The description looks good imo!
Going to ping ~Mystery Again and ~callmeamuffin.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
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I have come.
If it's in regard to Chrisimo's concern, I deleted the Aluminium Christmas Trees entry by mistake, instead of moving it to the YMMV section, while cleaning out the trope list. It's now back in under the YMMV section.
In regard to the Black Comedy Rape entry, I decided to remove the entry altogether after they posted because I was uncertain if it qualified as the fanfic's Crack Fic status has been disputed, and it is currently unknown if the fanfic is supposed to be taken seriously or not. I can readd the entry if anyone believes it fits.
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Artistic Licence – Chemistry - removed since I felt that the example was a little bit of a stretch. There wasn't anything about characters performing or explaining chemistry.
Ambiguously Brown - fic only mentioned "like a person except darker colored," which either was the author being racist or attempting to say the person was inhuman. Felt it also was a bit of a stretch, though a third opinion's welcome.
I took one of the Writers Cannot Do Math examples and readded it as Express Delivery.
Given that it's been a few weeks, I'll probably go ahead with this description
and the sandbox soon, unless there are objections.
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I swapped in the description, albeit a little more polished.
I also think the sandbox's ready for a launch.
Pretty happy that I partially contributed for the restored work page, and I could probably help again with restoring another cut work in the near future (They won't be as difficult as Sonic High School, since most works tend to have a reason for their existence.)
Edited by callmeamuffin on Jan 29th 2024 at 8:41:25 PM
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I don't know how Ambiguously Brown is a stretch; unless you're taking the stance that the story says the driver isn't human, it's a darker skinned than white person of unclear racial background. You can't get much clearer than that.
As for Artistic Licence – Chemistry, why doesn't the narrator talking about staining count as explaining chemistry?
OK, I've launched the page and will cross wick it. Since there were no comments or lock or not, I've left it locked for now. Further changes should be requested in the locked pages thread; closing here.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Mystery Again, why did you remove Ambiguously Brown, Artistic License: Chemistry, and Writers Cannot Do Math? How are they misuses?
callmeamuffin, why did you remove Aluminium Christmas Trees? Also, what's the deal with Black Comedy Rape? I could understand it being a misuse, but then why not delete it entirely?