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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'') is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series Series/OnceUponATime. It can be found [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/11439.html#cutid1 here]] (up to 2x06, the Thankful for Christmas Special and The New Years Resolution Special) and [[http://onceuponatimeabridged.blogspot.com/ here]].
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'') is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series Series/OnceUponATime.''Series/OnceUponATime''. It can be found [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/11439.html#cutid1 here]] (up to 2x06, the Thankful for Christmas Special and The New Years Resolution Special) and [[http://onceuponatimeabridged.blogspot.com/ here]].
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* CatchPhrase: "Henry Gold here !"
** "Hiiii Emma !"
** "Morons !"
** "Hey, bestie !"
* ChickMagnet: [[InsistentTerminology This version of Philip pretends to be one. ]]
** "Hiiii Emma !"
** "Morons !"
** "Hey, bestie !"
* ChickMagnet: [[InsistentTerminology This version of Philip pretends to be one. ]]
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** "Hiiii Emma !"
** "Morons !"
** "Hey, bestie !"
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* ManicPixieDreamGirl: WordofGod says Mary Margaret's character is based of this.
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* SerialRomeo: Graham.
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* NotSoStoic: Despite Emma's status as an [[OnlySaneMan Only Entirely Grounded Woman]] at the beginning, she slowly devolves into Only Mostly Sane Woman.
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* NotSoStoic: NotSoStoic:
** Despite Emma's status as an [[OnlySaneMan Only Entirely Grounded Woman]] at the beginning, she slowly devolves into Only Mostly Sane Woman.
** Despite Emma's status as an [[OnlySaneMan Only Entirely Grounded Woman]] at the beginning, she slowly devolves into Only Mostly Sane Woman.
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** It was promptly sort of... maybe... reversed ? It's hard to tell, really, because Regina snarks at herself so mcuh that you can never understand if she's supposed to be self-conscious and a deconstruction of MagnificentBitch or a StrawLoser.
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* DesperatelyCravesAffection: Mary Margaret, like in the series, though it is even more heartbreaking because she turns this UpToEleven.
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* DesperatelyCravesAffection: Mary Margaret, like in the series, though it is even more heartbreaking because she turns this UpToEleven.up to eleven.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: An Evil Regal reading the fanfiction tend to have this reaction.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Rumplestiltskin, towards his LoveInterests and best friends, Belle, Emma, Waldo and Archie. Belle and Emma are ready to call him out on this, unlike his best friends.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero. PlayedStraight with Regina, who was still obsessed with "[[{{Foreshadowing}} emotionally emasculating boyfriends]]", [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment whatever]] [[MindScrew that]] [[ContinuitySnarl means]].
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing ManipulativeBastard [[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero. PlayedStraight with Regina, who was still obsessed with "[[{{Foreshadowing}} emotionally emasculating boyfriends]]", [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment whatever]] [[MindScrew that]] [[ContinuitySnarl means]].
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* NeverLiveItDown: In-universe, Regina's rape of Graham is consistently evoked by The Writer, Regina, Rumple and Charming. Probably a JustifiedTrope since, in this universe, it's completely intentional and done "[[WordOfGod to feel power over someone]]".
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Regina's rape of Graham is consistently evoked by The Writer, Regina, Rumple and Charming. Probably a JustifiedTrope since, in this universe, it's completely intentional and done "[[WordOfGod to feel power over someone]]".
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--->'''Mary Margaret:''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny He told me he would treasure this apron forever !]]
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--->'''Mary Margaret:''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments He told me he would treasure this apron forever !]]
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* ExtremeDoormat: Archie. He grows out of it, and via LampshadeHanging it is called a "CrowningMomentOfAwesome" by name!
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* ExtremeDoormat: Archie. He grows out of it, and via LampshadeHanging it is called a "CrowningMomentOfAwesome" "SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome" by name!
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* AbusiveParents: Mary Margaret, when she resurfaces, thinks that Emma's presence is good because she can enact a ParentTrapPlot. Other then that, on the SlidingScaleOfParentShamingInFiction:
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* AbusiveParents: Mary Margaret, when she resurfaces, thinks that Emma's presence is good because she can enact a ParentTrapPlot. Other then that, on On the SlidingScaleOfParentShamingInFiction:
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother who sent them all here! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her [[BatmanGambit Batman Gambits]] always succeed...unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally...who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer...even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some [[InnocentBystander Innocent Bystanders]] are just as ruthless as him, and that Henry is no different? That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well: [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]]!
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother who sent them all here! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her [[BatmanGambit Batman Gambits]] {{Batman Gambit}}s always succeed...unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally...who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer...even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some [[InnocentBystander Innocent Bystanders]] {{Innocent Bystander}}s]] are just as ruthless as him, and that Henry is no different? That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well: [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]]!
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* AbusiveParents: Mary Margaret, when she resurfaces, thinks that Emma's presence is good because she can enact TheParentTrap. Other then that, on the SlidingScaleOfParentShamingInFiction :
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* AbusiveParents: Mary Margaret, when she resurfaces, thinks that Emma's presence is good because she can enact TheParentTrap. a ParentTrapPlot. Other then that, on the SlidingScaleOfParentShamingInFiction : SlidingScaleOfParentShamingInFiction:
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero. PlayedStraight with Regina, who was still obsessed with "[[{{Foreshadowing}} emotionally emasculating boyfriends]]", [[BigLippedAligatorMoment whatever]] [[MindScrew that]] [[ContinuitySnarl means]].
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero. PlayedStraight with Regina, who was still obsessed with "[[{{Foreshadowing}} emotionally emasculating boyfriends]]", [[BigLippedAligatorMoment [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment whatever]] [[MindScrew that]] [[ContinuitySnarl means]].
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** Regina and Charming are type II. The latter has GoodParents moments once in a while and Regina had one ParentsAsPeople moment.
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** Regina and Charming are type II.II or (sometimes humorously) type III. The latter has GoodParents moments once in a while and Regina had one ParentsAsPeople moment.
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Though the specifics do not apply, Regina actually loves Henry.
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Though the specifics do not apply, Regina actually loves Henry. Henry... [[DeconstructedTrope like a pet]]. BlissfulDenial BETTER THAN NOTHING, RIGHT ?
** However, it seems that Belle and Rumple do care for each other... in a very twisted but honest way.
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* BrainlessBeauty: Charming can be momentarly this sometimes in the abridged series, though he seems more HotBlooded and refusing to plan. [[TooDumbToLive David is much worse]]...
* ButtMonkey: David and Prince Charming. Mary Margaret sees him in a state close from BrainwashedAndCrazy... and comments that it can mean no good as he is way too likable. No one seems shocked at her bluntness.
* ButtMonkey: David and Prince Charming. Mary Margaret sees him in a state close from BrainwashedAndCrazy... and comments that it can mean no good as he is way too likable. No one seems shocked at her bluntness.
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* BrainlessBeauty: Charming can be momentarly this sometimes in the abridged series, though he seems more HotBlooded and refusing to plan. [[TooDumbToLive David Nolan is much worse]]...
* ButtMonkey: David Nolan and Prince Charming. Mary Margaret sees him in a state close from BrainwashedAndCrazy... and comments that it can mean no good as he is way too likable. No one seems shocked at her bluntness.
* ButtMonkey: David Nolan and Prince Charming. Mary Margaret sees him in a state close from BrainwashedAndCrazy... and comments that it can mean no good as he is way too likable. No one seems shocked at her bluntness.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Emma, Snow White, Henry, and, occasionally David and Charming, which is much more awesome than his fight scenes. However, they are all bested by [[OnlySaneMan Regina]]. Ryumplestiltskin prefers StealthInsult.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Emma, Snow White, Henry, and, occasionally David and Charming, which is much more awesome than his fight scenes. However, in the first season, they are all bested by [[OnlySaneMan Regina]]. Ryumplestiltskin prefers StealthInsult.
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* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: {{Subverted}} with Regina. She has a very blunt mother, but her bluntness is described as funny, and Regina's reaction isn't really PlayedForLaughs, though it isn't as dramatic either.
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* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: {{Subverted}} with Regina. She has a very blunt mother, but her bluntness is described as funny, and Regina's reaction isn't really PlayedForLaughs, though it isn't as dramatic and sad as in the show either.
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* NeverLiveItDown: In-universe, Regina's rape of Graham is consistently evoked by The Writer, Regina, Rumple and Charming.
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* NeverLiveItDown: In-universe, Regina's rape of Graham is consistently evoked by The Writer, Regina, Rumple and Charming. Probably a JustifiedTrope since, in this universe, it's completely intentional and done "[[WordOfGod to feel power over someone]]".
** It was promptly sort of... maybe... reversed ? It's hard to tell, really, because Regina snarks at herself so mcuh that you can never understand if she's supposed to be self-conscious and a deconstruction of MagnificentBitch or a StrawLoser.
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* PairTheSpares: Jefferson and Ruby elope just after seeing each other onscreen.
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* PairTheSpares: Jefferson and Ruby elope just after seeing each other onscreen. Probably justified: they are alike and their chemistry is wonderful. Both characters were also abandoned and left without love interests by the writers of the TV original.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: The abridged Regina's feeling. To be fair, she is right most of the time.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: The abridged Emma and Regina's feeling. To be fair, fair to the former, she is right most of the time.time, and the latter isn't exactly wrong to say that her surroundings are mostly stupider than her.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero. PlayedStraight with Regina, who was still obsessed with emotionally emasculating boyfriends, whatever that means.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero. PlayedStraight with Regina, who was still obsessed with "[[{{Foreshadowing}} emotionally emasculating boyfriends, whatever that means.boyfriends]]", [[BigLippedAligatorMoment whatever]] [[MindScrew that]] [[ContinuitySnarl means]].
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Regina is depicted as this, and even sometimes as a sort of StrawHypocrite.
* NeverLiveItDown: In-universe, Regina's rape of Graham is consistently evoked by The Writer, Regina, Rumple and Charming.
* SpotlightStealingSquad: ParodiedTrope with Regina. Season 2 is considered a SeasonalRot by the author due to storylines always focusing on her.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero. PlayedStraight with Regina, who was still obsessed with emotionally emasculating boyfriends, whatever that means.
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'') is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime. It can be found [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/11439.html#cutid1 here]] (up to 2x06, the Thankful for Christmas Special and The New Years Resolution Special) and [[http://onceuponatimeabridged.blogspot.com/ here]].
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'') is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime.Series/OnceUponATime. It can be found [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/11439.html#cutid1 here]] (up to 2x06, the Thankful for Christmas Special and The New Years Resolution Special) and [[http://onceuponatimeabridged.blogspot.com/ here]].
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* AbusiveParents: Mary Margaret, when she resurfaces, thinks that Emma's presence is good because she can enact TheParentTrap.
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** Emma, Snow and Ruth are type I at first. The two former go off the scale into GoodParents.
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** Emma, Snow and Ruth are type I at first. The two former go off the scale into GoodParents. Rumple is type on with Bae and GoodParents with Henry.
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** Cora and George are type IV.
** Regina and Charming are type II. The latter has GoodParents moments once in a while and Regina had one ParentsAsPeople moment.
** Emma, Snow and Ruth are type I at first. The two former go off the scale into GoodParents.
** Regina and Charming are type II. The latter has GoodParents moments once in a while and Regina had one ParentsAsPeople moment.
** Emma, Snow and Ruth are type I at first. The two former go off the scale into GoodParents.
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* LoserArchetype: The author sometimes tries to make Regina into one (she uses the scapegoat franchise Twilight and the fact that Regina loves the sparkling vampires to try to discredit her), but since some of her best brillance in the series comes from the way she writes Regina, it's never the case.
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Though the spcifics do not apply, Regina actually loves Henry.
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Though the spcifics specifics do not apply, Regina actually loves Henry.
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** '''The Charmer''' is August, then Jefferson, and then Hook. He evolved into The Dork later on.
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** '''The Charmer''' is August, then Jefferson, and then Hook. He evolved into The Dork later on. Regina and Rumplestiltskin have their moments.
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* SitcomCharacterArchetypes:
** '''The Wisecracker''' is Rumplestiltskin.
** '''The Square''' is Emma. Snow White could fit the role too.
** '''The Goofball''' is Mary Margaret.
** '''The Dork''' is David. Hook and Regina are supposed to temporarly join him there during their ineffectual moments/tentatives at redeeming moments.
** '''The Bully''' is Regina.
** '''The Charmer''' is August, then Jefferson, and then Hook. He evolved into The Dork later on.
** '''The Sage''' are Charming and Snow White, in a HotBlooded TheMcCoy The Heart and a TheSnarkKnight TheConscience TheStrategist way.
** '''The Wisecracker''' is Rumplestiltskin.
** '''The Square''' is Emma. Snow White could fit the role too.
** '''The Goofball''' is Mary Margaret.
** '''The Dork''' is David. Hook and Regina are supposed to temporarly join him there during their ineffectual moments/tentatives at redeeming moments.
** '''The Bully''' is Regina.
** '''The Charmer''' is August, then Jefferson, and then Hook. He evolved into The Dork later on.
** '''The Sage''' are Charming and Snow White, in a HotBlooded TheMcCoy The Heart and a TheSnarkKnight TheConscience TheStrategist way.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero.UnscrupulousHero who seems to be going to PragmaticHero.
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** They are even given NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast in the later series's episodes.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: Snow White is a subversion bordering an inversion. She was originally an EnfanteTerrible ManipulativeBastard[[BitchInSheepsClothing In Sheep's Clothing]] and slowly turned into a JerkWithAHeartOfGold UnscrupulousHero.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: An Evil Regal reading the fanfiction tend to have this reaction.
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* Pairthespares: Jefferson and Ruby elope just after seeing each other onscreen.
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--->'''Evil Queen:''' How would you two like to help me commit a murder?
--->'''Gretel:'''Aren't you wearing your latest kill on the side of your head?
--->'''Evil Queen:''' ...You're going to make this a long day for me, aren't you?
--->'''Gretel:'''Aren't you wearing your latest kill on the side of your head?
--->'''Evil Queen:''' ...You're going to make this a long day for me, aren't you?