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* NeverMyFault: The male mercenary at the end blames Snow for killing his wife, ignoring the fact that he was the one who gunned her down in the ShootTheHostage situation below.
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* CoitusEnsues: Hirald sleeps with Snow after wearing his ex-wife's dress and learning some backstory.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Snow is a one-handed albino, although he does not look it much. The original story makes sure to describe his paper white skin and bright red eyes as things that make him stand out, but in this short he simply looks like a regular man with greying hair and has both hands to begin with, although one is shot off in the opening act.
* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Snow and Hirald seem to have sex so abruptly it makes it seem like he's just suddenly turned on by his dead wife's dress. In the short story, the two would already have been romantically involved by that point, and the fact that they have sex for nearly 12 hours straight without any sign of Hirald being worn down is what serves as the FiveSecondForeshadowing for her true nature.
* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Snow and Hirald seem to have sex so abruptly it makes it seem like he's just suddenly turned on by his dead wife's dress. In the short story, the two would already have been romantically involved by that point, and the fact that they have sex for nearly 12 hours straight without any sign of Hirald being worn down is what serves as the FiveSecondForeshadowing for her true nature.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Snow is a one-handed albino, although he does not look it much. The original story makes sure to describe his
* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Snow and Hirald seem to have sex so abruptly it makes it seem like he's just suddenly turned on by his dead wife's dress. In the short story, the two would already have been romantically involved by that point, and the fact that they have sex for nearly 12 hours straight without any sign of Hirald being worn down is what serves as the FiveSecondForeshadowing
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* AlbinosAreFreaks: Aside being an immortal that can easily regenerate lost limbs, Snow is also an albino. It's not made explicit if it's an actual surname or just a nickname. It's also unclear if the albinism relates in any way with his immortality. However, the first bounty hunter who approaches him notes his albinism derisively.
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* AlbinosAreFreaks: Aside from being an immortal that who can easily regenerate lost limbs, Snow is also an albino. It's not made explicit if it's an actual surname or just a nickname. It's also unclear if the albinism relates in any way with to his immortality. However, the first bounty hunter who approaches him notes his albinism derisively.
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** No, Hirald isn't there as a HoneyPot or a spy or whatever. She's searching for a soul-mate that would be just as [[TheAgeless ageless]] as she is.
* TheCavalry: Hirald saves Snow's life twice during the short, always preventing his execution.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A futuristic pillory, where convicts are locked in a sealed container and left to the sun. In a resulting heat, all the water in their bodies slowly evaporates, staying inside the container, but not before the convict dies out of dehydration.
* TheCavalry: Hirald saves Snow's life twice during the short, always preventing his execution.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A futuristic pillory, where convicts are locked in a sealed container and left to the sun. In a resulting heat, all the water in their bodies slowly evaporates, staying inside the container, but not before the convict dies out of dehydration.
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** No, Hirald isn't there as a HoneyPot or a spy or whatever. She's searching for a soul-mate soulmate that would be just as [[TheAgeless ageless]] as she is.
*TheCavalry: BigDamnHeroes: Hirald saves Snow's life twice during the short, always preventing his execution.
*CruelAndUnusualDeath: A futuristic pillory, where convicts are locked in a sealed container and left to CensorShadow: When Hirald undresses, all we see is her silhouette against the sun. In a resulting heat, all the water sunlight coming in their bodies slowly evaporates, staying inside the container, but not before the convict dies out of dehydration.from behind her.
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* ConvenientlyTimedAttackFromBehind: Hirald's favorite way of saving Snow's skin - sneaking up on his assailants and back-stabbing or shooting them at the last possible moment.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A futuristic pillory, where convicts are locked in a sealed container and left to the sun. In a resulting heat, all the water in their bodies slowly evaporates, staying inside the container, but not before the convict dies out of dehydration.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A futuristic pillory, where convicts are locked in a sealed container and left to the sun. In a resulting heat, all the water in their bodies slowly evaporates, staying inside the container, but not before the convict dies out of dehydration.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Snow's last wife killed herself once she became an old woman and he was still at his prime.
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* DisneyDeath: It looks like Hirald is killed with a BoomHeadshot until we learn that she is a cyborg.
* DrivenToSuicide: Snow's last wife killed herself once she became an old woman and [[MayflyDecemberRomance he was still at hisprime.prime]].
* EpunymousTitle: "Snow in the Desert" refers to the main character's name.
* DrivenToSuicide: Snow's last wife killed herself once she became an old woman and [[MayflyDecemberRomance he was still at his
* EpunymousTitle: "Snow in the Desert" refers to the main character's name.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: If you look closely, when Hirald is being shot, her wounds glow, rather than being turn into mince, like in case of every other character. When she shows up in the end to rescue Snow, her synthetic limbs are shown to be made out of some white, glowing substance.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Snow asks Hirald if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like suicidal lack of preparedness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Snow asks Hirald if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like suicidal lack of preparedness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: If you look closely, when Hirald is being shot, her wounds glow, rather than being turn turned into mince, like in case of every other character. When she shows up in the end to rescue Snow, her synthetic limbs are shown to be made out of some white, glowing substance.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Snow asks Hirald if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like a suicidal lack of preparedness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Snow asks Hirald if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like a suicidal lack of preparedness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
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* HealingFactor: Snow isn't just immortal, he can regrown blown-out limbs in a matter of ''days''. The hand he got blown away in a bar is already regenerating few hours later.
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* HandSlidingDownTheGlass: A suffering water thief inside a sealed glass container lets his hand slide down the wall as Snow walks by.
* HealingFactor: Snow isn't just immortal, he canregrown regrow blown-out limbs in a matter of ''days''. The hand he got blown away in a bar is already regenerating a few hours later.
* HealingFactor: Snow isn't just immortal, he can
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* InTheBack: Hirald's favourite way of saving Snow's skin - sneaking up on his assailants and back-stabbing or shooting them.
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* InTheBack: Hirald's favourite way ISurrenderSuckers: During the fight scene, Snow plays dead only to jump his opponent when he draws close.
* KirksRock: The rock formation that Snow and Hirald pass by at night looks like this.
* MatchCut: Early on, from the WantedPoster to a closeup ofsaving Snow's skin - sneaking up on his assailants and back-stabbing or shooting them.
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* KirksRock: The rock formation that Snow and Hirald pass by at night looks like this.
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* NighInvulnerability: Hirald. She sustains a short burst of machine fire that was shown capable of shredding flesh into pink mist. But since she's a cyborg, all damage it does is removing the outer, cosmetic layer of human skin.
* OutlawCouple: The duo of mercenaries with face tattoos are a married couple.
* OutlawCouple: The duo of mercenaries with face tattoos are a married couple.
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* NighInvulnerability: Hirald. She sustains a short burst of machine fire that was shown capable of shredding flesh into pink mist. But since she's a cyborg, all damage it does is removing remove the outer, cosmetic layer of human skin.
* ObligatoryEarpieceTouch: The female bounty hunter at the inn lifts her hand up to her ear when giving orders to her partners via earpiece. Also later during the attack, the mercenaries use this gesture while communicating.
* OutlawCouple: The duo of mercenaries with face tattoosare is a married couple.
* ObligatoryEarpieceTouch: The female bounty hunter at the inn lifts her hand up to her ear when giving orders to her partners via earpiece. Also later during the attack, the mercenaries use this gesture while communicating.
* OutlawCouple: The duo of mercenaries with face tattoos
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* ReplacementGoldfish: It originally seems like that Snow is looking for one for his deceased wife. Turns out he couldn't care any less.
* RoboticReveal: Hirald is an ageless cyborg, also looking for a soul-mate.
* RoboticReveal: Hirald is an ageless cyborg, also looking for a soul-mate.
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* ReplacementGoldfish: It originally seems like that Snow is looking for one for his deceased wife. Turns out he couldn't care any less.
* RoboticReveal: Hirald is an ageless cyborg, also looking for asoul-mate.soulmate.
* ShootTheHostage: The male mercenary has [[NoHonorAmongThieves no qualms shooting his female partner]] who Snow uses as a HumanShield.
* RoboticReveal: Hirald is an ageless cyborg, also looking for a
* ShootTheHostage: The male mercenary has [[NoHonorAmongThieves no qualms shooting his female partner]] who Snow uses as a HumanShield.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Hirald approaches Snow with the proposition to allow himself to be studied by the organization she works for, while also preventing his immortality from being reverse engineered by the wrong people. Snow asks why not just kill him and solve the second part, to which Hirald replies [[ForScience her organization doesn't destroy knowledge]]. By the end of the episode, it becomes clear that even though this may be her assignment, she, like Snow, is also functionally immortal, and looking for a companion to ease her loneliness.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Hirald approaches Snow with the proposition to allow himself to be studied by the organization she works for, while also preventing his immortality from being reverse engineered reverse-engineered by the wrong people. Snow asks why not just kill him and solve the second part, to which Hirald replies [[ForScience her organization doesn't destroy knowledge]]. By the end of the episode, it becomes clear that even though this may be her assignment, she, like Snow, is also functionally immortal, and looking for a companion to ease her loneliness.
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* DeathWorld: Water is so precious in the desert world that stealing it gets you locked inside a container where you'll dehydrate and overheat to death as described above and beer delivered to bar patrons is locked behind glass covers requiring a PIN code to remove, and it's so inhospitable that the native dragon-like creatures cover under their wings and people need a special "day tent" with an internal cooler to survive during the day.
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An immortal man is trying to evade mercenaries hunting down for his power, hiding in an inhospitable desert planet.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Snow is a one-handed albino, although he does not look it much. The original story makes sure to describe his paper white skin and bright red eyes as things that make him stand out, but in this short he simply looks like a regular man with greying hair and he has both hands to begin with, although one is shot off in the opening act.
* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Snow and Hirald seem to have sex so abruptly it makes it seem like he's just suddenly turned on by his dead wife's dress. In the short the two would already have been romantically involved by that point in the story, and the fact that they have sex for nearly 12 hours straight without any sign of Hirald being worn down is what serves as the FiveSecondForeshadowing in the short story.
* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Snow and Hirald seem to have sex so abruptly it makes it seem like he's just suddenly turned on by his dead wife's dress. In the short the two would already have been romantically involved by that point in the story, and the fact that they have sex for nearly 12 hours straight without any sign of Hirald being worn down is what serves as the FiveSecondForeshadowing in the short story.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Snow is a one-handed albino, although he does not look it much. The original story makes sure to describe his paper white skin and bright red eyes as things that make him stand out, but in this short he simply looks like a regular man with greying hair and he has both hands to begin with, although one is shot off in the opening act.
* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Snow and Hirald seem to have sex so abruptly it makes it seem like he's just suddenly turned on by his dead wife's dress. In the short story, the two would already have been romantically involved by thatpoint in the story, point, and the fact that they have sex for nearly 12 hours straight without any sign of Hirald being worn down is what serves as the FiveSecondForeshadowing in the short story.for her true nature.
* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Snow and Hirald seem to have sex so abruptly it makes it seem like he's just suddenly turned on by his dead wife's dress. In the short story, the two would already have been romantically involved by that
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** Hirald is also the case, since her body is fully synthetic and as such doesn't age.
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* {{Cyborg}}: All that's left of Hirald's organic body is a spine column and "mostly" human brain. Everything else is an advanced synthetic body.
* DrivenToSuicide: Snow's latest wife committed one once she became an old woman and he was still at his prime.
* DrivenToSuicide: Snow's latest wife committed one once she became an old woman and he was still at his prime.
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* {{Cyborg}}: All that's left of Hirald's organic body is a spine spinal column and "mostly" human brain. Everything else is an advanced synthetic body.
body which is both superhumanly strong and durable (she can effortlessly drive her hand all the way through a man's body, while being shot point-blank by a HandCannon only damages her skin, and doesn't appear to affect the underlying structure at all).
* DrivenToSuicide: Snow'slatest last wife committed one killed herself once she became an old woman and he was still at his prime.
* DrivenToSuicide: Snow's
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* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: The nigh-immortal Snow is perpetually stuck in his late 30s.
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* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: The nigh-immortal Snow is perpetually stuck looking like he's in his late 30s.
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* InTheBack: Hirald's favourite way of saving Snow's skin - sneaking on his assailants and back-stabbing or shooting them.
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* InTheBack: Hirald's favourite way of saving Snow's skin - sneaking up on his assailants and back-stabbing or shooting them.
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* MayflyDecemberRomance: Snow once had a wife, but she killed herself when she grew old and he didn't.
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* MayflyDecemberRomance: Snow once has had a wife, several wives, but she at least one killed herself when she grew old and he didn't.
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* RoboticReveal: Hirald's is an ageless cyborg, also looking for a soul-mate.
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* RoboticReveal: Hirald's Hirald is an ageless cyborg, also looking for a soul-mate.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Hirald approaches Snow with the proposition to allow himself to be studied by the organization she works for, while also preventing his immortality from being reverse engineered by the wrong people. Snow asks why not just kill him and solve the second part, to which Hirald replies [[ForScience her organization doesn't destroy knowledge]].
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Hirald approaches Snow with the proposition to allow himself to be studied by the organization she works for, while also preventing his immortality from being reverse engineered by the wrong people. Snow asks why not just kill him and solve the second part, to which Hirald replies [[ForScience her organization doesn't destroy knowledge]]. By the end of the episode, it becomes clear that even though this may be her assignment, she, like Snow, is also functionally immortal, and looking for a companion to ease her loneliness.
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* WantedPoster: Snow is seen on one when roaming into the settlement.
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* WantedPoster: Sci-fi version. Snow is seen on one a large, digital screen that marks him as wanted when roaming into the settlement.
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Cue The Sun misuse, that's for sunrise signifying something good/hopeful. That is too far to be Five Second Foreshadowing. Ironic Name is a ZCE. Misuse of Not What It Looks Like, that's for when someone walks in on a compromising-looking situation. Misuse of Stock Punishment, that's when people are in the apparatus in the page image and jeered
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* AlbinosAreFreaks: Aside being an immortal that can easily regenerate lost limbs, Snow is also an albino. It's not made explicit if it's an actual surname or just a nickname. It's also unclear if the albinism relates in any way with his immortality.
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* AlbinosAreFreaks: Aside being an immortal that can easily regenerate lost limbs, Snow is also an albino. It's not made explicit if it's an actual surname or just a nickname. It's also unclear if the albinism relates in any way with his immortality. However, the first bounty hunter who approaches him notes his albinism derisively.
* BaitAndSwitch:
** The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormone responsible for his HealingFactor.
** No, Hirald isn't there as a HoneyPot or a spy or whatever. She's searching for a soul-mate that would be just as [[TheAgeless ageless]] as she is.
* BaitAndSwitch:
** The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormone responsible for his HealingFactor.
** No, Hirald isn't there as a HoneyPot or a spy or whatever. She's searching for a soul-mate that would be just as [[TheAgeless ageless]] as she is.
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* CueTheSun: Given the planet they are on, it forces Snow and Hirald to take a stop, because it gets so hot during a day, it requires a ''cryogenic tent'' to survive the heat.
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* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: Snow is perpetually stuck in his late 30s.
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* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: The nigh-immortal Snow is perpetually stuck in his late 30s.30s.
* InkSuitActor: Snow and Hirald are dead ringers for their respective voice actors Creator/PeterFranzen and Creator/ZitaHanrot.
* InkSuitActor: Snow and Hirald are dead ringers for their respective voice actors Creator/PeterFranzen and Creator/ZitaHanrot.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike:
** The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormone responsible for his HealingFactor.
** No, Hirald isn't there as a HoneyPot or a spy or whatever. She's searching for a soul-mate that would be just as [[TheAgeless ageless]] as she is.
** The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormone responsible for his HealingFactor.
** No, Hirald isn't there as a HoneyPot or a spy or whatever. She's searching for a soul-mate that would be just as [[TheAgeless ageless]] as she is.
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* StockPunishment: With lethal intent. Since water is so scarce, "water theft" is considered punishable by death - the thieves are hauled into a tiny, reinforced greenhouses into the desert and left there to the sun.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Snow is an albino, although he does not look it much. The original story makes sure to describe his paper white skin and bright red eyes as things that make him stand out, but in this short he simply looks like a regular man with greying hair.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Snow is an a one-handed albino, although he does not look it much. The original story makes sure to describe his paper white skin and bright red eyes as things that make him stand out, but in this short he simply looks like a regular man with greying hair.hair and he has both hands to begin with, although one is shot off in the opening act.
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* MayflyDecemberRomance: Snow once had a wife, but she killed herself when she grew old and he didn't.
* ProudWarriorRace: The first set of bounty hunters Snow encounters belong to one of this, hence why the leader makes a big show of issuing Snow a formal challenge; in their culture it would be unthinkable to turn a formal challenge down.
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* WouldHitAGirl: While Snow does casually kill the female leader of the bounty hunters, he makes every attempt to avoid a conflict first. The short explicitly states he's doing this because he genuinely doesn't like killing young women like her.
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* CoitusEnsues: Hirald is apparently turned on when Snow reveals that his wife killed herself.
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* CoitusEnsues: Hirald is apparently turned on when sleeps with Snow reveals that after wearing his wife killed herself.ex-wife's dress and learning some backstory.
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* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Snow and Hirald seem to have sex so abruptly it makes it seem like he's just suddenly turned on by his dead wife's dress. In the short the two would already have been romantically involved by that point in the story, and the fact that they have sex for nearly 12 hours straight without any sign of Hirald being worn down is what serves as the FiveSecondForeshadowing in the short story.
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* CompressedAdaptation: Several subplots are missing from the original short story, including a plotline where Snow tries to figure out what it is people want from him.
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* CompressedAdaptation: Several subplots are missing from the original short story, including a plotline where Snow tries to figure out what it is people want from him.him, where in the episode he seems to already have a good idea.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: If you look closely, when Hirald is being shot, her wounds glow, rather than being turn into mince, like in case of every other character. When she shows up in the end to rescue Snow, her synthetic limbs are shown to be made out of some white, glowing subtance.
** Earlier on, when Snow asks if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like suicidal lack of prepardness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
** Earlier on, when Snow asks if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like suicidal lack of prepardness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: If you look closely, when Hirald is being shot, her wounds glow, rather than being turn into mince, like in case of every other character. When she shows up in the end to rescue Snow, her synthetic limbs are shown to be made out of some white, glowing subtance.
substance.
** Earlier on, when Snow asks if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like suicidal lack ofprepardness...preparedness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
** Earlier on, when Snow asks if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like suicidal lack of
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* InTheBack: Hirald's favourite way of saving Snow's skin - sneaking on his assiliants and back-stabbing or shooting them.
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* InTheBack: Hirald's favourite way of saving Snow's skin - sneaking on his assiliants assailants and back-stabbing or shooting them.
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** The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormon responsible for his HealingFactor.
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** The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormon hormone responsible for his HealingFactor.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Hirald approaches Snow with the proposition to allow himself to be studied by the organization she works for, while also preventing his immortality from being reverse engineered by the wrong people. Snow asks why not just kill him and solve the second part, to which Hirald replies [[ForScience her organization doesn't destroy knowledge]].
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* CompressedAdaptation: Several subplots are missing from the original short story, including a plotline where Snow tries to figure out what it is people want from him.
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Adapted from a short story by Neal Asher.
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Adapted from a short story of the same name by Neal Asher.
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* CoitusEnsues: Hirald is apparently turned on when Snow reveals that his wife killed herself.
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* TheReveal: Hirald's is an ageless cyborg, also looking for a soul-mate.
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* ReplacementGoldfish: It originally looks like that Snow is looking
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* ReplacementGoldfish: It originally looks seems like that Snow is lookinglooking for one for his deceased wife. Turns out he couldn't care any less.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormon responsible for his HealingFactor.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: NotWhatItLooksLike:
** The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormon responsible for hisHealingFactor.HealingFactor.
** No, Hirald isn't there as a HoneyPot or a spy or whatever. She's searching for a soul-mate that would be just as [[TheAgeless ageless]] as she is.
** The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormon responsible for his
** No, Hirald isn't there as a HoneyPot or a spy or whatever. She's searching for a soul-mate that would be just as [[TheAgeless ageless]] as she is.
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An immortal man is trying to evade mercenaries hunting down for his power, hiding in an inhospitable desert planet.
Adapted from a short story by Neal Asher.
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!!Tropes:
* TheAgeless:
** Snow lived for thousands of years, maintaining the appearance of being in his late 30s, further made "younger" by his albinism. He can be still killed - it just happens to be ''extremely'' hard to do due to his HealingFactor.
** Hirald is also the case, since her body is fully synthetic and as such doesn't age.
* AlbinosAreFreaks: Aside being an immortal that can easily regenerate lost limbs, Snow is also an albino. It's not made explicit if it's an actual surname or just a nickname. It's also unclear if the albinism relates in any way with his immortality.
* TheCavalry: Hirald saves Snow's life twice during the short, always preventing his execution.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A futuristic pillory, where convicts are locked in a sealed container and left to the sun. In a resulting heat, all the water in their bodies slowly evaporates, staying inside the container, but not before the convict dies out of dehydration.
* CueTheSun: Given the planet they are on, it forces Snow and Hirald to take a stop, because it gets so hot during a day, it requires a ''cryogenic tent'' to survive the heat.
* {{Cyborg}}: All that's left of Hirald's organic body is a spine column and "mostly" human brain. Everything else is an advanced synthetic body.
* DrivenToSuicide: Snow's latest wife committed one once she became an old woman and he was still at his prime.
* EqualOpportunityEvil: The merc group includes three different species, both male and female.
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: If you look closely, when Hirald is being shot, her wounds glow, rather than being turn into mince, like in case of every other character. When she shows up in the end to rescue Snow, her synthetic limbs are shown to be made out of some white, glowing subtance.
** Earlier on, when Snow asks if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like suicidal lack of prepardness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
* HandCannon: All the guns present are oversized and overpowered, routinely leading to blown-apart limbs and punching huge, gaping holes in the body.
* HealingFactor: Snow isn't just immortal, he can regrown blown-out limbs in a matter of ''days''. The hand he got blown away in a bar is already regenerating few hours later.
* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: Snow is perpetually stuck in his late 30s.
* InTheBack: Hirald's favourite way of saving Snow's skin - sneaking on his assiliants and back-stabbing or shooting them.
* IronicName: Assuming Snow is his actual name and not a nickname.
* MundaneLuxury: A container full of cryo-preserved, fresh strawberries. They had to cross ''half the galaxy'' to reach Snow and he's actively risking his life to get them, solely so he can enjoy some.
* NighInvulnerability: Hirald. She sustains a short burst of machine fire that was shown capable of shredding flesh into pink mist. But since she's a cyborg, all damage it does is removing the outer, cosmetic layer of human skin.
* NotWhatItLooksLike: The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormon responsible for his HealingFactor.
* OutlawCouple: The duo of mercenaries with face tattoos are a married couple.
* ReplacementGoldfish: It originally looks like that Snow is looking
* TheReveal: Hirald's is an ageless cyborg, also looking for a soul-mate.
* SpaceOpera: A sci-fi story that doesn't really care about the "sci" part of the genre and instead focuses on all the cool aspects of being set on a far-away planet, with weird aliens, cool robots and even cooler superpowers.
* StockPunishment: With lethal intent. Since water is so scarce, "water theft" is considered punishable by death - the thieves are hauled into a tiny, reinforced greenhouses into the desert and left there to the sun.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: The container and new shipment that Snow ordered (and risked his life for)? Strawberries. Which given the circumstances of the planet he's on, are quite a luxury.
* WantedPoster: Snow is seen on one when roaming into the settlement.
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Downplayed example. Snow can die and be killed, it just happens that he doesn't age at all. It seems he came to peace with the fact that people around him age and eventually die, but it still affects his life.
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Adapted from a short story by Neal Asher.
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!!Tropes:
* TheAgeless:
** Snow lived for thousands of years, maintaining the appearance of being in his late 30s, further made "younger" by his albinism. He can be still killed - it just happens to be ''extremely'' hard to do due to his HealingFactor.
** Hirald is also the case, since her body is fully synthetic and as such doesn't age.
* AlbinosAreFreaks: Aside being an immortal that can easily regenerate lost limbs, Snow is also an albino. It's not made explicit if it's an actual surname or just a nickname. It's also unclear if the albinism relates in any way with his immortality.
* TheCavalry: Hirald saves Snow's life twice during the short, always preventing his execution.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: A futuristic pillory, where convicts are locked in a sealed container and left to the sun. In a resulting heat, all the water in their bodies slowly evaporates, staying inside the container, but not before the convict dies out of dehydration.
* CueTheSun: Given the planet they are on, it forces Snow and Hirald to take a stop, because it gets so hot during a day, it requires a ''cryogenic tent'' to survive the heat.
* {{Cyborg}}: All that's left of Hirald's organic body is a spine column and "mostly" human brain. Everything else is an advanced synthetic body.
* DrivenToSuicide: Snow's latest wife committed one once she became an old woman and he was still at his prime.
* EqualOpportunityEvil: The merc group includes three different species, both male and female.
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: If you look closely, when Hirald is being shot, her wounds glow, rather than being turn into mince, like in case of every other character. When she shows up in the end to rescue Snow, her synthetic limbs are shown to be made out of some white, glowing subtance.
** Earlier on, when Snow asks if she has her own sun tent, she says no. Given the planet they are on, it seems like suicidal lack of prepardness... but since she's a cyborg, the heat does nothing to her.
* HandCannon: All the guns present are oversized and overpowered, routinely leading to blown-apart limbs and punching huge, gaping holes in the body.
* HealingFactor: Snow isn't just immortal, he can regrown blown-out limbs in a matter of ''days''. The hand he got blown away in a bar is already regenerating few hours later.
* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: Snow is perpetually stuck in his late 30s.
* InTheBack: Hirald's favourite way of saving Snow's skin - sneaking on his assiliants and back-stabbing or shooting them.
* IronicName: Assuming Snow is his actual name and not a nickname.
* MundaneLuxury: A container full of cryo-preserved, fresh strawberries. They had to cross ''half the galaxy'' to reach Snow and he's actively risking his life to get them, solely so he can enjoy some.
* NighInvulnerability: Hirald. She sustains a short burst of machine fire that was shown capable of shredding flesh into pink mist. But since she's a cyborg, all damage it does is removing the outer, cosmetic layer of human skin.
* NotWhatItLooksLike: The villain wants Snow's balls. At first it sounds like something a loan shark or a mafioso would want for a CoolAndUnusualPunishment, but then it's revealed Snow testicles produce some sort of hormon responsible for his HealingFactor.
* OutlawCouple: The duo of mercenaries with face tattoos are a married couple.
* ReplacementGoldfish: It originally looks like that Snow is looking
* TheReveal: Hirald's is an ageless cyborg, also looking for a soul-mate.
* SpaceOpera: A sci-fi story that doesn't really care about the "sci" part of the genre and instead focuses on all the cool aspects of being set on a far-away planet, with weird aliens, cool robots and even cooler superpowers.
* StockPunishment: With lethal intent. Since water is so scarce, "water theft" is considered punishable by death - the thieves are hauled into a tiny, reinforced greenhouses into the desert and left there to the sun.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: The container and new shipment that Snow ordered (and risked his life for)? Strawberries. Which given the circumstances of the planet he's on, are quite a luxury.
* WantedPoster: Snow is seen on one when roaming into the settlement.
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Downplayed example. Snow can die and be killed, it just happens that he doesn't age at all. It seems he came to peace with the fact that people around him age and eventually die, but it still affects his life.
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