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NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#87751: Aug 29th 2016 at 2:15:29 PM

[up]Both Haruna and Chizuru seem to share that trait, although Haruna, perhaps due to bigger panel time, actually comes off as better intentioned about it.

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#87752: Aug 29th 2016 at 2:17:57 PM

Technically, they're both well intentioned, but you know what they say about the road to hell...

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
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Oh for God's sake!
#87753: Aug 29th 2016 at 2:18:51 PM

Haruna seems to paradoxically care about her friends but lacks empathy towards them. She cares about Nodoka progressing with Negi but cannot fathom why she just doesn't outright say 'You're my boyfriend now, let's go',since that's likely what Haruna would do.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#87754: Aug 29th 2016 at 4:43:17 PM

@ Chizuru: Well, of course she's going to end up a control freak. Her intention is to be a kindergarten teacher, any other mentality is a lawsuit waiting to happen, even in Japan.

SkormSnow-Strider Since: Jun, 2013 Relationship Status: Tsundere'ing
#87755: Aug 29th 2016 at 4:55:17 PM

[up][up]I don't think Haruna is blind to the emotional well being of others around her. Sure, she does love to get her kicks by getting reactions out of people, but she's never went so far as to actually really hurt them in the process, which is something someone like her could probably do quite easily. Let's not forget that Nodoka and Yue, who were pretty closed off from the rest of the class comparatively, were and still are very good friends with her. That has to say something, even if I'm not sure what that something is.

Chizuru...well, we don't really know much if anything about her since she's been so out of focus. She's not afraid to slap a grown ass man across the face for barging into her dorm room, which I thought was cool at the time. Then the leek happened.

edited 29th Aug '16 4:56:14 PM by SkormSnow-Strider

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#87756: Aug 29th 2016 at 5:47:10 PM

Chizuru was introduced as a motherly, quiet type, and the leek thing was just a gag that she used merely to point out that she does have an edge and isn't just marshmallow fluff (IIRC, Negi named Marshmallow Hell because of her)... but then that edge turned into bum banditry.

Haruna, meanwhile, is someone who cares but can't quite comprehend others. She has no idea why someone would punish themselves the way most do - by holding themselves back, keeping a tight lid on their emotions and desires, and the like. She probably sees her prodding people as liberating rather than annoying.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
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#87757: Aug 29th 2016 at 6:38:35 PM

Isn't the road to hell lined with frozen lawyers?

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NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#87758: Aug 29th 2016 at 6:42:56 PM

No, Frozen lawyers are Disney lawyers, and thus one of the most fearsome forces in the world. You don't pave any road with them: they pave roads with you.

SkormSnow-Strider Since: Jun, 2013 Relationship Status: Tsundere'ing
#87759: Aug 29th 2016 at 6:43:30 PM

[up][up]Only in the Dark Age of the Law, they are!

edited 29th Aug '16 6:43:50 PM by SkormSnow-Strider

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#87760: Aug 29th 2016 at 6:56:54 PM

Even the original Prosecutor balks at the sight of the Frozen Lawyers.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
rikalous World's Cutest Direwolf from Upscale Mordor Since: May, 2009 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
World's Cutest Direwolf
#87761: Aug 29th 2016 at 7:25:46 PM

Let's not forget that Nodoka and Yue, who were pretty closed off from the rest of the class comparatively, were and still are very good friends with her. That has to say something, even if I'm not sure what that something is.
Strong are the bonds forged in the uncharted depths of Library Island by people who aren't Konoka.

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"EEEEK!!! CATS!!" "Setsuna? Chill out."
#87762: Aug 29th 2016 at 9:59:23 PM

[up] Hear, hear!

@Anemoi It wasn't meant as an attack on rikalous. It was more a brutally honest comment about my lack of writing this year. Even the poke at Eva Unit I made was in jest, but serious also.

@Kurush Great Red appreciates your respect.

Madman with a box? I'm a madman with a semi, a pretzel bender and a Heart of Gold!
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#87763: Aug 29th 2016 at 10:30:29 PM

Why and how, respectively? Take note that that I'm already assuming heaps of Character Development before that point is reached in the first place. Haruna and Negi at the beginning of the story aren't exactly the same as the ones from later in the story.
You never said anything about character development, and I'm not going to make any unspecified assumptions on your behalf unless I'm explicitly directed/requested to.

As for your why/how.... at the end of the day, I simply don't see Haruna being one to officially relinquish her Captaincy status willingly (meaning, you'd basically have to have Yue and Nodoka blackmail her into stepping down). As explained by others (IANCE and OM among them), canon Haruna has more than a passing desire to Take Over the World, and while she's not at all unclever, she also wants everyone to know about her dominance.

As people on SV have said, Haruna "is the Evil Overlord who read the list."

You take that away, and IMO she kinda stops being Haruna.

Both, actually. The Space Pirate Haruna one would naturally have a space kraken instead... which is only called a "kraken" because about the only trait that makes it even remotely resemble a creature of the material realm is that it has vaguely cephalopod-like tentacles.

Yes, Space Pirate Haruna's White Kraken is a cthulhuesque Animalistic Abomination. What's the problem?

NO! NONE OF THAT! SHAME ON YOU!

edited 29th Aug '16 10:58:24 PM by EvaUnit01

Kurush from Stockholm Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Desperate
#87764: Aug 29th 2016 at 11:07:11 PM

@Marq First off, you never gave off any hint that the Kraken would be on a planet.

Secondly, we kept referring to the damn thing as a Space Kraken. Which means Kraken. In. SPACE. And since Space is the vacuum that surrounds all other planets out there, where else would the Space Kraken be if its official name was the Space Kraken?

@Eva Thank you for having the common sense out of this group for once.

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#87765: Aug 30th 2016 at 12:02:42 AM

No such thing in Space Negima as Space named-after-Earthnoid-marine-animals! No, I don't give a damn if Macross 7 did it nigh-on twenty years ago!

We acknowledge your perversions, Marq, but fail to see any kind of a need or purpose for you to start making things weird-

[up]....I take mild offense at the "for once" part of your statement, but otherwise, you're welcome.

edited 30th Aug '16 12:21:27 AM by EvaUnit01

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#87766: Aug 30th 2016 at 12:36:46 PM

You're killing me, man, killing me.

Call me back when one of your own interpretations actually sees posting, and then we'll talk on the subject.

Blatant condescension isn't conducive to me taking your "criticism" seriously.

Until then I'm kinda tired of your wanting to dictate guidelines on characters and world building
... Where the hell did I say anything of the kind?

and asking for advice you're never going to use and instead just dismiss discard at your whim whenever you don't agree with it, making us waste our collective time in your castles in the air.
Again, where did you get the impression that I'm dismissing/discarding advice at my whim just because I don't agree with it? Besides, just because someone asks for advice doesn't mean they're obliged to follow it, especially if they're not convinced of its correctness. People have brains, therefore they should use them to analyze what information they're recieving and act based on the resulting judgments, otherwise they'd be falling into blind obedience.

While OM is mostly pointing out the worse parts of their personality, it is no less their personality. Haruna was always Evil, and Chizuru was the source of the 'evil intimidating mom' jokes with Kotaro.

So, yeah, he's actually correct, even if he's not also pointing out that they've also got positive traits (for all that Haruna is insensitive towards her friends, she does want to actually help them, she just doesn't go about it in a tactful or respectful way).

I did say Haruna didn't act out of actual malice (I suspect the reason why she isn't in UQ Holder's history books as an actual world conqueror wannabe is because sooner than later she realized she'd have to actually hurt people to do it), and that Chizuru has a maternal side. Still doesn't change the fact she's always been the type to enact plans sure to fail for dubious reasons (see- kenpo sharks), to drag Natsumi and Kotaro's chains around with little care to actually ask for their opinions, and that her ego is actually very touchy.

That, and in the anime (that still went with Akamatsu's approval, and technically doesn't outright contradict what little we saw of Chizuru's characterization in the manga) she's actively trollish and willing to subtly pick on Natsumi's frail ego for her own amusement.

Haruna seems to paradoxically care about her friends but lacks empathy towards them. She cares about Nodoka progressing with Negi but cannot fathom why she just doesn't outright say 'You're my boyfriend now, let's go',since that's likely what Haruna would do.
Chizuru was introduced as a motherly, quiet type, and the leek thing was just a gag that she used merely to point out that she does have an edge and isn't just marshmallow fluff (IIRC, Negi named Marshmallow Hell because of her)... but then that edge turned into bum banditry.

Haruna, meanwhile, is someone who cares but can't quite comprehend others. She has no idea why someone would punish themselves the way most do - by holding themselves back, keeping a tight lid on their emotions and desires, and the like. She probably sees her prodding people as liberating rather than annoying.

And here you guys make what is sadly a common mistake in western fandoms of anime/manga/other Japanese media: You're taking too seriously what is supposed to be treated as Comedic Sociopathy (or some similar trope). Slapstick violence and the like should never be taken out of its comedic context and treated with the same weight as what behavior is exhibited by the same characters in clearly serious moments; this the most prevalent pitfall that pervades the Ranma One Half fandom in the Western world, for example, and the reason why it's so filled with Fan Dumb who think it's canon-compliant to vilify everyone in the cast as irredeemable sociopaths except for one or two favored characters, who get the opposite treatment instead (i.e. most/all flaws are whitewashed/retconned away).

I also strongly suspect that you guys are letting Akamatsu's distinct failure in giving proper Character Development to a lot of the 3-Aers skew your interpretations of their characters, with perhaps a dash of inappropiate application of Occam's Razor-like principles (i.e. "if there's not 'enough' hints for X, then it's invalid to base an argument on X and at the same time claim that it's canon-compliant").

Strong are the bonds forged in the uncharted depths of Library Island by people who aren't Konoka.
Yeah, that's another problem that Akamatsu had: Konoka was officially part of the Library Club's cast herd, yet nothing truly came out of it since the Kyoto Arc began; effectively, she was quietly removed from said cast herd's dynamics.

You never said anything about character development, and I'm not going to make any unspecified assumptions on your behalf unless I'm explicitly directed/requested to.
... So my line here where I said "after many trials and adventures which eventually involve the temporary forcible breakup of the crew" doesn't count for anything?

As for your why/how.... at the end of the day, I simply don't see Haruna being one to officially relinquish her Captaincy status willingly (meaning, you'd basically have to have Yue and Nodoka blackmail her into stepping down). As explained by others (IANCE and OM among them), canon Haruna has more than a passing desire to Take Over the World, and while she's not at all unclever, she also wants everyone to know about her dominance.

As people on SV have said, Haruna "is the Evil Overlord who read the list."

You take that away, and IMO she kinda stops being Haruna.

And I've pointed out that I do not get where they got that impression, while at the same time giving some examples of in-story behavior from her that cast doubt on the veracity of such an interpretation. Also, Character Development can and has done similar changes in motivations in non-fan works; I don't see why a fan work can't do that.

NO! NONE OF THAT! SHAME ON YOU!

We acknowledge your perversions, Marq, but fail to see any kind of a need or purpose for you to start making things weird-

It's Haruna. Not giving her a chance to realize her perverted dreams when the plot/setting makes it so damn plausible and a very logical course of action seems utterly blasphemous to me.

First off, you never gave off any hint that the Kraken would be on a planet.

Secondly, we kept referring to the damn thing as a Space Kraken. Which means Kraken. In. SPACE. And since Space is the vacuum that surrounds all other planets out there, where else would the Space Kraken be if its official name was the Space Kraken?

It's a space kraken because, like a Space Whale, it can traverse outer space under its own power. Nothing says that it or a Space Whale has to spend all its time in outer space; it seems logical that it would make its "nest"/lair either on some sort of planetary body or within an asteroid. Besides, outer space isn't exactly known for abundance of prey/victims, in contrast to planets and other inhabitable celestial bodies.

edited 30th Aug '16 12:39:13 PM by MarqFJA

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EvaUnit01 Fandom Heretic Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
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#87767: Aug 30th 2016 at 1:24:10 PM

Again, where did you get the impression that I'm dismissing/discarding advice at my whim just because I don't agree with it?
For me, it's the way you just unsubtly dismiss things as "Oh, that's just Comedic Sociopathy. We're not supposed to take it seriously." and then try to change the subject back to what you clearly would much prefer to be discussing.

And here you guys make what is sadly a common mistake in western fandoms of anime/manga/other Japanese media: You're taking too seriously what is supposed to be treated as Comedic Sociopathy (or some similar trope). Slapstick violence and the like should never be taken out of its comedic context and treated with the same weight as what behavior is exhibited by the same characters in clearly serious moments; this the most prevalent pitfall that pervades the Ranma ½ fandom in the Western world, for example, and the reason why it's so filled with Fan Dumb who think it's canon-compliant to vilify everyone in the cast as irredeemable sociopaths except for one or two favored characters, who get the opposite treatment instead (i.e. most/all flaws are whitewashed/retconned away).
Except that when seemingly 90% of a character's screentime consists of comedic sociopathy, it becomes rather difficult to dissociate that from the rare moments when they're not doing that.

... So my line here where I said "after many trials and adventures which eventually involve the temporary forcible breakup of the crew" doesn't count for anything?
Hey, you could've been running with Loads and Loads Of Static Characters, who are very clearly-defined and distinct from one another, but don't actually change significantly over the course of the story.

I mean, even in One Piece itself, the individual members of the Straw Hats typically only very rarely have what I'd consider a meaningful character shift after they've joined the crew (highlights in my recollection being Nami during the Arlong arc, and Robin and Usopp during Water Seven/Enies Lobby), and much of that is because of the story's nature as a comedy first and foremost.

And I've pointed out that I do not get where they got that impression, while at the same time giving some examples of in-story behavior from her that cast doubt on the veracity of such an interpretation.
What part of "CANONICALLY ATTEMPTED TO TAKE OVER GODDAMN MAGICAL MARS WITH BOYS LOVE MANGA — AND CAME WITHIN A FEW HAIRS OF SUCCEEDING" is so hard for you to understand?

Also, Character Development can and has done similar changes in motivations in non-fan works; I don't see why a fan work can't do that.
See, part of the problem here is that you can cry "BUT WHAT IF CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT" to theoretically justify pretty much any hypothetical situation.

Negi randomly decides to inflict Rape, Pillage, and Burn on dozens of innocent villages without being provoked just for the hell of it, giggling maniacally as he does so? "Oh, that's because his girlfriend Tsukuyomi and father-in-law Cletus Kasady have been rubbing off on him for the past several years after all his students and other positive influences got killed off in the last Crisis Crossover event."

It's Haruna. Not giving her a chance to realize her perverted dreams
Space Haruna is only interested in humans and near-human life-forms... which still doesn't narrow things down by a whole lot.

when the plot/setting makes it so damn plausible and a very logical course of action seems utterly blasphemous to me.
<wants to shut down discussion of Haruna's latent sociopathic tendencies and desire for world domination by crying "Played for Laughs!", but refuses to acknowledge that the same trope also applies to much of Haruna's exaggerated perversity/deviancy, and thus it shouldn't be treated with much or any seriousness>

I don't think I need to offer a further response here.

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#87769: Aug 30th 2016 at 2:41:53 PM

TL;DR: Stop being stubborn, brah.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
rikalous World's Cutest Direwolf from Upscale Mordor Since: May, 2009 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
World's Cutest Direwolf
#87770: Aug 30th 2016 at 3:32:21 PM

I'm pretty sure Haruna's aspirations towards world domination come up more often than her being particularly pervy, actually. She brings BL to the magic world and draws that one page threatening her friends with whippings, but I think that's it.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#87771: Aug 30th 2016 at 4:04:46 PM

(reads the two large chunks of text)

Huh. So this is what talking with me looks like from the outside.

Anemo1 The one and only from Wherever I was originally Since: Apr, 2014
The one and only
#87772: Aug 30th 2016 at 4:24:28 PM

Kinda like listening to the sound of your own voice

I know you all miss me
NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#87773: Aug 30th 2016 at 5:24:39 PM

OK, now there's a little more time to address some specifics.

this the most prevalent pitfall that pervades the Ranma ½ fandom in the Western world, for example, and the reason why it's so filled with Fan Dumb who think it's canon-compliant to vilify everyone in the cast as irredeemable sociopaths

The thing is, most of the Ranma cast are sociopaths. Being Played for Laughs doesn't make you any less of a sociopath, it just gives you Comedic Sociopathy. You can say even The Joker has Comedic Sociopathy often (like in Batman The Brave and The Bold), but that doesn't make him any less twisted, it's just he isn't as chillingly twisted as he'd be when he goes around stabbing people with his face ripped off.

When Mousse says he wants to killl Ranma, he means it'. Otherwise there'd be no point to his attacks- he wants Shampoo to abandon Ranma, she'll never abandon him for Mousse as long as Ranma is alive. That is the whole point of Mousse's character. Ditto for Shampoo regarding Akane. Her attempts are supposed to be comedic because she fails, not because of her lack of actual intent. As for Nabiki, Word of God from Takahashi herself says she's purely evil (even though the anime gives her a lot of humanity, but different continuity). Even Ryouga, the most honorable and generally well intentioned rival, has actually tried to downright murder Ranma and bury his body when he'd fallen for Ryouga in the Fishing Rod arc, and that wasn't his usual 'Ranma, prepare to die!' shallow mere bravado— he was thinking that to himself, when he had no reason to exaggerate out of sheer anger.

And as for being irredeemable, time and time again they prove themselves to be rather stubborn, blind to their own flaws, in flat out denial of changing for the better, and clingy to Status Quo Is God. So... yeah. Other than a handful (Tofu, arguably Kasumi and Cologne, Ranma and Akane themselves— and even the latter two, while great people at their core, bring out the worst out of each other repeteadly) who can be reasonable and overall pleasant to interact with as long as you don't greatly cross them, they are horrible people. It doesn't mean they can't be endearing despite (or because of) their many flaws, that they can't be interesting and funny. But still, they're horrible people, and being played for comedy doesn't change that.

Think of it as a reverse Carnival Phantasm— if you started your Type Moon exposure by watching CP, you'd be right by deducing it means, in a 'realistic' interpretation, Gilgamesh is a selfish, arrogant and callous ubermensch; Shinji cruelly abuses Sakura routinely for his own sense of self worth and primal satisfaction; Caster has an unhealthy and creepy attraction for Saber; and so on. You wouldn't think 'oh, this is all comedic exaggeration only and in reality they all would be nice people'. Because they actually aren't, well, not the ones who act like dicks, perverts and murderers for our laughs anyway. The joke works because their comedic sociopathy has a basis on a 'serious' context as well.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#87774: Aug 30th 2016 at 5:34:58 PM

The difference between comedy and tragedy is consequences. In tragedy, consequences tend to bite you in the ass and drag you down. In comedy, consequences are a punchline that only endure if it can keep being funny (see Perpetual Poverty).

In the end, as always, it comes down to execution. After all, it's possible for the enduring consequence punchline to be believable.

edited 30th Aug '16 5:35:09 PM by SCMof2814

Hyp3rB14d3 Since: Jan, 2001
#87775: Aug 30th 2016 at 8:49:10 PM

Someone should write a Gao Gai Gar / Mahou Sensei Negima cross. Because a little bit of courage is the real magic.


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