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Removing unnecessary usage of "or" and "alternatively"
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** Alternatively, Alice crashes into Bob with a freakin' ''parachute.''
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** Alternatively, Alice crashes into Bob with a freakin' ''parachute.''
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** Or the crash is their ''last'' meeting.
** Or they meet in a normal manner, but crash into each other when they leave.
** Or they say "Hello" first, ''then'' crash into each other immediately after a la [[Anime/HugttoPrettyCure Hana and Nozomi]].
** Or they meet in a normal manner, but crash into each other when they leave.
** Or they say "Hello" first, ''then'' crash into each other immediately after a la [[Anime/HugttoPrettyCure Hana and Nozomi]].
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** Or the The crash is their Alice and Bob's ''last'' meeting.
**Or they Alice and Bob meet in a normal manner, but crash into each other when they leave.
**Or they Alice and Bob say "Hello" first, ''then'' crash into each other immediately after a la [[Anime/HugttoPrettyCure Hana and Nozomi]].
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** Or Bob and Alice crash into each other, and, due to the horrible first impression, each thinks the other is a careless jerk, and, instead of love interests, become enemies.
** Or Bob and Alice crash into each other, but then never see each other again.
** Or Bob and Alice crash into each other, but then never see each other again.
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** Or Bob and Alice crash into each other, and, due to the horrible first impression, each thinks the other is a careless jerk, and, instead of love interests, become enemies.
**Or Bob and Alice crash into each other, but then never see each other again.
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** Or they say "Hello" first, ''then'' crash into each other immediately after a la [[Anime/HugttoPrettyCure Hana and Nozomi]].
* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice just so happens to be CarryingACake when Bob crashes into her, causing a big cake mess and cherries on their heads ([[DontExplainTheJoke get it, cherry on top?]]).
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%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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%%* '''Played For Horror''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': The CrashIntoHello meeting causes injuries to Alice that she resents Bob for, and for which Bob feels guilty about and responsible for.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** The CrashIntoHello meeting causes injuries to Alice that she resents Bob for, and for which Bob feels guilty about and responsible for.
** The CrashIntoHello meeting causes injuries to Alice that she resents Bob for, and for which Bob feels guilty about and responsible for.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.
** Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.
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** Bob somehow survives a ColonyDrop containing Alice.
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** Bob somehow survives a ColonyDrop containing Alice.Alice
**Bob and Alice met by crashing into each-other on the way to school... and [[DeconstructiveParody waking up in the hospital ward together due to mutual concussion.]]
**Bob and Alice met by crashing into each-other on the way to school... and [[DeconstructiveParody waking up in the hospital ward together due to mutual concussion.]]
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** The MeetCute is about all Bob and Alice have in common, and after a brief relationship they both go their separate ways, becoming AmicableExes. Relationships require more than a cute meetup for stability.
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** Alice, by coincidence, also crashes into her next love-interest, but they have far more in common and it's implied they would have hit it off regardless.
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** Alice and Bob meet when they ''almost'' run into each other, but stop just before the collision.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob and Charlie meet by crashing into each other, and later become best friends.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Bob and Charlie meet by crashing into each other, and later become bestfriends.friends.
** Alice collides with something Bob is sitting on but not Bob himself yet still knocking him over.
** Bob and Charlie meet by crashing into each other, and later become best
** Alice collides with something Bob is sitting on but not Bob himself yet still knocking him over.
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* '''Justified''': Alice and Bob are involved in some activity (such as skiing) in which crashing into other people is fairly common.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Alice and Bob are involved in some activity (such as skiing) in which crashing into other people is fairlycommon.common.
** The "crash" is actually Bob [[DivingSave pushing Alice out of the way of an incoming truck]], and [[RescueRomance she falls in love out of gratitude for him saving her]].
** Alice and Bob are involved in some activity (such as skiing) in which crashing into other people is fairly
** The "crash" is actually Bob [[DivingSave pushing Alice out of the way of an incoming truck]], and [[RescueRomance she falls in love out of gratitude for him saving her]].
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** Bob and Alice crash into each other, Alice apologized adorably and nervously heads off, and... [[PercussivePickpocket hey, where did Bob's wallet go]]?
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Changed line(s) 31 (click to see context) from:
* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Bob notices he's about to crash into Alice and goes for a FunbagAirbag.
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** Bob somehow survives a ColonyDrop containing Alice.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Bob and Charlie meet by crashing into each other, and later become best friends.
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* '''Straight''': Alice and Bob meet by crashing into each other while both are running to school, and later fall in love.
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* '''Straight''': Alice and Bob meet by crashing into each other while both are running to school, and later fall in love.
* '''Downplayed''': ???
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** The Lonely Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing football helmets. While their [[Music/TheBeatles band]] plays
* '''Deconstructed''': The CrashIntoHello meeting causes injuries to Alice that she resents Bob for, and for which Bob feels guilty about and responsible for.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.
* '''Deconstructed''': The CrashIntoHello meeting causes injuries to Alice that she resents Bob for, and for which Bob feels guilty about and responsible for.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.
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** The Lonely Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing football helmets. While their [[Music/TheBeatles band]] plays
* '''Deconstructed''': The CrashIntoHello meeting causes injuries to Alice that she resents Bob for, and for which Bob feels guilty about and responsible for.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.plays.
* '''Deconstructed''': The CrashIntoHello meeting causes injuries to Alice that she resents Bob for, and for which Bob feels guilty about and responsible for.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.
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* '''Enforced''': "We need to have Alice and Bob meet each other somehow... let's have them run into each other literally."
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* '''Enforced''': "We need to have Alice and Bob meet each other somehow... let's have them run into each other literally."literally".
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''': The CrashIntoHello meeting causes injuries to Alice that she resents Bob for, and for which Bob feels guilty about and responsible for.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob work out their resentments and fall in love in the process.
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Look out or you're gonna run into CrashIntoHello! ...Too late.
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Look out or you're out! You're gonna run into CrashIntoHello! ...collide against {{Crash Into Hel|lo}}-*BLAM*! ...Too late.
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Indentation
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice and Bob crash into each other with enough force to put both of them in the hospital. Both instantly fall in love with each other.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Alice and Bob crash into each other with enough force to put both of them in the hospital. Both instantly fall in love with each other.
** Alice and Bob crash into each other with enough force to put both of them in the hospital. Both instantly fall in love with each other.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice and Bob, despite the foreshadowing, step out of each other's way at the last second and go on about their separate lives and plot threads without so much as ever being in the same place again.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice and Bob, despite the foreshadowing, step out of each other's way at the last second and go on about their separate lives and plot threads without so much as ever being in the same place again.
** Alice and Bob, despite the foreshadowing, step out of each other's way at the last second and go on about their separate lives and plot threads without so much as ever being in the same place again.
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* '''Subverted''': It looks like Alice will crash into Bob, but Bob dodges.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** It looks like Alice will crash into Bob, but Bob dodges.
** It looks like Alice will crash into Bob, but Bob dodges.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Bob, thinking he was safe, fails to pay attention and crashes into Alice anyways.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** Bob, thinking he was safe, fails to pay attention and crashes into Alice anyways.
** Bob, thinking he was safe, fails to pay attention and crashes into Alice anyways.
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* '''Parodied''': Bob is a superpowered LoveInterest magnet which draws everyone (girls and [[EvenTheGuysWantHim guys]]) into colliding with him, and builds his UnwantedHarem this way.
** The Lonely Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing football helmets.
*** While their [[Music/TheBeatles band]] plays
** The Lonely Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing football helmets.
*** While their [[Music/TheBeatles band]] plays
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Bob is a superpowered LoveInterest magnet which draws everyone (girls and [[EvenTheGuysWantHim guys]]) into colliding with him, and builds his UnwantedHarem this way.
** The Lonely Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing footballhelmets.
***helmets. While their [[Music/TheBeatles band]] plays
** Bob is a superpowered LoveInterest magnet which draws everyone (girls and [[EvenTheGuysWantHim guys]]) into colliding with him, and builds his UnwantedHarem this way.
** The Lonely Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing football
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* '''Invoked''': Alice purposely introduces herself to Bob full-force.
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* '''Invoked''': '''Invoked''':
** Alice purposely introduces herself to Bob full-force.
** Alice purposely introduces herself to Bob full-force.
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*** While their [[TheBeatles band]] plays
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*** While their [[TheBeatles [[Music/TheBeatles band]] plays
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** The Lone Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing football helmets.
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** The Lone Lonely Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing football helmets.helmets.
*** While their [[TheBeatles band]] plays
*** While their [[TheBeatles band]] plays
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** The Lone Hearts Club meetings consist of lines of guys and girls charging at each other wearing football helmets.
