICKY” MICKY" said otachi
** What had happened was bob said to ryou that
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** Pudding was scared. She was so scared her face looked scared AND she looked at him and ciek laughed and said “whats wrong are you scared?” “yews” said pudding “I am scared."
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** Pudding was scared. She was so scared her face looked scared AND she looked at him and ciek laughed and said “whats "whats wrong are you scared?” “yews” scared?" "yews" said pudding “I "I am scared."
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-->''earth……….. a beautiful blue plant filled with millions of life forms. Earth today however there are around 2580 species of animals facing extinct on this planet. It is time to stand up against thus destruction…………………..now. for all living creatures…………………..and for ourselves!!!!!''
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** “thank "thank you for saving micky” micky" micky said.
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** "“oh no mint is dead!” SAID MINT"
** "Otachi’s eyes grew red with blood when we became angry"
** "“I fell bad for what has happened” said Ichigo." Said at [[spoiler: Masaya's funeral after he fell from a roller coaster.]]
** "Otachi’s eyes grew red with blood when we became angry"
** "“I fell bad for what has happened” said Ichigo." Said at [[spoiler: Masaya's funeral after he fell from a roller coaster.]]
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** "“oh ""oh no mint is dead!” dead!" SAID MINT"
**"Otachi’s "Otachi's eyes grew red with blood when we became angry"
**"“I ""I fell bad for what has happened” happened" said Ichigo." Said at [[spoiler: Masaya's funeral after he fell from a roller coaster.]]
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** "“but we need your help” said ryou and clenched his fist “otachi is right” said zakuro. “we do need your help lettuce”"
** "“Im worried” said mint “ weve nbeen in space a long time. Are we lost?” “yes” said otachi “thats a relief” said mint “as long as we stay on course we will be fine” he said"
** "“Im worried” said mint “ weve nbeen in space a long time. Are we lost?” “yes” said otachi “thats a relief” said mint “as long as we stay on course we will be fine” he said"
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** "“but ""but we need your help” help" said ryou and clenched his fist “otachi "otachi is right” right" said zakuro. “we "we do need your help lettuce”"
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**"“Im worried” ""Im worried" said mint “ " weve nbeen in space a long time. Are we lost?” “yes” lost?" "yes" said otachi “thats "thats a relief” relief" said mint “as "as long as we stay on course we will be fine” fine" he said"
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** "“well everyone is different mint” said mint."
** "“micky!” said mint. “micky!” [[TalkingAnimal said micdy"]]
** “mary is for politics”
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** “mary is for politics”
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** "“well ""well everyone is different mint” mint" said mint."
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** “pudding! "pudding! Be mew with zakuro said”said"
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** “I for be protect con mint” shouted otachi
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** "“and we are here to defeat the demen!” yelled mew pumkin pie pointing to the cat sir pouncealot (or so they thought)…"
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* TheDitz: “while the cats are gone the mice will play.” “what does hat mean? Im right here”
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** Mint saying “I was born in 1957", when she was 9 in 1957. On that note, as mentioned earlier, the story either takes place in the future when she's 15-16, or the author failed math again by having it take place when she should be 10-11.
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** Mint saying “I "I was born in 1957", when she was 9 in 1957. On that note, as mentioned earlier, the story either takes place in the future when she's 15-16, or the author failed math again by having it take place when she should be 10-11.
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* BiTheWay: Averted. While Mint originally liked Zakuro in ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'', she seems to have no feelings for her here, and instead opts for Otachi.
** Winthorpe. He "falls in love" with Ciel when he thinks Ciel is a girl, and keeps true to his "love" when he finds out Ciel is a boy.
** Winthorpe. He "falls in love" with Ciel when he thinks Ciel is a girl, and keeps true to his "love" when he finds out Ciel is a boy.
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''Woof Woof Power'' has {{Crossovers}}, [[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampires,]] moon crabs, hamsters, fashion competitions, and [[MusicalEpisode musical numbers]]....and that's just counting the first 40-odd pages.
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''Woof Woof Power'' has {{Crossovers}}, {{Crossover}}s, [[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampires,]] moon crabs, hamsters, fashion competitions, and [[MusicalEpisode musical numbers]]....and that's just counting the first 40-odd pages.
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* ReplacementLoveInterest: Ichigo replaces Masaya with Otachi. Otachi replaces Ichigo with Mint, then Mint with Lettuce, and may now replace Lettuce with someone else.
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*** Ciel also dies in a much later chapter when the plane crashes and he gets a pipe stuck in his chest. [[CaptainObvious They bring him back.]]
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*** Ciel also dies in a much later chapter when the plane crashes and he gets a pipe stuck in his chest. [[CaptainObvious They bring him back.]]
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* MotiveRant: "Listen you" Said zakuro "I know I have powers and I know I am special [[InformedLoner but I work by myself.]] And no one else can ever change my mind [[OrphansOrdeal ever since I was born I was by myself and I had to learn to live by myself on the cold streets.]] [[ThereAreNoAdults And I used to spend everyday gathering food for my brothers and sisters.]] [[CaptainObvious I've had a hard life]] and I don't need yoyu to tell me I need to work as a team when Ive been alone by hole life. Im on the top now model and I can support myself. And im not afraid of any aliens or pedisites or [[FreudianSlip and as I came to this planet]] Ive been trying to get along and you people just keep making things harder for me and Im sick of it. You make me sick. [[OverlyLongGag So you're my answer is no."]]
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* MotiveRant: "Listen you" Said zakuro "I know I have powers and I know I am special [[InformedLoner but I work by myself.]] And no one else can ever change my mind [[OrphansOrdeal ever since I was born I was by myself and I had to learn to live by myself on the cold streets.]] [[ThereAreNoAdults And I used to spend everyday gathering food for my brothers and sisters.]] [[CaptainObvious I've had a hard life]] life and I don't need yoyu to tell me I need to work as a team when Ive been alone by hole life. Im on the top now model and I can support myself. And im not afraid of any aliens or pedisites or [[FreudianSlip and as I came to this planet]] Ive been trying to get along and you people just keep making things harder for me and Im sick of it. You make me sick. [[OverlyLongGag So you're my answer is no."]]
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** Well, of course. She's [[CaptainObvious Sarcasm Girl]].
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** Well, of course. She's [[CaptainObvious Sarcasm Girl]].Girl.
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** [[{{Naruto}} Lord Uzumaki]].
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** [[{{Naruto}} [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Lord Uzumaki]].
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* YouFailHistoryForever
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* StartOfDarkness: Woof woof power special chapter: ~*~story of ciel*~*
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* StartOfDarkness: StartOfDarkness:
** Woof woof power special chapter: ~*~story of ciel*~*
** Woof woof power special chapter: ~*~story of ciel*~*
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* StockholmShnozzing: Lettuce and Ciel.
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* TheChosenOne: Otachi is the only Woof Woof.
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* TheChosenOne: TheChosenOne:
** Otachi is the only Woof Woof.
** Otachi is the only Woof Woof.
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** A snail named Dinky has a bunch of siblings or friends with puns on that name (and what they may be good at or like), like Kinky, Slinky ("I fell down the stairs"), Shrinky, and [[TheLegendOfZelda Linky ("I will save the princess")]].
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** A snail named Dinky has a bunch of siblings or friends with puns on that name (and what they may be good at or like), like Kinky, Slinky ("I fell down the stairs"), Shrinky, and [[TheLegendOfZelda [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Linky ("I will save the princess")]].
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That was already in the Character Sheet. Correcting...
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* KaleidoscopeEyes: Otachi's eyes are dark red, but will become red like blood when he's angry.
** Some of the other OC Mew Mews have crazy eye colors.
** Some of the other OC Mew Mews have crazy eye colors.
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* TechnicolorEyes: Otachi's eyes are dark red, and some of the other OC Mew Mews have crazy eye colors.
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Useful Notes/ pages are not tropes
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* TheVietnamWar: Mint's past.
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* {{Crossover}}: with {{Hamtaro}}, {{Pokemon}}, {{Megamind}}, and Manga/BlackButler, respectively. [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Sir-Pounce-A-Lot]] may be an example, as well.
** Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean. No, really.
** {{Transformers}}. I shit you not.
** WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants: Squidward is apparently Davy Jones's brother, as well as a shaman.
** Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean. No, really.
** {{Transformers}}. I shit you not.
** WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants: Squidward is apparently Davy Jones's brother, as well as a shaman.
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* {{Crossover}}: with {{Hamtaro}}, {{Pokemon}}, {{Megamind}}, ''Anime/{{Hamtaro}}'', ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'', ''WesternAnimation/{{Megamind}}'', and Manga/BlackButler, ''Manga/BlackButler'', respectively. [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Sir-Pounce-A-Lot]] may be an example, as well.
**Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean.''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''. No, really.
**{{Transformers}}.''Franchise/{{Transformers}}''. I shit you not.
**WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants: ''WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants'': Squidward is apparently Davy Jones's brother, as well as a shaman.
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* AWorldwidePunomenon: Like TokyoMewMew, the story is riddled with puns. While some make sense or are outright funny, others are completely nonsensical. Examples include:
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* AWorldwidePunomenon: Like TokyoMewMew, ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'', the story is riddled with puns. While some make sense or are outright funny, others are completely nonsensical. Examples include:
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* BiTheWay: Averted. While Mint originally liked Zakuro in TokyoMewMew, she seems to have no feelings for her here, and instead opts for Otachi.
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* BiTheWay: Averted. While Mint originally liked Zakuro in TokyoMewMew, ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'', she seems to have no feelings for her here, and instead opts for Otachi.
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* RecycledinSpace: TokyoMewMew....IN SPACE!
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* RecycledinSpace: TokyoMewMew....''Manga/TokyoMewMew''...IN SPACE!
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* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Hell, Author?]] In Chapter 30, the author said that Lettuce had to dress as a waitress, and was nervous because she had never waited on people before; though if anybody knows ANYTHING about TokyoMewMew, they would know that the girls are, indeed, waitresses.
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* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Hell, Author?]] In Chapter 30, the author said that Lettuce had to dress as a waitress, and was nervous because she had never waited on people before; though if anybody knows ANYTHING about TokyoMewMew, ''Manga/TokyoMewMew'', they would know that the girls are, indeed, waitresses.
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* AWorldwidePunomenon: Like TokyoMewMew, the story is riddled with puns. While some make sense or are outright funny, others are completely nonsensical. Examples include:
** "Vampirate", which Ciel is called due to being a vampire of pirate lineage.
** "Bat", which is a mixture of cat and bird, seemingly without knowing that a bat is already a thing.
** Chapter 41 has a moment where the aliens are talking and Kish continuously breaks out dinosaur puns like "We did the hollow out with dino might (get it?)", "I guess you could say the planet earth was rex'd get it. it was terrible dactyl", and "I think they egg sellent".
** A beaver named "[[JustinBieber Justin Beaver]]".
** Genderbent version of the characters in more recent chapters have names that are sort of puns, like "Boychigo", "Hertachi", and "Boyding".
** Tony's name is the subject of many puns by other characters, like "Tony Spamonie", "Tony Calogney", and "Tony Baloney Macaroni and Cheese", often followed by Ciel saying "that's not his name."
** Some demon saying "I lick evelopes but they are envelopes really evilopes get it? For a living but I am a demon"
** A snail named Dinky has a bunch of siblings or friends with puns on that name (and what they may be good at or like), like Kinky, Slinky ("I fell down the stairs"), Shrinky, and [[TheLegendOfZelda Linky ("I will save the princess")]].
** Mint's alternate/old name is Nhu (pronounced close to "new"), and the author often likes to write things like "I nhu" and "Nhu York".
** "what was wrong with the man with no left leg or left arm? Nothing HE WAS ALL RIGHT HAHAHAHAHAHAHA"
** At one point, an alien named AJ releases bees, causing Mint to yell "Be careful around bees!" What followed that was "Honda would be careful of the whole alphabet."
** "Vampirate", which Ciel is called due to being a vampire of pirate lineage.
** "Bat", which is a mixture of cat and bird, seemingly without knowing that a bat is already a thing.
** Chapter 41 has a moment where the aliens are talking and Kish continuously breaks out dinosaur puns like "We did the hollow out with dino might (get it?)", "I guess you could say the planet earth was rex'd get it. it was terrible dactyl", and "I think they egg sellent".
** A beaver named "[[JustinBieber Justin Beaver]]".
** Genderbent version of the characters in more recent chapters have names that are sort of puns, like "Boychigo", "Hertachi", and "Boyding".
** Tony's name is the subject of many puns by other characters, like "Tony Spamonie", "Tony Calogney", and "Tony Baloney Macaroni and Cheese", often followed by Ciel saying "that's not his name."
** Some demon saying "I lick evelopes but they are envelopes really evilopes get it? For a living but I am a demon"
** A snail named Dinky has a bunch of siblings or friends with puns on that name (and what they may be good at or like), like Kinky, Slinky ("I fell down the stairs"), Shrinky, and [[TheLegendOfZelda Linky ("I will save the princess")]].
** Mint's alternate/old name is Nhu (pronounced close to "new"), and the author often likes to write things like "I nhu" and "Nhu York".
** "what was wrong with the man with no left leg or left arm? Nothing HE WAS ALL RIGHT HAHAHAHAHAHAHA"
** At one point, an alien named AJ releases bees, causing Mint to yell "Be careful around bees!" What followed that was "Honda would be careful of the whole alphabet."
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* Retcon: Quite a few in Mint's backstory.
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* Retcon: {{Retcon}}: Quite a few in Mint's backstory.
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** [[SpiritedAway Haku]]
** Lord Con's hotel seems an awful lot like the one in SpiritedAway as well...
** Lord Con's hotel seems an awful lot like the one in SpiritedAway as well...
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** [[SpiritedAway [[Anime/SpiritedAway Haku]]
** Lord Con's hotel seems an awful lot like the one inSpiritedAway Anime/SpiritedAway as well...
** Lord Con's hotel seems an awful lot like the one in
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* {{Crossover}}: with Hamtaro, Pokemon, Megamind, and [[BlackButler Black Butler]], respectively. [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Sir-Pounce-A-Lot]] may be an example, as well.
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* {{Crossover}}: with Hamtaro, Pokemon, Megamind, {{Hamtaro}}, {{Pokemon}}, {{Megamind}}, and [[BlackButler Black Butler]], Manga/BlackButler, respectively. [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Sir-Pounce-A-Lot]] may be an example, as well.
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** Transformers. I shit you not.
** SpongebobSquarepants: Squidward is apparently Davy Jones's brother, as well as a shaman.
** SpongebobSquarepants: Squidward is apparently Davy Jones's brother, as well as a shaman.
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** Transformers.{{Transformers}}. I shit you not.
**SpongebobSquarepants: WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants: Squidward is apparently Davy Jones's brother, as well as a shaman.
**
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* AnachronismStew: Mint/Nhu's story takes place in 1957, during the Vietnam War. The author then promptly describes things like cellphones, WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy, and LadyGaga.
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* AnachronismStew: Mint/Nhu's story takes place in 1957, during the Vietnam War. The author then promptly describes things like cellphones, WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy, and LadyGaga.Music/LadyGaga.
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* AnachronismStew: Mint/Nhu's story takes place in 1957, during the Vietnam War. The author then promptly describes things like cellphones, FamilyGuy, and LadyGaga.
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* AnachronismStew: Mint/Nhu's story takes place in 1957, during the Vietnam War. The author then promptly describes things like cellphones, FamilyGuy, WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy, and LadyGaga.
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* RoseHairedGirl: Ichigo when transformed.
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* BigBadassWolf: Otachi and Zakuro.
** Tony is supposedly the prince of the werewolves, despite never displaying any werewolf powers or characteristics.
** Tony is supposedly the prince of the werewolves, despite never displaying any werewolf powers or characteristics.
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** It eventually was used again.
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