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to Cesaire.

to Petrie

So that's five to Cesaire, so without further adieu.

• Red Riding Hood: Cesaire is the werewolf who has been terrorizing the village his daughter Valerie lived in for years. While living as a seemingly normal member of the community, the wolf left the people alone due to animal sacrifices for the past twenty years, before deciding to find richer hunting grounds in the city. He planned to take his daughters with him, and turn them into werewolves too, but upon finding out that Luci wasn't his, he kills Luci in a fit of anger. He would later take his revenge on his wife's lover, Henry's father. He'd return as a wolf and kill off the knights sent to protect the village. Confronting Valerie as a wolf, he tries to get Valerie to leave with him, threatening to kill her friend Roxanne and massacre the village if she refuses. Later on, he goes on a rampage, during which he bites off Father Solomon's hand. The next day, he kills his mother and feeds and unwitting Valerie her remains as soup, before trying to bite her against her will, and attempting to kill her lover interest Peter.

edited 31st Aug '15 8:45:52 AM by Beast

Any more votes for Lily, Sgorr and my new SCP - 106 write up ?

Also for J.B. Allen: Does he love his daughter? He does give her "trophies" of his victims.

6 for Petrie now. That's myself, Ravok, Overlord, Scraggle, Lightysnake and Beast. One or more?

Petrie

Yes! That’s 7 , 0 for Petrie! Here’s a draft of his write up:

• Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D.:
  • The Season 4 Fan fics: Brett Petrie is the last undercover HYDRA agent to blow his cover. A year after HYDRA’s exposure in infiltrating SHIELD, he comes out by slaughtering every member of his team and his supposed girlfriend on the spot without hesitation. He single-handedly perfected Arnim Zola’s work and actively took part in Bucky Barnes’ brainwashing into the Winter Soldier. While killing Andrew was on Grant Ward’s orders, Petrie’s brutal torture, disemboweling and castration of him was not authorized by Ward who was as equally disturbed as everyone else. He’d casually kill fellow agents who failed in missions and against Ward’s wishes, viciously tortures and [[Family-Unfriendly Death murdered Lincoln with his own powers]] just for fun. He is revealed to have manipulated and used Ward to bait SHIELD and use his intel against them. He slits the throat of a random HYDRA agent just to get her communication device that Ward shut him out of and then reveals Ward as a pawn and nearly succeeds in having him killed. He carries out a mass attack against SHIELD that nearly cripples them. He kidnaps Audrey to bait Coulson out of hiding and expose him to the world as well (threatening not only to kill her, but it’s hinted he’ll rape her after too) and finally, attempts to go after Ward’s brother Thomas out of spite and bomb Washington D.C. with a nuclear weapon. Even though he serves HYDRA, it’s only for him to get off on the carnage he causes for it. Petrie’s a depraved sadist and represents the absolute worst of HYDRA.

It needs a bit of cleaning up. Could somebody help me with that please? Thanks.

edited 2nd Sep '15 10:14:24 AM by futuremoviewriter

OK, sorry for bringing this topic up again, but now that Gentarou Hongou (suggested by me) from Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors has been unanimously (7-0) declared as a CM, who is going to write down that entry? Since English is not my native language, the draft of the write-up can be a little clunky.

edited 31st Aug '15 11:23:24 AM by Kookosbanaani

I'll do that with this weekend's batch.
Ditto. If you'll write it up, I can edit it.

Pretty much a shorter version of my effort post a few pages before but at least it's something.

• Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors: Gentarou Hongou, the CEO of Cradle Pharmaceutical is eventually revealed to be responsible for nearly every bad thing happening in the game. More commonly known for his codename Ace, Hongou first appears as a helpful and altruistic old man. Suffering from prosopagnosia, Hongou developed The First Nonary Game as a chance to see human faces again. In this cruel game, eighteen kidnapped children were forced to solve various puzzles with their counterparts in order to escape in time. After an undercover detective named Seven manages to rescue the remaining children, Hongou furiously chases them and manages to recapture young Akane. He then shoves Akane in an incinerator, where she has to solve a sudoku puzzle before a time limit reaches zero but is unable to do it, while Hongou leers sadistically from the door window. During the Second Nonary Game, Hongou murders three of his colleagues. First, he persuades Teruaki Kubota to enter door number five alone, not only for covering his tracks but also for the sake of testing whether the Second Nonary Game was a real deal or not and to obtain the highly useful number nine bracelet. Later, he shoves Nagisa Nijisaki behind door number three, believing him to be one the children from the First Nonary Game, faking a heroic sacrifice afterwards, when he willingly leaves behind so that the others wouldn't find "Snake's" corpse. In the Captain's Quarters, Hongou murders Kagechika Musashidou, believing that he is going to confess. After his true identity is revealed, Hongou kidnaps Lotus with a revolver and tries to escape with the required bracelets, taunting at the others how he is going to leave them behind to die. In the alternate Safe Ending Hongou murders Clover and later taunts at Snake, encouraging him to attack in revenge despite being blind. When Snake gets his hands on Hongou, he begs for his life. An utterly corrupted, delusional and heartless man, Hongou's Freudian Excuse is inexcusable compared to the sheer scale of his atrocities.

edited 31st Aug '15 1:18:34 PM by Kookosbanaani

Okay, now THAT, that needs to be MASSIVELY cut, probably by about half or so (at least).

That really needs to be cut down.

Any more votes for Sedessa?

edited 31st Aug '15 1:18:40 PM by Scraggle

If it's not too much to ask, would you cut down most of it, please?

Edit: Already shortened most of the unnecessary sentences.

edited 31st Aug '15 12:40:16 PM by Kookosbanaani

I can do a write-up on Hongou later.

I've sort of drafted all the stories with Petrie's arcs. Even though he was voted up unanimously, should we wait to add him until everything is published? Is it okay for him to be added as long as the rest of the stories do get published?

edited 31st Aug '15 3:33:40 PM by futuremoviewriter

Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors: Gentarou Hongou, alias "Ace", is the CEO of Cradle Pharmaceutical and Big Bad of the past and present day. Before the game proper, Hongou had eighteen children kidnapped and forced to solve various puzzles with their lives on the line in the hopes that one pair of children with develop the means to cure his prosopagnosia. After an undercover detective named Seven manages to rescue the remaining children, Hongou recaptures and shoves a young Akane in an incinerator where she has to solve a sudoku puzzle before she's burned alive.

That's all I've been able to do so far. It's a little tricky trying to shrink his actions down into a concise entry.

edited 31st Aug '15 3:08:55 PM by VeryMelon

Alright, as of this episode of RVB...Felix dies. So we are done with him.

Too be honest, he might not count because as horrible as he is, Hargrove far outranks him. Sure, Felix was content with killing his own men and did manipulate Locus (and that was out of fear), but Hargrove was content with killing an entire colony.

Also Hargrove appeared with his ship on Chorus. And he is not too happy...

Aki Honda dies in one of the most horryfing ways ever (because Kitoh is insane). She still count.

edited 31st Aug '15 6:27:12 PM by KazuyaProta

I know we've voted him through, but anybody have any thoughts or commentary on Petrie and the things he's done?

I've removed Roger Stimple from the YMMV page for The Closer. Has anybody requested he be cut from the main TV subpage yet? Sometime in the next day or two I'll also check out the episode with Judd Whaley, who is also listed, to see if he actually counts.

EDIT: I also made a mistake earlier when Lightysnake asked me about Markos Christakis, the killer of 17. I conflated him with one of the villains on The Closer. He's actually from Season 3 of Major Crimes and is in an episode I haven't seen yet. I'm starting Season 3 tonight and will have an opinion on him sometime in the next few weeks.

edited 31st Aug '15 9:29:47 PM by AmbarSonofDeshar

Ambar, my thoughts about Stimple were never answered (although, given the "redeeming" (I use that word VERY loosely) quality, it may be enough).
Also, you're our Criminal Minds person: What about J.B. Allen (body count; does he love his daughter?)?

edited 31st Aug '15 11:52:38 PM by ACW

Your concerns amount to restating the facts of the case. Yes, he raped and killed three young girls. No, that does not make him heinous by the standards of the story, something I already explained in the original post.

Stimple killed 3 people. Wade Weller's total bodycount is 25, not counting the people he failed to kill. Markos Christakis killed 15, raped a 16th, and disfigured a 17th. Philip Stroh raped 5 women, then raped and murdered another 6, and targeted the judge, the police, and the witnesses. That's three villains whose crimes vastly overshadow Stimple. And that's just three, the list could go on.

And before you ask, no the fact that he killed children makes him nothing special. Zoran Antunovich butchered a town which of course, included children. The killer from the episode I just watched last night asphyxiated two kids to death in the back of his car, then stuffed them into suitcases and left them at the airport, and he's such a minor villain that I can't remember his name.

Throw in the fact that Stimple shows a few, tiny iotas of remorse—which would see him cut even if he had a much higher bodycount—and we cannot keep him.

I know nothing about the Criminal Minds example in question; haven't watched the show in years.

Got it. Would Zoran or Weller count?

• Christakis: Is he the one who you said was trying to fulfill his mother's wishes?

edited 1st Sep '15 2:15:51 AM by ACW

I've been watching the 2011 Thundercats. I saw the last of Grune's episodes last night. It will take a little bit longer for me to see all of Mumm Ra's episodes though. I believe I should see all of Mumm Ra's episodes before discussing Grune due to the whole "relative heinous standard" thing.

OK, now I've shortened Hongou's entry for a decent amount.

• Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors: Gentarou Hongou, better known for his codename "Ace", first appears as a helpful and altruistic ally. This all changes after he is revealed to be the CEO of Cradle Pharmaceutical and the game's true Big Bad. Hongou created the First Nonary Game, kidnapping eighteen children and forcing them to commit numerous tasks with their lives on the line, for the sake of curing his prosopagnosia. He personally shoves young Akane in an incinerator after an unsuccessful escape attempt where she burns alive, being too frightened and clueless to solve the sudoku puzzle required to escape. Hongou's actions are also the reason why Akane became a vengeful extremist in the first place. In the Second Nonary Game, this time as a participant himself, Hongou intends to betray and murder everyone in exchange for Lotus' bracelet and his own safe escape, succeeding in the Submarine Ending. He also murders his three colleagues in order to hide his identity and keep his crimes from never reaching the court. In the alternate Safe Ending, Hongou murders Clover, later taunting at her brother Snake how he loved the sensation and encouraging Snake to attack him in fury despite being blind. An utterly corrupted, delusional and sadistic man, Hongou shows nothing but pride and enjoyment for tormenting others despite trying to reason for being a tragic individual at the same time.

edited 5th Sep '15 12:52:19 PM by Kookosbanaani