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* GoodIsNotSoft: While he is a comparatively benevolent example of a commissar, Cain favors bombing worlds that have been occupied by the Ta'u and assimilated their culture and will still not hesitate to execute Imperial soldiers and citizens when the alternatives are worse. For example, in ''For The Emperor'' he immediately executes two suspicious Guardsmen who survived a battle with Genestealers, on suspicion that [[ZombieInfectee they were infected and allowed to escape.]] A quick inspection of their bodies [[ProperlyParanoid proved him right.]]
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* GoodIsNotSoft: While he is a comparatively benevolent example of a commissar, Cain favors bombing worlds that have been occupied by the Ta'u and assimilated their culture and will still not hesitate to execute Imperial soldiers and citizens when the alternatives are worse. For example, in ''For The Emperor'' he immediately executes two suspicious Guardsmen who survived a battle with Genestealers, on suspicion that [[ZombieInfectee they were infected and allowed to escape.]] A quick inspection of their bodies [[ProperlyParanoid proved him right.]]
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* GoodIsNotSoft: While he is a comparatively benevolent example of a commissar, Cain will still not hesitate to execute someone who is a threat. For example, in ''For The Emperor'' he immediately executes two suspicious Guardsmen who survived a battle with Genestealers, on suspicion that [[ZombieInfectee they were infected and allowed to escape.]] A quick inspection of their bodies [[ProperlyParanoid proved him right.]]
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* GoodIsNotSoft: While he is a comparatively benevolent example of a commissar, Cain favors bombing worlds that have been occupied by the Ta'u and assimilated their culture and will still not hesitate to execute someone who is a threat.Imperial soldiers and citizens when the alternatives are worse. For example, in ''For The Emperor'' he immediately executes two suspicious Guardsmen who survived a battle with Genestealers, on suspicion that [[ZombieInfectee they were infected and allowed to escape.]] A quick inspection of their bodies [[ProperlyParanoid proved him right.]]
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* BaitTheDog: She initially seems like the OnlySaneWoman amidst the other bigoted, officious, ForScience leaders of her shrine, but turns out to be more of a MadScientist than any of them.
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* IWorkAlone: While he is willing to temporarily work with others, unlike other field inquisitors such as Amberly and Killian, he seems to lack a full/time entourage of his own.
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* NiceGuy: He has a dutiful, informative attitude while dealing with Cain and Fulcher.
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** Her plan in ''Choose Your Enemies'', [[spoiler: is pretty much the same; she intends to turn the forge world of Ironfound into her personal daemon world, though with the added benefits of gaining access to the Webway through a portal left over when Ironfound was an Eldar Maiden World, and getting to devour plenty of Eldar soulstones collected by her cultist dupes to both increase her power exponentially and protect her from Jurgen's abilities, since she inevitably expected another confrontation with Ciaphas]].
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** Her plan in ''Choose Your Enemies'', [[spoiler: is pretty much the same; she intends to turn the forge hive world of Ironfound into her personal daemon world, though with the added benefits of gaining access to the Webway through a portal left over when Ironfound was an Eldar Maiden World, and getting to devour plenty of Eldar soulstones collected by her cultist dupes to both increase her power exponentially and protect her from Jurgen's abilities, since she inevitably expected another confrontation with Ciaphas]].
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* ArmchairMilitary: He is a commanding and sensible headquarters soldier who wields a lot of influence but, like many generals, is InnocentlyInsensitive about having Cain attach himself to a dangerous operation as an overseer.
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* ArmchairMilitary: TheBrigadier: He is a commanding and sensible headquarters soldier who wields a lot of influence but, but has a RuggedScar and still dresses like the field combatant he likely was as a youth.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Like many generals, he isInnocentlyInsensitive unaware of how alarming he can sound when he talks about about having Cain attach himself to a dangerous operation as an overseer.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Like many generals, he is
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* CloserToEarth: She behaves more human-like than most tech priests, lacking a titled voice and taking the time to shake hands with Cain.
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* CloserToEarth: She behaves more human-like than most tech priests, lacking a titled stilted voice and taking the time to shake hands with Cain.
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* HumbleHero: He is a LivingLegend who never writes his own memoirs and, when someone else writes a biography of his career, is willing to acknowledge when a triumph depended more on luck than skill.
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* CrazyPrepared: He has analyzed every likely threat against the Shadowlight, whether it involves outside attacks or infiltration from the inside.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: He narrowly survives some pretty intense fighting only for one of Amberley's footnotes to mention that he died later in the battle without Cain's knowledge.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: He narrowly survives some pretty intense fighting against tyrannids, only for one of Amberley's footnotes to mention that he died later in the battle against the Chaos cultists who came to Perlia a few months later without Cain's knowledge.knowledge.
* IndyPloy: He is aware that detailed plans fall apart in combat and prefers flexible strategies that can be altered on the fly.
* IndyPloy: He is aware that detailed plans fall apart in combat and prefers flexible strategies that can be altered on the fly.
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!!Civilians
[[folder:Kolfax]]
A Perlia local and desert prospector used by Cain and the other refugees to navigate the desert during the First Siege of Perlia.
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* NativeGuide: A local road worker and desert expert who guides the group to sources of water.
* SacrificialLion: He's KilledOffScreen near the end of the book after having made enough of an impression that Cain finds himself missing the man and even thinks of him a time or two in later books.
* SacrificialLion: He's KilledOffScreen near the end of the book after having made enough of an impression that Cain finds himself missing the man and even thinks of him a time or two in later books.
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* NativeGuide: A local road worker and desert expert who guides TheCavalry: The arrival of his task force turns the group to sources of water.
* SacrificialLion: He's KilledOffScreen near the endtide of the book after having made enough Battle of an impression that Cain finds himself missing the man Periemunda.
* TheVoice: Transcripts of his communiques andeven thinks of him a time or two meetings he hosts have appeared in later books.interludes, but he has yet to meet Cain.
* SacrificialLion: He's KilledOffScreen near the end
* TheVoice: Transcripts of his communiques and
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[[folder:Ariott]]
A veterinarian on Perlia who is among the liberated prisoners who join Cain's convoy.
A veterinarian on Perlia who is among the liberated prisoners who join Cain's convoy.
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[[folder:Kolfax]]
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Due to the lack of an actual medical he ends up caring for the injured.
* KindlyVet: He is a humble, and sympathetic veterinarian.
* KindlyVet: He is a humble, and sympathetic veterinarian.
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Due to NativeGuide: A local road worker and desert expert who guides the lack group to sources of water.
* SacrificialLion: He's KilledOffScreen near the end of the book after having made enough of anactual medical he ends up caring for impression that Cain finds himself missing the injured.
* KindlyVet: He is a humble,man and sympathetic veterinarian.even thinks of him a time or two in later books.
* SacrificialLion: He's KilledOffScreen near the end of the book after having made enough of an
* KindlyVet: He is a humble,
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[[folder:Captain Mires]]
Captain of a civilian vessel that once transports Cain and the Valhallans.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: His incompetence and general cost-cutting gets the ship infested by a demon, damaged and put in mortal danger along with its passengers. He then works hard with his crew to find a way to get them down to the planet safely, but breaks his neck in the landing.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: His incompetence and general cost-cutting gets the ship infested by a demon, damaged and put in mortal danger along with its passengers. He then works hard with his crew to find a way to get them down ClosestThingWeGot: Due to the planet safely, but breaks his neck in lack of an actual medical he ends up caring for the landing.injured.
* KindlyVet: He is a humble, and sympathetic veterinarian.
* KindlyVet: He is a humble, and sympathetic veterinarian.
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[[folder:Kolyn]]
A member of Mires' bridge crew.
A member of Mires' bridge crew.
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A member
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* IgnoredExpert: As things go badly, Kolyn is quick to point out about how he's been warning Mires about the need for equipment repairs and the reconsecration of wards for some time.
* ResignInProtest: Fed up with Mires ignoring his recommendations for so long, Kolyn declares his intention to quit as soon as the mission is over. Some {{Retirony}} is teased when the ship ends up being destroyed instead, but Kolyn survives (albeit with a broken arm).
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Kolyn and the other surviving crewmen are last seen separating from Cain and his men while they flee their ship before it can sink into the lake where they've crashed. Cain speculates that their knowledge of the ship will allow them to escape faster than his party, but they are never seen or mentioned again.
* ResignInProtest: Fed up with Mires ignoring his recommendations for so long, Kolyn declares his intention to quit as soon as the mission is over. Some {{Retirony}} is teased when the ship ends up being destroyed instead, but Kolyn survives (albeit with a broken arm).
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Kolyn and the other surviving crewmen are last seen separating from Cain and his men while they flee their ship before it can sink into the lake where they've crashed. Cain speculates that their knowledge of the ship will allow them to escape faster than his party, but they are never seen or mentioned again.
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* IgnoredExpert: As things go badly, Kolyn is quick to point out about how he's been warning Mires about the need for equipment repairs RedemptionEqualsDeath: His incompetence and the reconsecration of wards for some time.
* ResignInProtest: Fed up with Mires ignoring his recommendations for so long, Kolyn declares his intention to quit as soon as the mission is over. Some {{Retirony}} is teased whengeneral cost-cutting gets the ship ends up being destroyed instead, but Kolyn survives (albeit infested by a demon, damaged and put in mortal danger along with a broken arm).
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Kolyn and the other surviving crewmen are last seen separating from Cain andits passengers. He then works hard with his men while they flee their ship before it can sink into the lake where they've crashed. Cain speculates that their knowledge of the ship will allow crew to find a way to get them down to escape faster than the planet safely, but breaks his party, but they are never seen or mentioned again.neck in the landing.
* ResignInProtest: Fed up with Mires ignoring his recommendations for so long, Kolyn declares his intention to quit as soon as the mission is over. Some {{Retirony}} is teased when
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Kolyn and the other surviving crewmen are last seen separating from Cain and
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[[folder:Demara and Tamworth]]
Two members of the Perlia group, a former cop and criminal respectively, who first fight each other, then are forced to cooperate by Cain.
Two members of the Perlia group, a former cop and criminal respectively, who first fight each other, then are forced to cooperate by Cain.
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* FireForgedFriends: They go from trying to kill each other over some spilled water to goofing off together when not on duty and being an effective fire team and BackToBackBadasses going up against an Ork ZergRush.
* TattooedCrook: Demara is a former gang enforcer with a tattooed cheek.
* TattooedCrook: Demara is a former gang enforcer with a tattooed cheek.
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* FireForgedFriends: They IgnoredExpert: As things go from trying badly, Kolyn is quick to kill each other over point out about how he's been warning Mires about the need for equipment repairs and the reconsecration of wards for some spilled water time.
* ResignInProtest: Fed up with Mires ignoring his recommendations for so long, Kolyn declares his intention togoofing off together quit as soon as the mission is over. Some {{Retirony}} is teased when not on duty and the ship ends up being an effective fire team and BackToBackBadasses going up against an Ork ZergRush.
* TattooedCrook: Demara is a former gang enforcerdestroyed instead, but Kolyn survives (albeit with a tattooed cheek.broken arm).
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Kolyn and the other surviving crewmen are last seen separating from Cain and his men while they flee their ship before it can sink into the lake where they've crashed. Cain speculates that their knowledge of the ship will allow them to escape faster than his party, but they are never seen or mentioned again.
* ResignInProtest: Fed up with Mires ignoring his recommendations for so long, Kolyn declares his intention to
* TattooedCrook: Demara is a former gang enforcer
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Kolyn and the other surviving crewmen are last seen separating from Cain and his men while they flee their ship before it can sink into the lake where they've crashed. Cain speculates that their knowledge of the ship will allow them to escape faster than his party, but they are never seen or mentioned again.
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[[folder:Artur Morel]]
Head of the miner's guild of Simia Orirchalacae.
Head of the miner's guild of Simia Orirchalacae.
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* BenevolentBoss: When some of Morel's men disappear, he refuses to ignore it and wants an investigation to protect his remaining workers. Morel also shows anger when it is (falsely) suggested that the culprits might be among his staff.
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* BenevolentBoss: When FireForgedFriends: They go from trying to kill each other over some of Morel's men disappear, he refuses spilled water to ignore it and wants an investigation to protect his remaining workers. Morel also shows anger goofing off together when it not on duty and being an effective fire team and BackToBackBadasses going up against an Ork ZergRush.
* TattooedCrook: Demara is(falsely) suggested that the culprits might be among his staff.a former gang enforcer with a tattooed cheek.
* TattooedCrook: Demara is
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[[folder:Durant]]
A merchant ship captain who ferries Imperial Guards.
A merchant ship captain who ferries Imperial Guards.
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A merchant ship captain who ferries Imperial Guards.
Head of the miner's guild of Simia Orirchalacae.
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* CyborgHelmsman: Durant has so many cyborg parts that Cain almost mistakes him for a servitor, and his mechanical parts are entwined with the ship itself.
* GoodParents: He's quite warm toward his daughter (his ship's Tech-Priest) and feels that she has the potential to do a lot more than stick around his ship.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: When Cain fills his ship with refugees, Durant demands an explanation, but once he gets one, he's mollified and accommodating.
* GoodParents: He's quite warm toward his daughter (his ship's Tech-Priest) and feels that she has the potential to do a lot more than stick around his ship.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: When Cain fills his ship with refugees, Durant demands an explanation, but once he gets one, he's mollified and accommodating.
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* CyborgHelmsman: Durant has so many cyborg parts BenevolentBoss: When some of Morel's men disappear, he refuses to ignore it and wants an investigation to protect his remaining workers. Morel also shows anger when it is (falsely) suggested that Cain almost mistakes him for a servitor, and the culprits might be among his mechanical parts are entwined with the ship itself.
* GoodParents: He's quite warm toward his daughter (his ship's Tech-Priest) and feels that she has the potential to do a lot more than stick around his ship.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: When Cain fills his ship with refugees, Durant demands an explanation, but once he gets one, he's mollified and accommodating.staff.
* GoodParents: He's quite warm toward his daughter (his ship's Tech-Priest) and feels that she has the potential to do a lot more than stick around his ship.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: When Cain fills his ship with refugees, Durant demands an explanation, but once he gets one, he's mollified and accommodating.
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[[folder:Kimeon Slabbard]]
A freight hauler on Adumbria who is bribed by heretics.
A freight hauler on Adumbria who is bribed by heretics.
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* InelegantBlubbering: He spends most of his brief appearance crying and frantically protesting throughout an interrogation for potentially capital charges.
* SuspiciousSpending: His corruption is detected after he spends three times his salary on HookersAndBlow.
* SuspiciousSpending: His corruption is detected after he spends three times his salary on HookersAndBlow.
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* InelegantBlubbering: He spends most of CyborgHelmsman: Durant has so many cyborg parts that Cain almost mistakes him for a servitor, and his brief appearance crying and frantically protesting throughout an interrogation for potentially capital charges.mechanical parts are entwined with the ship itself.
*SuspiciousSpending: His corruption is detected after he spends three times GoodParents: He's quite warm toward his salary on HookersAndBlow.daughter (his ship's Tech-Priest) and feels that she has the potential to do a lot more than stick around his ship.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: When Cain fills his ship with refugees, Durant demands an explanation, but once he gets one, he's mollified and accommodating.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: When Cain fills his ship with refugees, Durant demands an explanation, but once he gets one, he's mollified and accommodating.
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[[folder:The Cleff Family]]
Residents of Nusquam Fundumentibus who are briefly mentioned in an InUniverse news article.
Residents of Nusquam Fundumentibus who are briefly mentioned in an InUniverse news article.
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Residents of Nusquam Fundumentibus
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* NotEnoughToBury: When their great-grandmother is attacked by a Tyranid, all her family can save of her is her spectacles.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: It's slightly PlayedForLaughs, but the surviving family members describe their ravaged settlement as not being "a fit place to bring up kids in now" and announce their intention to move elsewhere.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: It's slightly PlayedForLaughs, but the surviving family members describe their ravaged settlement as not being "a fit place to bring up kids in now" and announce their intention to move elsewhere.
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* NotEnoughToBury: When their great-grandmother is attacked by a Tyranid, all her family can save InelegantBlubbering: He spends most of her is her spectacles.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: It's slightly PlayedForLaughs, but the surviving family members describe their ravaged settlement as not being "a fit place to bring up kids in now"his brief appearance crying and announce their intention to move elsewhere.frantically protesting throughout an interrogation for potentially capital charges.
* SuspiciousSpending: His corruption is detected after he spends three times his salary on HookersAndBlow.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: It's slightly PlayedForLaughs, but the surviving family members describe their ravaged settlement as not being "a fit place to bring up kids in now"
* SuspiciousSpending: His corruption is detected after he spends three times his salary on HookersAndBlow.
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[[folder:The Cleff Family]]
Residents of Nusquam Fundumentibus who are briefly mentioned in an InUniverse news article.
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* NotEnoughToBury: When their great-grandmother is attacked by a Tyranid, all her family can save of her is her spectacles.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: It's slightly PlayedForLaughs, but the surviving family members describe their ravaged settlement as not being "a fit place to bring up kids in now" and announce their intention to move elsewhere.
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Residents of Nusquam Fundumentibus who are briefly mentioned in an InUniverse news article.
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* NotEnoughToBury: When their great-grandmother is attacked by a Tyranid, all her family can save of her is her spectacles.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: It's slightly PlayedForLaughs, but the surviving family members describe their ravaged settlement as not being "a fit place to bring up kids in now" and announce their intention to move elsewhere.
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