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** Bonnie is seen holding a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' book.
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** Bonnie is seen holding a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' ''Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya'' book.
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* [[GirlInABox Guy In A Box]]: Allen becomes this.
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''Allen The Alien'' is a strip by ComicFury users [[Tropers/PancticeSquadCutterback ataeaf]] and [[Webcomic/ZachMannAndSD zachdewd]] (for the most part, respectively the writer and artist). In it, a man named Allen is taken in an AlienAbduction. Meanwhile, his wife Bonnie is trying to write "the greatest novel ever"...
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-->"Yeah, MORE exposition. ItGetsBetter, we swear. [--[[ScheduleSlip If zachdewd can hurry it up already.]]--]
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-->"Yeah, MORE exposition. ItGetsBetter, [[SlowPacedBeginning It gets better, we swear. swear.]] [--[[ScheduleSlip If zachdewd can hurry it up already.]]--]
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** When Bonnie wants to try Allen's gun, she comments "[[VideoGame/GrandTheftAuto GTA]] won't suffice."
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** When Bonnie wants to try Allen's gun, she comments "[[VideoGame/GrandTheftAuto GTA]] "''[[VideoGame/GrandTheftAuto GTA]]'' won't suffice."
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* ProgressivelyPrettier: Inverted with Allen, who starts off ''really'' attractive. Sadly, it wouldn't last.
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* ProgressivelyPrettier: Inverted with Allen, who starts started off ''really'' attractive. Sadly, it wouldn't last.
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* ProgressivelyPrettier: Inverted with Allen, who starts off ''really'' attractive. Sadly, it couldn't last.
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* ProgressivelyPrettier: Inverted with Allen, who starts off ''really'' attractive. Sadly, it couldn't wouldn't last.
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* ProgressivelyPrettier: Inverted with Allen, who starts off ''really'' attractive. Sadly, they didn't last.
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* ProgressivelyPrettier: Inverted with Allen, who starts off ''really'' attractive. Sadly, they didn't it couldn't last.
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* ProgressivelyPrettier: Inverted with Allen, who starts off ''really'' attractive. Sadly, they didn't last.
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** ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'' is referenced in one strip.
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** ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'' is referenced in one strip. Specifically, "blackjack and hookers" are mentioned to be part of Bonnie's book.
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* StartMyOwn: Bonnie references the trope namer (''Futurama'') when her book is commented on by 565-14.
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** When Bonnie wants to try Allen's gun, she comments "[[VideoGame/GrandTheftAuto GTA]] won't suffice."
* StartMyOwn: Bonnie references the trope namer (''Futurama'') when her book choices is commented on by565-14.565-14. This is why she's trying to write her own book.
* StartMyOwn: Bonnie references the trope namer (''Futurama'') when her book choices is commented on by
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* SuperDickery: Parodied. On the cover of a comic book, a superhero says "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''The Mousetrap''."
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* SuperDickery: Parodied. On the cover of a comic book, a superhero says "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''The Mousetrap''."" In tiny font, [--*He's really doing this to help him.--]
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The comic goes through two successions, the "main" strip, which is more plot based, and the {{B Side Comic|s}} Poorly Drawn Allen, which is more comedic.
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The comic goes through two successions, the "main" strip, which is slightly more plot based, and the {{B Side Comic|s}} Poorly ''Poorly Drawn Allen, Allen'', which is slightly more comedic.
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* ArtEvolution: Zig-zagged. The artwork can be in varying degrees of quality. Though there has been something of a downward trend, because they artist is busy with outside conflicts and doesn't really have time to focus on the strip. However, it's starting to improve, cut-and-pasted strips aside.
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* ArtEvolution: Zig-zagged. The artwork can be in varying degrees of quality. Though there has been something of a downward trend, because they artist is busy with outside conflicts and doesn't really have time to focus on the strip. However, it's starting to improve, cut-and-pasted strips and ''Poorly Drawn Allen'' aside.
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* BSideComics: Poorly Drawn Alien, which is very much StylisticSuck.
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* BSideComics: Poorly ''Poorly Drawn Alien, Alien'', which is very much StylisticSuck.
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* StickFigureComic: Poorly Drawn Allen.
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* StickFigureComic: Poorly ''Poorly Drawn Allen.Allen''.
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* StylisticSuck: The {{B Side Comic|s}} Poorly Drawn Allen.
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* StylisticSuck: The {{B Side Comic|s}} Poorly ''Poorly Drawn Allen.Allen''.
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''Allen The Alien'' is a strip by ComicFury users [[Tropers/PancticeSquadCutterback ataeaf]] and [[Webcomic/ZachMannAndSD zachdewd]] (respectively the writer and artist). In it, a man named Allen is taken in an AlienAbduction. Meanwhile, his wife Bonnie is trying to write "the greatest novel ever"...
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''Allen The Alien'' is a strip by ComicFury users [[Tropers/PancticeSquadCutterback ataeaf]] and [[Webcomic/ZachMannAndSD zachdewd]] (respectively (for the most part, respectively the writer and artist). In it, a man named Allen is taken in an AlienAbduction. Meanwhile, his wife Bonnie is trying to write "the greatest novel ever"...
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* ItRunsOnNonsenseoluem: Apparently, the English the aliens speak is translated Czech. It's entirely played for laughs.
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* ItRunsOnNonsenseoluem: ItRunsOnNonsensoleum: Apparently, the English the aliens speak is translated Czech. It's entirely played for laughs.
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* ItRunsOnNonsenseoluem: Apparently, the English the aliens speak is translated Czech. It's entirely played for laughs.
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* VoodooShark: Apparently, the English the aliens speak is translated Czech. It's entirely played for laughs.
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* StunnedSilence: Allen is at a loss for words after RR-TWTTW comments that the aliens actually speak translated Czech.
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* VoodooShark: Apparently the English the aliens speak is translated Czech. It's entirely played for laughs.
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* VoodooShark: Apparently Apparently, the English the aliens speak is translated Czech. It's entirely played for laughs.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Subverted. They actually speak Czech.
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* ArtEvolution: Zig-zagged. The artwork can be in varying degrees of quality. Though there has been something of a downward trend, because they artist is busy with outside conflicts and doesn't really have time to focus on the strip.
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* ArtEvolution: Zig-zagged. The artwork can be in varying degrees of quality. Though there has been something of a downward trend, because they artist is busy with outside conflicts and doesn't really have time to focus on the strip. However, it's starting to improve, cut-and-pasted strips aside.
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* MediumAwareness: When Chad gives 565-14 back to RR-TWTTW, he comments that "the writer couldn't think up of a good subplot for her." [''sic'']
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* VoodooShark: Apparently the English the aliens speak is translated Czech. It's entirely played for laughs.
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''Allen The Alien'' is a strip by ComicFury users [[Tropers/PancticeSquadCutterback ataeaf]] and [[Webcomic/ZachManAndSD zachdewd]] (respectively the writer and artist). In it, a man named Allen is taken in an AlienAbduction. Meanwhile, his wife Bonnie is trying to write "the greatest novel ever"...
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''Allen The Alien'' is a strip by ComicFury users [[Tropers/PancticeSquadCutterback ataeaf]] and [[Webcomic/ZachManAndSD [[Webcomic/ZachMannAndSD zachdewd]] (respectively the writer and artist). In it, a man named Allen is taken in an AlienAbduction. Meanwhile, his wife Bonnie is trying to write "the greatest novel ever"...
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''Allen The Alien'' is a strip by ComicFury users [[Tropers/PancticeSquadCutterback ataeaf]] and zachdewd (respectively the writer and artist). In it, a man named Allen is taken in an AlienAbduction. Meanwhile, his wife Bonnie is trying to write "the greatest novel ever"...
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''Allen The Alien'' is a strip by ComicFury users [[Tropers/PancticeSquadCutterback ataeaf]] and zachdewd [[Webcomic/ZachManAndSD zachdewd]] (respectively the writer and artist). In it, a man named Allen is taken in an AlienAbduction. Meanwhile, his wife Bonnie is trying to write "the greatest novel ever"...
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** A superhero says, "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''." '''Technically''' it's this trope. We think it's BreadEggsMilkSquick.
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** A superhero says, "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''." '''Technically''' it's this trope. We think it's BreadEggsMilkSquick.they're all equal.
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** A superhero says, "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''."
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** A superhero says, "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''."" '''Technically''' it's this trope. We think it's BreadEggsMilkSquick.
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* SuperDickery: Parodied. On the cover of a comic book, a superhero says "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''."
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* SuperDickery: Parodied. On the cover of a comic book, a superhero says "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''.''The Mousetrap''."
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** ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'' is mentioned in one strip.
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** ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'' is mentioned referenced in one strip.
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* StartMyOwn: Bonnie references the [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} trope namer]] when her book is commented on by 565-14.
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** ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'' is mentioned in one strip.
* StartMyOwn: Bonnie references the[[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} trope namer]] namer (''Futurama'') when her book is commented on by 565-14.
* StartMyOwn: Bonnie references the
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Bonnie says that when she finishes her book, she'll get the "Nobel Peace Prize For The Best Book In The World", she'll be a "world idol", and she'll be talked about on a "um... daytime progrum?"
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: ArsonMurderAndJaywalking:
** Bonnie says that when she finishes her book, she'll get the "Nobel Peace Prize For The Best Book In The World", she'll be a "world idol", and she'll be talked about on a "um... daytimeprogrum?"progrum?"
** A superhero says, "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''."
** Bonnie says that when she finishes her book, she'll get the "Nobel Peace Prize For The Best Book In The World", she'll be a "world idol", and she'll be talked about on a "um... daytime
** A superhero says, "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''."
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* SuperDickery: Parodied. On the cover of a comic book, a superhero says "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''.
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* SuperDickery: Parodied. On the cover of a comic book, a superhero says "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''."
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* ClarkesThirdLawForGirlsToys: Disscused; Bonnie points out this trope, then 565-14 remarks, "So magic was invented by a woman?"
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* ClarkesThirdLawForGirlsToys: ClarkesLawForGirlsToys: Disscused; Bonnie points out this trope, then 565-14 remarks, "So magic was invented by a woman?"woman?"
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: 565-14 remarks, "So magic was invented by a woman?", when Bonnie refernces Clarke's Law for Girls Toys.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: 565-14 remarks, "So magic was invented by a woman?", when Bonnie refernces Clarke's Law for Girls Toys.
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* SuperDikery: Parodied. On the cover of a comic book, a superhero says "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''.
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* SuperDikery: SuperDickery: Parodied. On the cover of a comic book, a superhero says "I'll rape your babies, and murder you, and spoil ''Theatre/TheMousetrap''.
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** "The Scarlet Ibis" is directly referenced.
** Bonnie is seen holding a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' book.
* StartMyOwn: Bonnie references the [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} trope namer]] when her book is commented on by 565-14.
** Bonnie is seen holding a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' book.
* StartMyOwn: Bonnie references the [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} trope namer]] when her book is commented on by 565-14.
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* ThumbtackOnTheChair: Defied; Bonnie thinks about doing this to RR-TWTTW, but decides "it'd be too messy".
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* TrivialTitle: Disscused; Elanis complains about these types of titles.
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* AliensAreBastards[=/=]HumansAreBastards: RR-TWTTW says that neither are true (it's just he has anger issues and that everyone's just lazy.
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* AliensAreBastards[=/=]HumansAreBastards: RR-TWTTW says that neither are true (it's just he has anger issues and that everyone's just lazy.lazy).
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* TheUnpronouncable: How ''would'' you pronounce "RR-TWTTW" or "565-14" [[note]]Aside from spelling them out, of course[[/note]] They just get called David and Jill (but according to the character sheet, the latter prefers to be called "Elanis", respectively.
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* TheUnpronouncable: How ''would'' you pronounce "RR-TWTTW" or "565-14" [[note]]Aside from spelling them out, of course[[/note]] They just get called David and Jill (but according to the character sheet, the latter prefers to be called "Elanis", "Elanis"), respectively.
