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** Bob is discovered by Charles right in the middle of having sex Alice, who happens to Charles' girlfriend/wife. Charles, enraged, kills Bob on the spot.
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** Bob is discovered by Charles right in the middle of having sex with Alice, who happens to Charles' girlfriend/wife. Charles, enraged, kills Bob on the spot.
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** Bob is discovered by Charles right in the middle of having sex with his wife, Alice, and Charles, enraged, kills him on the spot.
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** Bob is discovered by Charles right in the middle of having sex with his wife, Alice, and who happens to Charles' girlfriend/wife. Charles, enraged, kills him Bob on the spot.
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* '''Straight''': Bob is having sex with Alice when he has a heart attack and dies.
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* '''Straight''': '''Straight''':
** Bob is having sex with Alice when he has a heart attack anddies.dies.
** Bob is discovered by Charles right in the middle of having sex with his wife, Alice, and Charles, enraged, kills him on the spot.
** Unbeknowst to Bob, Alice is a HoneyTrap who is out to assassinate him. Exploiting that his guard is down while they are having sex, she murders him mid-coitus.
** Bob is having sex with Alice when he has a heart attack and
** Bob is discovered by Charles right in the middle of having sex with his wife, Alice, and Charles, enraged, kills him on the spot.
** Unbeknowst to Bob, Alice is a HoneyTrap who is out to assassinate him. Exploiting that his guard is down while they are having sex, she murders him mid-coitus.
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* '''Played for Laughts''': Alice is so bad at having sex that Bob dies of embarrassment, afraid that if word gets out, he'll [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten never be able to forget it]].
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* '''Played for Laughts''': Laughs''': Alice is so bad at having sex that Bob dies of embarrassment, afraid that if word gets out, he'll [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten never be able to forget it]].
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* '''Parodied''': Bob dies because he was having sex with Alice in an over-the-top and ludicrously dangerous fashion.
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* '''Parodied''': Bob dies suffers an UndignifiedDeath because he was having sex with Alice in an over-the-top and ludicrously dangerous fashion.
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** Bob dies of a heart attack before he can even climax while he was [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil raping]] Alice. Alice [[BlackComedyRape pushes Bob's dead body off of herself]] and then brushes herself and walks away [[RefugeInAudacity out of there]].
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** Bob dies of a heart attack before he can even climax while he was [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil raping]] Alice. Alice [[BlackComedyRape pushes Bob's dead body off of herself]] and then brushes herself off and walks away [[RefugeInAudacity out of there]].
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** Bob dies of a heart attack before he can even climax while he was [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil raping]] Alice. Alice [[BlackComedyRape pushes Bob's dead body off of herself]] and then brushes herself and walks away [[RefugeInAudacityout of there]].
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** Bob dies of a heart attack before he can even climax while he was [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil raping]] Alice. Alice [[BlackComedyRape pushes Bob's dead body off of herself]] and then brushes herself and walks away [[RefugeInAudacityout [[RefugeInAudacity out of there]].
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** Bob dies of a heart attack before he can even climax while he was [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil raping]] Alice. Alice [[BlackComedyRape pushes Bob's dead body off of herself]] and then brushes herself and walks away [[RefugeInAudacityout of there]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob is having sex with Alice when his [[YourHeadASplode head explodes]] from how good the orgasm is.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Bob is having sex with Alice when his [[YourHeadASplode head explodes]] from how good the orgasmis.is.
** Alice and Bob explode in LudicrousGibs after having sex for a minute.
** Bob is having sex with Alice when his [[YourHeadASplode head explodes]] from how good the orgasm
** Alice and Bob explode in LudicrousGibs after having sex for a minute.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice has sex with Bob, and he dies from it. She continues the sex, and he is resurrected. The next day, they have sex, and he dies again. She continues the sex, and he is not resurrected, leaving her traumatized. However, she discovers weeks later that she is [[SomeoneToRememberHimBy pregnant]]. She carries the fetus to term, and names him Bobby. Believing Bobby has inherited Bob's curse, Alice becomes an overprotective parent and does not allow him to have sex. Bobby then proceeds to rebel at the age of 14, and has sex with Pam, the slutty older girl next door. He appears to have died, and Alice assumes this to be the case, so Bobby really freaks everybody out when he awakens from his coma at the funeral. He then proceeds to lead a relatively normal life, marred only by the death of his mother, of an STD she got from Bob's brother Darren. At age 23, he meets a nice girl named Jenny, and they eventually marry. Driving back from their passionate honeymoon, they accidentally drive off a cliff.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': '''Zig-Zagged''': Alice has sex with Bob, and he dies from it. She continues the sex, and he is resurrected. The next day, they have sex, and he dies again. She continues the sex, and he is not resurrected, leaving her traumatized. However, she discovers weeks later that she is [[SomeoneToRememberHimBy pregnant]]. She carries the fetus to term, and names him Bobby. Believing Bobby has inherited Bob's curse, Alice becomes an overprotective parent and does not allow him to have sex. Bobby then proceeds to rebel at the age of 14, and has sex with Pam, the slutty older girl next door. He appears to have died, and Alice assumes this to be the case, so Bobby really freaks everybody out when he awakens from his coma at the funeral. He then proceeds to lead a relatively normal life, marred only by the death of his mother, of an STD she got from Bob's brother Darren. At age 23, he meets a nice girl named Jenny, and they eventually marry. Driving back from their passionate honeymoon, they accidentally drive off a cliff.
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* '''Played For Laughts''': Alice is so bad at having sex that Bob dies of embarrassment, afraid that if word gets out, he'll [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten never be able to forget it]].
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* '''Played For for Laughts''': Alice is so bad at having sex that Bob dies of embarrassment, afraid that if word gets out, he'll [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten never be able to forget it]].
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** Bob and/or Alice are of a species that dies after mating, such as an octopus.
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** Alice is a life-draining [[HornyDevils succubus]].
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** Alice is a life-draining [[HornyDevils [[SuccubiAndIncubi succubus]].
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Alice murders Bob while having sex with him.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I guess he [[IncrediblyLamePun came]]... and went." "YYYEEEAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I guess he [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} came]]... and went." "YYYEEEAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!"
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* '''Played For Laughts''': Alice is so bad at having sex that Bob dies of embarrassment, afraid that if word gets out, he'll NeverLiveItDown.
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* '''Played For Laughts''': Alice is so bad at having sex that Bob dies of embarrassment, afraid that if word gets out, he'll NeverLiveItDown.[[OnceDoneNeverForgotten never be able to forget it]].
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** Alice is a life-draining [[HornyDevils succubus]].
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* '''Implied''': Bob is found dead with his pants down in an alley known for being a hotbed of sexual activity and suggestive stains near his corpse.
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* '''Implied''': Bob is found dead with his pants down in an alley known for being a hotbed of sexual activity and activity, with suggestive stains near his corpse.
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* '''Implied''': Bob is found dead with his pants down in an alley known for being a hotbed of sexual activity and suggestive stains near his corpse.
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* '''Played For Laughts''': Alice is so bad at having sex that Bob dies of embarrassment, afraid that if word gets out, he'll NeverLiveItDown.
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** Alice is an assassin who is [[HoneyTrap striking when Bob's defenses are completely down]].
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** Alice is an assassin who is [[HoneyTrap [[TheVamp striking when Bob's defenses are completely down]].
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** Alice is an assassin who is striking when Bob's defenses are completely down.
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** Alice is an assassin who is [[HoneyTrap striking when Bob's defenses are completely down.down]].
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Bob is having sex with Alice when he has a debilitating - but not fatal - stroke.
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** Bob will die if he doesn't have sex.
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** [[MateOrDie Bob will die if he doesn't have sex.sex]].
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* '''Justified''': Bob has a heart condition and energetic sex puts it under strain.
** Alternatively: Alice is an assassin who is striking when Bob's defenses are completely down.
* '''Inverted''': Bob will die if he doesn't have sex.
** Alternatively: Having [[ILoveTheDead sex with Bob]] will [[IntimateHealing bring him back to life.]]
** Alternatively: Whilst neither Bob nor Alice die during sex, someone else dies whenever they do.
** Alternatively: Alice is an assassin who is striking when Bob's defenses are completely down.
* '''Inverted''': Bob will die if he doesn't have sex.
** Alternatively: Having [[ILoveTheDead sex with Bob]] will [[IntimateHealing bring him back to life.]]
** Alternatively: Whilst neither Bob nor Alice die during sex, someone else dies whenever they do.
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** Bob has a heart condition and energetic sex puts it under strain.
**Alternatively: Alice is an assassin who is striking when Bob's defenses are completely down.
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** Bob will die if he doesn't have sex.
**Alternatively: Having [[ILoveTheDead sex with Bob]] will [[IntimateHealing bring him back to life.]]
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* '''Deconstructed''': The shock of having her partner die during sex traumatizes Alice, resulting in lots of guilt on the subject and numerous hang-ups about sex in the future.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice is drawn to weaker, older men, and she is aware of the risks but reasons that she might as well make their last memories pleasant ones.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice is drawn to weaker, older men, and she is aware of the risks but reasons that she might as well make their last memories pleasant ones.
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* '''Invoked''': Alice is aware that sex will result in Bob's death and thus actively seduces him with that in mind.
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* '''Invoked''': '''Invoked''':
** Alice is aware that sex will result in Bob's death and thus actively seduces him with that in mind.
** Alice is aware that sex will result in Bob's death and thus actively seduces him with that in mind.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is put on trial under suspicion of having deliberately attempted to murder Bob through sex.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The shock of having her partner die during sex traumatizes Alice, resulting in lots of guilt on the subject and numerous hang-ups about sex in the future.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice is drawn to weaker, older men, and she is aware of the risks but reasons that she might as well make their last memories pleasant ones.
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** Alice is put on trial under suspicion of having deliberately attempted to murder Bob through sex.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice is drawn to weaker, older men, and she is aware of the risks but reasons that she might as well make their last memories pleasant ones.
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** YouDontWantToDieAVirginDoYou?
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** YouDontWantToDieAVirginDoYou?MustNotDieAVirgin.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice has sex with Bob, and he dies from it. She continues the sex, and he is resurrected. The next day, they have sex, and he dies again. She continues the sex, and...
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice has sex with Bob, and he dies from it. She continues the sex, and he is resurrected. The next day, they have sex, and he dies again. She continues the sex, and...and he is not resurrected, leaving her traumatized. However, she discovers weeks later that she is [[SomeoneToRememberHimBy pregnant]]. She carries the fetus to term, and names him Bobby. Believing Bobby has inherited Bob's curse, Alice becomes an overprotective parent and does not allow him to have sex. Bobby then proceeds to rebel at the age of 14, and has sex with Pam, the slutty older girl next door. He appears to have died, and Alice assumes this to be the case, so Bobby really freaks everybody out when he awakens from his coma at the funeral. He then proceeds to lead a relatively normal life, marred only by the death of his mother, of an STD she got from Bob's brother Darren. At age 23, he meets a nice girl named Jenny, and they eventually marry. Driving back from their passionate honeymoon, they accidentally drive off a cliff.
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