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* DarkSkinnedRedhead: She and Zinc are black, but she has [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead red hair and green eyes]]. However, she still has natural textured hair and curls.
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* CustomUniform: A mild example. He never goes anywhere without his [[NiceHat beanie]].
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* CustomUniform: A mild example. He never goes anywhere without his [[NiceHat beanie]].beanie.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Around thirty, with seven point of view characters. There's quite a bit.
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* RapunzelHair: Her hair goes down to her butt. Though considering how short she is, that might make her hair shorter than it seems.
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* TheNapolean: She's short and very aggressive.
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* TheNapolean: TheNapoleon: She's short and very aggressive.
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* BastardBastard: A mild example. He's not exactly the nicest kid around, but he managed to snag a boyfriend and treats him pretty well. The only people he seems to hold a grudge against are their father--even with Dionea, their relationship is more SiblingRivalry rather than anything else.
** BespectacledBastardBoyfriend: Averted. He has glasses, can be mean, and is a [[SecretOtherFamily literal bastard]], but he's not abusive.
** BespectacledBastardBoyfriend: Averted. He has glasses, can be mean, and is a [[SecretOtherFamily literal bastard]], but he's not abusive.
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* [[spoiler: RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: With Hiyoko, after the final battle of the first book.]]
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: Since most of the girls who love other girls are high-school age, they fall under this trope.
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* MySisterIsOffLimits: Though this mainly manifests in animosity towards Zinc, Molly also doesn't approve of [[SchoolgirlLesbians Beryl and Annie's budding feelings]]. [[spoiler: Due to Molly and Zinc's later friendship upgrade, they become BestFriendsInLaw... after Xenon un-dumps Zinc, of course.]]
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* MySisterIsOffLimits: Though this mainly manifests in animosity towards Zinc, Molly also doesn't approve of [[SchoolgirlLesbians Beryl and Annie's budding feelings]].feelings. [[spoiler: Due to Molly and Zinc's later friendship upgrade, they become BestFriendsInLaw... after Xenon un-dumps Zinc, of course.]]
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: She loves girls and she loves going to school to meet girls.
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: With Snow.
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* [[{{Asexuality}} Asexual]] and {{Aromantic}}: He has no interest in sex or romance. This often results in him being AloneAmongTheCouples.
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The story follows a large cast of characters as they go through regular high school life at Nuther's School for the Gifted Child; you know, attending class, dealing with crushes, and [[EggsMilkSquick killing demons that threaten to end the world]].world. Regular stuff for regular kids.
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* PromotedToParent: Less so with Annie, as their parents still like her, but given their treatment of Xenon, Molly has basically taken over all parental roles in regards to Xenon.
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* PromotedToParent: PromotionToParent: Less so with Annie, as their parents still like her, but given their treatment of Xenon, Molly has basically taken over all parental roles in regards to Xenon.
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* {{Transgender}}: MTF (male to female). Rory's transition throughout the book is mostly a background event.
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* HotForTeacher: Bety has a crush on Tommy Winters. [[spoiler: It turns out they actually dated when Tommy was in school.]]
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* GoodAdulteryBadAdultery: Xenon accuses him often of this. [[spoiler: While his and Molly's relationship truly is platonic, his and Puriel's relationship definitely was not--though he had no idea Xenon would disapprove of [[EnemyWithin Puriel]] in the first place, given that Xenon had no problem with the rest of their [[FlipPersonality personas]] having feelings for Zinc (or anyone else).]]
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* GoodAdulteryBadAdultery: Xenon accuses him often of this. [[spoiler: While his and Molly's relationship truly is platonic, his and Puriel's relationship definitely was not--though he had no idea Xenon would disapprove of [[EnemyWithin Puriel]] in the first place, given that Xenon had no problem with the rest of their [[FlipPersonality personas]] having feelings for Zinc (or anyone else).]]
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* YourCheatingHeart: Xenon accuses him often of this. [[spoiler: While his and Molly's relationship truly is platonic, his and Puriel's relationship definitely was not--though he had no idea Xenon would disapprove of [[EnemyWithin Puriel]] in the first place, given that Xenon had no problem with the rest of their [[FlipPersonality personas]] having feelings for Zinc (or anyone else).]]
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* SecretOtherFamily: He and Dionea share a father; when on a trip to Brazil, their father met Malici's mother and [[YourCheatingHeart started an affair]], resulting in Malici. No one really knows how that mess got sorted out, but Malici and his mother have a steady supply of money after the whole incident.
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* SecretOtherFamily: He and Dionea share a father; when on a trip to Brazil, their father met Malici's mother and [[YourCheatingHeart started an affair]], affair, resulting in Malici. No one really knows how that mess got sorted out, but Malici and his mother have a steady supply of money after the whole incident.
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* LatinoIsBrown: Zig-zagged. While he does have the characteristic light-brown skin and dark hair, he shares blue eyes with Dionea.
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** In school, they're referred to as [[BuffyTheVampireSlayer Giles]], to separate them from the regular, untrained {{Muggles}}.
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** In school, they're referred to as [[BuffyTheVampireSlayer [[Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer Giles]], to separate them from the regular, untrained {{Muggles}}.
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''Something Is Coming Out From Under The Mountain'' is the (working) title of a planned series by two overworked college students. While only referred to as 'The Thing' by the authors, TheThing is actually already a thing.
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''Something Is Coming Out From Under The Mountain'' is the (working) title of a planned series by two overworked college students. While only referred to as 'The Thing' by the authors, TheThing The Thing is actually already a thing.
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The story follows a large cast of characters as they go through regular high school life at Nuther's School for the Gifted Child; you know, attending class, dealing with crushes, and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking [[EggsMilkSquick killing demons that threaten to end the world]]. Regular stuff for regular kids.
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'''Molly Hexcyanferrate'''
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The leader of the Alpha Pi team and number one big brother to Annie and Xenon. Though he has no powers of his own, he's smart and capable of leading a group of super-powered kids-- ''and'' have some modicum of control over them. Though he's a bit of a hard-edge when it comes to the rules, he genuinely cares about his team members-- even though sometimes he can be harsh.
* ParentalAbandonment: It's implied that Molly was sent to school so his parents could more easily ignore him.
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The second-in-command (though Molly is loath to admit it) of team Alpha Pi and Beryl's big brother. He's tough and loud, but despite how much he talks, only a few people can tell how he's really feeling. He much prefers to punch and speak before thinking.
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The illegitimate son of a French jewelry chain C.E.O. and his Brazilian mistress. He's cocky and not the least bit serious about much of anything (except maybe his [[LadykillerInLove boyfriend]], Neptor). The only thing he hates more than the word "GoldDigger" is his half-sister and father.
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A quiet loner who somehow is best friends with Zinc. He's more of a rule-breaker than a lot of people think.
* ChildhoodFriend: With Zinc.
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Molly's little sister and the Hexcyanferrate's only daughter. Unlike her siblings, Annie is bright, talkative, and an optimist. Unfortunately, her parents and siblings' tendencies to spoil and baby her might have left her a bit unprepared for the responsibilities the school has given her.
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A small, quiet girl who can see the future. She skipped a grade, so she's the youngest kid in school-- but somehow, she also seems to be the most mature. Despite this, however, she is still a child in more than a few ways.
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A cold girl who not many people know that well. Given that she's an orphan, the people who ''did'' know her are probably long gone.
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The heiress to a French jewel store chain's C.E.O. and leader of Team Omicron Iota. While she acts carefree, she actually is very responsible when it comes to her team... though she allows herself ''some'' indulgences.
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* TheCasanova: She hopes from girl to girl, but unlike the usual trope, she makes sure not to hurt anyone.
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* GayGuySeeksPopularJock: Holmium was the former team leader, so he had to be pretty good at his job; [[spoiler: if their relationship is viewed as romantic, Zinc is popular and loves gym class]]; and [[spoiler: Lil'T is a college frat boy and plays football]]. You could say Molly has a type.
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* GayGuySeeksPopularJock: Holmium was the former team leader, so he had to be pretty good at his job; [[spoiler: [[{{YMMV}} if their relationship is viewed as romantic]], Zinc is popular and loves gym class]]; and [[spoiler: Lil'T is a college frat boy and plays football]]. You could say Molly has a type.
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* [[MySisterIsOffLimits My Siblings Are Off-Limits!]]: Though this mainly manifests in animosity towards Zinc, Molly also doesn't approve of [[SchoolgirlLesbians Beryl and Annie's budding feelings]]. [[spoiler: Due to Molly and Zinc's later friendship upgrade, they become BestFriendsInLaw... after Xenon un-dumps Zinc, of course.]]
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* [[MySisterIsOffLimits My Siblings Are Off-Limits!]]: MySisterIsOffLimits: Though this mainly manifests in animosity towards Zinc, Molly also doesn't approve of [[SchoolgirlLesbians Beryl and Annie's budding feelings]]. [[spoiler: Due to Molly and Zinc's later friendship upgrade, they become BestFriendsInLaw... after Xenon un-dumps Zinc, of course.]]
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* SecondLove: [[spoiler: [[{{YMMV Depending on how you interpret the relationship]] between Molly and Zinc post-bonding, Zinc could be this for Molly, but Molly's clear romantic feelings for Lil'T fit this trope much more clearly.]]
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* SecondLove: [[spoiler: [[{{YMMV Depending on how you interpret the relationship]] relationship between Molly and Zinc post-bonding, Zinc could be this for Molly, but Molly's clear romantic feelings for Lil'T fit this trope much more clearly.]]
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* ArtShift: Or rather, Font Shift. When someone is thinking, whether to themselves or [[{{Telepathy}} to someone else]], the font changes depending on the person who is "speaking".
* BoardingSchool: Nethur's School [[spoiler: and St. Carthaige's]] are both boarding schools.
* ChildSoldier: These are all teenagers, but they're expected to fight to the death.
* [[DesertTropes Desert]]: The school is in a desert.
* EmbarrassingLastName: The Hexcyanferrates, due to both [[AbusiveParents family issues]] and the fact that [[TheUnpronounceable no one can pronounce their last name correctly]]. Molly is hit with a double dose: [[TheUnpronounceable Molbdenum Hexcyanferrate]].
* FantasticRacism: Those [[LittleBitBeastly afflicted with E.B.S.]], are feared and discriminated against; they're seen as violent and stupid animals rather than humans. They're also oppressed as they're the only group that can both resist the super-powered elite humans, and, in some cases, have powers themselves, on par with humans.
* GirlPosse: The closest thing to a 'popular clique' the school consists of [[LovableAlphaBitch Bety]], Kaya, Malici, [[BetaBitch Casi]], and Celeste. However, due to everyone's varied class schedules and different age groups, they rarely do much other than eat lunch together and [[GossipyHens gossip]]. [[spoiler: After Bety and Hiyoko become friends, the group falls apart.]]
* EmbarrassingLastName: The Hexcyanferrates, due to both [[AbusiveParents family issues]] and the fact that [[TheUnpronounceable no one can pronounce their last name correctly]]. Molly is hit with a double dose: [[TheUnpronounceable Molbdenum Hexcyanferrate]].
* FantasticRacism: Those [[LittleBitBeastly afflicted with E.B.S.]], are feared and discriminated against; they're seen as violent and stupid animals rather than humans. They're also oppressed as they're the only group that can both resist the super-powered elite humans, and, in some cases, have powers themselves, on par with humans.
* GirlPosse: The closest thing to a 'popular clique' the school consists of [[LovableAlphaBitch Bety]], Kaya, Malici, [[BetaBitch Casi]], and Celeste. However, due to everyone's varied class schedules and different age groups, they rarely do much other than eat lunch together and [[GossipyHens gossip]]. [[spoiler: After Bety and Hiyoko become friends, the group falls apart.]]
* HeadDesk: [[spoiler: After being kidnapped at St. Carthaige's, Celeste repeatedly hits her head on the table in front of her in frustration.]]
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Molly, Annie, and Beryl don't use their first names very often.
* OrphanageOfLove: The 'No Parents Kids' live at one and are looked after by [[TeamMom Teri]].
* {{Polyamory}}: Teri, Vrik, and Snow are all in a loving, three-way relationship with each other.
* [[HeartwarmingOrphan Sliding]] [[DoorstopBaby Scale]] [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan of]] [[ParentalAbandonment Orphan]][[OrphansOrdeal Issues]]: Due to the dangers of monster fighting, a lot of students are orphans. There's a large variety of how each student feels about their predicament: [[DoorstopBaby Lappia]] doesn't much [[MysteriousWaif talk about it]]; [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan Casi]], [[HeartwarmingOrphan Rory]], [[HeartwarmingOrphan Beryl]], and [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan Zinc]]'s parents died a while ago; Teri and Kage are [[ParentalAbuse glad]] their parents are [[ParentalAbandonment gone]] [[spoiler: ; Concua loses her only parent mid-book, and is [[OrphansOrdeal heart-broken]]]]
* OrphanageOfLove: The 'No Parents Kids' live at one and are looked after by [[TeamMom Teri]].
* {{Polyamory}}: Teri, Vrik, and Snow are all in a loving, three-way relationship with each other.
* [[HeartwarmingOrphan Sliding]] [[DoorstopBaby Scale]] [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan of]] [[ParentalAbandonment Orphan]][[OrphansOrdeal Issues]]: Due to the dangers of monster fighting, a lot of students are orphans. There's a large variety of how each student feels about their predicament: [[DoorstopBaby Lappia]] doesn't much [[MysteriousWaif talk about it]]; [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan Casi]], [[HeartwarmingOrphan Rory]], [[HeartwarmingOrphan Beryl]], and [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan Zinc]]'s parents died a while ago; Teri and Kage are [[ParentalAbuse glad]] their parents are [[ParentalAbandonment gone]] [[spoiler: ; Concua loses her only parent mid-book, and is [[OrphansOrdeal heart-broken]]]]
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* SchoolUniformsAreTheNewBlack: Everyone at school wears uniforms while at school. When on a [[FieldTrip trip for the school]], they still wear their uniforms to [[DressCodedForYourConvenience show that they're on official school business]].
* SexIsGood: It's a bunch of teenagers in a school in the middle of nowhere who have to fight monsters. Hormones run rampant. Very few of the kids dating others don't have sex.
* SiblingTeam: Since a lot of siblings go to the same school, they're usually put on the same teams.
* ThemeNaming: The kids from well-respected hunter families are named after periodic elements.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Because of the stress of [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest uncontrolled healing magic]] and the [[MySkullRunnethOver difficulty of controlling powerful magic]], Healers are often expected to [[MadDoctor go insane]]. [[spoiler: In fact, E.B.S. was created by [[MadDoctor Healers]] attempting to get rid of magic.]]
* SexIsGood: It's a bunch of teenagers in a school in the middle of nowhere who have to fight monsters. Hormones run rampant. Very few of the kids dating others don't have sex.
* SiblingTeam: Since a lot of siblings go to the same school, they're usually put on the same teams.
* ThemeNaming: The kids from well-respected hunter families are named after periodic elements.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Because of the stress of [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest uncontrolled healing magic]] and the [[MySkullRunnethOver difficulty of controlling powerful magic]], Healers are often expected to [[MadDoctor go insane]]. [[spoiler: In fact, E.B.S. was created by [[MadDoctor Healers]] attempting to get rid of magic.]]
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Inverted. Molly finds his given name, [[EmbarrassingFirstName Molybdenum]], much more embarrassing, given how it's unpronounceable and a random element on the periodic table.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: [[spoiler: With Zinc, after their bonding trip.]] Though, one could argue that relationship crosses into HoYay territory.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: [[spoiler: With Zinc, after their bonding trip.]] Though, one could argue that relationship crosses into HoYay territory.
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Inverted. Molly finds his given name, [[EmbarrassingFirstName Molybdenum]], much more embarrassing, given how it's unpronounceable [[TheUnpronounceable unpronounceable]] and a random element on the periodic table.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: The responsible to Xenon and Annie's foolish.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: [[spoiler: With Zinc, after their bonding trip.]] Though, one could argue that relationship crosses into HoYay territory.]]
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: The responsible to Xenon and Annie's foolish.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: [[spoiler: With Zinc, after their bonding trip.
* GayGuySeeksPopularJock: Holmium was the former team leader, so he had to be pretty good at his job; [[spoiler: [[{{YMMV}} if their relationship is viewed as romantic]], Zinc is popular and loves gym class]]; and [[spoiler: Lil'T is a college frat boy and plays football]]. You could say Molly has a type.
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* SecondLove: [[spoiler: Depending on how you interpret the relationship between Molly and Zinc post-bonding, Zinc could be this for Molly, but Molly's clear romantic feelings for Lil'T fit this trope much more clearly.]]
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* SecondLove: [[spoiler: [[{{YMMV Depending on how you interpret the relationship relationship]] between Molly and Zinc post-bonding, Zinc could be this for Molly, but Molly's clear romantic feelings for Lil'T fit this trope much more clearly.]]
* SiblingTeam: Zig-zagged. He's on the same team as Annie, but he and Annie are separated from Xenon.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Inverted. His relationship with Zinc is definitely not friendly, and they argue all the time. [[spoiler: After they ''do'' become friends, they stop the bickering and squabbling.]]
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* FlawExploitation: Literally his super-power; has a strange amount of luck when it comes to battle in stumbling upon the thing that will hurt, if not kill, his opponent.
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* FlawExploitation: Literally his super-power; has a strange amount of luck when it comes to battle in stumbling upon BoisterousBruiser: Most people (except Molly) like him, and he's usually the thing that will hurt, if not kill, his opponent.brawn of the team.
* BrainsAndBrawn: The brawn to Radon's brain.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: The foolish to Beryl's responsible.
* BrainsAndBrawn: The brawn to Radon's brain.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: The foolish to Beryl's responsible.
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** [[spoiler: With Molly, after their bonding trip.]] Though, one could argue that relationship crosses into HoYay territory.
* LoveWillLeadYouBack: [[spoiler: after getting dumped by Xenon, he's willing to wait for however long for them to come back.]] As it should be, since it was his fault they broke up in the first place.
* LoveWillLeadYouBack: [[spoiler: after getting dumped by Xenon, he's willing to wait for however long for them to come back.]] As it should be, since it was his fault they broke up in the first place.
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* [[spoiler: LoveWillLeadYouBack:[[spoiler: after getting dumped by Xenon, he's willing to wait for however long for them to come back.]] back. As it should be, since it was his fault they broke up in the first place.]]
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* PromotionToParent: After the deaths of their parents, Zinc and Teri became the closest thing Beryl has to parents.
* Psychometry: Zinc can see visions when he comes into contact with things of emotional value.
* [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl Savvy Guy, Energetic Guy]]: Loud and energetic, especially when compared to the quieter, [[EruditeStoner pot smoking]] Radon.
* Psychometry: Zinc can see visions when he comes into contact with things of emotional value.
* [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl Savvy Guy, Energetic Guy]]: Loud and energetic, especially when compared to the quieter, [[EruditeStoner pot smoking]] Radon.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Xenon accuses him often of this. [[spoiler: While his and Molly's relationship truly is platonic, his and Puriel's relationship definitely was not--though he had no idea Xenon would dissapprove of [[EnemyWithin Puriel]] in the first place, given that Xenon had no problem with the rest of their [[FlipPersonality personas]] having feelings for Zinc (or anyone else).]]
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Inverted. His relationship with Molly is definitely not friendly, and they argue all the time. [[spoiler: After they ''do'' become friends, they stop the bickering and squabbling.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Xenon accuses him often of this. [[spoiler: While his and Molly's relationship truly is platonic, his and Puriel's relationship definitely was not--though he had no idea Xenon woulddissapprove disapprove of [[EnemyWithin Puriel]] in the first place, given that Xenon had no problem with the rest of their [[FlipPersonality personas]] having feelings for Zinc (or anyone else).]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Xenon accuses him often of this. [[spoiler: While his and Molly's relationship truly is platonic, his and Puriel's relationship definitely was not--though he had no idea Xenon would
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Is this to Dionea. Though, considering the circumstances, there's a [[SecretOtherFamily good reason]] why she dislikes him.
* BastardBastard: A mild example. He's not exactly the nicest kid around, but he managed to snag a boyfriend and treats him pretty well. The only people he seems to hold a grudge against are their father--even with Dionea, their relationship is more SiblingRivalry rather than anything else.
** BespectacledBastardBoyfriend: Averted. He has glasses, can be mean, and is a [[SecretOtherFamily literal bastard]], but he's not abusive.
* BerserkButton: Unless it's a [[{{Pun}} pun]] on his [[{{Extraoredinary}} metal powers]], he doesn't like it when anyone calls himself or his mother a GoldDigger.
* {{Extraoredinary}}: Malici can control metals. However, this does not include people who are named after metals.
* GayBestFriend: Despite most of his closest friends being female (with his BestFriend being the [[LovableAlphaBitch most popular girl in school, Bety Fairbairn]]), his friendship with them is not based on his gayness to accessorize their group.
* NerdGlasses: Subverted. Even though he has large rimmed glasses, he's considered a pretty cool dude and is mildly popular as a part of Bety's [[GirlPosse posse]].
* LatinoIsBrown: Zig-zagged. While he does have the characteristic light-brown skin and dark hair, he shares blue eyes with Dionea.
* SecretOtherFamily: He and Dionea share a father; when on a trip to Brazil, their father met Malici's mother and [[YourCheatingHeart started an affair]], resulting in Malici. No one really knows how that mess got sorted out, but Malici and his mother have a steady supply of money after the whole incident.
* SiblingRivalry: With Dionea. Given their... [[SecretOtherFamily history]], its understandable that they dislike each other.
* SiblingTeam: Averted. He's one of the only people who's not on the same team as his sibling.
* BastardBastard: A mild example. He's not exactly the nicest kid around, but he managed to snag a boyfriend and treats him pretty well. The only people he seems to hold a grudge against are their father--even with Dionea, their relationship is more SiblingRivalry rather than anything else.
** BespectacledBastardBoyfriend: Averted. He has glasses, can be mean, and is a [[SecretOtherFamily literal bastard]], but he's not abusive.
* BerserkButton: Unless it's a [[{{Pun}} pun]] on his [[{{Extraoredinary}} metal powers]], he doesn't like it when anyone calls himself or his mother a GoldDigger.
* {{Extraoredinary}}: Malici can control metals. However, this does not include people who are named after metals.
* GayBestFriend: Despite most of his closest friends being female (with his BestFriend being the [[LovableAlphaBitch most popular girl in school, Bety Fairbairn]]), his friendship with them is not based on his gayness to accessorize their group.
* NerdGlasses: Subverted. Even though he has large rimmed glasses, he's considered a pretty cool dude and is mildly popular as a part of Bety's [[GirlPosse posse]].
* LatinoIsBrown: Zig-zagged. While he does have the characteristic light-brown skin and dark hair, he shares blue eyes with Dionea.
* SecretOtherFamily: He and Dionea share a father; when on a trip to Brazil, their father met Malici's mother and [[YourCheatingHeart started an affair]], resulting in Malici. No one really knows how that mess got sorted out, but Malici and his mother have a steady supply of money after the whole incident.
* SiblingRivalry: With Dionea. Given their... [[SecretOtherFamily history]], its understandable that they dislike each other.
* SiblingTeam: Averted. He's one of the only people who's not on the same team as his sibling.
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* [[{{Asexuality}} Asexual]] and {{Aromantic}}: He has no interest in sex or romance. This often results in him being AloneAmongTheCouples.
* CustomUniform: A mild example. He never goes anywhere without his [[NiceHat beanie]].
* EmotionBomb: He can influence the emotions of people. The more people he tries to control, the less influence he has on individuals. He mostly uses his powers to calm down [[SitcomArchNemesis Zinc and Molly]], though.
* EruditeStoner: He's a [[TheQuietOne quiet kid]] and he smokes pot. He also often serves as an advise dispenser when Zinc needs help.
* HackerCave: His room has a lot of computers. Not just for hacking; he just likes video games.
* OnlySaneMan: Though he rarely speaks up about the things he don't think will work out.
* [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl Savvy Guy, Energetic Guy]]: Could be part of why he's considered [[TheQuietOne quiet]]; Zinc is pretty boisterous.
* TheQuietOne: He doesn't really talk a lot. He's not exactly at TheStoic levels (yet), but he is definitely a quiet kid.
* CustomUniform: A mild example. He never goes anywhere without his [[NiceHat beanie]].
* EmotionBomb: He can influence the emotions of people. The more people he tries to control, the less influence he has on individuals. He mostly uses his powers to calm down [[SitcomArchNemesis Zinc and Molly]], though.
* EruditeStoner: He's a [[TheQuietOne quiet kid]] and he smokes pot. He also often serves as an advise dispenser when Zinc needs help.
* HackerCave: His room has a lot of computers. Not just for hacking; he just likes video games.
* OnlySaneMan: Though he rarely speaks up about the things he don't think will work out.
* [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl Savvy Guy, Energetic Guy]]: Could be part of why he's considered [[TheQuietOne quiet]]; Zinc is pretty boisterous.
* TheQuietOne: He doesn't really talk a lot. He's not exactly at TheStoic levels (yet), but he is definitely a quiet kid.
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* ChildhoodFriend: She and Beryl have been friends since they were babies, and they're the only reason Molly and Zinc would ever spend any time with each other.
* IAmNotMyFather: Annie doesn't like being compared to her parents.
* ParentalFavoritism: Though she's not very happy about it. She loves her siblings and doesn't like how their parents treat them, especially in relation to her. [[spoiler: Still, she's surprised when her parents sell her out to the government after she runs away from school to ask for their help.]]
* PuppyLove: With Beryl.
* SiblingTeam: Zig-zagged. She's on the same team as Molly, but they're separated from Xenon.
* SpoiledSweet: Even though she's [[ParentalFavoritism the favorite child]] of the Hexcyanferrates, she's very sweet and loves her elder siblings very much.
* {{Teleportation}}: She can teleport. However, since she's so young, she can only really go short distances.
* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Thanks to [[KnightTemplarBigBrother Molly]] being the leader of the group, she and Beryl are often babied.
* IAmNotMyFather: Annie doesn't like being compared to her parents.
* ParentalFavoritism: Though she's not very happy about it. She loves her siblings and doesn't like how their parents treat them, especially in relation to her. [[spoiler: Still, she's surprised when her parents sell her out to the government after she runs away from school to ask for their help.]]
* PuppyLove: With Beryl.
* SiblingTeam: Zig-zagged. She's on the same team as Molly, but they're separated from Xenon.
* SpoiledSweet: Even though she's [[ParentalFavoritism the favorite child]] of the Hexcyanferrates, she's very sweet and loves her elder siblings very much.
* {{Teleportation}}: She can teleport. However, since she's so young, she can only really go short distances.
* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Thanks to [[KnightTemplarBigBrother Molly]] being the leader of the group, she and Beryl are often babied.
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* AdorablyPrecociousChild: She's the youngest kid in school, but she takes her job and training as [[{{Seers}} the only Seer alive]] very seriously. However, most people just find her adorable.
* ChildhoodFriend: She and Annie have been friends since they were babies, and they're the only reason Molly and Zinc would ever spend any time with each other.
* DarkSkinnedRedhead: She and Zinc are black, but she has [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead red hair and green eyes]]. However, she still has natural textured hair and curls.
* EveryonesBabySister: She's the youngest of the entire school, and given that most of the older students already have some level of [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sibling Instinct]], it's pretty much instinct for them to act this way towards the younger students.
* PuppyLove: With Annie.
* {{Seers}}: She can see the future.
* SkilledButNaive: Due to the fact that she's the only [[{{Seers}} Seer]] alive, she's automatically the most skilled (though that's not to say she's [[UnskilledButStrong weak power-wise]]). However, she has no idea why [[{{Ephebophile}} no one likes Mr. Cappoccia]].
* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Thanks to [[KnightTemplarBigBrother Molly]] being the leader of the group, along with her own [[PromotionToParent brother]], she and Annie are often babied.
* UnskilledButStrong: This is her first year in this school, and though she has an extremely powerful ability, she has little to no control over it.
* WaifProphet: She's a small child with the ability to see the future.
* ChildhoodFriend: She and Annie have been friends since they were babies, and they're the only reason Molly and Zinc would ever spend any time with each other.
* DarkSkinnedRedhead: She and Zinc are black, but she has [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead red hair and green eyes]]. However, she still has natural textured hair and curls.
* EveryonesBabySister: She's the youngest of the entire school, and given that most of the older students already have some level of [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sibling Instinct]], it's pretty much instinct for them to act this way towards the younger students.
* PuppyLove: With Annie.
* {{Seers}}: She can see the future.
* SkilledButNaive: Due to the fact that she's the only [[{{Seers}} Seer]] alive, she's automatically the most skilled (though that's not to say she's [[UnskilledButStrong weak power-wise]]). However, she has no idea why [[{{Ephebophile}} no one likes Mr. Cappoccia]].
* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Thanks to [[KnightTemplarBigBrother Molly]] being the leader of the group, along with her own [[PromotionToParent brother]], she and Annie are often babied.
* UnskilledButStrong: This is her first year in this school, and though she has an extremely powerful ability, she has little to no control over it.
* WaifProphet: She's a small child with the ability to see the future.
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* AloofDarkHairedGirl: She doesn't talk much, and has the dark hair.
* EmotionSuppression: Implied to be how she controls her power.
* EmotionlessGirl: She's very serious and quiet.
* PlayingWithFire: She can summon and control flames.
* [[spoiler: PuppyLove: With Anomur in the second book.]]
* MysteriousWaif: Though she isn't an important plot point, she is a small, orphaned girl and many people don't know about her past.
* SpicyLatina: Averted. Not only is she one of the youngest kids in school, thus not into sex, she's also very deadpan and serious.
* TeenGenius: She's fourteen and shows amazing control over her powers. Of course, given what [[PlayingWithFire her power]] is, it probably requires a lot more control than other kids her age need.
* TheStoic: She rarely shows emotion on her face, instead relying on body language to convey how she feels.
* EmotionSuppression: Implied to be how she controls her power.
* EmotionlessGirl: She's very serious and quiet.
* PlayingWithFire: She can summon and control flames.
* [[spoiler: PuppyLove: With Anomur in the second book.]]
* MysteriousWaif: Though she isn't an important plot point, she is a small, orphaned girl and many people don't know about her past.
* SpicyLatina: Averted. Not only is she one of the youngest kids in school, thus not into sex, she's also very deadpan and serious.
* TeenGenius: She's fourteen and shows amazing control over her powers. Of course, given what [[PlayingWithFire her power]] is, it probably requires a lot more control than other kids her age need.
* TheStoic: She rarely shows emotion on her face, instead relying on body language to convey how she feels.
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* AuraVision: She can see people's auras, which reflect emotions and aspects of a person's personality. She usually uses this information to manipulate others.
* BigBeautifulWoman: She's heavier than other girls at the school, but she has no problem being seen as attractive.
* BigFun: Chubby and liked by everyone (except the [[MySisterIsOffLimits elder siblings of the girls she dates]]). She's also the daughter of a pretty rich dude, so she has some layer of aristocracy as well.
* [[BigBrotherBully Big Sister Bully]]: Towards Malici.
* CustomUniformOfSexy: She leaves her blouse unbuttoned lower and rolls up her skirt to look sexier. This gets her in a lot of trouble with the faculty.
* SchoolgirlLesbians: She loves girls and she loves going to school to meet girls.
* SiblingRivalry: With Malici. Given their... [[SecretOtherFamily history]], its understandable that they dislike each other.
* SiblingTeam: Averted. She's one of the only people to not be on the same team as her sibling.
* AuraVision: She can see people's auras, which reflect emotions and aspects of a person's personality. She usually uses this information to manipulate others.
* BigBeautifulWoman: She's heavier than other girls at the school, but she has no problem being seen as attractive.
* BigFun: Chubby and liked by everyone (except the [[MySisterIsOffLimits elder siblings of the girls she dates]]). She's also the daughter of a pretty rich dude, so she has some layer of aristocracy as well.
* [[BigBrotherBully Big Sister Bully]]: Towards Malici.
* CustomUniformOfSexy: She leaves her blouse unbuttoned lower and rolls up her skirt to look sexier. This gets her in a lot of trouble with the faculty.
* SchoolgirlLesbians: She loves girls and she loves going to school to meet girls.
* SiblingRivalry: With Malici. Given their... [[SecretOtherFamily history]], its understandable that they dislike each other.
* SiblingTeam: Averted. She's one of the only people to not be on the same team as her sibling.
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* BadassNormal: He may have no powers, but he's definitely prepared for the life he's chosen.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Inverted. His younger sister acts more like an older sister than he does.
* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend]]: To Lil'D. He refuses to acknowledge that they're dating, but they're [[SecretRelationship not fooling anyone]].
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Zig-zagged. While Teri is loud and tomboy-ish, she takes her role as TeamMom really seriously. Meanwhile, though Kage is quieter and more studious, he is easily flustered and can be just as flighty as Teri.
* MuggleBornOfMages: He's a Giles, while his sister inherited {{Telepathy}}.
* NerdGlasses: Played straight. He's studious and good in his classes, and wears glasses. Ironically, they're not as big or as thick as the other, more "rebellious" characters.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Platonic example with Teri.
* SecretRelationship: With Lil'D. They're terrible at keeping it a secret though... and not just because his little sister is a [[DirtyMindReading mind reader]].
* TeamDad: A mild example. He mostly provides support for Teri's [[TeamMom maternal moments]].
* BigBrotherInstinct: Inverted. His younger sister acts more like an older sister than he does.
* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend]]: To Lil'D. He refuses to acknowledge that they're dating, but they're [[SecretRelationship not fooling anyone]].
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Zig-zagged. While Teri is loud and tomboy-ish, she takes her role as TeamMom really seriously. Meanwhile, though Kage is quieter and more studious, he is easily flustered and can be just as flighty as Teri.
* MuggleBornOfMages: He's a Giles, while his sister inherited {{Telepathy}}.
* NerdGlasses: Played straight. He's studious and good in his classes, and wears glasses. Ironically, they're not as big or as thick as the other, more "rebellious" characters.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Platonic example with Teri.
* SecretRelationship: With Lil'D. They're terrible at keeping it a secret though... and not just because his little sister is a [[DirtyMindReading mind reader]].
* TeamDad: A mild example. He mostly provides support for Teri's [[TeamMom maternal moments]].
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* AffectionateNickname: Vrik and Teri give Snow any Snow-based nickname they can think of: Snowbelle, Snowflower, Snowflake, Snowball, and so on.
* CustomUniform: In a very small way; while his ripped jeans and leather jacket certainly ''seem'' rebellious, [[RuleAbidingRebel both are still within the school's uniform dress code]].
* DelinquentHair: He likes to dye his hair and his tips [[KaleidoscopeHair different colors]] to fit in with his [[{{Delinquents}} too cool for school facade]]. He also has eyebrow and lip piercings to complete the look.
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Implied to be part of why he dresses this way. Though, considering he has [[{{Polyamory}} two girlfriends]], he must be doing ''something'' right.
* NerdGlasses: While he tries to be cool with dyed hair and piercings, he has to wear large glasses. Also, Teri is merciless when it comes to teasing him.
* SickeninglySweethearts: With Teri and Snow. Despite how much Teri and Vrik [[VitriolicBestBuds tease each other]], Vrik is often caught thinking about how much he loves his girlfriends.
* VitriolicBestBuds: With Teri. Vrik considers Teri his best friend as well as his girlfriend, so this still applies.
* WindsOfDestinyChange: Can control luck. To him, it manifests as glowing gold sand, which he can manipulate with his mind. The more sand in an area, the luckier that area is.
* CustomUniform: In a very small way; while his ripped jeans and leather jacket certainly ''seem'' rebellious, [[RuleAbidingRebel both are still within the school's uniform dress code]].
* DelinquentHair: He likes to dye his hair and his tips [[KaleidoscopeHair different colors]] to fit in with his [[{{Delinquents}} too cool for school facade]]. He also has eyebrow and lip piercings to complete the look.
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Implied to be part of why he dresses this way. Though, considering he has [[{{Polyamory}} two girlfriends]], he must be doing ''something'' right.
* NerdGlasses: While he tries to be cool with dyed hair and piercings, he has to wear large glasses. Also, Teri is merciless when it comes to teasing him.
* SickeninglySweethearts: With Teri and Snow. Despite how much Teri and Vrik [[VitriolicBestBuds tease each other]], Vrik is often caught thinking about how much he loves his girlfriends.
* VitriolicBestBuds: With Teri. Vrik considers Teri his best friend as well as his girlfriend, so this still applies.
* WindsOfDestinyChange: Can control luck. To him, it manifests as glowing gold sand, which he can manipulate with his mind. The more sand in an area, the luckier that area is.
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* AffectionateNickname: Vrik and Teri give Snow any Snow-based nickname they can think of: Snowbelle, Snowflower, Snowflake, Snowball, and so on.
* CoolShades: Teri and her cool cherry-red shades. Not as weird as it should be, considering that the school is in a desert.
* DirtyMindReading: She often uses her powers to peek into others' minds and find out about their relationships.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Zig-zagged. While Teri is loud and tomboy-ish, she takes her role as TeamMom really seriously. Meanwhile, though Kage is quieter and more studious, he is easily flustered and can be just as flighty as Teri.
* MamaBear: To the 'No Parents Kids.'
* MindOverManners: Averted. Teri has no issue with the fact that she can't turn off her telepathy. At worst, she gets a headache from the constant chatter when she's tired.
* PromotionToParent: To all in the 'No Parents Kids' club. Implied to be part of the reason why the orphanage is the OrphanageOfLove.
* TeamMom: Not to her own team; to the 'No Parents Kids.' She refuses to take care of anyone except "her kids."
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: The Tomboy to Snow's Girly-Girl.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Platonic example with Kage.
* SchoolgirlLesbians: With Snow.
* SickeninglySweethearts: To Snow and Vrik. Despite how much Teri and Vrik [[VitriolicBestBuds tease each other]], Vrik is often caught thinking about how much he loves his girlfriends.
* {{Telepathy}}: She can read minds.
* VitriolicBestBuds: With Vrik. Teri considers Vrik her best friend as well as her boyfriend, so this still applies.
* CoolShades: Teri and her cool cherry-red shades. Not as weird as it should be, considering that the school is in a desert.
* DirtyMindReading: She often uses her powers to peek into others' minds and find out about their relationships.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Zig-zagged. While Teri is loud and tomboy-ish, she takes her role as TeamMom really seriously. Meanwhile, though Kage is quieter and more studious, he is easily flustered and can be just as flighty as Teri.
* MamaBear: To the 'No Parents Kids.'
* MindOverManners: Averted. Teri has no issue with the fact that she can't turn off her telepathy. At worst, she gets a headache from the constant chatter when she's tired.
* PromotionToParent: To all in the 'No Parents Kids' club. Implied to be part of the reason why the orphanage is the OrphanageOfLove.
* TeamMom: Not to her own team; to the 'No Parents Kids.' She refuses to take care of anyone except "her kids."
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: The Tomboy to Snow's Girly-Girl.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Platonic example with Kage.
* SchoolgirlLesbians: With Snow.
* SickeninglySweethearts: To Snow and Vrik. Despite how much Teri and Vrik [[VitriolicBestBuds tease each other]], Vrik is often caught thinking about how much he loves his girlfriends.
* {{Telepathy}}: She can read minds.
* VitriolicBestBuds: With Vrik. Teri considers Vrik her best friend as well as her boyfriend, so this still applies.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: While Teri doesn't care much, Snow finds Vrik's fashion to be adorable. [[spoiler: Though she stops liking it as much once she realizes her brother dresses the same way.]]
* BigBrotherAttraction: Averted. [[spoiler: Once she finds out Vrik and Noir have the same fashion tastes she starts to find herself less attracted to the 'bad boy' image.]]
* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: Vrik, if 'sulking' or 'pouting' can count as brooding. [[spoiler: Also a platonic example with Noir.]]
* DisappearedDad: Her dad isn't mentioned by anyone.
* DontSplitUsUp: [[spoiler: Due to her brother not having any powers, he was forced to go to St. Carthaige's while Snow went to Nuther's. They haven't seen each other for almost seven years since he was admitted. After they reunite, Snow leaves Nuther's to attend the new St. Carthaige's with Noir.]]
* EmbarrassingFullName: [[spoiler: Martha Peters.]] Snow herself says that its family tradition to give children horribly embarrassing names.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Teri and Vrik love to give her AffectionateNicknames. However, Snow mostly finds these either lackluster or tremendously embarrassing.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: [[spoiler: The responsible to Noir's foolish.]]
* LittleBitBeastly: A dog E.B.S., with the ears, tail, sense of smell, and eye sight of a dog. [[spoiler: Eventually, she leaves Nuther's to go to the new St. Carthaige's to be with her brother.]]
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: [[spoiler: Her real name is Martha Peters. She goes by Snow Vane to stick to the weather-themed naming of her mother, Rain.]]
* SiblingYinYang: [[spoiler: With Noir. She's a quiet, sweet girly girl, while he's a loud, rebellious delinquent.]]
* ThirdEye: In the middle of her forehead.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: The Girly-Girl to Teri's Tomboy.
* WeatherManipulation: She can manipulate the weather.
* BigBrotherAttraction: Averted. [[spoiler: Once she finds out Vrik and Noir have the same fashion tastes she starts to find herself less attracted to the 'bad boy' image.]]
* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: Vrik, if 'sulking' or 'pouting' can count as brooding. [[spoiler: Also a platonic example with Noir.]]
* DisappearedDad: Her dad isn't mentioned by anyone.
* DontSplitUsUp: [[spoiler: Due to her brother not having any powers, he was forced to go to St. Carthaige's while Snow went to Nuther's. They haven't seen each other for almost seven years since he was admitted. After they reunite, Snow leaves Nuther's to attend the new St. Carthaige's with Noir.]]
* EmbarrassingFullName: [[spoiler: Martha Peters.]] Snow herself says that its family tradition to give children horribly embarrassing names.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Teri and Vrik love to give her AffectionateNicknames. However, Snow mostly finds these either lackluster or tremendously embarrassing.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: [[spoiler: The responsible to Noir's foolish.]]
* LittleBitBeastly: A dog E.B.S., with the ears, tail, sense of smell, and eye sight of a dog. [[spoiler: Eventually, she leaves Nuther's to go to the new St. Carthaige's to be with her brother.]]
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: [[spoiler: Her real name is Martha Peters. She goes by Snow Vane to stick to the weather-themed naming of her mother, Rain.]]
* SiblingYinYang: [[spoiler: With Noir. She's a quiet, sweet girly girl, while he's a loud, rebellious delinquent.]]
* ThirdEye: In the middle of her forehead.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: The Girly-Girl to Teri's Tomboy.
* WeatherManipulation: She can manipulate the weather.
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* HalfIdenticalTwins: Despite being assigned different sexes at birth, Rory and Casi are alike enough in looks and stature that Rory can wear Casi's clothes no problem.
* InnocentBlueEyes: Unlike her sister, her big, blue eyes show how innocent and naive she is.
* {{Invisibility}}: Can turn herself invisible. However, she has shaky, if any, control over her abilities. When she's flustered or nervous (which is often) she'll often blink out of sight.
* PolarOppositeTwins: Soft-spoken and nervous whereas Casi is loud and confident.
* PrecociousCrush: Has one on Kaya.
* [[MommasBoy Momma's Girl]]: Towards her semi-adoptive mother, Teri. She's clingy and quite close to the older girl.
* MagicPants: Rory can turn her clothes invisible as well as herself. It's implied that that requires a lot of control... because otherwise [[InvisibleStreaker she'd have to take them off]].
* {{Transgender}}: MTF (male to female). Rory's transition throughout the book is mostly a background event.
* ShrinkingViolet: Nervous and easily frightened.
* WonderTwinPowers: Averted. Rory and Casi's powers have nothing to do with each other.
* InnocentBlueEyes: Unlike her sister, her big, blue eyes show how innocent and naive she is.
* {{Invisibility}}: Can turn herself invisible. However, she has shaky, if any, control over her abilities. When she's flustered or nervous (which is often) she'll often blink out of sight.
* PolarOppositeTwins: Soft-spoken and nervous whereas Casi is loud and confident.
* PrecociousCrush: Has one on Kaya.
* [[MommasBoy Momma's Girl]]: Towards her semi-adoptive mother, Teri. She's clingy and quite close to the older girl.
* MagicPants: Rory can turn her clothes invisible as well as herself. It's implied that that requires a lot of control... because otherwise [[InvisibleStreaker she'd have to take them off]].
* {{Transgender}}: MTF (male to female). Rory's transition throughout the book is mostly a background event.
* ShrinkingViolet: Nervous and easily frightened.
* WonderTwinPowers: Averted. Rory and Casi's powers have nothing to do with each other.
Together:
* BattleCouple: Like everything else, fighting is done together.
* CantLiveWithoutYou: A mild example. [[spoiler: Casi and Celeste find it really hard to do anything when separated; Celeste is unable to control her powers without Casi, and Casi is unable to do ''anything'' without Celeste giving her energy.]]
* LightFeminineDarkFeminine: Casi has blonde hair and loves pink mini skirts; Celeste wears black sweaters and her bangs often get in her eyes. However, Casi is much more unpleasant than Celeste; she yells, curses, and is more likely to kick open a door than knock. Celeste, meanwhile, is the ShrinkingViolet who follows Casi like a shadow.
* PureEnergy: Celeste has access to a huge amount of energy, but she can't control it. Enter Casi, who has no power of her own beyond being able to channel Celete's energy into something usable, whether it's [[EnergyBall Energy Balls]], [[PsychicLink Telepathy]], [[MindOverMatter Telekinesis]], and so-on. [[spoiler: when they're separated however, they're useless. Celeste has too much energy, which makes her both extremely jittery and extremely irritable, along with no control of what her powers do. On the other hand, Casi, so used to Celeste supplying her energy, becomes almost [[{{Sleepyhead}} narcoleptic]], and unable to do anything other than stand and sway sleepily.]]
* MindlinkMates: Casi and Celeste have a [[PsychicLink private telepathic link]]. Teri [[spoiler: and Haikki]] can overhear it, but other than that, they can't hear or be heard by anyone else.
* LipstickLesbian: They're both feminine and they're both in love with each other.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Both for each other.
Casi:
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: She's very protective of her sister, Rory.
* InnocentBlueEyes: Averted. She has big, blue eyes and is very mean.
* GirlishPigtails: She has two half-pigtails on each side of her head.
* GirlyGirlWithATomboyStreak: Despite her blonde hair and love of pink, she's prone to yelling and cursing more than the boys.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's only cruel to others because of Celeste and Rory; due to the discrimination Celeste has faced before and discrimination Casi is afraid Rory will face, Casi is very protective of both. She either acts out in hopes of scaring threats into leaving them alone or so that they will punish her instead of Rory or Celeste.
* [[LovableAlphaBitch Loveable]] BetaBitch: The BetaBitch to [[LovableAlphaBitch Bety]], but unlike usual set-ups, she's content being the beta bitch.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: [[spoiler: Celeste was continuously discriminated against in school and ended up being held back a year due to teachers bullying her. Casi bombed her own classes and assignments to get held back as well so the two wouldn't be separated.]]
* PinkMeansFeminine: Her favorite color is pink.
* ProudBeauty: Not exactly sexy, but definitely cute, and proud of it.
* [[UnderstandingBoyfriend Understanding Girlfriend]]: To Celeste in regards to her jealousy. When she notices it, Casi finds it adorable. She understands that Celeste is afraid of separation because of both her E.B.S. and her powers.
* WonderTwinPowers: Averted. Rory and Casi's powers have nothing to do with each other.
Celeste:
* AloofDarkHairedGirl: She's not very sociable and has dark hair.
* ClingyJealousGirl: She doesn't like it when Casi doesn't pay attention to her.
* EvilIsPetty: Inverted. She's on the side of good, but is extremely petty to others.
* {{Goth}}: Of the Gloomy variety; she's quiet and wears a lot of dark colors.
* HeadDesk: [[spoiler: After being kidnapped at St. Carthaige's, Celeste repeatedly hits her head on the table in front of her in frustration.]]
* IceQueen: Can seem this way to others, especially since she distrusts a lot of people.
* LadyOfBlackMagic: She's cold and cool, and has an extreme amount of power [[spoiler: ...but only when she's with Casi. When they're separated the pent-up energy makes her explode, both figuratively and literally.]]
* LittleBitBeastly: She has bat ears, bat teeth, and dark, leathery skin. Unfortunately, her eyesight is bad too.
* PinkMeansFeminine: Though her wardrobe is [[{{Goth}} mostly black]], she still likes the color pink.
* ScratchDamage: [[spoiler: To Haikki; she licks her hand and scratches Haikki with her hand. Then implies that she has rabies. It doesn't do much besides gross out Haikki and make her mad, but Celeste is happy with the pettiness.]]
* ShrinkingViolet: She's extremely shy and hides behind Casi most of the time; however, she comes off as being a bit of an IceQueen at times.
* BattleCouple: Like everything else, fighting is done together.
* CantLiveWithoutYou: A mild example. [[spoiler: Casi and Celeste find it really hard to do anything when separated; Celeste is unable to control her powers without Casi, and Casi is unable to do ''anything'' without Celeste giving her energy.]]
* LightFeminineDarkFeminine: Casi has blonde hair and loves pink mini skirts; Celeste wears black sweaters and her bangs often get in her eyes. However, Casi is much more unpleasant than Celeste; she yells, curses, and is more likely to kick open a door than knock. Celeste, meanwhile, is the ShrinkingViolet who follows Casi like a shadow.
* PureEnergy: Celeste has access to a huge amount of energy, but she can't control it. Enter Casi, who has no power of her own beyond being able to channel Celete's energy into something usable, whether it's [[EnergyBall Energy Balls]], [[PsychicLink Telepathy]], [[MindOverMatter Telekinesis]], and so-on. [[spoiler: when they're separated however, they're useless. Celeste has too much energy, which makes her both extremely jittery and extremely irritable, along with no control of what her powers do. On the other hand, Casi, so used to Celeste supplying her energy, becomes almost [[{{Sleepyhead}} narcoleptic]], and unable to do anything other than stand and sway sleepily.]]
* MindlinkMates: Casi and Celeste have a [[PsychicLink private telepathic link]]. Teri [[spoiler: and Haikki]] can overhear it, but other than that, they can't hear or be heard by anyone else.
* LipstickLesbian: They're both feminine and they're both in love with each other.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Both for each other.
Casi:
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: She's very protective of her sister, Rory.
* InnocentBlueEyes: Averted. She has big, blue eyes and is very mean.
* GirlishPigtails: She has two half-pigtails on each side of her head.
* GirlyGirlWithATomboyStreak: Despite her blonde hair and love of pink, she's prone to yelling and cursing more than the boys.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's only cruel to others because of Celeste and Rory; due to the discrimination Celeste has faced before and discrimination Casi is afraid Rory will face, Casi is very protective of both. She either acts out in hopes of scaring threats into leaving them alone or so that they will punish her instead of Rory or Celeste.
* [[LovableAlphaBitch Loveable]] BetaBitch: The BetaBitch to [[LovableAlphaBitch Bety]], but unlike usual set-ups, she's content being the beta bitch.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: [[spoiler: Celeste was continuously discriminated against in school and ended up being held back a year due to teachers bullying her. Casi bombed her own classes and assignments to get held back as well so the two wouldn't be separated.]]
* PinkMeansFeminine: Her favorite color is pink.
* ProudBeauty: Not exactly sexy, but definitely cute, and proud of it.
* [[UnderstandingBoyfriend Understanding Girlfriend]]: To Celeste in regards to her jealousy. When she notices it, Casi finds it adorable. She understands that Celeste is afraid of separation because of both her E.B.S. and her powers.
* WonderTwinPowers: Averted. Rory and Casi's powers have nothing to do with each other.
Celeste:
* AloofDarkHairedGirl: She's not very sociable and has dark hair.
* ClingyJealousGirl: She doesn't like it when Casi doesn't pay attention to her.
* EvilIsPetty: Inverted. She's on the side of good, but is extremely petty to others.
* {{Goth}}: Of the Gloomy variety; she's quiet and wears a lot of dark colors.
* HeadDesk: [[spoiler: After being kidnapped at St. Carthaige's, Celeste repeatedly hits her head on the table in front of her in frustration.]]
* IceQueen: Can seem this way to others, especially since she distrusts a lot of people.
* LadyOfBlackMagic: She's cold and cool, and has an extreme amount of power [[spoiler: ...but only when she's with Casi. When they're separated the pent-up energy makes her explode, both figuratively and literally.]]
* LittleBitBeastly: She has bat ears, bat teeth, and dark, leathery skin. Unfortunately, her eyesight is bad too.
* PinkMeansFeminine: Though her wardrobe is [[{{Goth}} mostly black]], she still likes the color pink.
* ScratchDamage: [[spoiler: To Haikki; she licks her hand and scratches Haikki with her hand. Then implies that she has rabies. It doesn't do much besides gross out Haikki and make her mad, but Celeste is happy with the pettiness.]]
* ShrinkingViolet: She's extremely shy and hides behind Casi most of the time; however, she comes off as being a bit of an IceQueen at times.
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* [[spoiler: AmnesiacsAreInnocent: Averted. Despite Bety's memory loss, she's still a [[AlphaBitch bitch]].]]
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: To Kaya. [[spoiler: Even though they're not actually sisters. Bety is Kaya's [[OlderThanTheyLook great-aunt]].]]
* DespairEventHorizon: Averted. [[spoiler: Despite Kaya being kidnapped, Bety is simply filled with determination to get her back.]] [[spoiler: But then Zig-zagged: when Hiyoko is killed, Bety vows revenge.]]
* FirstNameBasis: Bety is this with all of the teachers and faculty. She even has a [[AffectionateNickname special nickname]] for Thomas, the gym teacher. [[spoiler: This is because Bety has been in school as long as most of the faculty. In the case of Thomas Winters, they were even students together.]]
* ForgetfulJones: Bety is quite forgetful at times, from confusing [[FakeMemories what things have happened]] to MissingTime. [[spoiler: It's because the school is [[LaserGuidedAmnesia forcefully removing her memories]].]]
* [[spoiler: HarmfulHealing: She has no control over her powers and has been stuck in high-school for almost forty years because of it.]]
* HotForTeacher: Bety has a crush on Tommy Winters. [[spoiler: It turns out they actually dated when Tommy was in school.]]
* [[spoiler: MoralityChain: Hiyoko becomes this for her. After her death, Bety becomes very [[DespairEventHorizon upset]].]]
* [[spoiler: LaserGuidedAmnesia: The school periodically erases Bety's memories in hopes of both controlling her and also studying a Healer before they [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity go off the deep end]].]]
* LifeDrinker: When Bety is injured, she becomes this to use other's LifeEnergy to heal herself.
* LifeEnergy: Bety should, theoretically, be able to control this; by taking life force from one thing, she can apply it to another injury and [[HealingFactor heal it]]. However, she has a lot of difficulty [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest controlling it]], and can't remember a time when she successfully used it on purpose.
* LovableAlphaBitch: She's the AlphaBitch at school, has her own GirlPosse and GayBestFriend, and she's crass and rude... but [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold don't mess with her students]].
* OlderThanTheyLook: Bety is short and chubby, so some people mistake her for a younger teenager. [[spoiler: Even further: Bety actually ''should'' be in her fifties, due to her [[HealingFactor powers]], she actually looks like a teenager.]]
* OneHeadTaller: Bety is already shorter than a normal person and Lil'J is already taller than average, and he has a crush on her.
* PowerIncontinence: Bety has no control over her healing power unless she's injured, and then she has no control over who she takes health ''from.''
* ProudBeauty: Bety knows she's pretty and is proud of it.
* [[spoiler: RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: With Hiyoko, after the final battle of the first book.]]
* RapunzelHair: Her hair goes down to her butt. Though considering how short she is, that might make her hair shorter than it seems.
* SugarAndIcePersonality: Towards everyone except Kaya, especially Lil'J (where it becomes borderline IceQueen).
* TheNapolean: She's short and very aggressive.
* ValleyGirl: She talks in [[TotallyRadical the slang]] and certainly loves the beach, but she doesn't have the [[SincerityMode honest sincerity]] or [[TheDitz the stupidity]] typically associated with the character. [[spoiler: However, she's not a [[StockParody parody character]]; she is actually ''from'' the sixties. Her healing powers [[OlderThanTheyLook make her eternally young]].]]
* VitriolicBestBuds: With Lil'D. She dared him to make his only pair of glasses huge TriangleShades.
* WalkingSpoiler: She has... a lot of spoilers related to her.
* [[spoiler: WhoWantsToLiveForever: Theoretically, Bety could live forever. She doesn't like the idea.]]
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: As with all [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest Healers]], Bety faces the threat of going insane from her powers. [[spoiler: This is exactly what the school is trying to avoid by [[LaserGuidedAmnesia erasing her memories]].]]
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: To Kaya. [[spoiler: Even though they're not actually sisters. Bety is Kaya's [[OlderThanTheyLook great-aunt]].]]
* DespairEventHorizon: Averted. [[spoiler: Despite Kaya being kidnapped, Bety is simply filled with determination to get her back.]] [[spoiler: But then Zig-zagged: when Hiyoko is killed, Bety vows revenge.]]
* FirstNameBasis: Bety is this with all of the teachers and faculty. She even has a [[AffectionateNickname special nickname]] for Thomas, the gym teacher. [[spoiler: This is because Bety has been in school as long as most of the faculty. In the case of Thomas Winters, they were even students together.]]
* ForgetfulJones: Bety is quite forgetful at times, from confusing [[FakeMemories what things have happened]] to MissingTime. [[spoiler: It's because the school is [[LaserGuidedAmnesia forcefully removing her memories]].]]
* [[spoiler: HarmfulHealing: She has no control over her powers and has been stuck in high-school for almost forty years because of it.]]
* HotForTeacher: Bety has a crush on Tommy Winters. [[spoiler: It turns out they actually dated when Tommy was in school.]]
* [[spoiler: MoralityChain: Hiyoko becomes this for her. After her death, Bety becomes very [[DespairEventHorizon upset]].]]
* [[spoiler: LaserGuidedAmnesia: The school periodically erases Bety's memories in hopes of both controlling her and also studying a Healer before they [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity go off the deep end]].]]
* LifeDrinker: When Bety is injured, she becomes this to use other's LifeEnergy to heal herself.
* LifeEnergy: Bety should, theoretically, be able to control this; by taking life force from one thing, she can apply it to another injury and [[HealingFactor heal it]]. However, she has a lot of difficulty [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest controlling it]], and can't remember a time when she successfully used it on purpose.
* LovableAlphaBitch: She's the AlphaBitch at school, has her own GirlPosse and GayBestFriend, and she's crass and rude... but [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold don't mess with her students]].
* OlderThanTheyLook: Bety is short and chubby, so some people mistake her for a younger teenager. [[spoiler: Even further: Bety actually ''should'' be in her fifties, due to her [[HealingFactor powers]], she actually looks like a teenager.]]
* OneHeadTaller: Bety is already shorter than a normal person and Lil'J is already taller than average, and he has a crush on her.
* PowerIncontinence: Bety has no control over her healing power unless she's injured, and then she has no control over who she takes health ''from.''
* ProudBeauty: Bety knows she's pretty and is proud of it.
* [[spoiler: RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: With Hiyoko, after the final battle of the first book.]]
* RapunzelHair: Her hair goes down to her butt. Though considering how short she is, that might make her hair shorter than it seems.
* SugarAndIcePersonality: Towards everyone except Kaya, especially Lil'J (where it becomes borderline IceQueen).
* TheNapolean: She's short and very aggressive.
* ValleyGirl: She talks in [[TotallyRadical the slang]] and certainly loves the beach, but she doesn't have the [[SincerityMode honest sincerity]] or [[TheDitz the stupidity]] typically associated with the character. [[spoiler: However, she's not a [[StockParody parody character]]; she is actually ''from'' the sixties. Her healing powers [[OlderThanTheyLook make her eternally young]].]]
* VitriolicBestBuds: With Lil'D. She dared him to make his only pair of glasses huge TriangleShades.
* WalkingSpoiler: She has... a lot of spoilers related to her.
* [[spoiler: WhoWantsToLiveForever: Theoretically, Bety could live forever. She doesn't like the idea.]]
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: As with all [[HealingMagicIsTheHardest Healers]], Bety faces the threat of going insane from her powers. [[spoiler: This is exactly what the school is trying to avoid by [[LaserGuidedAmnesia erasing her memories]].]]
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Averted with Lil'J. He likes his brother fine, but he isn't protective of him, nor very parental.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: The responsible to Lil'J's [[spoiler: and the rest of his brothers']] foolish.
* LovableJock: He's pretty sporty and athletic (though, at their school, everyone has to be).
* [[spoiler: MassiveNumberedSiblings: Lil'D has five older brothers. [[LovableJock: All of them are members of the same frat and play football]]. It's expected that he'll join them when he graduates.]]
* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend!]]: On the receiving end of this from Kage. He doesn't much care about what people think.
* SecretRelationship: With Kage. Though they're not very good at hiding it, especially since Kage's sister is a [[DirtyMindReading mind reader]].
* {{Teleportation}}: He can teleport inanimate objects to an undisclosed place he calls 'The Locker' that only he can access and pull them out as well.
* TriangleShades: He wears them at all times. They're prescription. Bety dared him to make his only pair of glasses huge anime shades.
* TheStoic: He doesn't show a lot of emotion.
* [[spoiler: UncannyFamilyResemblance: He denies it, but everyone says he's similar he to his brothers.]]
* VitriolicBestBuds: With Bety.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: The responsible to Lil'J's [[spoiler: and the rest of his brothers']] foolish.
* LovableJock: He's pretty sporty and athletic (though, at their school, everyone has to be).
* [[spoiler: MassiveNumberedSiblings: Lil'D has five older brothers. [[LovableJock: All of them are members of the same frat and play football]]. It's expected that he'll join them when he graduates.]]
* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend!]]: On the receiving end of this from Kage. He doesn't much care about what people think.
* SecretRelationship: With Kage. Though they're not very good at hiding it, especially since Kage's sister is a [[DirtyMindReading mind reader]].
* {{Teleportation}}: He can teleport inanimate objects to an undisclosed place he calls 'The Locker' that only he can access and pull them out as well.
* TriangleShades: He wears them at all times. They're prescription. Bety dared him to make his only pair of glasses huge anime shades.
* TheStoic: He doesn't show a lot of emotion.
* [[spoiler: UncannyFamilyResemblance: He denies it, but everyone says he's similar he to his brothers.]]
* VitriolicBestBuds: With Bety.
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* BadassNormal: As a Giles, he has no powers, but he can fight along with the rest of his team.
* DoggedNiceGuy: He has a crush on Bety and is extremely obvious about it. However, though she doesn't reciprocate, he's perfectly fine with being her friend.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: The foolish [[spoiler: with the rest of his brothers]] to Lil'J's responsible.
* GentleGiant: He's extremely tall, but kind and a bit naive.
* LovableJock: He's pretty sporty and athletic (though, at their school, everyone has to be).
* [[spoiler: MassiveNumberedSiblings: Lil'D has six older brothers. [[LovableJock: All of them are members of the same frat and play football]]. It's expected that he'll join them when he graduates.]]
* [[spoiler: MagicalSeventhSon: Inverted. His six brothers all have magic powers, but he is [[MuggleBornOfMages powerless]].]]
* OneHeadTaller: He has a crush on Bety and he's extremely tall.
* SitcomArchNemesis: With Kaya. She's the only one he's outright mean to.
* [[spoiler: UncannyFamilyResemblance: He has similar interests and sense of humor as his brother, along with tastes in women (except for [[StraightGay Lil'D]], [[StraightGay Lil'T]], and [[AmbiguouslyGay Lil'R of course]].]]
* DoggedNiceGuy: He has a crush on Bety and is extremely obvious about it. However, though she doesn't reciprocate, he's perfectly fine with being her friend.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: The foolish [[spoiler: with the rest of his brothers]] to Lil'J's responsible.
* GentleGiant: He's extremely tall, but kind and a bit naive.
* LovableJock: He's pretty sporty and athletic (though, at their school, everyone has to be).
* [[spoiler: MassiveNumberedSiblings: Lil'D has six older brothers. [[LovableJock: All of them are members of the same frat and play football]]. It's expected that he'll join them when he graduates.]]
* [[spoiler: MagicalSeventhSon: Inverted. His six brothers all have magic powers, but he is [[MuggleBornOfMages powerless]].]]
* OneHeadTaller: He has a crush on Bety and he's extremely tall.
* SitcomArchNemesis: With Kaya. She's the only one he's outright mean to.
* [[spoiler: UncannyFamilyResemblance: He has similar interests and sense of humor as his brother, along with tastes in women (except for [[StraightGay Lil'D]], [[StraightGay Lil'T]], and [[AmbiguouslyGay Lil'R of course]].]]
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* CoolBigSis: Sees Bety as one. [[spoiler: It turns out, Bety isn't actually her sister; she's her great-aunt. However, because of their shared last name and their resemblance, [[MemoryWipingCrew they]] rearranged her memories so she forgot that she ''didn't'' have a sister.]]
* [[spoiler: FalseMemories: She remembers Bety as her sister, but that's actually not true.]]
* PrecociousCrush: Rory has one on her, and its unclear if its unrequited or Kaya is just waiting for Rory to get a bit older. At the very least, Kaya is fond of the younger girl.
* SitcomArchNemesis: With Lil'J. She's pleasant to everyone but him.
* TheFashionista: She's highly interested in fashion. Part of the reason why she dislikes Lil'J is because of his fashion sense... even though they all wear [[SchoolUniformsAreTheNewBlack the same uniform]]. Later, she starts making dresses and other clothes for Rory.
* [[spoiler: FalseMemories: She remembers Bety as her sister, but that's actually not true.]]
* PrecociousCrush: Rory has one on her, and its unclear if its unrequited or Kaya is just waiting for Rory to get a bit older. At the very least, Kaya is fond of the younger girl.
* SitcomArchNemesis: With Lil'J. She's pleasant to everyone but him.
* TheFashionista: She's highly interested in fashion. Part of the reason why she dislikes Lil'J is because of his fashion sense... even though they all wear [[SchoolUniformsAreTheNewBlack the same uniform]]. Later, she starts making dresses and other clothes for Rory.
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'''Thomas Winters'''
* HotTeacher: He's young and attractive enough that Bety has a crush on him.
* TeacherStudentRomance: Bety wants this with him. [[spoiler: it turns out he actually ''did'' date Bety when he was younger.]]
'''Mr. Cappoccia'''
'''Thomas Winters'''
* HotTeacher: He's young and attractive enough that Bety has a crush on him.
* TeacherStudentRomance: Bety wants this with him. [[spoiler: it turns out he actually ''did'' date Bety when he was younger.]]
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* AbusiveParents: The Hexcyanferrate parents are this to [[TheUnfavorite Molly and Xenon]]. They keep [[DeniedFoodAsPunishment padlocks on the fridge]], which only they and [[ParentalFavoritism Annie]] have keys to. When they aren't hurling barbed comments at Molly and Xenon, they're [[ParentalNeglect ignoring them]]. [[HonorRelatedAbuse While Molly's been dealing with this for all his remembered life, since he's always been powerless, so being gay didn't change much of his parents' treatment of him. Meanwhile, Xenon's had a tougher time dealing with their parent's abuse, since they used to be adored by their parents... until they came out as trans.]]
* AdultsAreUseless: Zig-zagged. While most of the work does fall on the youngsters, they are still specially trained youngsters-trained by adults. Of course, there are ''some'' instances where adults are better suited for the task at hand, [[spoiler: and the reliance on kids by adults is exploited by Sepida and Persin]].
* BadassNormal: Even parents who both have powers can end up having a kid who's, for all intents and purposes, a [[MuggleBornOfMages Muggle]]. Still, there's uses for them at Nuther's; they end up becoming TheSmartGuy who the more-offensive team members use to supply with information about [[MonsterOfTheWeek whatever monster they're fighting]]. Of course, they still have to learn how to fight--can't have any of these precious children getting killed off, now can we!
** In school, they're referred to as [[BuffyTheVampireSlayer Giles]], to separate them from the regular, untrained {{Muggles}}.
* BreakUpMakeUpScenario: [[spoiler: Xenon ends up dumping Zinc after he accidentally cheats on them, but they take him back eventually.]]
* CastFullOfGay: There's only a few heterosexual characters. Well, less than 'a few,' and more like 'one or two.' Given the authors are both gay, it shouldn't really be a surprise.
** StraightGay: Since almost every character is not heterosexual, there's few, if any, reliance on stereotypes. So, most everyone can fall under the "StraightGay" umbrella.
* ClassTrip: Of course, given that this is a school that trains kids to fight monsters, these are less 'trips to the science museum' and more 'trips to hunt down and kill demons'.
* GoneHorriblyRight: At one point, when fed up with [[SitcomArchNemesis Molly and Zinc's constant bickering]], their team decides to take the car and leave them stranded in the city to find their own way home [[spoiler: as a prank, of course. However, when the group returns a few hours later to pick up the two boys, it turns out they took them seriously... and have left.]]
* LittleBitBeastly: The E.B.S. characters. Those affected have the ears, tails, eyes, and sometimes a few claws of certain animals. Besides that, they also have a ThirdEye in the center of their forehead, and the ability to cancel out the powers of others. Of course, they're treated the exact same as everyone else! ...As long as they hide any non-human characteristics and have the proper papers to prove they're not mindless animals. [[spoiler: E.B.S. afflicted people were actually the results of an experiment by a radical super-powered terrorist group who, intent on destroying the 'elite' powered humans, combined some of said super-powered humans with certain animals resistant to their powers.]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Around thirty, with seven point of view characters. There's quite a bit.
* MeaningfulName: Most all of the characters have names that mean ''something''.
* NoodleIncident: Just ''what'' happened on [[spoiler: Molly and Zinc's friendship field trip]]?!
* SchoolgirlLesbians: Since most of the girls who love other girls are high-school age, they fall under this trope.
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'''Molly Hexcyanferrate'''
* BadassNormal: He may have no powers, but he's definitely prepared for the life he's chosen. Plus, he's the ''team leader''; he's definitely got some skills.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Bordering on KnightTemplarBigBrother when it comes to Annie, but definitely shows shades of this when it comes to Xenon as well, mainly in the form of [[MySisterIsOffLimits My Sibling is Off-Limits]]. It doesn't help that [[SitcomArchNemesis Zinc]] is the one his little sibling decided to date.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Inverted. Molly finds his given name, [[EmbarrassingFirstName Molybdenum]], much more embarrassing, given how it's unpronounceable and a random element on the periodic table.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: [[spoiler: With Zinc, after their bonding trip.]] Though, one could argue that relationship crosses into HoYay territory.
* JockDadNerdSon: Molly's dad is a magical government agent that hunts and fights demons, while Molly himself is a [[{{Muggles}} Giles]] with straight A's.
* MuggleBornOfMages: One of the many reasons Molly is TheUnfavorite.
* [[MySisterIsOffLimits My Siblings Are Off-Limits!]]: Though this mainly manifests in animosity towards Zinc, Molly also doesn't approve of [[SchoolgirlLesbians Beryl and Annie's budding feelings]]. [[spoiler: Due to Molly and Zinc's later friendship upgrade, they become BestFriendsInLaw... after Xenon un-dumps Zinc, of course.]]
* PromotedToParent: Less so with Annie, as their parents still like her, but given their treatment of Xenon, Molly has basically taken over all parental roles in regards to Xenon.
* SecondLove: [[spoiler: Depending on how you interpret the relationship between Molly and Zinc post-bonding, Zinc could be this for Molly, but Molly's clear romantic feelings for Lil'T fit this trope much more clearly.]]
* TeamDad: As he's the eldest in the group and the group's leader, he usually falls into this role within his team. It doesn't help that he's pretty used to being in the paternal role, thanks to Annie and Xenon.
* SitcomArchNemesis: With Zinc. [[spoiler: That is, until their super weird friendship field trip.]]
* TheOneThatGotAway: Holmium, his ex-boyfriend. [[spoiler: Made worse by the fact that it was Molly's parents who forced them to break up.]]
* TheUnfavorite: Molly is not liked by his parents since he's powerless and gay.
'''Zinc Ribitol'''
* BigBrotherInstinct: Though he's usually pretty hands-off in regards to taking care of Beryl (when compared to [[KnightTemplarBigBrother Molly]], that is), he definitely has his moments, especially in regards to [[{{Ephebophile}} Mr. Cappiocia's]]... interest... in his sister.
* FlawExploitation: Literally his super-power; has a strange amount of luck when it comes to battle in stumbling upon the thing that will hurt, if not kill, his opponent.
* HeterosexualLifePartners:
** With Radon; they've been [[ChildhoodFriends friends since childhood]].
** [[spoiler: With Molly, after their bonding trip.]] Though, one could argue that relationship crosses into HoYay territory.
* LoveWillLeadYouBack: [[spoiler: after getting dumped by Xenon, he's willing to wait for however long for them to come back.]] As it should be, since it was his fault they broke up in the first place.
* MakeOutKids: With Xenon.
* SitcomArchNemesis: With Molly. [[spoiler: That is, until their super weird friendship field trip.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Xenon accuses him often of this. [[spoiler: While his and Molly's relationship truly is platonic, his and Puriel's relationship definitely was not--though he had no idea Xenon would dissapprove of [[EnemyWithin Puriel]] in the first place, given that Xenon had no problem with the rest of their [[FlipPersonality personas]] having feelings for Zinc (or anyone else).]]
'''Malici Santos-Limos'''
'''Radon Quinone'''
'''Annie Hexcyanferrate'''
'''Beryl Ribitol'''
'''Lappia Hernandez'''
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'''Dionea '''
'''Kage Kramer'''
'''Vrik Muller'''
'''Teri Kramer'''
'''Snow Vane'''
'''Rory Thompson'''
'''Casi Thompson & Celeste Kaiser'''
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[[folder:Team Gamma Zeta]]
'''Bety Fairbairn'''
'''Lil'D Bonner'''
'''Lil'J Bonner'''
'''Kaya Fairbairn'''
'''Saloia Kappel'''
'''Tritan Kappel'''
'''Catara Faline'''
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[[folder:Team Omega Epsilon]]
'''Hiyoko Oshiro'''
'''Emilyn Blake'''
'''Neptor Gatos-Espinosas'''
'''Tabila Gatos-Espinosas'''
'''Ibuki Oshiro'''
'''Concua Misra'''
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* AbusiveParents: The Hexcyanferrate parents are this to [[TheUnfavorite Molly and Xenon]]. They keep [[DeniedFoodAsPunishment padlocks on the fridge]], which only they and [[ParentalFavoritism Annie]] have keys to. When they aren't hurling barbed comments at Molly and Xenon, they're [[ParentalNeglect ignoring them]]. [[HonorRelatedAbuse While Molly's been dealing with this for all his remembered life, since he's always been powerless, so being gay didn't change much of his parents' treatment of him. Meanwhile, Xenon's had a tougher time dealing with their parent's abuse, since they used to be adored by their parents... until they came out as trans.]]
* AdultsAreUseless: Zig-zagged. While most of the work does fall on the youngsters, they are still specially trained youngsters-trained by adults. Of course, there are ''some'' instances where adults are better suited for the task at hand, [[spoiler: and the reliance on kids by adults is exploited by Sepida and Persin]].
* BadassNormal: Even parents who both have powers can end up having a kid who's, for all intents and purposes, a [[MuggleBornOfMages Muggle]]. Still, there's uses for them at Nuther's; they end up becoming TheSmartGuy who the more-offensive team members use to supply with information about [[MonsterOfTheWeek whatever monster they're fighting]]. Of course, they still have to learn how to fight--can't have any of these precious children getting killed off, now can we!
** In school, they're referred to as [[BuffyTheVampireSlayer Giles]], to separate them from the regular, untrained {{Muggles}}.
* BreakUpMakeUpScenario: [[spoiler: Xenon ends up dumping Zinc after he accidentally cheats on them, but they take him back eventually.]]
* CastFullOfGay: There's only a few heterosexual characters. Well, less than 'a few,' and more like 'one or two.' Given the authors are both gay, it shouldn't really be a surprise.
** StraightGay: Since almost every character is not heterosexual, there's few, if any, reliance on stereotypes. So, most everyone can fall under the "StraightGay" umbrella.
* ClassTrip: Of course, given that this is a school that trains kids to fight monsters, these are less 'trips to the science museum' and more 'trips to hunt down and kill demons'.
* GoneHorriblyRight: At one point, when fed up with [[SitcomArchNemesis Molly and Zinc's constant bickering]], their team decides to take the car and leave them stranded in the city to find their own way home [[spoiler: as a prank, of course. However, when the group returns a few hours later to pick up the two boys, it turns out they took them seriously... and have left.]]
* LittleBitBeastly: The E.B.S. characters. Those affected have the ears, tails, eyes, and sometimes a few claws of certain animals. Besides that, they also have a ThirdEye in the center of their forehead, and the ability to cancel out the powers of others. Of course, they're treated the exact same as everyone else! ...As long as they hide any non-human characteristics and have the proper papers to prove they're not mindless animals. [[spoiler: E.B.S. afflicted people were actually the results of an experiment by a radical super-powered terrorist group who, intent on destroying the 'elite' powered humans, combined some of said super-powered humans with certain animals resistant to their powers.]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Around thirty, with seven point of view characters. There's quite a bit.
* MeaningfulName: Most all of the characters have names that mean ''something''.
* NoodleIncident: Just ''what'' happened on [[spoiler: Molly and Zinc's friendship field trip]]?!
* SchoolgirlLesbians: Since most of the girls who love other girls are high-school age, they fall under this trope.
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'''Molly Hexcyanferrate'''
* BadassNormal: He may have no powers, but he's definitely prepared for the life he's chosen. Plus, he's the ''team leader''; he's definitely got some skills.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Bordering on KnightTemplarBigBrother when it comes to Annie, but definitely shows shades of this when it comes to Xenon as well, mainly in the form of [[MySisterIsOffLimits My Sibling is Off-Limits]]. It doesn't help that [[SitcomArchNemesis Zinc]] is the one his little sibling decided to date.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Inverted. Molly finds his given name, [[EmbarrassingFirstName Molybdenum]], much more embarrassing, given how it's unpronounceable and a random element on the periodic table.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: [[spoiler: With Zinc, after their bonding trip.]] Though, one could argue that relationship crosses into HoYay territory.
* JockDadNerdSon: Molly's dad is a magical government agent that hunts and fights demons, while Molly himself is a [[{{Muggles}} Giles]] with straight A's.
* MuggleBornOfMages: One of the many reasons Molly is TheUnfavorite.
* [[MySisterIsOffLimits My Siblings Are Off-Limits!]]: Though this mainly manifests in animosity towards Zinc, Molly also doesn't approve of [[SchoolgirlLesbians Beryl and Annie's budding feelings]]. [[spoiler: Due to Molly and Zinc's later friendship upgrade, they become BestFriendsInLaw... after Xenon un-dumps Zinc, of course.]]
* PromotedToParent: Less so with Annie, as their parents still like her, but given their treatment of Xenon, Molly has basically taken over all parental roles in regards to Xenon.
* SecondLove: [[spoiler: Depending on how you interpret the relationship between Molly and Zinc post-bonding, Zinc could be this for Molly, but Molly's clear romantic feelings for Lil'T fit this trope much more clearly.]]
* TeamDad: As he's the eldest in the group and the group's leader, he usually falls into this role within his team. It doesn't help that he's pretty used to being in the paternal role, thanks to Annie and Xenon.
* SitcomArchNemesis: With Zinc. [[spoiler: That is, until their super weird friendship field trip.]]
* TheOneThatGotAway: Holmium, his ex-boyfriend. [[spoiler: Made worse by the fact that it was Molly's parents who forced them to break up.]]
* TheUnfavorite: Molly is not liked by his parents since he's powerless and gay.
'''Zinc Ribitol'''
* BigBrotherInstinct: Though he's usually pretty hands-off in regards to taking care of Beryl (when compared to [[KnightTemplarBigBrother Molly]], that is), he definitely has his moments, especially in regards to [[{{Ephebophile}} Mr. Cappiocia's]]... interest... in his sister.
* FlawExploitation: Literally his super-power; has a strange amount of luck when it comes to battle in stumbling upon the thing that will hurt, if not kill, his opponent.
* HeterosexualLifePartners:
** With Radon; they've been [[ChildhoodFriends friends since childhood]].
** [[spoiler: With Molly, after their bonding trip.]] Though, one could argue that relationship crosses into HoYay territory.
* LoveWillLeadYouBack: [[spoiler: after getting dumped by Xenon, he's willing to wait for however long for them to come back.]] As it should be, since it was his fault they broke up in the first place.
* MakeOutKids: With Xenon.
* SitcomArchNemesis: With Molly. [[spoiler: That is, until their super weird friendship field trip.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Xenon accuses him often of this. [[spoiler: While his and Molly's relationship truly is platonic, his and Puriel's relationship definitely was not--though he had no idea Xenon would dissapprove of [[EnemyWithin Puriel]] in the first place, given that Xenon had no problem with the rest of their [[FlipPersonality personas]] having feelings for Zinc (or anyone else).]]
'''Malici Santos-Limos'''
'''Radon Quinone'''
'''Annie Hexcyanferrate'''
'''Beryl Ribitol'''
'''Lappia Hernandez'''
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[[folder:Team Omicron Iota]]
'''Dionea '''
'''Kage Kramer'''
'''Vrik Muller'''
'''Teri Kramer'''
'''Snow Vane'''
'''Rory Thompson'''
'''Casi Thompson & Celeste Kaiser'''
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Team Gamma Zeta]]
'''Bety Fairbairn'''
'''Lil'D Bonner'''
'''Lil'J Bonner'''
'''Kaya Fairbairn'''
'''Saloia Kappel'''
'''Tritan Kappel'''
'''Catara Faline'''
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[[folder:Team Omega Epsilon]]
'''Hiyoko Oshiro'''
'''Emilyn Blake'''
'''Neptor Gatos-Espinosas'''
'''Tabila Gatos-Espinosas'''
'''Ibuki Oshiro'''
'''Concua Misra'''
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[[folder:Adults]]
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[[folder:Antagonists]]
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''Undone'' is the (working) title of a planned series by two overworked college students. While only referred to as 'The Thing' by the authors, TheThing is actually already a thing.
The story follows a large cast of characters as they go through regular high school life at Nuther's School for the Gifted Child; you know, attending class, dealing with crushes, and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking killing demons that threaten to end the world]]. Regular stuff for regular kids.
Well, regular is a relative term.
The series is planned on spanning at least two books, describing the struggle between the super-powered human elite and the magic-cancelling E.B.S. humans, as teenagers work to revolutionize the world and make it into a better place.
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Well, regular is a relative term.
The series is planned on spanning at least two books, describing the struggle between the super-powered human elite and the magic-cancelling E.B.S. humans, as teenagers work to revolutionize the world and make it into a better place.
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