I think 1+3 would be good, but either of the latter two with the first one would work
Have you never before supped upon Pined Cone?I find the entire image JAFAAC
TroperWall / WikiMagic CleanupThat image illustrates All Animals Are Dogs to me, not Incompetent Guard Animal.
I read it like he's ordering the croc to attack the standing guy. But like I said it's not great; if the thing's pulled I won't be upset.
Edited by Synchronicity on May 11th 2022 at 3:47:50 AM
Eh, pull.
+1 to pull.
Pull.
The universe is under no obligation to make sense to us.Pull.
(Annoyed grunt)Keep. I think it's pretty clear he's ordering the alligator to attack the other guy, but the alligator just lays on its back.
Keet cleanupPanels 1 & 2.
I think the image is clear enough.
That's an improvement to the current. It's much clearer what's going on, even with only one panel.
The universe is under no obligation to make sense to us.the suggestion is decent, but I don’t think it’s clear that Pluto is guarding the house and not helping the ‘burglar’. This might be controversial, but I think we should keep the current. I’ve never seen the show it’s from and I can tell he wants the gator to attack the guy, only for it to act playful.
Edited by Fivey on May 15th 2022 at 4:40:03 PM
This account is now inactive because the actual Fivey (my sheep who I loved dearly) passed away and it feels wrong to use her name anymore.I'm preferring 13, it's more concise and visually clearer (the colors on OP make it hard for me to get what is going on).
Crowner.
Votes bump; two in the green, one in consensus range.
I think it's going to need something to clarify that the dog is supposed to be a guard dog and not the thief's accomplice to begin with.
No consensus, closing.
Crown Description:
I don't think this concept is great for one, but I don't have any replacement suggestions so I will just suggest keeping only one or two of the panels. 1+2 has the bigger difference (ordering the croc to attack and then it rolls over instead) so I'm ok with either or both.