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* DumbIsGood -- Jurgen seems to be this at first glance, but he's remarkably insightful, has an amazing knack for scrounging, and is extremely diligent and thorough. What intelligence he may lack is made up for by unyielding faith in the Emperor's will and a pragmatic outlook along the lines of "The Commissar is always right." The author has stated that Jurgen has a good claim to being the real hero of the stories, "if anyone ever noticed him."
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* DumbIsGood -- Jurgen seems to be this at first glance, but he's remarkably insightful, has an amazing knack for scrounging, and is extremely diligent and thorough. What intelligence he may lack is made up for by unyielding faith in the Emperor's will and a pragmatic outlook along the lines of "The Commissar is always right." The author has stated that Jurgen has a good claim to being the real hero of the stories, "if anyone ever noticed him."
* HeroOfAnotherStory -- The author has stated that Jurgen has a good claim to being the real hero of the stories, "if anyone ever noticed him."
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* TheScrounger -- Another indication that Jurgen's smarter than he lets on. Cain finds this talent to be quite useful.
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* TheScrounger -- Another indication that Jurgen's smarter than he lets on. on, though the proxy use of Cain's commissarial authority helps. Cain finds this talent to be quite useful.useful, and admits that he doesn't ask questions about Jurgen's methods to avoid knowing anything incriminating.
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** Her skills as a quartermaster really shine in the Last Ditch, where she completely decimites the local planets Admisntratium to gain access to some orbital shuttles 'overlooked'. Cain tagged along to try and add his weight to the discussion but readily admits he ended up just watching Sulla bowl over the Bueacratic BS like a Baneblade through a horde of Gretchin.
* GiftedlyBad -- Aforementioned memoirs contain insanely overcomplicated and frilly language to the point of being intenionally unreadable.
* GoodLookingPrivates: ''Averted'' for once. While pretty much all the other women in Cainverse are attractive, Cain describes Sulla's face as reminiscent of a pouting pony. This diminishes over the years, though, so maybe he's just letting his severe dislike of her aggressive tactics taint his opinion.
* GiftedlyBad -- Aforementioned memoirs contain insanely overcomplicated and frilly language to the point of being intenionally unreadable.
* GoodLookingPrivates: ''Averted'' for once. While pretty much all the other women in Cainverse are attractive, Cain describes Sulla's face as reminiscent of a pouting pony. This diminishes over the years, though, so maybe he's just letting his severe dislike of her aggressive tactics taint his opinion.
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** Her skills as a quartermaster really shine in the ''The Last Ditch, Ditch'', where she completely decimites the local planets Admisntratium Admistratium to gain access to some orbital shuttles that were 'overlooked'. Cain tagged along to try and add his weight to the discussion discussion, but readily admits he ended up just watching Sulla bowl over the Bueacratic BS bureaucratic interference like a Baneblade through a horde of Gretchin.
* GiftedlyBad -- Aforementioned memoirs contain insanely overcomplicated and frilly language to the point of beingintenionally unreadable.
[[StylisticSuck intentionally unreadable]].
*GoodLookingPrivates: GoodLookingPrivates -- ''Averted'' for once. While pretty much all the other women in Cainverse are attractive, Cain describes Sulla's face as reminiscent of a pouting pony. This diminishes over the years, though, so maybe he's just letting his severe dislike of her aggressive tactics taint his opinion.
* GiftedlyBad -- Aforementioned memoirs contain insanely overcomplicated and frilly language to the point of being
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* BattleCouple: Grifen and Magot are implied.
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* BattleCouple: Implied between Grifen and Magot are implied.Magot.
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* SociopathicSoldier: Cain describes Magot as "a cheerfully sociopathic young woman".
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* SociopathicSoldier: Cain describes Magot as "a cheerfully sociopathic young woman".
woman" who would probably have caused the civilian authorities plenty of trouble if the Imperial Guard hadn't channelled her energy towards the enemy.
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A sergeant of in Sulla's platoon, who shows extreme professionalism in his job, something Cain appreciates when needing his back covered.
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A sergeant of in Sulla's platoon, who shows extreme professionalism in his job, something Cain appreciates when needing his back covered.
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Whilst travelling around the galaxy aboard her personal yacht ''Exterminatus Externus'', Amberley Vail finds numerous persons whose talents she may put to good use. No one had denied her requests for help yet, because saying "No" to an inquisitor is usually suicidal at best. As such, she's acquires a personal RagtagBunchOfMisfits to assist her on her missions. Their personality quirks are numerous to the point that one wonders if she specifically searches for {{Bunny Ears Lawyer}}s.
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Whilst travelling around the galaxy aboard her personal yacht ''Exterminatus Externus'', Amberley Vail finds numerous persons whose talents she may put to good use. No one had denied her requests for help yet, because saying "No" to an inquisitor is usually suicidal at best. As such, she's she acquires a personal RagtagBunchOfMisfits to assist her on her missions. Their personality quirks are numerous to the point that one Cain wonders if she specifically searches for {{Bunny Ears Lawyer}}s. (Amberley's footnote replies that she doesn't actually look for eccentrics, but she works in a strange business and the people involved are bound to be unusual.)
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An inquisitor of the Ordo Xenos, she's met Cain during his campaign of Gravallax, and he's remained her agent[[hottip:*:And a lover]] ever since.Amberley appears to be unusually unaffected by her experiences and knowledge, able to face the universe with a smile and a quip, only occasionally allowing the strain to show to her closest allies. To most who meet her, she appears as a cheerful, slightly whimsical young woman about as far from the normal appearance of an Inquisitor as it is possible to be (which is of course the point).
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An inquisitor of the Ordo Xenos, she's met Cain during his campaign of Gravallax, Gravalax, and he's remained her agent[[hottip:*:And a lover]] ever since.since. Amberley appears to be unusually unaffected by her experiences and knowledge, able to face the universe with a smile and a quip, only occasionally allowing the strain to show to her closest allies. To most who meet her, she appears as a cheerful, slightly whimsical young woman about as far from the normal appearance of an Inquisitor as it is possible to be (which is is, of course course, the point).
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* BadassGrandpa -- Caractacus is an elderly sage in a robe. He's also regularly running through firefights with apparently little to no body armor, without hesitation.
** Justified in that he is almost entirely a machine.
** Justified in that he is almost entirely a machine.
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* BadassGrandpa -- Caractacus is an elderly sage in a robe. He's also regularly running through firefights with apparently little to no body armor, without hesitation.
** Justified in thathesitation. However, he is almost entirely a machine. mostly artificial cyborg.
** Justified in that
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight -- Brought down an entire syndicate with one murder frame up. Cain didn't see the problem with that.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight -- Brought down an entire syndicate with one [[FramingTheGuiltyParty murder frame up.up]]. Cain didn't see the problem with that.
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A former fast food worker on Periremunda who got caught in a genestealer assassination attempt on Cain, and actually managed to kill a few. Hired by Amberley, she soon showed that she was competent enough in a firefight, and also served to run errands for Amberley in her disguise.
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A former fast food fast-food worker on Periremunda who got was caught in a genestealer assassination attempt on Cain, and actually managed to kill a few. Hired by Amberley, she soon showed that she was competent enough in a firefight, and also served to run errands for Amberley in her disguise.
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* UnusualEuphemism -- Even Amberley never figured out half of what she was saying.
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* UnusualEuphemism UnusualEuphemism[=/=]TotallyRadical -- Even Amberley never figured out half of what she was saying.
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*** Last Ditch adds a MAWLOC to his one on one records. And a Tervigon of all things with merelya over strength squad and a lone Valyrie fighter jet as backup!
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** Also Cain suspects she never really forgave him for blowing up the Mechanius Shrine Dam.
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** Her skills as a quartermaster really shine in the Last Ditch, where she completely decimites the local planets Admisntratium to gain access to some orbital shuttles 'overlooked'. Cain tagged along to try and add his weight to the discussion but readily admits he ended up just watching Sulla bowl over the Bueacratic BS like a Baneblade through a horde of Gretchin.
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* DestructiveSaviour -- Cain has favored this approach on at least four distinct separate occasions. Granted, all of them crossed the GodzillaThreshold. In his own words, no machinery can cost as much as a life of a single soldier.
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* DestructiveSaviour -- Cain has favored this approach on at least four five distinct separate occasions. Granted, all of them crossed the GodzillaThreshold. In his own words, no machinery can cost as much as a life of a single soldier.soldier (especially if the soldier in question is him).
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** In ''The Last Ditch'' he blows up a geothermal power plant (and the city it's in) [[spoiler:in order to destroy a crash-landed Tyranid Bio-Ship buried underneath it.]]
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: In ''The Traitor's Hand'' she was almost jealous of a picture of Slaaneshi artwork in a sexual position she had thought impossible. Cain assured her it wasn't, and even if it was, would be against regulations.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: In ''The Traitor's Hand'' she was almost jealous of a picture of Slaaneshi artwork in a sexual position she had thought impossible. Cain assured her it wasn't, wasn't possible, and that even if it was, was it would be against regulations.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: In ''The Traitor's Hand'' she was almost jealous of a picture of Slaanishi artwork in a sexual position she had thought impossible. Cain assured her it wasn't, and even if it was, would be against regulations.
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* CursedWithAwesome: She causes accidents through her clumsiness pretty much every time she's mentioned. They all work out in her favour though, so it's something to laugh about.
* {{Dojikko}}
* EatingTheEyeCandy: In ''The Traitor's Hand'' she was almost jealous of a picture ofSlaanishi Slaaneshi artwork in a sexual position she had thought impossible. Cain assured her it wasn't, and even if it was, would be against regulations.
* {{Dojikko}}
* EatingTheEyeCandy: In ''The Traitor's Hand'' she was almost jealous of a picture of
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* ConsumateProfession: Something Cain likes.
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* ConsumateProfession: ConsummateProfessional: Something Cain likes.
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[[folder:"Jinkie" Penlan]]
A sergeant in the Valhallan 597th, Penlan is noted for being very accident prone, leading to her nickname "Jinkie".
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* MajorlyAwesome
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* BattleCouple: Vorhees and Drere. Grifen and Magot are implied.
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!!!Grifen
* BattleCouple:Vorhees and Drere. Grifen and Magot are implied.implied.
* RedOniBlueOni: Grifen is blue.
* SergeantRock
!!!Mari Magot
* BattleCouple:
* RedOniBlueOni: Grifen is blue.
* SergeantRock
!!!Mari Magot
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* {{Cyborg}}: Drere, after needing an augmentic lung.BerserkButton: Let's just say she has a few, but threatening Grifen is a big one.
* FieryRedHead
* FieryRedHead
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* SociopathicSoldier: Cain describes Magot as "a cheerfully sociopathic soldier".
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* SergeantRock: Grifen
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* RedOniBlueOni: Very, very red with Grifen's blue.
* SociopathicSoldier: Cain describes Magot as "a cheerfully sociopathicsoldier".
young woman".
!!! Janny Drere
*SergeantRock: Grifen
BattleCouple: With Vorhees.
* {{Cyborg}}: Drere, after needing an augmentic lung.
* VaderBreath: The augmentic lung can occasionally be heard.
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Ambulls?]]: Understandably nervous about the prospect of ambulls.
!!! Vorhees
* BattleCouple: With Drere.
* BerserkButton: Don't threaten Janny when he's around.
* ScreamingWarrior: Cain mentions that there was screaming going on when Drere was injured, but doesn't specify if it was either Vorhees or the ambull. Amberly says it was possible that it was both.
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Ambulls?]] He's equally nervous around them.
* SociopathicSoldier: Cain describes Magot as "a cheerfully sociopathic
!!! Janny Drere
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* {{Cyborg}}: Drere, after needing an augmentic lung.
* VaderBreath: The augmentic lung can occasionally be heard.
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Ambulls?]]: Understandably nervous about the prospect of ambulls.
!!! Vorhees
* BattleCouple: With Drere.
* BerserkButton: Don't threaten Janny when he's around.
* ScreamingWarrior: Cain mentions that there was screaming going on when Drere was injured, but doesn't specify if it was either Vorhees or the ambull. Amberly says it was possible that it was both.
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Ambulls?]] He's equally nervous around them.
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A sergeant in the Valhallan 597th, Penlan is noted for being very accident prone, leading to her nickname "Jinkie".
* EatingTheEyeCandy: In ''The Traitor's Hand'' she was almost jealous of a picture of Slaanishi artwork in a sexual position she had thought impossible. Cain assured her it wasn't, and even if it was, would be against regulations.
* IJustShotMarvinInTheFace: In ''The Last Ditch'' she hits a heavy weapon with the butt of her lasgun, causing it to discharge. Fortunately, it hit an Ork pilot.
* SergeantRock
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[[folder:Lustig]]
A sergeant of in Sulla's platoon, who shows extreme professionalism in his job, something Cain appreciates when needing his back covered.
* ConsumateProfession: Something Cain likes.
* FieldPromotion: Is bumped up to Lieutenant when Sulla is given a brevet Captaincy.
* {{Irony}}: Lustig was one of those "I work for a living" Guardsmen who disdained officers. His field promotion's irony was not lost on Cain.
* SergeantRock: For most of the series.
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A sergeant in the Valhallan 597th, Penlan is noted for being very accident prone, leading to her nickname "Jinkie".
* EatingTheEyeCandy: In ''The Traitor's Hand'' she was almost jealous of a picture of Slaanishi artwork in a sexual position she had thought impossible. Cain assured her it wasn't, and even if it was, would be against regulations.
* IJustShotMarvinInTheFace: In ''The Last Ditch'' she hits a heavy weapon with the butt of her lasgun, causing it to discharge. Fortunately, it hit an Ork pilot.
* SergeantRock
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[[folder:Lustig]]
A sergeant of in Sulla's platoon, who shows extreme professionalism in his job, something Cain appreciates when needing his back covered.
* ConsumateProfession: Something Cain likes.
* FieldPromotion: Is bumped up to Lieutenant when Sulla is given a brevet Captaincy.
* {{Irony}}: Lustig was one of those "I work for a living" Guardsmen who disdained officers. His field promotion's irony was not lost on Cain.
* SergeantRock: For most of the series.
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** And finally, let's not forget that it's possible that Cain considers himself a poor soldier by ''the standards of the Imperium'', a martyr culture if there ever was one.
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** And finally, let's not forget that it's possible that Cain considers himself a poor soldier coward by ''the standards of the Imperium'', a martyr culture if there ever was one.
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A former Commissar who went off the deep end, he was placed with a combat drug injector and made part of Amberley's entourage.
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* DrivenToMadness -- While a Commissar, he succumbed to battle stress and ordered a squad executed for failing to salute a superior officer during a live fire artillery barrage.
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* ThePoliticalOfficer -- Used to be his job.
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* DrivenToMadness -- While a Commissar, he succumbed to battle stress and ordered a squad executed for failing to salute a superior officer during a live fire an artillery barrage.
* ThePoliticalOfficer -- Used to be hisjob.
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* ThePoliticalOfficer -- Used to be his
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[[folder: Methius]]
Metheius]]
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* SwissMessenger -- He always finds some way to get Cain in trouble (accidentally getting him stuck on the wrong side of some doors or nearly getting him beaten to death by angry Tau sympathisers for example) without meaning to.
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* SwissMessenger UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom -- He always finds some way to get Cain in trouble (accidentally getting him stuck on the wrong side of some doors or nearly getting him beaten to death by angry Tau sympathisers for example) without meaning to.
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In contrast to the stereotype sometimes shown in the main {{Warhammer40000}} universe, where Valhallans fight with human-wave tactics reminiscent of the Great Patriotic War at its bloodiest, the Valhallans of the Cain-version of {{Warhammer40000}} are extraordinarily proficient and professional soldiers and almost unmatched in arctic environments.
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In contrast to the stereotype sometimes shown in the main {{Warhammer40000}} ''{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe, where Valhallans fight with human-wave tactics reminiscent of the Great Patriotic War at its bloodiest, the Valhallans of the Cain-version of {{Warhammer40000}} ''{{Warhammer 40000}}'' are extraordinarily proficient and professional soldiers and almost unmatched in arctic environments.
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* WeDoTheImpossible -- Cain's specialty, and the point of the series. His life is an endless cycle of being sent to a new assignment, find some way to get out of that assignment while still looking like he's doing something meaningful, accidentally stumble onto the ''real'' problem because everyone else was too focused on what was in front of their eyes to investigate, and then throw every resource at his disposal at that problem because any other option will get him killed. This inevitably inflates his reputation as a resilient, perceptive hero who Gets Things Done, which in turn gets him sent on more of these assignments...[[/folder]]
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* WeDoTheImpossible -- Cain's specialty, and the point of the series. His life is an endless cycle of being sent to a new assignment, find finding some way to get out of that assignment while still looking like he's doing something meaningful, accidentally stumble stumbling onto the ''real'' problem because everyone else was too focused on what was in front of their eyes to investigate, and then throw throwing every resource at his disposal at that problem because any other option will get him killed. This inevitably inflates his reputation as a resilient, perceptive hero who Gets Things Done, which in turn gets him sent on more of these assignments...[[/folder]]
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* WeakButSkilled -- While he's certainly no slouch by comparison to other humans, Cain is still only a bog-standard human himself (aside from a couple of augmetic fingers). Nevertheless, he has a preternatural ability to manipulate the situation to his advantage when he needs to.[[/folder]]
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* WeDoTheImpossible -- Cain's specialty, and the point of the series. His life is an endless cycle of being sent to a new assignment, find some way to get out of that assignment while still looking like he's doing something meaningful, accidentally stumble onto the ''real'' problem because everyone else was too focused on what was in front of their eyes to investigate, and then throw every resource at his disposal at that problem because any other option will get him killed. This inevitably inflates his reputation as a resilient, perceptive hero who Gets Things Done, which in turn gets him sent on more of these assignments...[[/folder]]
* WeDoTheImpossible -- Cain's specialty, and the point of the series. His life is an endless cycle of being sent to a new assignment, find some way to get out of that assignment while still looking like he's doing something meaningful, accidentally stumble onto the ''real'' problem because everyone else was too focused on what was in front of their eyes to investigate, and then throw every resource at his disposal at that problem because any other option will get him killed. This inevitably inflates his reputation as a resilient, perceptive hero who Gets Things Done, which in turn gets him sent on more of these assignments...[[/folder]]
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* {{Expy}}: Any fans of {{Firefly}} reading this have already noticed that she bears more than a little resemblance to River Tam.
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** In the short story "Sector 13," he discovers a genestealer cult. At the end of the story, amid general celebration, he's trying (unsuccessfully) to avoid thinking about all the Imperial subjects and guardsmen who're being executed because, despite being loyal, they '''are''' infected and there's no way to save them.
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* RightPlaceRightTimeWrongReason -- He owes pretty much his entire career to this trope. The Emperor appears to have it in for him because almost every act of intended cowardice, self-preservation/gratification or caution on his part ends up being turned on its head and landing him smack dab in the middle of another life-threatening situation. Then again he always manages to survive it with flying colours, so the Emperor might just be doing it because he knows he can take it.
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* MeaningfulName -- Mixed in with a bit of FridgeBrilliance. His first name was that of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Caiaphas the rabbi who condemned Jesus]], referring to Cain being his own greatest critic, despite how much of a genuine hero he eventually becomes. Not to mention the biblical Caiaphas is condemned in ''DantesInferno'' as a ''hypocrite'' (which is more or less what Cain considers himself).
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* MeaningfulName -- Mixed in with a bit of FridgeBrilliance. His first name was that of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Caiaphas the rabbi who condemned Jesus]], referring to Cain being his own greatest critic, despite how much of a genuine hero he eventually becomes. Not to mention the biblical Caiaphas is condemned in ''DantesInferno'' ''TheDivineComedy'' as a ''hypocrite'' (which is more or less what Cain considers himself).
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** [[ShrugOfGod Even the author isn't sure which interpretation is true.]]
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* DidNtThinkThisThrough: Went with a group of Mechanicus adepts to explore the Necron tomb, but they were all killed except for him.
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* TheCasanova -- He mentions several [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean "non-regulation"]] relationships he has with a number of women who are invariably quite attractive, and a few more had been implied. His relationships with women were wide rather than deep, at least until he met Amberley.
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* TheCasanova -- He mentions several [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean "non-regulation"]] "non-regulation" relationships he has with a number of women who are invariably quite attractive, and a few more had been implied. His relationships with women were wide rather than deep, at least until he met Amberley.
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* GenkiGirlGenkiGirl: Highly unusual for the Mechanicus, who disdain emotions and try to rise above them. One of her teachers thought this would limit her prospects.
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