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Synchronicity (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#1: May 11th 2022 at 12:15:44 PM

I don't think this concept is great for one, but I don't have any replacement suggestions so I will just suggest keeping only one or two of the panels. 1+2 has the bigger difference (ordering the croc to attack and then it rolls over instead) so I'm ok with either or both.

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#2: May 11th 2022 at 12:48:41 PM

I think 1+3 would be good, but either of the latter two with the first one would work

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#5: May 11th 2022 at 1:47:20 PM

I read it like he's ordering the croc to attack the standing guy. But like I said it's not great; if the thing's pulled I won't be upset.

Edited by Synchronicity on May 11th 2022 at 3:47:50 AM

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#9: May 11th 2022 at 11:46:17 PM

Pull.

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#11: May 14th 2022 at 4:29:14 PM

Keep. I think it's pretty clear he's ordering the alligator to attack the other guy, but the alligator just lays on its back.

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#14: May 14th 2022 at 9:23:43 PM

I think the image is clear enough.

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#15: May 14th 2022 at 11:57:11 PM

[up][up]That's an improvement to the current. It's much clearer what's going on, even with only one panel.

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#17: May 15th 2022 at 8:38:42 AM

[up][up][up][up]the suggestion is decent, but I don’t think it’s clear that Pluto is guarding the house and not helping the ‘burglar’. This might be controversial, but I think we should keep the current. I’ve never seen the show it’s from and I can tell he wants the gator to attack the guy, only for it to act playful.

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#18: May 16th 2022 at 7:09:20 AM

I'm preferring 13, it's more concise and visually clearer (the colors on OP make it hard for me to get what is going on).

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#20: May 19th 2022 at 6:59:16 AM

Votes bump; two in the green, one in consensus range.

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#21: May 21st 2022 at 7:19:11 AM

We're at day 4 and 5's the only one with consensus. It's in and tagged, caption?

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#22: May 21st 2022 at 8:02:27 AM

I think it's going to need something to clarify that the dog is supposed to be a guard dog and not the thief's accomplice to begin with.

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