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* FantasticDrug: The magical drug "glut" is smoked for a temporary high and a steroid-like boost in muscle growth, with prolonged use causing distinctive gigantism. This is [[https://unsoundedcomic.tumblr.com/post/616770029162201088/hi-maybe-this-is-silly-but-does-bell-have-an why Bell]] [[https://unsoundedcomic.tumblr.com/post/616751079975223296/dont-know-if-it-was-explained-before-somewhere is so large.]]
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* FantasticDrug: Many, the most common being "purple weed", which has [[https://unsoundedcomic.tumblr.com/post/677631075376414720/wait-so-the-stuff-we-see-people-smoking similar effects to cannabis]] and is widely smoked in lieu of tobacco, as well as the stimulant krrf. The magical drug steroid "glut" is smoked for a temporary high and a steroid-like boost in muscle growth, with prolonged use causing distinctive gigantism. This is [[https://unsoundedcomic.tumblr.com/post/616770029162201088/hi-maybe-this-is-silly-but-does-bell-have-an why Bell]] [[https://unsoundedcomic.tumblr.com/post/616751079975223296/dont-know-if-it-was-explained-before-somewhere is so large.]]
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* BarbieDollAnatomy: Coupled with BellyButtonless, and apparently in-story:
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* BarbieDollAnatomy: Coupled with BellyButtonless, It's confirmed that Sette has no nipples or belly button and apparently in-story:Sette implies she has no genitals either, though that's not actually depicted.
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** It's later confirmed that Sette has no nipples or belly button and Sette implies she has no genitals either, though that's not actually depicted.
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** General Bell is a Crescian nationalist... who wants to abolish most of Cresce's core cultural values to replace them with Alderode's. He's also a religious fundamentalist... who wants to convert his country a different sect, again one favored by Alderode. He's incredibly ruthless and willing to commit atrocities for his cause, yet acts disgusted by Queen Sonorie's own ruthlessness. Toma sums it up well when they finally confront each other: Bell is ultimately loyal only to himself and his own lust for power, and he's willing to change his principles on a dime to get it.
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* ImStandingRightHere: [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch10/ch10_124.html When]] Duane's nature is revealed to Toma and Quigley, they immediately disregard the pressing threat in order to engage in IKnewIt with each other and theorize that he's a mindless plod under someone else's control while Duane is standing right there. Eventually he gets fed up and uses pymary to [[PutTheirHeadsTogether knock their heads together]]. [[invoked]]
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* ImStandingRightHere: [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch10/ch10_124.html When]] Duane's nature is revealed to Toma and Quigley, they immediately disregard the pressing threat in order to engage in IKnewIt with each other and theorize that he's a mindless plod under someone else's control while Duane is standing right there. Eventually he gets fed up and uses pymary to [[PutTheirHeadsTogether knock their heads together]]. [[invoked]]
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* PutTheirHeadsTogether: [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch10/ch10_124.html When]] Duane's nature is revealed to Toma and Quigley, they immediately disregard the pressing threat in order to engage in IKnewIt with each other and theorize that he's a mindless plod under someone else's control while Duane is [[ImStandingRightHere standing right there]]. Eventually he gets fed up and uses pymary to knock their heads together.
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* PutTheirHeadsTogether: [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch10/ch10_124.html When]] Duane's nature is revealed to Toma and Quigley, they immediately disregard the pressing threat in order to engage in IKnewIt with each other and theorize that he's a mindless plod under someone else's control while Duane is [[ImStandingRightHere standing right there]]. Eventually he gets fed up and uses pymary to knock their heads together.
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* AnyoneCanDie: So far the main characters (roughly defined as Duane, Sette, Quigley, Matti, Toma, Elka, and Jivi) seem to be safe, but anyone else... well. [[spoiler:When the silver goes on the rampage in the Deadly Nevergreen there's quite a culling of the secondary cast, and with the Crescian army bent on incinerating the town to cover up their treachery, it looks like the body count hasn't stopped ticking up.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: So far Up until the final chapters the main characters (roughly defined as Duane, Sette, Quigley, Matti, Toma, Elka, and Jivi) seem seemed to be safe, but anyone else... well. [[spoiler:When When the silver goes on the rampage in the Deadly Nevergreen there's quite a culling of the secondary cast, and with the Crescian army bent on incinerating the town to cover up their treachery, it looks like the body count hasn't stopped ticking up.]]
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* ArtificialLimbs: Lost an arm? No problem. There's a whole range of simulacra. Including cigar-lighting, [[ArmCannon weaponized]], and [[ADateWithRosiePalms self-lubricating]].
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* ArtificialLimbs: Lost an arm? No problem. There's a whole range of simulacra. Including cigar-lighting, [[ArmCannon weaponized]], and [[ADateWithRosiePalms self-lubricating]].and self-lubricating.
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* DiedOnTheirBirthday: [[spoiler: Duane Adelier and his daughter]] are both brutally murdered by a group of muggers on [[spoiler: the daughter's]] birthday. One of the last things [[spoiler: Duane]] saw before his eyes were gouged out was his daughter's lifeless corpse lying in front of him.
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* DamselInDistress: Sette rants at a sister-brother pair (even calling them "stupid damsels in distress") who were being menaced by some ruffians because [[NeutralFemale they didn't do anything]]. In their defense, the sister did actually try to fend them off with a sharp "rat-poker" immediately before Duane and Sette arrive at the scene.
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* DistressedDamsel: Sette rants at a sister-brother pair (even calling them "stupid damsels in distress") who were being menaced by some ruffians because [[NeutralFemale they didn't do anything]]. In their defense, the sister did actually try to fend them off with a sharp "rat-poker" immediately before Duane and Sette arrive at the scene.
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* BareYourMidriff:
** Crescian men wear a simple short shirt with ties holding the sides as casual wear. it cuts off just below the pecs. It seems to usually be worn under other clothes, but not always.
** Bastion rarely wears a proper shirt, usually just sleeves with a little something across the chest and a flouncy cape. Sette points this out when her da introduces Bastion as someone of means, and Sette is unimpressed by his lack of proper shirt.
** Crescian men wear a simple short shirt with ties holding the sides as casual wear. it cuts off just below the pecs. It seems to usually be worn under other clothes, but not always.
** Bastion rarely wears a proper shirt, usually just sleeves with a little something across the chest and a flouncy cape. Sette points this out when her da introduces Bastion as someone of means, and Sette is unimpressed by his lack of proper shirt.
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** In chapter 7, Jivi is given a hat that is commonly worn by Crescians that he grows rather attached to. Eventually, Sette seems to grow attached to it as well as she begins repeatedly stealing it from him, which makes him increasingly annoyed.
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* DeadGuyOnDisplay: Wick Madigan gets caught by the Aldish government, killed, mutilated and strung up at a crossroads as a warning against those who might try to do anything against the current bigoted totalitarian rule.
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* NoPronunciationGuide: A commonly-asked question on Ashley's Formspring is the pronunciation of the characters' names. A guide to the two protagonists' names can be found [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/262675824199604599 here]] however.
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* RequestForPrivacy: When a majority of the Queen's Council [[https://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch17/ch17_27.html decide]] to withdraw support from her dynasty, one of them [[https://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch17/ch17_29.html unceremoniously moves]] the Chancellor out into the hallway with magic before they continue to debate.
-->'''Councilor:''' Ufal, begone. This discussion is beyond a mere mouthpiece such as you.
-->'''Councilor:''' Ufal, begone. This discussion is beyond a mere mouthpiece such as you.
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* FrustratedOverheadScribble: When one of Stockyard's prostitutes has his cigarette stolen and is ordered to keep searching for Sette his irritation with the situation is exemplified by the [[https://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch09/ch09_54.html thick black scribble in his speech bubble as he walks away.]]
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* DivineIncest: The four [[TheMaker creator gods]] are imagined as siblings; two of them are [[GodCouple married]], and one version of the CreationMyth takes a decidedly physical interpretation of their activities. Being very much ''not'' {{Physical God}}s, the incest element isn't seen as applicable.
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* SentimentalHomemadeToy: The eight-year-old [[https://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch04/ch04_50.html Matty Quigley]] has Chitz, a small stuffed blob that his mother sewed for him -- very poorly, albeit with love. Since the attack that killed her and blinded him, it doubles as a TragicKeepsake and is [[{{Magitek}} enchanted]] to "see" for him; he [[CompanionCube treats it like it's alive]] and [[ParrotPetPosition keeps it on his shoulder]].
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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: According to WordOfGod, they are essentially a depository of memories. Thoughts and feelings and such occur in the brain, the soul just retains memories and feelings experienced over a lifetime. [[spoiler:Duane is unique in that his soul has managed to adapt to his rotting body. His brain has rotted away, so logically he shouldn't be even able to think or feel, but his soul has adjusted to his body's circumstances so that he has a thinking and feeling soul, something that so far is apparently one of a kind.]]
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** Cresce is an honest-to-Twins communist state with social equality--but the people living there have no autonomy, the whole system only works because the two-toe lizards are forced to take the worst jobs that humans don't want to do and are one degree away from slaves, and the minority religion's members are ruthlessly hunted down and killed. They also practice the ritual sacrifice and cannibalism of twins (well one of the twins, the other is expected to spend the rest of their life as clergy) which horrifies people from Alderode, who believe the body is sacred and should be burned after death to be spared any indignities.
** Everyone hates the two-toed lizards. Everyone. [[spoiler:At least one said lizard decides to fight back, but since everyone is indirectly responsible for the current state of the two-toes, he just starts killing everybody.]]
** Everyone hates the two-toed lizards. Everyone. [[spoiler:At least one said lizard decides to fight back, but since everyone is indirectly responsible for the current state of the two-toes, he just starts killing everybody.]]
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** Cresce is an honest-to-Twins communist state with social equality--but the people living there have no autonomy, the whole system only works because the two-toe lizards are forced to take the worst jobs that humans don't want to do and are one degree away from slaves, and the minority religion's members are ruthlessly hunted down and killed. They also
** Every nation (excluding the Ssaelists of Alderode) practice the ritual sacrifice andcannibalism cannibalization of twins (well one of the twins, believing that twins are beloved by the other Gefendur gods, and that the sacrificed twin is expected to spend freed from the endless cycle of reincarnation, staying at the gods' sides. The surviving twin spends the rest of their life as clergy) which horrifies people a member of the clergy, taking care of other twin children until their turn comes at adulthood in shrines separate from Alderode, who believe society. The Ssaelists of Alderode find this practice abhorent and whenever they give birth to twins, they do everything they can to make the body is sacred and should be burned after death twins appear not to be spared any indignities.
out of the belief that Gefendur believers will steal the children away to be taken to a shrine, a belief that may or may not be Ssaelist propoganda.
** Everyone hates the two-toed lizards. Everyone. Aldrode doesn't basically enslave them like the Cresians do, but that's likely largely due to the absence of Two-Toe population in Aldeorde. [[spoiler:At least one said lizard decides to fight back, but since everyone is indirectly responsible for the current state of the two-toes, he just starts killing everybody.]]
** Every nation (excluding the Ssaelists of Alderode) practice the ritual sacrifice and
** Everyone hates the two-toed lizards. Everyone. Aldrode doesn't basically enslave them like the Cresians do, but that's likely largely due to the absence of Two-Toe population in Aldeorde. [[spoiler:At least one said lizard decides to fight back, but since everyone is indirectly responsible for the current state of the two-toes, he just starts killing everybody.]]
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* BigotWithACrush: Duane is repelled and disgusted when he learns his new friend Sarthos is a Third Option, considering it nigh heretical to give up womanhood and become a wright despite not being born male. Before he can put in motion his plan to cut ties a bully tries to kill him, Sarthos helps save his life and the two of them end up having sex in a closet. Duane is upset to realize Sarthos took the fall for the bully who ended up killed in the fight and kicked out of school, and is concerned Sarthos may be exiled or killed for arriving home without having proven to be "worth the loss of their womanhood" as was demanded of them.
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* YourHeadAsplode: ''Vienne of Seferpine'' reveals that Vienne had a pymaric weapon that could do this, kept for self-defense in case the government came for her.
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* YourHeadAsplode: ''Vienne of Seferpine'' reveals that Vienne had a pymaric weapon that could do this, reduce a man's head to vapor, kept for self-defense in case the government came for her.
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* WeirdWorldWeirdFood: Kasslyne is permeated with a BackgroundMagicField to which the local human analogs are bound, and while there are some flora and fauna that overlap with earth's most are unique and are used to create a different cuisine. Strawberry Fish--which are freshwater fish intentionally infested with a parasitic worm and served uncooked at room temperature fresh out of a tank--are a popular snack. A popular breakfast item is a colorful savory cereal made up of crunchy bits that taste like shrimp and salty biscuits served in warm [[{{Unicorn}} monny]] milk topped with monny cheese.
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* MagicMushroom: Bloodeye Wanderers are a type of mushroom that can crawl, fleeing from attacks or responding in kind en mass to poison a being. They are large gray mushrooms with poisonous spots of dripping crimson guttation.
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* DarkSkinnedBlond: The Silver or Renghul caste of Alderode all have dark skin and silver hair in addition to blue eyes.
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* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler:Stockyard]], previously an imposing and dignified crime boss, dies while blubbering about his father and begging for a child to save him. The smoke eels in the area are quick to mock him for this.
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* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler:Stockyard]], previously an imposing The wright Hart in Ethelmik is killed by his own spell backfiring and dignified crime boss, dies while blubbering about his father and begging for a child to save him. The smoke eels in the area are quick to mock blowing him for this.up when he's [[https://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch10/ch10_34.html crowded by a bunch of floating pymparic butts designed to advertise a local brothel.]]
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* EmbarrassinglyPainfulSunburn: Matty is very pale and ends up with an intense painful sunburn after he plays in the sun with Jivi and Sette. Sette offers him a (fake) sunburn cure if he trades her his sight aid and draws an eel with the pressure of her finger on his back.
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* MarkOfShame: Inak pariahs are marked with a series of scars to warn off other Inak when their clan disowns them. The most striking scar is across their muzzle to the bone, taking a chunk of their lips and ensuring their teeth are always visible.
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* MegaCorp: Beadman's Betters is a giant company that produces just about everything, from food items, to sex toys, to weapons and magical constructs, and the owner of the company, Jab Beadman, is the power behind Sharteshane's PuppetKing.
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* MyCountryTisOfTheeThatISting: Quigley despises Alderode, at one point quipping that he'd rather be called the son of a whore than a son of Alderode.
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** Gender flipped with [[spoiler:Anadyne]]. Her boyfriend [[spoiler:Toby]] and cousin [[spoiler:Stockyard]] both die shortly after their introductions, providing the CynicismCatalyst that pushes her to [[spoiler:fuse with the First Silver monster]].
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* FantasticFruitsAndVegetables: Hedgeapples are a common fruit, often used as an ingredient in bigger dishes. They're round with little nodules and light colored flesh and taste like woody pears.
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* KillingInSelfDefense: The first time Duane killed someone it was a bully who had gathered a group of friends to jump and kill Duane out of jealousy. While killing him made his friends flee and saved Duane's life he was traumatized by what he'd done, especially because he Core Leeched the other boy which is not considered an honorable way to do things.
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* ImpairmentShot: During the flashback to Duane's assassination there's a panel from his pov showing the double vision encroaching on him after getting hit with drugged darts.
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* TongueOutInsult: When Duane relates to Sette that in Alderode women are forbidden from learning pymary and considered unsuited for it she sticks out her tongue in an echo of his memory of Mikaila doing the same thing.
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* WeddingRingRemoval: In the side story "Orphans" Quigley uses a heated knife to burn and cut away his wedding brand before attempting to commit suicide, out of feelings of guilt and despair over his wife's murder.
