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** There was some sinister foreshadowing to it, but Chapter 9 gives us the reveal of Zofia's DarkAndTroubledPast has this painful line after their boss tries to use said past to blackmail them out of trying to save the Digital Circus members from their imprisonment by spreading photos of Zofia's [[BlatantLies "modeling career"]] all over the building:

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** There was some sinister foreshadowing to it, but Chapter 9 gives us the reveal of Zofia's DarkAndTroubledPast has through this painful line after their boss tries to use said past to blackmail them out of trying to save the Digital Circus members from their imprisonment by spreading photos of Zofia's [[BlatantLies "modeling career"]] all over the building:
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** Chapter 11 has Penny and Zofia meeting with Cain and asking him directly how the game works. We get two of these pretty close together as a result. The first is when Penny comments that the VR headset scans in the player's mind:
--->'''Cain:''' That is not what the headset does.
** And then, the ''big'' one, when Penny puts the pieces together:
--->'''Penny:''' It does what Regina said. It makes copies.

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* In episode 7 of ''Podcast/SporadicPhantoms'', Chapman says that "one of the Sporadic Phantoms is already one of our people." This is later backed up by the "Share the Truth" hackers, who say that one of the trio is already a [[PuppeteerParasite Controller]].

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* In episode 7 of ''Podcast/SporadicPhantoms'', Chapman says that "one From the fanfiction ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/51597709/chapters/130419961 LISTEN CLOSELY]]'', in which Pomni and Zooble are working with their real world counterparts, Penny and Zofia, to try and find a way out of the Sporadic Phantoms is already one of our people." This is later backed up by the "Share the Truth" hackers, who say that Digital Circus:
** From Pomni's encounter with Regina (Queenie's counterpart) in Chapter 7, we get this regarding
one of the trio founders of [[EvilInc C&A Entertainment]]:
--->'''Regina:''' Oh, yes, Cain. He was the more pleasant of the two. Always had a smile and a laugh for us. Nobody could believe it when we learned what he'd done, but... Well, I haven't heard anything from him since he was arrested.
** There was some sinister foreshadowing to it, but Chapter 9 gives us the reveal of Zofia's DarkAndTroubledPast has this painful line after their boss tries to use said past to blackmail them out of trying to save the Digital Circus members from their imprisonment by spreading photos of Zofia's [[BlatantLies "modeling career"]] all over the building:
--->Zofia reaches out to grab the closest one. They know this photo in particular. [[SleazyPhotoshoot They're not a fucking model here]], their prosthetic popped off and out of frame, sprawled out wearing a big smile and absolutely nothing else. [[RapeAsBackstory What they are
is already a [[PuppeteerParasite Controller]].one day shy of sixteen years old.]]


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* In episode 7 of ''Podcast/SporadicPhantoms'', Chapman says that "one of the Sporadic Phantoms is already one of our people." This is later backed up by the "Share the Truth" hackers, who say that one of the trio is already a [[PuppeteerParasite Controller]].
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* ''Fanfic/TheKingNobodyWanted'': Chataya's encounter with Vargo Hoat's hulking second-in-command leaves her frightened from the moment the man enters her brothel, but the true reason behind her anxiety (being in the presence of a notorious mass murderer whom she knows by sight) isn't revealed until several paragraphs later, with the line "Ser Gregor Clegane grinned at that."

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* ''Fanfic/TheKingNobodyWanted'': ''Fanfic/TheKingNobodyWanted'':
** Chapter 73 strongly implies with this line that Uthera Ruari, a mysterious visitor to Viserys' court, is descended from House Blackfyre (which made five attempts to take the Iron Throne) after she is questioned about living under an alias.
-->'''Uthera''': I'm a woman of mad determination, like my father's people. And aye, like my mother's. Five failures will not dissuade us when we've decided on a course.
** In Chapter 74, Tywin's growing distance from his older children as they defy him in ways they never did in canon causes him to take a new step for his house's future that he never did in canon.
--> '''Stannis''': He is to be [[spoiler:formally betrothed to Alysanne Whent.]]
** In Chapter 93, escaped prisoner Alliser Thorne is confused when a group of people he encounters at a wedding insist on taking him to see their family, and only recognizes the significance of it when he sees one of the women waiting for them at their tent.
--> ''"Alliser?" said his sister, and then suddenly he was wrapped in her arms.''
**
Chataya's encounter with Vargo Hoat's hulking second-in-command leaves her frightened from the moment the man enters her brothel, but the true reason behind her anxiety (being in the presence of a notorious mass murderer whom who she knows by sight) isn't revealed until several paragraphs later, with the line "Ser Gregor Clegane grinned at that.""
** Near the end of Ned Stark's unusual and at times emotional first encounter with the tired but optimistic Septon Daeron (the High Septon of King Robert's reign in the old timeline), Daeron reveals that he has recently been BlessedWithSuck DreamingOfThingsToCome (or rather things that will hopefully never be), including one scene that is very familiar to readers of the first book.
--> '''Daeron''': I have had dreams. Strange and terrible dreams. I saw you in one of them. You and I were standing on the steps of Baelor's Great Sept together, before a great multitude. We were both many years older, and I, alas, was many pounds fatter. I spoke to them. Then you did. [[OffWithHisHead And then...]]
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** During the climax of the second arc, Rainbow Dash/Supermare goes into an UnstoppableRage when ComicBook/{{Brainiac}} nearly kills her mother, and unleashes a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown on him, to the point of almost ''killing'' him, with [[LoveInterest Thunderlane]] only able to stop her with a [[ArmorPiercingQuestion single question]].

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** During the climax of the second arc, Rainbow Dash/Supermare goes into an UnstoppableRage when ComicBook/{{Brainiac}} nearly kills her mother, and unleashes a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown on him, to the point of almost ''killing'' him, with [[LoveInterest [[LoveInterests Thunderlane]] only able to stop her with a [[ArmorPiercingQuestion single question]].



** Shortly after the third trial, and not long after an awkward moment in which Saya rejects a kiss from her apparent LoveInterest Lucina, Saya heads over to Lucina's room, but Lucina isn't the one who answers the door, indicating that perhaps [[LoveTriangle Saya has competition for Lucina]].

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** Shortly after the third trial, and not long after an awkward moment in which Saya rejects a kiss from her apparent LoveInterest {{Love Interest|s}} Lucina, Saya heads over to Lucina's room, but Lucina isn't the one who answers the door, indicating that perhaps [[LoveTriangle Saya has competition for Lucina]].
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* ''Fanfic/ChikasBizarreAdventure'': In chapter 5, an [[InstantArmkr Armored Stand User]] abducts You from the air and forces her into a HighAltitudeBattle. At the end of the chapter, Ruby (who cannot see Stands [[InvisibleToNormals since she currently doesn't have one]]) screams in fight when she sees who is underneath the armor.

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* ''Fanfic/ChikasBizarreAdventure'': In chapter 5, an [[InstantArmkr [[InstantArmor Armored Stand User]] abducts You from the air and forces her into a HighAltitudeBattle. At the end of the chapter, Ruby (who cannot see Stands [[InvisibleToNormals since she currently doesn't have one]]) screams in fight when she sees who is underneath the armor.
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* ''Fanfic/ChikasBizarreAdventure'': In chapter 5, an [[InstantArmkr Armored Stand User]] abducts You from the air and forces her into a HighAltitudeBattle. At the end of the chapter, Ruby (who cannot see Stands [[InvisibleToNormals since she currently doesn't have one]]) screams in fight when she sees who is underneath the armor.
-->'''Ruby''': That girl...she's [[Anime/LoveLive Kotori]]! [[RogueProtagonist Kotori Minami]]!
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* ''Fanfic/EverydayCrazinessInPontypandy'': In "[[Recap/EverydayCrazinessInPontypandyValentinesDaze Valentine's Daze]]", Gabby skips out on the Valentine's Day festival with the excuse that she's expecting an important phone call. Once she admits this lie to Elvis, she tells him why she doesn't like Valentine's Day, and inadvertedly reveals the ''real'' reason she didn't want to attend the party...
--> '''Gabby:''' (''after a rant about not liking boys'') I don't want to dance with any of them! [[QueerEstablishingMoment I like girls]]!
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-->'''Applejack:''' "Dash, that ain't us."

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-->'''Applejack:''' --->'''Applejack:''' "Dash, that ain't us."



-->"Colgate... I think you'll be a fantastic L."

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-->"Colgate...--->"Colgate... I think you'll be a fantastic L."



-->'''Sapphire''': I know you're trying to help, Mom, but I'm not in the mood for a motivational speech right now. Why don't you just go home?\\

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-->'''Sapphire''': --->'''Sapphire''': I know you're trying to help, Mom, but I'm not in the mood for a motivational speech right now. Why don't you just go home?\\



--> '''Mayor Bourgeois''': Yes? Mayor Bourgeois speaking.
--> '''Mr. Damocles''': Thank you for picking up Mr. Bourgeois.

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--> '''Mayor -->'''Mayor Bourgeois''': Yes? Mayor Bourgeois speaking.
--> '''Mr.-->'''Mr. Damocles''': Thank you for picking up Mr. Bourgeois.



* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37880047/chapters/94591849 The Black Flower]]''.

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37880047/chapters/94591849 The Black Flower]]''.''Fanfic/TheBlackFlower'':



----> '''Chloé''': Why did you call us back then? We would have got her if you didn't interfere.
----> '''Gabriel''': No, you would have died.

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----> '''Chloé''': ---->'''Chloé''': Why did you call us back then? We would have got her if you didn't interfere.
----> '''Gabriel''': ---->'''Gabriel''': No, you would have died.



----> '''Marinette''': We accept.

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----> '''Marinette''': ---->'''Marinette''': We accept.



---> '''Chloé''': What's your problem?! I don't even know you!
---> '''Zoé''': A-Ah, I'm sorry. I-I'm Zoé. I'm your sister.

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---> '''Chloé''': --->'''Chloé''': What's your problem?! I don't even know you!
---> '''Zoé''': --->'''Zoé''': A-Ah, I'm sorry. I-I'm Zoé. I'm your sister.



--> '''Fu''': Hello Marianne... Yes it is as you said. I will hand over my title of guardian to the boy soon but before that I have some unfinished business to do first.

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--> '''Fu''': -->'''Fu''': Hello Marianne... Yes it is as you said. I will hand over my title of guardian to the boy soon but before that I have some unfinished business to do first.



* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38509432/chapters/96249811 Outcasts]]'':

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38509432/chapters/96249811 Outcasts]]'':''Fanfic/{{Outcasts|Miraculous}}'':



---> Heroes' Day, Part 1 - The Meaning Of Hero (daeD ydaerlA erA seoreH)[[note]]It's 'Heroes Are Already Dead' flipped[[/note]]

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---> Heroes' --->Heroes' Day, Part 1 - The Meaning Of Hero (daeD ydaerlA erA seoreH)[[note]]It's 'Heroes Are Already Dead' flipped[[/note]]



---> '''Cat Noir''': I see... [[HeelRealization I'm sorry]].

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---> '''Cat --->'''Cat Noir''': I see... [[HeelRealization I'm sorry]].



---> Gabriel Agreste was what you could call a logical person. If there was a problem he'd take the logical way to solve it. A photographer wasn't doing his job correctly? He'd fire him. A design that was sent to him displeased him? He'd send it back. But waking his wife from her coma? That was something that even he doesn't know how to resolve, no matter what. He just left it to the doctors for that. Although he doubts they'd manage to wake her up. [[note]]It's the first hint that Gabriel is ''not'' Hawk Moth[[/note]]

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---> Gabriel --->Gabriel Agreste was what you could call a logical person. If there was a problem he'd take the logical way to solve it. A photographer wasn't doing his job correctly? He'd fire him. A design that was sent to him displeased him? He'd send it back. But waking his wife from her coma? That was something that even he doesn't know how to resolve, no matter what. He just left it to the doctors for that. Although he doubts they'd manage to wake her up. [[note]]It's the first hint that Gabriel is ''not'' Hawk Moth[[/note]]



---> '''Gabriel''': Adrien. I was thinking to take a break from work.

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---> '''Gabriel''': --->'''Gabriel''': Adrien. I was thinking to take a break from work.



---> '''Hawk Moth''': Ladybug. No...Marinette. Your Miraculous ''will'' be mine.

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---> '''Hawk --->'''Hawk Moth''': Ladybug. No...Marinette. Your Miraculous ''will'' be mine.



-->'''Ladybug''': He akumatized his own son! Gabriel Agreste deserves to burn in Hell just for that, not to mention his other crimes!

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-->'''Ladybug''': --->'''Ladybug''': He akumatized his own son! Gabriel Agreste deserves to burn in Hell just for that, not to mention his other crimes!



--> '''Chloé''': Correct me if I'm wrong, but shouldn't you be transforming? You've got an akuma to purify.

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--> '''Chloé''': -->'''Chloé''': Correct me if I'm wrong, but shouldn't you be transforming? You've got an akuma to purify.



--> '''Rose''': [[DeadAllAlong Do you want to see my grave now?]]

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--> '''Rose''': --->'''Rose''': [[DeadAllAlong Do you want to see my grave now?]]



--> '''Mireille''': God, right? So crazy. I don't blame you one bit. Man. It really should've been even, with both of us using our powers and all that[[note]]Mireille revealing that she had used her powers to win the votes for Weather Girl, and later expressing shock that Aurore never did the same with her powers[[/note]].

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--> '''Mireille''': --->'''Mireille''': God, right? So crazy. I don't blame you one bit. Man. It really should've been even, with both of us using our powers and all that[[note]]Mireille revealing that she had used her powers to win the votes for Weather Girl, and later expressing shock that Aurore never did the same with her powers[[/note]].



--> '''Daikoku''': Yes, well ... I imagine living in Japan's far more exciting than the country you used to live in. Remind me, what were your sibling's names again?\\

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--> '''Daikoku''': --->'''Daikoku''': Yes, well ... I imagine living in Japan's far more exciting than the country you used to live in. Remind me, what were your sibling's names again?\\



** And then with Daikoku, which is actually preceeded by a WhamShot of his appearance transforming into Flect Turn after putting his mask on.
--> '''Daikoku/Flect Turn''': ''When I was a young man, I had difficulties with using my quirk. It was quite the mischievous one, you know ... able to reflect any movement it perceives as an attack back onto the user.''

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** And then with Daikoku, which is actually preceeded preceded by a WhamShot of his appearance transforming into Flect Turn after putting his mask on.
--> '''Daikoku/Flect --->'''Daikoku/Flect Turn''': ''When I was a young man, I had difficulties with using my quirk. It was quite the mischievous one, you know ... able to reflect any movement it perceives as an attack back onto the user.''



--> '''Momo''': Shouto, you've ... you've ''always'' had that scar. Ever since we met as children.

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--> '''Momo''': --->'''Momo''': Shouto, you've ... you've ''always'' had that scar. Ever since we met as children.



--> '''Mugen/All for One''': My name, is Mugen Shigaraki. Future prime minister of Japan.
* ''Fanfic/SleeperHitAU'' has Bakugou's declaration to Midoriya in front of Kirishima, Ochako and Yaoyorozu:

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--> '''Mugen/All --->'''Mugen/All for One''': My name, is Mugen Shigaraki. Future prime minister of Japan.
* ''Fanfic/SleeperHitAU'' has Bakugou's declaration to Midoriya in front of Kirishima, Ochako Ochako, and Yaoyorozu:



'''Twilight''': No you're not! You only hangout with me because my connections could help you. You never cared about me or anypony else! I can't believe I fell for it for so long.\\

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'''Twilight''': No you're not! You only hangout hang out with me because my connections could help you. You never cared about me or anypony else! I can't believe I fell for it for so long.\\



---->"There's only one pony with so much brains and still be so arrogant and narrow minded! Twilight Sparkle!"

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---->"There's only one pony with so much brains and still be so arrogant and narrow minded! narrow-minded! Twilight Sparkle!"
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* ''Fanfic/TotalDramaAllStarsRewrite'':
** Just before the challenge in "The Bold And Booty-ful", Chris reveals he's shaking up the formula for this season, with Gwen being the one who puts the pieces together.
-->'''Chris:''' Helpful hint: think fast, and work even faster because TWO of you are going home today. Oh, and the best part, tomorrow marks the day of the finale!\\
'''Gwen:''' Wait, so THREE of us are going to the finale this time?\\
'''Chris:''' Yep, more finalists means more injuries which means more ratings, and in some cases, more hilarity.
** In part four of the Wedding Special, after Noah brings up the time when Gwen gave Cody her bra, the goth expresses confusion and the truth of the matter comes out.
-->'''Gwen:''' You STOLE my bra!?
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--> '''Simmons:''' ''[[SacrificialLion Fuck... I think... 'M done...]]''

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--> ---> '''Simmons:''' ''[[SacrificialLion Fuck... I think... 'M done...]]''



--> Nodding, Church held the unconscious Twilight tightly before he jumped and slid down the icy ledge, landing roughly on the slope at the bottom. He then ran into the trees, focused on his sprint and wary of his surroundings. Church was so busy looking for enemies in his immediate vicinity, he failed to check his six. He didn't notice when [[TheMole Washington]] [[EvilAllAlong adjusted his sights to put him in the center of his targeting reticle. He didn’t expect the sudden BR burst that entered his back, sending him and Twilight tumbling to the snow.]]

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--> ---> Nodding, Church held the unconscious Twilight tightly before he jumped and slid down the icy ledge, landing roughly on the slope at the bottom. He then ran into the trees, focused on his sprint and wary of his surroundings. Church was so busy looking for enemies in his immediate vicinity, he failed to check his six. He didn't notice when [[TheMole Washington]] [[EvilAllAlong adjusted his sights to put him in the center of his targeting reticle. He didn’t expect the sudden BR burst that entered his back, sending him and Twilight tumbling to the snow.]]



--> '''Celestia:''' No need. [[TomatoInTheMirror I have been watching over Ancora for her entire life. Ever since that fateful day when she tries applying to my school.]]

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--> ---> '''Celestia:''' No need. [[TomatoInTheMirror I have been watching over Ancora for her entire life. Ever since that fateful day when she tries applying to my school.]]



* ''Fanfic/KwamiMagiHomuraMagica'': Chapter 1 and 2 are pretty clear on certain things. Even with the help of [[WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug Ladybug and Cat Noir]], [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Homura]] hasn't been able to kill Walpurgisnacht. While Cat Noir does have the power to do so with Catalcysm, its never been successfully done and the Lucky Charms keep telling her to go back, meaning the only solution to get rid of Walpurgisnacht is to use the Miraculous wish. It's only when a space-time accident lets Ladybug and her team talk to past timeline versions of the involved heroes that it becomes apparent the Lucky Charms telling Homura to keep going back ''aren't'' about defeat Walpurgisnacht at all.
-->'''Kyoko of the 53rd timeline:'' Because Spots over here got the same Lucky Charm, seconds before Fluffles over there hit the witch with Cataclysm.

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* ''Fanfic/KwamiMagiHomuraMagica'': Chapter 1 and 2 are pretty clear on certain things. Even with the help of [[WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug Ladybug and Cat Noir]], [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Homura]] hasn't been able to kill Walpurgisnacht. While Cat Noir does have the power to do so with Catalcysm, its never been successfully done and the Lucky Charms keep telling her to go back, meaning the only solution to get rid of Walpurgisnacht is to use the Miraculous wish. It's only when a space-time accident lets Ladybug and her team talk to past timeline versions of the involved heroes that it becomes apparent the Lucky Charms telling Homura to keep going back ''aren't'' about defeat defeating Walpurgisnacht at all.
-->'''Kyoko of the 53rd timeline:'' timeline:''' Because Spots over here got the same Lucky Charm, seconds before Fluffles over there hit the witch with Cataclysm.



-->"And besides," Maudeline [[note]](Mrs. Everglot)[[/note]] added, tone cold and final, "you're too late. Our daughter is already married."

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-->"And --->"And besides," Maudeline [[note]](Mrs. Everglot)[[/note]] added, tone cold and final, "you're too late. Our daughter is already married."



--> Nell beamed. "[[VideoGame/AliceMadnessReturns Dr. Angus Bumby.]]"

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--> ---> Nell beamed. "[[VideoGame/AliceMadnessReturns Dr. Angus Bumby.]]"
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* ''Fanfic/AlwaysVisible'': Galbraith's dialogue with Matt MacLaren about something being found inside Delia's uterus that is not pregnancy. "No, it wasn't pregnancy, this is something else"...

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* ''Fanfic/AlwaysVisible'': Galbraith's dialogue with Matt MacLaren [=MacLaren=] about something being found inside Delia's uterus that is not pregnancy. "No, it wasn't pregnancy, this is something else"...
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%%* ''Fanfic/TheLifeOfTheLegendaries'':
%%-->"Welcome to Team Galactic, Zero."

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%%* ''Fanfic/TheLifeOfTheLegendaries'':
%%-->"Welcome
* In Chapter 7 of ''Fanfic/TheLifeOfTheLegendaries'', [[Anime/PokemonGiratinaAndTheSkyWarrior Zero]] gets broken out of prison via ''helicopter'' and he's informed exactly who broke him out and why.
-->"Welcome
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* In the second-to-last chapter of ''[[Fanfic/DeliverUsFromEvilSeries Mortality]]'', [[Literature/SherlockHolmes Professor Moriarty]] is engaged in a conversation. In the last line of the chapter, we learn with whom:

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* ''Fanfic/DeliverUsFromEvilSeries'': In the second-to-last chapter of ''[[Fanfic/DeliverUsFromEvilSeries Mortality]]'', [[Literature/SherlockHolmes ''Mortality'', Professor Moriarty]] Moriarty is engaged in a conversation. In the last line of the chapter, we learn with whom:



* ''Fanfic/RobbReturns'' has Chapter 23. ''[[ArcWords The Others come. The Stark calls for aid. You are needed.]]'' They also act as this InUniverse.
** Chapter 45. "My champion," Arryn said with a savage smile. "The sea."

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* ''Fanfic/RobbReturns'' has ''Fanfic/TheKingNobodyWanted'': Chataya's encounter with Vargo Hoat's hulking second-in-command leaves her frightened from the moment the man enters her brothel, but the true reason behind her anxiety (being in the presence of a notorious mass murderer whom she knows by sight) isn't revealed until several paragraphs later, with the line "Ser Gregor Clegane grinned at that."
%%* ''Fanfic/RobbReturns'': %% Both of these lack context.
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Chapter 23. ''[[ArcWords The Others come. The Stark calls for aid. You are needed.]]'' They also act as this InUniverse.
** %%** Chapter 45. "My champion," Arryn said with a savage smile. "The sea."



* In ''Fanfic/PrisonIslandBreak'', [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Shadow the Hedgehog]] reads some documents about who his son is, and breaks down into hysterics. At first it doesn't sound like you're going get a name, just his screaming, but the WhamLine is delivered precisely at the end of the chapter, doubling both as the name, and informing readers that though Shadow is violent, [[EvenEvilHasStandards he would never hurt his own son]]...

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* In ''Fanfic/PrisonIslandBreak'', ''Fanfic/PrisonIslandBreak'': [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Shadow the Hedgehog]] reads some documents about who his son is, and breaks down into hysterics. At first it doesn't sound like you're going get a name, just his screaming, but the WhamLine is delivered precisely at the end of the chapter, doubling both as the name, and informing readers that though Shadow is violent, [[EvenEvilHasStandards he would never hurt his own son]]...
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* ''Fanfic/OniGaShikuSeries'':
** Chapter fourteen is Izuku going about his day helping people and spending time with his mom. And then he switches channels on the TV and finds out that his uncle Goro is a criminal and has been murdered.
--->'''-ain, our top story is the Sapporo shooting incident early yesterday morning. Hokkaido Police have determined... The victim was a senior member of Kanto's organized crime syndicate, The Tojo Clan. He's been identified as Goro Majima. Given the victim's status as member of the largest quirkless crime syndicate in Kanto-'''
** The reveal of Katsuki's trainer as rendered by BossSubtitles: [[VideoGame/KurohyoRyuGaGotokuShinsho Tatsuya Ukyo]].
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---> Reimu: Samus?
---> Samus: I'm not the Samus from your world.

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---> Reimu: '''Reimu''': Samus?
---> Samus: '''Samus''': I'm not the Samus from your world.



---> when suddenly, a Final Spark slammed into the flames, and causing a huge explosion, and to his shock, they were all still in one piece. "What…?! HOW?!"

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---> when ''when suddenly, a Final Spark slammed into the flames, and causing a huge explosion, and to his shock, they were all still in one piece. piece.'' "What…?! HOW?!"



---> Marisa's eyes widened as she saw her other counterpart walking towards them.

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---> Marisa's ''Marisa's eyes widened as she saw her other counterpart walking towards them.''
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--> It was the night that Elizabeth “Lizzy” Steinburg had been waiting for, the night of her bat mitzvah. After months of studying Hebrew and practicing her Torah portion, the night had finally arrived when she would cross the threshold into womanhood.\\

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--> It was the night that [[HerCodeNameWasMarySue Elizabeth “Lizzy” Steinburg Steinburg]] had been waiting for, the night of her bat mitzvah. After months of studying Hebrew and practicing her Torah portion, the night had finally arrived when she would cross the threshold into womanhood.\\
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* From Alice Cullen Must Die, Alice reveals that she isn't actually the player that everyone thinks that she is.
-->'''Alice:''' I wasn't dating them. I was pretending so I could have access to their blood.
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---->'''Yu Narukami''' ''shrugs'': We had to find out somehow. I want to know what happened last Christmas eve.\\
'''Yosuke''' ''Meets his friend's eyes and shrugs'': Another god messing things up, right? 'Course, had to make the world all creepy and red.\\
'''Naoto''' ''(bluntly)'': The world fused with the other world. We were able to summon our Personas again, at least until it was all over... and yet no one remembers a thing except for us, [[VideoGame/Persona3 the Shadow Ops]], the Phantom Thieves, Yu's uncle, and Nanako. We need answers.

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---->'''Yu Narukami''' ''shrugs'': Narukami:''' ''[shrugs]'' We had to find out somehow. I want to know what happened last Christmas eve.\\
'''Yosuke''' ''Meets '''Yosuke:''' ''[meets his friend's eyes and shrugs'': shrugs]'' Another god messing things up, right? 'Course, had to make the world all creepy and red.\\
'''Naoto''' ''(bluntly)'': '''Naoto:''' ''[bluntly]'' The world fused with the other world. We were able to summon our Personas again, at least until it was all over... and yet no one remembers a thing except for us, [[VideoGame/Persona3 the Shadow Ops]], the Phantom Thieves, Yu's uncle, and Nanako. We need answers.

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* ''Fanfic/MyLittleTitan'': [[WesternAnimation/TeenTitans Raven]] has been mysteriously transported into the world of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]] and placed in the body of Twilight Sparkle. This line reveals that someone else recognises her, and she may not have been the only one transported.;
--> “RAVEN?”
%%--> '''Trixie:''' Star? Not...short for Starfire, by any chance?

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* ''Fanfic/MyLittleTitan'': ''Fanfic/MyLittleTitan'':
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[[WesternAnimation/TeenTitans Raven]] has been mysteriously transported into the world of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]] and placed in the body of Twilight Sparkle. This line reveals that someone else recognises her, and she may not have been the only one transported.;
--> “RAVEN?”
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transported.
---> "RAVEN?"
** When the others refer to Starfire-in-Pinkie's body by her real name, the following line reveals that the DC universe is MutuallyFictional with Equestria.
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'''Trixie:''' Star? Not...short for Starfire, by any chance?



-->"It’s… [[GoMadFromTheRevelation too insane]]. It’s too crazy. I don’t want to believe it. I don’t want to believe that ''Discord is the father of Queens Celestia and Selena!''"

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-->"It’s… -->"It's... [[GoMadFromTheRevelation too insane]]. It’s It's too crazy. I don’t don't want to believe it. I don’t don't want to believe that ''Discord is the father of Queens Celestia and Selena!''"



-->“You are no trinket, Luna. You are my sister and once, long ago, a bitch’s[[note]]a female dog[[/note]] only child.”

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-->“You -->"You are no trinket, Luna. You are my sister and once, long ago, a bitch’s[[note]]a bitch's[[note]]a female dog[[/note]] only child."
* ''Fanfic/DiscordsNewBusiness'': In Starlight's chapter, where she turned into a Changeling Queen and fell prey to her instinct to claim love, she ended up claiming Sunburst (who was willing, once he helped her gain control of her instincts). One thing led to another, and the next morning...
--> '''Starlight Glimmer:''' So, I think I'm pregnant.
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* '''Fanfic/TheSoulmateTimelin'': Hitomi [[ProperlyParanoid wisely]] decides she's not buying what Kyubey's selling with his "contract" unless she's knows everything involved and tries to back out, telling him unless he explains himself fully she wants him to just go away. Unfortunately for her, a [[ExactWords poorly-worded sentence with the words "I wish"]] coupled with her genuine meaning is taken the exact wrong way by Kyubey.

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* '''Fanfic/TheSoulmateTimelin'': ''Fanfic/TheSoulmateTimeline'': Hitomi [[ProperlyParanoid wisely]] decides she's not buying what Kyubey's selling with his "contract" unless she's knows everything involved and tries to back out, telling him unless he explains himself fully she wants him to just go away. Unfortunately for her, a [[ExactWords poorly-worded sentence with the words "I wish"]] coupled with her genuine meaning is taken the exact wrong way by Kyubey.
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* '''Fanfic/TheSoulmateTimelin'': Hitomi [[ProperlyParanoid wisely]] decides she's not buying what Kyubey's selling with his "contract" unless she's knows everything involved and tries to back out, telling him unless he explains himself fully she wants him to just go away. Unfortunately for her, a [[ExactWords poorly-worded sentence with the words "I wish"]] coupled with her genuine meaning is taken the exact wrong way by Kyubey.
--> '''Hitomi''': Kyubey, I don’t know what this ‘contract’ of yours is about. Without knowing that, the only thing I can wish for is that you’d go away and leave me alone unless you can provide me with more details.\\
'''Kyubey''': Odd, it is in fact your heart's greatest desire for me to vanish. Very well. Your wish is granted.
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!!''Literature/{{Redwall}}''

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%%* [[Creator/UltamiteNineball ultamite nineball]]'s fic ''Fanfic/SoullessShellRedwall'':
%%-->"[[UnusuallyUninterestingSight then he shot a beam from his paw]] which the rat teleported away from"...

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!!''Literature/{{Redwall}}''
* Up until Chapter 3, nothing about
[[Creator/UltamiteNineball ultamite nineball]]'s fic ''Fanfic/SoullessShellRedwall'':
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fanfic ''Fanfic/SoullessShellRedwall'' suggested that there was such a thing as magic, especially not laser beams one could shoot from their paws. However, after Leif is captured by a mysterious organization, he's ordered to demonstrate his powers. It then leads to this line:
-->"[[UnusuallyUninterestingSight
then he shot a beam from his paw]] which the rat teleported away from"...
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11026736/1/Operation-FOSTERS Operation: FOSTERS]]'', [[WesternAnimation/CodenameKidsNextDoor Sector V]] is investigating WesternAnimation/FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends and fall under the suspicon of Mac and Bloo. When Numbuh Three slips who they are, Mac has a surprising freak out of the reveal and demands Numbuh Three and Four to tell them what are they doing here. It's Numbuh One that tells Bloo the reason Mac is terrified of them.

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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11026736/1/Operation-FOSTERS Operation: FOSTERS]]'', [[WesternAnimation/CodenameKidsNextDoor Sector V]] is investigating WesternAnimation/FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends and fall under the suspicon of Mac and Bloo. When Numbuh Three slips who they are, Mac has a surprising freak out of the reveal and demands Numbuh Three and Four to tell them what are they doing here. It's then that Numbuh One that tells Bloo the reason Mac is terrified of them.
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* ''Fanfic/AlwaysVisible'': Galbraith's dialogue with Matt MacLaren about something being found inside Delia's uterus that is not pregnancy. "No, it wasn't pregnancy, this is something else"...
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* ''Fanfic/AlwaysAdvancing'': Yukari learns what the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] that created the alternate timeline was:

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* ''Fanfic/AlwaysAdvancing'': Yukari learns what the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] PointOfDivergence that created the alternate timeline was:



* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22810651/chapters/55822420#workskin How Like Home]]'' has one for Harry after he discovers [[ForWantOfANail the key difference]] between his reality and the one he traveled to.

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22810651/chapters/55822420#workskin How Like Home]]'' has one for Harry after he discovers [[ForWantOfANail [[PointOfDivergence the key difference]] between his reality and the one he traveled to.



** The end of Chapter 7 has Izuku introduced to someone who could help him out with his quirk, with the person introducing himself immediately establishing a major ForWantOfANail:

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* ''Fanfic/NarutoTheSecretSongsOfTheNinja'', the last line of chapter 6, as Team 7 are returning home to Konoha from their adventure in the Country of Earth, [[ForWantOfANail just a day or two late to catch the end of the Chuunin Exams]]:

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* ''Fanfic/NarutoTheSecretSongsOfTheNinja'', the last line of chapter 6, as Team 7 are returning home to Konoha from their adventure in the Country of Earth, [[ForWantOfANail [[ButterflyOfDoom just a day or two late to catch the end of the Chuunin Exams]]:
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* ''Fanfic/IgnitedSpark'':
** The end of Chapter 7 has Izuku introduced to someone who could help him out with his quirk, with the person introducing himself immediately establishing a major ForWantOfANail:
--> "It's nice to meet you, Midoriya, I've heard about you from All Might. My name is [[AdaptationalHeroism Tenko Shimura]]."
** Hood delivers one during the USJ that reveals its true identity:
--> '''Hood''': [[CompositeCharacter THE POWER! S-SHOW IT TO ME A-AGAIN! SH-SHOW ME - Y-YOUR - B-B-BLOOD!"]]
** Chapter 28 ends up with a big one:
--> '''Itsuka''': I … w-what did you say?\\
'''Nejire''': I asked, what is One for All?
** Two instances happen in Chapter 32, that to a CanonCharacterAllAlong reveal. First with Skip:
--> '''Daikoku''': Yes, well … I imagine living in Japan's far more exciting than the country you used to live in. Remind me, what were your sibling's names again?\\
'''Skip''': Roro, and Lala, sir.
** And then with Daikoku, which is actually preceeded by a WhamShot of his appearance transforming into Flect Turn after putting his mask on.
--> '''Daikoku/Flect Turn''': ''When I was a young man, I had difficulties with using my quirk. It was quite the mischievous one, you know … able to reflect any movement it perceives as an attack back onto the user.''
** Momo delivers one halfway through chapter 33.
--> '''Momo''': Shouto, you've … you've ''always'' had that scar. Ever since we met as children.
** Another one is dropped in the end of the chapter, also concluding the Sports Festival arc.
--> '''Mugen/All for One''': My name, is Mugen Shigaraki. Future prime minister of Japan.

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