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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

k410ren Since: Jan, 2016
#79701: Mar 24th 2017 at 8:34:54 PM

I'll concede on that point with Azula attempting genocide, but I think Zhao is just as bad because even Azula had Hidden Depths and was a "Well Done, Son" Guy toward her mother. Zhao reacted the same way as Azula did when Zuko was scarred and has no redeeming traits.

edited 24th Mar '17 8:36:05 PM by k410ren

"I'll show you the Dark Side." CM actors and kills
k410ren Since: Jan, 2016
#79702: Mar 24th 2017 at 8:38:01 PM

On second thought, forget it. I won't plead my case any longer.

"I'll show you the Dark Side." CM actors and kills
Awesomekid42 Since: Jul, 2012
#79703: Mar 24th 2017 at 8:42:41 PM

@Ravok

Ok, while I agree that he's not heinous enough, I don't think he was treated like a joke. Iroh and Jeong Jeong took him pretty seriously, and the only comedic scene I recall him being involved in was where the butt of the joke was somebody else (some guy from the water tribe who tried to attack Zhao and promptly gets knocked off the ship by him with Iroh shaking his head)

[down][down][down]

Ok. Been a long time since I saw Book One, so my memory's pretty fuzzy on it.

edited 24th Mar '17 9:38:14 PM by Awesomekid42

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#79704: Mar 24th 2017 at 8:43:20 PM

[tdown] to Zhao echoing Ravok and Lighty's reasons

For my loathsome CM in terms of acts and personality, it still be Joffrey Baratheon. My reasons include Joffrey being a massive Sadist enjoying making everyone's life family included be a living hell just because he's King, him being such a Dirty Coward and Weakling who doesn't even try to fight back those who aren't afraid of him, and gloating to everyone on how he single handily won the War of Five King, when its his grandfather who won the war for him, and practically did all the work. Seriously his death is still my all time favorite scene and that includes scene where Ramsay gets eaten by his hounds. I'm glad on how Jack Gleeson made the character so despicable, shame he retired acting so early.

As for my most loathed CM in terms of being poorly written and boring, Jarvis comes to mind. To me, he is just a cliche villain who wants to use a pokemon to Take Over the World, something that been done many times before, simply looks non-threatening and bland. It also doesn't help thatin the English dub his name is changed to Alva and changed his voice actor from Sean Schemmel (Voice of Goku and other characters in Pokémon including Grings Kodai) to Billy Bob Thompson just because the former is now living in LA. In fact I found it easier to be scared of Lusamine than I did for Jarvis and she is not even a CM.

Anywho I currently have 3 [tup] for D'Arby anyone else want to vote?

Awesomekid42 Since: Jul, 2012
MasterGhandalf Since: Jul, 2009
#79706: Mar 24th 2017 at 8:47:19 PM

[up][up][up]I wouldn't consider Zhao a joke, either - he was absolutely a dangerous villain and a significant threat across the season; his ego and ambition just exceeded his competence and the story had a tendency to smack him down for it. An observation I made a while back is that Zhao, both in his arc as a whole and most of the individual episodes he appears in, has a distinct tendency to start out strong and then fumble his endgame, usually because his explicitly noted in-story flaws of pridefulness and temper get ahold of him (as Aang notes, he has no self-control). That said, as has been mentioned previously there's really no axis he's heinous on that Ozai and/or Azula don't beat him at, so I'd definitely agree with a [tdown].

EDIT: There were a couple of explicitly comedic scenes at Zhao's expense - Aang's mockery of him in "The Deserter" and his being attacked by Momo after he captures the Moon Spirit in "Siege of the North II" ("get it off me, get it off me!"), but the first was a deliberate, and successful, attempt on Aang's part to get Zhao to blow his top and stop fighting rationally, and the second was more about breaking the tension in what was, at that point, one of the most serious and intense scenes in the entire series. There was also a brief bit in "The Blue Spirit" where Zhao is bragging about having a full transcript of his speech about having captured Aang sent to Ozai along with glowing testimony from the audience, only to immediately discover that Aang has escaped, but that's a brief moment in the episode as a whole where Zhao is probably at his biggest threat level all season. Zhao isn't played for laughs in most of his scenes, and speaking of Book One antagonists, Zuko is the butt of jokes much more often (admittedly, partially because the audience spends more time with him).

edited 24th Mar '17 8:52:55 PM by MasterGhandalf

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#79707: Mar 24th 2017 at 9:15:04 PM

A CM wouldn't be played so lightheartedly as Zhao. I'm sorry, but they wouldn't.

Getting a butt wagged in your face, having a flying lemur jump on you while you shriek like a lunatic, being regularly and embarassingly beaten down by the heroes/Zuko, having a badass speech you are writing be interrupted by the fact that you have just failed horribly, and appearing in a sequel series SOLELY for the show to make fun of how pathetic you are are NOT things that a CM would have.

If one or two were present, then MAYBE we could brush it off, but all working together makes Zhao a stooge 49% of the time.

I know that the ones arguing about this humor thing aren't saying that Zhao is a CM, but saying that he wasn't Played for Laughs quite a bit in a way no real CM would be is plain untrue.

There's no point to this debate, regardless.

As for D'Arby....I'm gonna need to think on him. I originally voted 'No' last time, but seeing the crimes refreshed makes me rethink it a bit...I'll need to think on it.

edited 24th Mar '17 9:23:11 PM by Ravok

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
MorningStar1337 Like reflections in the glass! from 🤔 Since: Nov, 2012
Like reflections in the glass!
#79708: Mar 24th 2017 at 9:20:37 PM

[tdown] Zhao. Butt-Monkey and Complete Monster are usually mutually exclusive.

MasterGhandalf Since: Jul, 2009
#79709: Mar 24th 2017 at 9:31:40 PM

[up][up]I certainly wasn't trying to argue that Zhao was never played for laughs or the butt of jokes; he was. I do, however, disagree with any attempt to dismiss him as a solely comedic villain, because he was a genuine threat when firing on all cylinders - but when he overreached, which he almost always did, the story was quick to punish and humiliate him for it. I actually think Zhao's scenes of competence made the humorous moments more effective, because they were karmic - there was never any doubt that this man deserved whatever humiliation was being thrown at him. I wasn't trying to make the point that he was treated seriously enough to be a CM, because it's moot anyway - he doesn't qualify for other reasons (though in a hypothetical universe where Ozai and Azula either didn't exist or were significantly less menacing - the only way I can see to make Zhao count - I would imagine he'd have been treated with greater gravitas).

But we're quickly moving beyond the scope of this thread.

edited 24th Mar '17 9:33:38 PM by MasterGhandalf

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#79710: Mar 24th 2017 at 11:52:44 PM

Diablo's entry needs to be trimmed, like, by AT LEAST 1/4.

Rest look good. Beast, bobg, drafts please.

Besides the usual batch, I may have 2 effortposts of my own (those Department 19 ones). One I didn't think was heinous enough, but taking another look may indeed be. The other I'll have to check.

edited 25th Mar '17 2:13:46 AM by ACW

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DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#79712: Mar 25th 2017 at 4:23:34 AM

Having finished Catalyst I have an expansion for Krennic:

  • Catalyst & Rogue One: Commander Orson Callan Krennic, The Sociopath who would eventually become Director of the Advanced Weapons Research division of the Imperial Military—and thus in charge of the creation of the Death Star, especially the superlaser—fought for the Republic as a Lieutenant Commander in the Clone Wars, where he revealed his true colors by massacring civilians and noncombatants whose only crime was being affiliated with Separatists. Upon the rise of the Empire, Krennic enthusiastically supported the new regime, both to make his dream of creating the Death Star a reality. Krennic frequently engineers schemes to give the Empire control of mining interests, and at one point engineers a war on one world, both so the Empire can end up brutally suppressing it and to distract Tarkin. Krennic frequently displays a tendency to betray and kill those who work with him. He is the Evil Former Friend of the pacifistic genius scientist Galen Erso, and acts as his False Friend, in order to use his research for the superlaser. When a group of engineers ask to be released from their contracts, Krennic simply obliterates their facility. When Erso escapes, Krennic tracks him down, resulting in the death of Galen's wife, and forces him to help design the Death Star. Krennic later has it tested on the civilian city of Jedha and has innocent engineers massacred just to hurt Galen even after Galen admits to leaking information. Firmly dedicated to his own career, Krennic will betray or murder whoever he has to in order to keep the command he feels is his by right.

edited 25th Mar '17 6:24:05 AM by ACW

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TommyFresh Since: Aug, 2013
#79713: Mar 25th 2017 at 6:36:40 AM

[tdown] Kira and Zhao. I'm not really sure about D'Arby.

ReynTime250 Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
#79714: Mar 25th 2017 at 8:18:59 AM

What is the show

Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt is a vulgar comedy that is a parody of adult animation. The main characters are anti-heroines. These characters constantly do Kick the Dog moments such as trying to kill a character, liking BDSM or sex and also joking about abortions. However there is the main villain of the work that the main characters who are comedic sociopaths don't like. His name is Corset.

Who is he?

Corset is a tyrant and the mayor of Daten City. He is a sadomasochist,sadist and also a pervert who abuses his own daughters to unlock the keys of hell using the ghost of a character's penis which will then open up the gates of hell allowing him to rule the world and will kill everyone with his ghosts.

What has he done?

The first mention we see of Corset is after Episode 6 where he is shown to abuse Scanty and Kneesocks through various torture works that are described to be very disturbing. He makes his official appearance in the end of Episode 12 (There's 13 episodes overall) where he pretends to be Brief's father and was using him to marry the daughters so they could have sex. Brief instead falls in love with Panty but it still triggers anyway giving Panty a Heroic B.S.O.D. He then goes up against Garterbelt ripping his heart out of body cruely smiling before destroying it killing Garterbelt with no seem of remedy and uses Scanty and Kneesocks of literal tools and weapons for his need without giving a crap about them. Corset then tries to kill Panty and Stocking to get his job done despite that Stocking is also related to Corset. When Corset ends up being defeated by God all seems over until he is still revealed to be alive and used Stocking to kill Panty and then he tries to do his plan again.

Lack of redeeming features

He has a weird love for Bondage which he uses to power himself up. I don't think having a BDSM fetish counts enough though.

Heinous example

Has a 0% approval rating from the main characters who are comedic sociopaths. While typically Panty and Stocking is a vulgar comedy he is a Knight of Cerebus that drops most (If not all) of the comedy in the show and is the Big Bad. Notably every other villain is a case of Made of Evil (The Ghosts) or Laughably Evil (Scanty and Kneesocks).

Verdict

Comedies are always to be skeptical but while Panty and Stocking is indeed a vulgar comedy, Corset is always to be taken seriously and a huge case of Knight of Cerebus. Gainax works are always iffy and Scanty and Kneesocks do some incest at one point. Notably however those two having incest would be a step down but I always believe that in a comedy if a character only does vulgar stuff once and never does it again I don't think it's as bad as a character doing vile stuff all the time and it playing 100% completely seriously. I'm midway with this guy as I can see both points but he's easily the second worst Gainax/Trigger villain besides from Ragyo. I'll be leaving it to you guys.

edited 25th Mar '17 11:09:58 AM by ReynTime250

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#79715: Mar 25th 2017 at 8:49:31 AM

He proably SHOULDN'T be on the YMMV page, as he hasn't been approved yet.

As for the proposal, I don't know enough about the work's tone to vote.

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zcooper95 Since: Oct, 2014 Relationship Status: And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
#79716: Mar 25th 2017 at 8:50:32 AM

Hi so in Patrick Bateman's writeup, it says "the novel and its movie adaptation completely construct the idea of the Complete Monster". I would just ask the the last part about "movie adaption" in that sentence be removed-given it's been proven the movie adaption does not count because he couldn't bring himself to kill a girl he worked with.

ReynTime250 Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
#79717: Mar 25th 2017 at 8:55:21 AM

[up][up] I mentioned that. Corset is not on the YMMV page at all. That's why I made the proposal.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#79718: Mar 25th 2017 at 10:19:08 AM

Foremost...Bateman not murdering Beverly doesn't mean much. He's amused and fascinated by her because she's the only person around him who's not utterly shallow and empty. It's not him being moral. He's not really capable of that.

@ Reyn: A work won't be on the YMMV page (or shouldn't be) if it's not proposed here first. Regarding posting...it helps a lot if you first explain what the work is, who the characters are, etc. so we have some background info here. Especially as from what I recall, Panty & Stocking was a comedy, which means we have to know more and be naturally skeptical. This post doesn't even mention Corset's ultimate plan...he doesn't even seem to pass the baseline from what you said

edited 25th Mar '17 10:21:16 AM by Lightysnake

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#79719: Mar 25th 2017 at 10:23:21 AM

"A work won't be on the YMMV page (or shouldn't be) if it's not proposed here first."

Yeah, that's what I was trying to say; I just wasn't clear.

Lighty, thoughts on D'Arby? We're trying to settle this once and for all.

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ReynTime250 Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
#79720: Mar 25th 2017 at 10:54:02 AM

Edited my analysis of Corset's actions with more detail and context.

Erin582 Everything is Everything from I live among the creatures of the night Since: Oct, 2013 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Everything is Everything
#79721: Mar 25th 2017 at 11:00:44 AM

Hello, I am new to this. I looked over the rules and was still wondering if I could just add some potential candidates or is there some sort of waiting I had to do? My suggestions are not from works that have not been released yet.

I can't deal with these forums; they anger up the blood too much.
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#79722: Mar 25th 2017 at 11:05:20 AM

If they're not released how do you know they count?

Erin582 Everything is Everything from I live among the creatures of the night Since: Oct, 2013 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Everything is Everything
#79723: Mar 25th 2017 at 11:09:45 AM

I'm sorry, I guess I worded that incorrectly. :/ I was trying to say that the suggestions I have are not on a list of works waiting to be released, but from a show that has been out of production for the past several years. I hope that cleared things up.

I can't deal with these forums; they anger up the blood too much.
username2527 Since: Nov, 2013
#79724: Mar 25th 2017 at 11:10:31 AM

Using the ghost of someone's penis as keys? Yeah...no. I can't vote up a character like that.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#79725: Mar 25th 2017 at 11:11:27 AM

[up][up] If it's been out of production for several years, you can probably propose the character.

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