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* CassandraTruth: Nonverbal variation. Rainbow Dash assumed that some of the pegasi were faking their coughing to get out of Tornado Duty. Unfortunately, it turns out that they were genuinely coughing, and because Rainbow Dash still pushed them to train, it developed into Feather Flu, [[NiceJobBreakingItHero depriving the team of eight pegasi]].
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* CassandraTruth: Nonverbal variation. Rainbow Dash assumed that some of the pegasi were faking their coughing to get out of Tornado Duty. Unfortunately, it turns out that they were genuinely coughing, really ''were'' sick, and because Rainbow Dash still pushed them to train, it developed into Feather Flu, [[NiceJobBreakingItHero depriving the team of eight pegasi]].
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* {{Determinator}}
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* {{Determinator}}{{Determinator}}:
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* YankTheDogsChain: The first time Fluttershy attempts to test run she gets off to a good start, but her trauma kicks in and she stumbles at the last second making only 0.5. After an intense training montage and bulk up in courage, she tries again, more hopeful and confident, but still only makes 2.3. [[GiveTheDogABone She finally musters up a proper speed for the actual tornado]].
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* YankTheDogsChain: The first time Fluttershy attempts to test run she gets off to a good start, but her trauma kicks in and she stumbles at the last second making only 0.5. After an intense training montage and bulk up in courage, she tries again, more hopeful and confident, but still only makes 2.3. [[GiveTheDogABone [[ThrowTheDogABone She finally musters up a proper speed for the actual tornado]].
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* ObsessivelyOrganized: While it's a character-defining trait, Twilight is seen enforcing a germ-free environment. Absolutely germ-free. Turns out to be {{Justified|Trope}} when eight pegasi get sick and create a problem for Rainbow Dash. Also the whole point of the job was to transport water up to Cloudsdale. If the pegasi moving it were sick, the water could've been tainted.
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* SuperOCD: While it's a character-defining trait, Twilight is seen enforcing a germ-free environment. Absolutely germ-free. Turns out to be {{Justified|Trope}} when eight pegasi get sick and create a problem for Rainbow Dash. Also the whole point of the job was to transport water up to Cloudsdale. If the pegasi moving it were sick, the water could've been tainted.
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Trope is now Definition Only
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* OffModel: During the second tornado attempt, Fluttershy's wings briefly disappear when she smacks against the wingpower-measuring machine.
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* OpenMouthInsertFoot: On her first test run, Fluttershy achieves 0.5 wingpower. She seems okay with it, until Spike comments, "0.5? Isn't that, like, less than 1?" Twilight dope-slaps him for being insensitive, but the damage is already done.
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* TraumaButton: When Fluttershy hears Flitter and Cloudchaser laughing (though not at her) as she flies, it makes her panic because she imagines everypony laughing at her the way she was laughed at in flight camp when she failed to fly.
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* TraumaButton: When Fluttershy hears Flitter and Cloudchaser laughing (though not at her) as she flies, it makes her triggers a panic attack because she imagines everypony laughing at her the way she was laughed at in flight camp when she failed to fly.
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* TraumaButton: When Fluttershy hears Flitter and Cloudchaser laughing (though not at her) as she flies, it makes her panic because she imagines everypony laughing at her the way she was laughed at in flight camp when she failed to fly.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* BreakTheCutie: Fluttershy, ''[[UpToEleven 3 times]]'' (though twice it's self-inflicted). The poor girl just couldn't get a break this episode.
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* BreakTheCutie: Fluttershy, ''[[UpToEleven 3 times]]'' ''3 times'' (though twice it's self-inflicted). The poor girl just couldn't get a break this episode.
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* SuperOCD: While it's a character-defining trait, Twilight is seen enforcing a germ-free environment. [[UpToEleven Absolutely]] germ-free. Turns out to be {{Justified|Trope}} when eight pegasi get sick and create a problem for Rainbow Dash. Also the whole point of the job was to transport water up to Cloudsdale. If the pegasi moving it were sick, the water could've been tainted.
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* SuperOCD: While it's a character-defining trait, Twilight is seen enforcing a germ-free environment. [[UpToEleven Absolutely]] Absolutely germ-free. Turns out to be {{Justified|Trope}} when eight pegasi get sick and create a problem for Rainbow Dash. Also the whole point of the job was to transport water up to Cloudsdale. If the pegasi moving it were sick, the water could've been tainted.
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General editing.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Inverted. Fluttershy's tree disguise is basically flawless, but Rainbow Dash still isn't fooled by it.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Inverted. Fluttershy's tree disguise is basically flawless, but Rainbow Dash still isn't fooled by it. [[FridgeBrilliance And honestly, Rainbow Dash has been over at Fluttershy's house many times before]] so it is no surprise she would know which tree just suddenly sprung up there.
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* TestosteronePoisoning: Bulk Biceps is this to a fault. He's huge, muscular, hot-blooded and his sole purpose is a running gag.
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* TestosteronePoisoning: Bulk Biceps is this to a fault. He's huge, muscular, hot-blooded and hot-blooded, and his sole purpose is a running gag.
** Averted with Twilight when a squirrel comes up to her.
-->'''Spike:''' What is he saying?\\
'''Twilight:''' [[WesternAnimation/ThePowerpuffGirls Do I look like I speak Squirrel]]?
-->'''Spike:''' What is he saying?\\
'''Twilight:''' [[WesternAnimation/ThePowerpuffGirls Do I look like I speak Squirrel]]?
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* WritersCannotDoMath: [[FantasticMeasurementSystem Wing Power]] is stated to be cumulative. For the 8 Pegasi missing to account for breaking the record versus barely able to make the tornado would require them to have an average of over 13.75. This is unlikely given that only Dash displays a number higher than 10. That's only to beat Fillydelphia's 910, Dash's over 1000 goal would require the 8 to have been averaging over 25.
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* WritersCannotDoMath: [[FantasticMeasurementSystem Wing Power]] is stated to be cumulative. For the 8 Pegasi missing to account for breaking the record versus barely able to make the tornado would require them to have an average of over 13.75. This is unlikely given that only Dash displays a number higher than 10. That's only to beat Fillydelphia's 910, Dash's over 1000 wing power goal would require the 8 to have been averaging over 25.
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Misuse, since pegasi don't exist, so you can't say the result of Fluttershy's flight training is realistic or not
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While undergoing a few days of intense training will certainly help you improve, it's just not possible to go from the bottom of the heap to the top that quickly.
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YMMV
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* NonStandardCharacterDesign: Bulk Biceps, the white Pegasus with huge muscles and tiny wings, who has drawn comparisons to the works of Creator/JohnKricfalusi and been {{Fan Nickname}}d Roid Rage.
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* NonStandardCharacterDesign: Bulk Biceps, the white Pegasus with huge muscles and tiny wings, who has drawn comparisons to the works of Creator/JohnKricfalusi and been {{Fan Nickname}}d Roid Rage.Creator/JohnKricfalusi.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The overly-muscled pegasus stallion with disproportionately small wings is somewhat suggestive of steroid abuse. (Hence, why one FanNickname for this pony is "Roid Rage".)
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The overly-muscled pegasus stallion with disproportionately small wings is somewhat suggestive of steroid abuse. (Hence, why one FanNickname for this pony is "Roid Rage".)
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* FeatherFingers: Fluttershy (and [[FanNickname Dizzy Twister]] in the background in another scene) are shown doing pushups with her wings, and another Pegasus mare is shown weightlifting with hers. It's used one more time when Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy high-five each other.
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* FeatherFingers: Fluttershy (and [[FanNickname Dizzy Twister]] in the background in another scene) are shown doing pushups with her wings, and another Pegasus mare is shown weightlifting with hers. It's used one more time when Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy high-five each other.
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* MissionBriefing: Rainbow Dash gives a military style one about tornado duty to the Ponyville pegasi, including an instruction video.
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Bad indentation, plus these aren't surpring outcomes.
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** People can’t just “get over” long term childhood bullying even when working to overcome it. There oftentimes are scars that can last forever, but that doesn’t mean it has to rule your life.
** Also, sickness can and WILL happen eventually. Rainbow Dash assumes some Pegasi coughing are just faking to get out of doing their training. Because they were forced to train while sick and couldn’t rest before Tornado day? Eight Pegasi end up being taken out due to the Feather Flu, severely hurting the effort.
** Also, sickness can and WILL happen eventually. Rainbow Dash assumes some Pegasi coughing are just faking to get out of doing their training. Because they were forced to train while sick and couldn’t rest before Tornado day? Eight Pegasi end up being taken out due to the Feather Flu, severely hurting the effort.
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* RealityEnsues: While undergoing a few days of intense training will certainly help you improve, it's just not possible to go from the bottom of the heap to the top that quickly.
** People can’t just “get over” long term childhood bullying even when working to overcome it. There oftentimes are scars that can last forever, but that doesn’t mean it has to rule your life.
** Also, sickness can and WILL happen eventually. Rainbow Dash assumes some Pegasi coughing are just faking to get out of doing their training. Because they were forced to train while sick and couldn’t rest before Tornado day? Eight Pegasi end up being taken out due to the Feather Flu, severely hurting the effort.
** People can’t just “get over” long term childhood bullying even when working to overcome it. There oftentimes are scars that can last forever, but that doesn’t mean it has to rule your life.
** Also, sickness can and WILL happen eventually. Rainbow Dash assumes some Pegasi coughing are just faking to get out of doing their training. Because they were forced to train while sick and couldn’t rest before Tornado day? Eight Pegasi end up being taken out due to the Feather Flu, severely hurting the effort.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While undergoing a few days of intense training will certainly help you improve, it's just not possible to go from the bottom of the heap to the top that quickly.
** People can’t just “get over” long term childhood bullying even when working to overcome it. There oftentimes are scars that can last forever, but that doesn’t mean it has to rule your life.
** Also, sickness can and WILL happen eventually. Rainbow Dash assumes some Pegasi coughing are just faking to get out of doing their training. Because they were forced to train while sick and couldn’t rest before Tornado day? Eight Pegasi end up being taken out due to the Feather Flu, severely hurting the effort.
** People can’t just “get over” long term childhood bullying even when working to overcome it. There oftentimes are scars that can last forever, but that doesn’t mean it has to rule your life.
** Also, sickness can and WILL happen eventually. Rainbow Dash assumes some Pegasi coughing are just faking to get out of doing their training. Because they were forced to train while sick and couldn’t rest before Tornado day? Eight Pegasi end up being taken out due to the Feather Flu, severely hurting the effort.
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* PunishedForNoSympathy: Rainbow Dash forced Thunderlane to train while under the assumption that he’s faking coughing. Turns out, he ''was'' sick and he has gotten others sick with the Feather Flu, which causes the amount of Pegasi needed for the tornado mission to be depleted.
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* PunishedForNoSympathy: Rainbow Dash forced Thunderlane to train while under the assumption that he’s faking coughing. Turns out, he was sick and he has gotten others sick with the Feather Flu, which causes the amount of Pegasi needed for the tornado mission to be depleted.
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* PunishedForNoSympathy: Rainbow Dash forced Thunderlane to train while under the assumption that he’s faking coughing. Turns out, he was ''was'' sick and he has gotten others sick with the Feather Flu, which causes the amount of Pegasi needed for the tornado mission to be depleted.
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* PunishedForNoSympathy: Rainbow Dash forced Thunderlane to train while under the assumption that he’s faking coughing. Turns out, he was sick and he has gotten others sick with the Feather Flu, which causes the amount of Pegasi needed for the tornado mission to be depleted.
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** People can’t just “get over” long term childhood bullying even when working to overcome it. There oftentimes are scars that can last forever, but that doesn’t mean it has to rule your life.