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{{The Hero}}ine of the series.
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* OedipusComplex: He is fighting ''so hard'' to escape his father's shadow, to almost zero avail.
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* ForgetsToEat: Jame rarely remembers to eat or pack food, and is skinny as a rail with ribs showing. {{Justified|Trope}} in that the [[AlienLunch mutant vegetables]] she had to eat growing up would put anyone off food. Rue tries her best to keep Jame eating.
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* ForgetsToEat: Jame rarely remembers to eat or pack food, and is skinny as a rail with ribs showing. {{Justified|Trope}} in that the [[AlienLunch mutant vegetables]] vegetables she had to eat growing up would put anyone off food. Rue tries her best to keep Jame eating.
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* DarkSkinnedRedhead: Born in Kothifir and raised among the Southern Host by her randon officer mother, Brier is shockingly dark "like polished wood". She's also a redhead.
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* RapunzelHair: She normally keeps it under a cap, but without that it's "well below her waist," heavy, and "like a rain of blue-shot silk." The hair partially {{Justifie|dTrope}}s the fact that a TapOnTheHead rarely results in more than temporary unconsciousness. In the fourth and fifth books, at Tentir, Jame is pressured to cut it because someone could grab it in a fight. She knows they're right but she refuses because she considers it her "only good feature."
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* HumanMomNonhumanDad[=/=]HalfHumanHybrid: A native Rathillien human mother and a Kencyr Highborn father. Jame said she didn't know that type of combo was even possible--Caldane is slutty enough it ''defies logic!''!
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* HumanMomNonhumanDad[=/=]HalfHumanHybrid: HalfHumanHybrid: A native Rathillien human mother and a Kencyr Highborn father. Jame said she didn't know that type of combo was even possible--Caldane is slutty enough it ''defies logic!''!
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TRS has decided that Schoolgirl Lesbians is no longer a valid trope. Removing all links to the page and changing them to more appropriate pages if one can be found
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: Kinzi and Adiraina were Little Old Lady Lesbians, but way back in the day they were SchoolgirlLesbians--their sister-kinship was forged as young girls in the Womens' Halls. Adiraina remembers this time very fondly.
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Asexuality is now a disambiguation page.
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* {{Asexuality}}: Kindrie is completely asexual for the majority of the series. [[spoiler:Subverted in ''The Gates of Tagmeth'' when he gets with Kirien.]]
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* TheChosenOne ([[Administrivia/TropesAreFlexible Variation]]): A PowerTrio, the Chosen ''Three'', the Tyr-ridan--three prophesied Shanir, each aligned with one of the three aspects of God, who are supposed to bring about the final battle with Perimal Darkling.
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* TheChosenOne ([[Administrivia/TropesAreFlexible Variation]]): A PowerTrio, team of three consisting of the Chosen ''Three'', the Tyr-ridan--three prophesied Shanir, each aligned with one of the three aspects of God, who are supposed to bring about the final battle with Perimal Darkling.
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* InTheBlood: A predisposition to madness--and, as Keral points out, to incest.
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* InTheBlood: ItRunsInTheFamily: A predisposition to madness--and, as Keral points out, to incest.
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* InTheBlood: Torisen is terrified of inheriting the infamous Knorth madness that his father succumbed to.
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* InTheBlood: ItRunsInTheFamily: Torisen is terrified of inheriting the infamous Knorth madness that his father succumbed to.
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* FatGirl: Damson is a little fat, and she struggles with some of the physical training at Tentir. Her old ten-commander Vant teased her about it.
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* WeightWoe: Damson is a little fat, and she struggles with some of the physical training at Tentir. Her old ten-commander Vant teased her about it.
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Bad Dreams was renamed by TRS due to misuse.
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* TheInsomniac ({{Invoked|Trope}}): At his worst, he sometimes stays awake for days--even weeks--on end to avoid BadDreams.
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* TheInsomniac ({{Invoked|Trope}}): At his worst, he sometimes stays awake for days--even weeks--on end to avoid BadDreams.nightmares.
* PastExperienceNightmare: He suffers nightmares because of his PTSD, and wakes up screaming--waking up the whole barrack.
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** BadDreams: He suffers nightmares because of that, and wakes up screaming--waking up the whole barrack.
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** And a BadassGay too.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Invoked; long before Jame is in a position of power, he volunteers for this job knowing that one day she will need someone like him.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Invoked; long before Jame is in a position of power, he volunteers for this job knowing that one day [[PetRat she will need someone like him.him]].
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: She is thrilled when her husband grows breasts.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Invoked; long before Jame is in a position of power, he volunteers for this job knowing that one day she will need someone like him.
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* RapeAsDrama: It's strongly implied that Lord Caineron demanded sex as her act of obedience for taking her into his service on a permanent basis. He does it again when [[IhaveYouNowMyPretty he thinks Brier is at his mercy]], and [[DidNotSeeThatComing gets a nasty shock]] when [[InterruptedRape Jame intervenes]].
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* RapeAsDrama: It's strongly implied that Lord Caineron demanded sex as her act of obedience for taking her into his service on a permanent basis. He does it again when [[IhaveYouNowMyPretty he thinks Brier is at his mercy]], and [[DidNotSeeThatComing gets a nasty shock]] when [[InterruptedRape [[AttemptedRape Jame intervenes]].
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* RapeAsDrama: It's strongly implied that Lord Caineron demanded sex as her act of obedience for taking her into his service on a permanent basis. He does it again when [[IhaveYouNowMyPretty he thinks Brier is at his mercy]], and [[DidNotSeeThatComing gets a nasty shock]] when [[InterruptedRape Jame intervenes]].
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Jame doesn't want to call him the insulting name he's been given, so dubs him Graykin instead. All this doesn't win his loyalty then, it does later.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Jame doesn't want to call him the insulting name he's been given, so dubs him Graykin instead. All Although this doesn't win his loyalty then, it does later.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: His father is Lord Caineron, and all he wants is some acknowledgement from him. When all he gets for bringing word of Jame to him is a handful of coins, he realises he'll never get his regard and transfers his loyalty to Jame instead.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: His father is Lord Caineron, and all he wants is some acknowledgement from him. When all he gets for bringing word of Jame to him is a handful of coins, he realises he'll never get his regard and transfers his loyalty to Jame instead. What Caineron doesn't know is that Graykin also had Kin-Slayer with him, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain which he passes on to Jame instead]].
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A Southron-Kencyr Highborn half-breed, who Jame accidentally bound
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A Southron-Kencyr Highborn half-breed, who Jame accidentally boundbound.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Jame doesn't want to call him the insulting name he's been given, so dubs him Graykin instead. All this doesn't win his loyalty then, it does later.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Jame doesn't want to call him the insulting name he's been given, so dubs him Graykin instead. All this doesn't win his loyalty then, it does later.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: His father is Lord Caineron, and all he wants is some acknowledgement from him. When all he gets for bringing word of Jame to him is a handful of coins, he realises he'll never get his regard and transfers his loyalty to Jame instead.
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* MadOracle ([[Administrivia/TropesAreFlexible Variation]]): Not an oracle, but a priest. The power corrodes him mind over time.
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* MadOracle ([[Administrivia/TropesAreFlexible Variation]]): Not an oracle, but a priest. The power corrodes him his mind over time.
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* GreenEyes: Mint is notably pretty, and has green years
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** She has [=UST=] with Tori, including various fantasies, an EroticDream or two, and a BigDamnKiss in Mother Ragga's house. Tori is still in denial through, thanks to a ton of emotional baggage.
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** She has [=UST=] with Tori, including various fantasies, an EroticDream or two, and a BigDamnKiss TheBigDamnKiss in Mother Ragga's house. Tori is still in denial through, thanks to a ton of emotional baggage.
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: With Jame, including an EroticDream or two, and a BigDamnKiss in Mother Ragga's house. Tori is still in denial through, thanks to a ton of emotional baggage (his fear of and jealousy of Jame, among others). His [=UST=] with her is symbolic of his struggles with [[IAmWhatIAm self-acceptance]]. Jame is the embodiment of the part of himself Torisen most hates and represses: His past, and his Shanir powers. And as much as those aspects of Jame ''really'' bother him, he ''does'' love her... and so sometimes he thinks he could almost accept her, those aspects and all. But ''that's'' when he gets into ''really'' messy territory, mentally and emotionally: If he can accept those things in ''her'', can he still abhor them in ''himself?''
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: With Jame, including an EroticDream or two, and a BigDamnKiss TheBigDamnKiss in Mother Ragga's house. Tori is still in denial through, thanks to a ton of emotional baggage (his fear of and jealousy of Jame, among others). His [=UST=] with her is symbolic of his struggles with [[IAmWhatIAm self-acceptance]]. Jame is the embodiment of the part of himself Torisen most hates and represses: His past, and his Shanir powers. And as much as those aspects of Jame ''really'' bother him, he ''does'' love her... and so sometimes he thinks he could almost accept her, those aspects and all. But ''that's'' when he gets into ''really'' messy territory, mentally and emotionally: If he can accept those things in ''her'', can he still abhor them in ''himself?''
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* TheNameless: Graykin and Gricki are both just nicknames; his mother died before she could actually name him.
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* TheNameless: NeverGivenAName: Graykin and Gricki are both just nicknames; his mother died before she could actually name him.
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* SuperFamilyTeam: Jame and Tori are twins, and Kindrie is their double-cousin.[[note]]Meaning their cousin via both parents, and thereby twice as genetically related to them as a normal cousin. They share the same amount of genes as half-siblings.[[/note]]
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* SuperFamilyTeam: Jame and Tori are twins, and Kindrie is their double-cousin.[[note]]Meaning double first cousin.[[note]]Both of their cousin via both parents, and thereby twice as parents were siblings, meaning they share all four grandparents. Double first cousins are genetically related to them as a normal cousin. They share the same amount of genes close as half-siblings.siblings.[[/note]]
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* PrematurelyGreyHaired: He's about 30, and already has some white hairs. Since the rest of his hair is jet-black, it really shows. Keep in mind that Highborn are long lived, and that according to Adric, having fully white hair isn't realistic until you're about 90.
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*AntiHero: Torisen is trying his damnedest to be a good lord and leader of his people... but he's so overwhelmed by fighting his own inner demons he's barely holding it together. He screws up, lashes out at his sister, doesn't sleep for a week, and listens to his late, mad father whispering in his ear.
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* HeroAntagonist: Torisen is definitely one of the heroes. But he does spend a fair amount of time standing in opposition to Jame, who's the protagonist.