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* DefrostingIceQueen: Well, ice ''lord''. He hardened his heart against his daughter Madelyn's wishes, and [[IHaveNoSon renounced their relationship when she eloped]]. When he hears of her family in Sacae, years later, he's determined to make amends and [[spoiler:finally does when he meets Lyn, swallowing all his pride and admitting to his prior fault; hearing that Madelyn's life in Sacae was happy overjoys him and gives him peace]].
* DistressedDude: To be fair, the poor guy had a really crappy health due to his extremely old age [[spoiler:and because Lundgren had been secretly poisoning him. He's still not fully recovered a year later, when [[ButtMonkey he gets stabbed by Ephidel]] and barely survives]].
* DistressedDude: To be fair, the poor guy had a really crappy health due to his extremely old age [[spoiler:and because Lundgren had been secretly poisoning him. He's still not fully recovered a year later, when [[ButtMonkey he gets stabbed by Ephidel]] and barely survives]].
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Well, ice ''lord''. DefrostingIceKing: He hardened his heart against his daughter Madelyn's wishes, and [[IHaveNoSon renounced their relationship when she eloped]]. When he hears of her family in Sacae, years later, he's determined to make amends and [[spoiler:finally does when he meets Lyn, swallowing all his pride and admitting to his prior fault; hearing that Madelyn's life in Sacae was happy overjoys him and gives him peace]].
* DistressedDude: To be fair, the poor guyhad a is in really crappy health due to his extremely old age [[spoiler:and because Lundgren had been secretly poisoning him. He's still not fully recovered a year later, when [[ButtMonkey he gets stabbed by Ephidel]] and barely survives]].
* DistressedDude: To be fair, the poor guy
* AmbitionIsEvil: He attempts to murder his brother and grandniece so he can become ruler of Caelin.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Lundgren seems to be using a slow-acting poison on his brother with the intent of making it look like an illness, likely because it being obvious Hausen was poisoned would hurt his own legitimacy, especially when he's the obvious culprit.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Lundgren seems to be using a slow-acting poison on his brother with the intent of making it look like an illness, likely because it being obvious Hausen was poisoned would hurt his own legitimacy, especially when he's he would be the obvious culprit.prime suspect.
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* YouMonster: Regarded as such; he's respected only by those loyal to him (many of whom were duped), Lyn has no mercy for him, and nobody mourns him when he finally dies.
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* YouMonster: Regarded as such; he's respected only by those loyal to him (many of whom were duped), duped or implicitly blackmailed), Lyn has no mercy for him, and nobody mourns him when he finally dies.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Lundgren seems to be using a slow-acting poison on his brother with the intent of making it look like an illness, likely because it being obvious Hausen was poisoned would hurt his own legitimacy, especially when he's the obvious culprit.
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* BadassMoustache: He's got a fine 'stache, and he's the first promoted enemy in the game.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Poor Hausen and [[spoiler:Eagler]].
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* IHaveYourWife: Heavily implied that the reason he fights you is because Lundgren would go for his family if he didn't.
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* CripplingOverspecialization: Fights with an Axereaver, a lance that's weak against swords. The woman he was sent to kill? Fights with a sword that's effective against armor knights. Oops.
** Though for a first-time player who isn't aware of how these unique weapons work, Yogi could devastate your units if you go in unprepared. (Which, naturally, is the point; gameplay-wise, he's there to teach the player to double-check what weapons a boss has and how to make the best use of a combination of your own special weapons and any special rules the enemy may be using.)
** Though for a first-time player who isn't aware of how these unique weapons work, Yogi could devastate your units if you go in unprepared. (Which, naturally, is the point; gameplay-wise, he's there to teach the player to double-check what weapons a boss has and how to make the best use of a combination of your own special weapons and any special rules the enemy may be using.)
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* CripplingOverspecialization: Fights with an Axereaver, a lance that's weak against swords. The woman he was sent to kill? Fights with a sword that's effective against armor knights. Oops.
** ThoughOops.[[note]]Though for a first-time player who isn't aware of how these unique weapons work, Yogi could devastate your units if you go in unprepared. (Which, naturally, is the point; gameplay-wise, he's there to teach the player to double-check what weapons a boss has and how to make the best use of a combination of your own special weapons and any special rules the enemy may be using.))[[/note]]
** Though
* MustMakeAmends: His objective in Lyn's tale is to make peace with his daughter's family.
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: He outlives his daughter after she is killed in a bandit attack.
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: He outlives his daughter after she is killed in a bandit attack.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Offscreen. He disowned his daughter when she eloped with a Sacean nomad, but sought to make amends once he learned he was a grandfather.
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* EvilUncle: Wants to kill both his brother and great nephew to secure his rule over Caelin.
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* EvilOldFolks: He's most likely at least sixty, and he's the toughest bastard you'll be facing for a good 10 more chapters.
* EvilPrince: He's willing to resort to assassination and murder to claim the throne for himself.
* EvilUncle: Wants to kill both his brother and greatnephew niece to secure his rule over Caelin.
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* BadassMoustacheBadassMoustache: He's got a fine 'stache, and he's the first promoted enemy in the game.
* BladeOnAStick: His primary weapon is a Javelin.
* BladeOnAStick: His primary weapon is a Javelin.
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* BadassGrandpa: For someone whose primary character trait is "utter douchebag," you've got to respect the amount of punishment he can both take and dish out, considering he's almost certainly over sixty. This may or may not be GameplayAndStorySegregation to avoid him becoming an AnticlimaxBoss or even TheUnfought, as there's really no indication he can fight prior to the chapter where you actually fight him.
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* MadeOfIron: For someone whose primary character trait is "utter douchebag," you've got to respect the amount of punishment he can both take and dish out, considering he's almost certainly over sixty. This may or may not be GameplayAndStorySegregation to avoid him becoming an AnticlimaxBoss or even TheUnfought, as there's really no indication he can fight prior to the chapter where you actually fight him.
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* [[EvilUncle Evil Great Uncle]]: Wants to kill both his brother and great nephew to secure his rule over Caelin.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Well, ice ''lord''. He hardened his heart against his daughter Madelyn's wishes, and [[IHaveNoSon renounced their relationship when she eloped]]. When he hears of her family in Sacae, years later, he's determined to make amends and [[spoiler:finally does when he meets Lyn, swallowing all his pride and admitting to his prior fault; hearing that Madelyn's life in Sacae was happy overjoys him and gives him peace.]]
* DistressedDude: To be fair, the poor guy had a really crappy health due to his extremely old age [[spoiler:and because Lundgren had been secretly poisoning him. He's still not fully recovered a year later, when [[ButtMonkey he gets stabbed by Ephidel]] and barely survives.]]
* DistressedDude: To be fair, the poor guy had a really crappy health due to his extremely old age [[spoiler:and because Lundgren had been secretly poisoning him. He's still not fully recovered a year later, when [[ButtMonkey he gets stabbed by Ephidel]] and barely survives.]]
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Well, ice ''lord''. He hardened his heart against his daughter Madelyn's wishes, and [[IHaveNoSon renounced their relationship when she eloped]]. When he hears of her family in Sacae, years later, he's determined to make amends and [[spoiler:finally does when he meets Lyn, swallowing all his pride and admitting to his prior fault; hearing that Madelyn's life in Sacae was happy overjoys him and gives him peace.]]
peace]].
* DistressedDude: To be fair, the poor guy had a really crappy health due to his extremely old age [[spoiler:and because Lundgren had been secretly poisoning him. He's still not fully recovered a year later, when [[ButtMonkey he gets stabbed by Ephidel]] and barelysurvives.]]survives]].
* DistressedDude: To be fair, the poor guy had a really crappy health due to his extremely old age [[spoiler:and because Lundgren had been secretly poisoning him. He's still not fully recovered a year later, when [[ButtMonkey he gets stabbed by Ephidel]] and barely
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%%* ManipulativeBastard: Poor Hausen and [[spoiler: Eagler]][[spoiler:Eagler]].
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