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''Outlaw Star'' is a manga by Takehito Ito, which was serialized in ''[[Magazine/ShonenJump Ultra Jump]]'' from 1996 to 1999. It received an anime adaptation in 1998 by Creator/{{Sunrise}}'s as part of their ''Toward Stars'' universe.

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''Outlaw Star'' is a manga by Takehito Ito, which was serialized in ''[[Magazine/ShonenJump Ultra Jump]]'' from 1996 to 1999. It received an anime adaptation in 1998 by Creator/{{Sunrise}}'s Creator/{{Sunrise}} as part of their ''Toward Stars'' universe.
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Based on a manga by Takehito Ito, the first show in Creator/{{Sunrise}}'s ''Toward Stars'' universe, ''Outlaw Star'' is an old-fashioned SpaceOpera writ large.

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Based on a manga by Takehito Ito, the first show in Creator/{{Sunrise}}'s ''Toward Stars'' universe, ''Outlaw Star'' is a manga by Takehito Ito, which was serialized in ''[[Magazine/ShonenJump Ultra Jump]]'' from 1996 to 1999. It received an old-fashioned SpaceOpera writ large.
anime adaptation in 1998 by Creator/{{Sunrise}}'s as part of their ''Toward Stars'' universe.

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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: Subverted. [[spoiler: the finale seems to go this way: Gene, Jim, and Melfina remain together as the Outlaw Star’s crew, Aisha stays on Sentinel-3 as a spaceport stewardess, and Suzuka leaves to continue her solo assassin career. But in TheStinger, it turns out Aisha and Suzuka both had second thoughts about leaving — they hitched a ride to catch up with the others on the Outlaw Star and the series ends with them affirming their place on the crew.]]
* FiveManBand: The crew of the Outlaw Star consist of captain Gene, who's good with guns; Suzuka, an [[MysteriousMercenaryPursuer anachronistic assassin]] who's skilled with swords; Aisha, an aggressive ProudWarriorRaceGirl who gets stronger by [[OurWerebeastsAreDifferent transforming into a giant cat]]; Jim, Gene's precocious young business partner and [[HollywoodHacking genius hacker]]; and Melfina, the navigator who tries to make everyone get along.
* ForgottenSuperweapon: The Caster pistol. {{Justified|Trope}} by the difficulty of getting ammunition, which requires rituals known to maybe '''three''' people in the galaxy.

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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: Subverted. [[spoiler: the finale seems to go this way: Gene, Jim, and Melfina remain together as the Outlaw Star’s crew, Aisha stays on Sentinel-3 as a spaceport stewardess, and Suzuka leaves to continue her solo assassin career. But in TheStinger, it turns out Aisha and Suzuka both had second thoughts about leaving — they hitched a ride to catch up with the others on the Outlaw Star Star, and the series ends with them affirming their place on the crew.]]
* FiveManBand: The crew of the Outlaw Star consist consists of captain Captain Gene, who's good with guns; Suzuka, an [[MysteriousMercenaryPursuer anachronistic assassin]] who's skilled with swords; Aisha, an aggressive ProudWarriorRaceGirl who gets stronger by [[OurWerebeastsAreDifferent transforming into a giant cat]]; Jim, Gene's precocious young business partner and [[HollywoodHacking genius hacker]]; and Melfina, the navigator who tries to make everyone get along.
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: [[spoiler: When Gene uses No. 4 on Hamushi, she immediately is turned inside out when she's pulled inside, visually signaling her death. When Gene does the same to Hazanko, retains his clothing as he's pulled inside. This oddity foreshadows that Hazanko isn't going to be done in such an anticlimactic fashion and two minutes later, Hazanko does indeed manage to come back from nonexistence by being that more skilled than her]].
* ForgottenSuperweapon: The Caster pistol. {{Justified|Trope}} by the difficulty of getting ammunition, which requires rituals known to maybe '''three''' people in the galaxy. And sometimes even when he does use it, it tends to be [[TheWorfEffect negated by the more powerful enemies to show how powerful they are]], requiring Gene to get the strongest Caster Shells from these aforementioned three people to even fight the really powerful fighters.



%%* HandCannon: Gene describes Duuz's blaster like this.



* HaveYouToldAnyoneElse: At one point, Hazanko's boss, the Tendo King, sends a guy to check on what Hazanko is up to. When the agent discovers that Hazanko is intending to betray their master, he angrily confronts Hazanko about it before making his report, and then refuses Hazanko's offer of a bribe to keep quiet. [[TooDumbToLive He does this on Hazanko's ship while surrounded by Hazanko's personal group of assassins.]]

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* HaveYouToldAnyoneElse: At one point, Hazanko's boss, the Tendo King, sends a guy to check on what Hazanko is up to. When the agent discovers that Hazanko is intending to betray their master, he angrily confronts Hazanko about it before making his report, report and then refuses Hazanko's offer of a bribe to keep quiet. [[TooDumbToLive He does this on Hazanko's ship while surrounded by Hazanko's personal group of assassins.]]
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* SurvivedTheBeginning: "Hot Ice" Hilda appears to be an important character at the beginning of the show. Unfortunately, her ship is destroyed while being pursued by pirates. She tries to use a cable wire to pull herself to Gene Starwind's ship, but it just so happens to snap at the last minute. As she floats into the nearest sun, she leaves The Protagonist with the parting words, "Outlaws never go down easy, no matter what happens to them."
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* SciFiFlyby: The opening of the anime has a good portion of the intro with various shots of the spaceship Outlaw Star, baptized by Gene Starwind and the reason for the name of this anime. Also the ship contains a good part of the protagonist of the series, including the ship's AI (called "Gilliam") that also count as another character in the series.

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* NemesisWeapon: Gene Starwind uses a "caster", essentially a gun that shoots spells. The type of weapon is not unique but very rare and considered antiquated despite its considerable power. In the last episode, his rival Ronald [=MacDougal=] uses a staff caster. The two casters completely cancel out.

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* NemesisWeapon: Gene Starwind uses a "caster", essentially a gun that shoots spells. The type of weapon is not unique but very rare and considered antiquated despite its considerable power. In the last episode, episode 17, his rival Ronald [=MacDougal=] uses a staff caster. The two casters completely cancel out.


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* RecycledAnimation: Episode 18 uses the exact same launch sequence for the Outlaw Star that was used in Episode 8. This stands out because it shows one of the Outlaw Star's laser turrets being used to blast the boarding gangplank from the launch tower off the side of the ship- this was done in Episode 8 because they were making an emergency launch due to pirate attack and the control tower refused to give them clearance. In Episode 18, they were supposed to be making a launch under normal circumstances, making it seem like they engaged in some needless destruction on the way off-planet.

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** The reason Ctarl Ctarl are banned from the Strongest Woman in the Universe competition is because one got overly excited during a fight and [[Creator/MikeTyson bit off her opponent's right ear]] (before going on a rampage through the stadium that led to massive fatalities).

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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: For Gene and Jim, owning a highly-illegal SuperPrototype spaceship isn't the ticket to money and adventure that they'd dreamed it would be, because they're forced to sink every last Wong they earn into maintainence, fuel, repairs, ammunition for the ship's weaponry, fees for parking at the spaceport, and the other costs associated with it.



* TooAwesomeToUse: Gene's Caster- because it's an ancient, no longer used weapon, ammo for it is insanely hard to find so Gene has to save it for emergencies. Unfortunately, thanks to fighting foes who are extremely powerful Tao sorcerers whose magic makes them immune to conventional weapons, Gene is forced to rely on it far more often than he'd like.

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* TooAwesomeToUse: Gene's Caster- because it's an ancient, no longer used weapon, ammo for it is insanely hard to find so Gene has to save it for emergencies. Unfortunately, thanks to repeatedly fighting foes who are extremely powerful Tao sorcerers whose magic makes them immune to conventional weapons, Gene is forced to rely on it far more often than he'd like.
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* PhlebotinumProofRobot: One episode featured an alien cactus that could control people via their hearing. When the Outlaws confronted it, it used it's powers to incapacitate them, even forcing Jim to be it's hostage as it triumphantly declared itself invincible. But it turns out Melfina was immune because as a bioandroid she could alter her ability to hear and thus filter out the mind waves. She proceeded to crush the alien to death, though it ended up costing the crew a hefty bounty.
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: Subverted. [[spoiler: the finale seems to go this way: Gene, Jim, and Melfina remain together as the Outlaw Star’s crew, Aisha stays on Sentinel-3 as a spaceport stewardess, and Suzuka leaves to continue her solo assassin career. But in TheStinger, it turns out Aisha and Suzuka both had second thoughts about leaving — they hitched a ride to catch up with the others on the Outlaw Star and the series ends with them affirming their place on the crew.]]
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* FantasticFirearms: Gene Starwind and Ron MacDougal wield MagiTek caster guns, which fire spells contained in shells. Unfortunately ammo is rare and expensive and the three most powerful shells drain the wielder's life force when fired. The casters themselves resemble a bulbous pistol (Gene's) and a priest's staff (Ron's), and have glowing turbines that give off a lightshow when fired to give the viewer the idea that these aren't using gunpowder to fire.

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* FantasticFirearms: Gene Starwind and Ron MacDougal [=Ron MacDougal=] wield MagiTek caster guns, which fire spells contained in shells. Unfortunately ammo is rare and expensive and the three most powerful shells drain the wielder's life force when fired. The casters themselves resemble a bulbous pistol (Gene's) and a priest's staff (Ron's), and have glowing turbines that give off a lightshow when fired to give the viewer the idea that these aren't using gunpowder to fire.

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* OffModel: As mentioned in the "Animation Bump" entry. Since there were seven teams of animators[[note]] Creator/StudioGiants[=/=]Creator/{{Xebec}} (episodes 2, 3, 6, 9, 10, 13 & 22), Creator/NakamuraProductions (episodes 5, 7, 11, 12, 17, 18, 20, 21 & 23), Creator/ProductionIG (episodes 4 & 25), Ad Cosmo (episodes 15, 16, 19 & 24), Creator/StudioMu (episodes 17 & 23. Also supervised episodes 5 & 12), Creator/StudioMark (episode 5) and Creator/{{Sunrise}} themselves (episodes 1, 8, 12, 14, 17, 20, 23, 25 & 26) [[/note]], every episode had wildly varying quality.

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* FiveManBand:
** TheLeader: Gene — TheCaptain of the Outlaw Star, good with guns.
** TheLancer: Suzuka — An [[MysteriousMercenaryPursuer anachronistic assassin]], skilled with swords.
** TheBigGuy: Aisha — Aggressive [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Proud Warrior Race Girl]], gets stronger by [[OurWerebeastsAreDifferent transforming]].
** TheSmartGuy: Jim — Gene's precocious young business partner and [[HollywoodHacking genius hacker]].
** TheChick: Melfina — The gentle one whose tries to make everyone get along and [[WetwareCPU navigator]].

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* FiveManBand:
** TheLeader: Gene — TheCaptain
FiveManBand: The crew of the Outlaw Star, Star consist of captain Gene, who's good with guns.
** TheLancer: Suzuka — An
guns; Suzuka, an [[MysteriousMercenaryPursuer anachronistic assassin]], assassin]] who's skilled with swords.
** TheBigGuy: Aisha — Aggressive [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Proud Warrior Race Girl]],
swords; Aisha, an aggressive ProudWarriorRaceGirl who gets stronger by [[OurWerebeastsAreDifferent transforming]].
** TheSmartGuy: Jim —
transforming into a giant cat]]; Jim, Gene's precocious young business partner and [[HollywoodHacking genius hacker]].
** TheChick: Melfina — The gentle one whose
hacker]]; and Melfina, the navigator who tries to make everyone get along and [[WetwareCPU navigator]].along.



* HandCannon: Gene describes Duuz's blaster like this.

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* GirlInABox: End of the first and second episodes. In fact, this series is one of the prime examples.



-->"This show gets a free pass for being the most wish-fulfilling sci-fi title '''''ever'''''. Everything you can love about sci-fi is here: [[WackyRacing space races]], [[ExplosionsInSpace space combat]], [[SingleBiomePlanet diverse planets]], [[AnotherDimension alternate dimensions]], [[StarfishAliens weird aliens]], [[GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe hot aliens]], [[BizarreAlienBiology aliens of questionable gender]] (seriously, what is [[https://imgur.com/bDFUt64 that?]]), [[HumongousMecha giant robots]], [[ArtificialHuman bio-androids]], [[HollywoodCyborg human cyborgs]], [[GirlInABox cold-sleep]] [[MysteriousWaif beauties]], [[OurWerebeastsAreDifferent shapeshifting]] [[CatFolk beast men]], [[FamilyFriendlyFirearms laser]]-[[GunsAndGunplayTropes gun fights]], [[SingleStrokeBattle sword fights]], [[GoodOldFisticuffs fistfights]], [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking paintball]], {{Mad Scientist}}s, [[MagicPoweredPseudoscience Tao magicians]], [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot robotic panthers, kung-fu housecats]], ''and'' a HotSpringsEpisode that is actually ''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments funny]]''.

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-->"This show gets a free pass for being the most wish-fulfilling sci-fi title '''''ever'''''. Everything you can love about sci-fi is here: [[WackyRacing space races]], [[ExplosionsInSpace space combat]], [[SingleBiomePlanet diverse planets]], [[AnotherDimension alternate dimensions]], [[StarfishAliens weird aliens]], [[GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe hot aliens]], [[BizarreAlienBiology aliens of questionable gender]] (seriously, what is [[https://imgur.com/bDFUt64 that?]]), [[HumongousMecha giant robots]], [[ArtificialHuman bio-androids]], [[HollywoodCyborg human cyborgs]], [[GirlInABox cold-sleep]] cold-sleep [[MysteriousWaif beauties]], [[OurWerebeastsAreDifferent shapeshifting]] [[CatFolk beast men]], [[FamilyFriendlyFirearms laser]]-[[GunsAndGunplayTropes gun fights]], [[SingleStrokeBattle sword fights]], [[GoodOldFisticuffs fistfights]], [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking paintball]], {{Mad Scientist}}s, [[MagicPoweredPseudoscience Tao magicians]], [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot robotic panthers, kung-fu housecats]], ''and'' a HotSpringsEpisode that is actually ''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments funny]]''.
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* EpicRace: One episode is like this.

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* EpicRace: One episode "Gathering For the Space Race" has Gene enter the Outlaw Star in the Heifong Space Race which is like this.said to cross a couple of billion kilometers and take one thousand hours to complete.
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* SmokescreenCrime: In the "Final Countdown", a terrorist named Crackerjack plants a bomb on the Outlaw Star and threatens to detonate it unless Heifong is granted independence. This act of terrorism is actually meant to be a jewelry store robbery after the store's security system was disabled when the power was cut in response to the decoy crime.
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* TamerAndChaster: A kind of BadExportForYou and ToneShift is the English adaptation of the anime in which Creator/CartoonNetwork toned down the anime in its exhibition, including the DigitalBikini added to Melfina in the first episodes, Fred's mannerisms were toned down and the HotSpringsEpisode wasn't even broadcast. All of this was subverted with the DVD releases, that have all the original scenes available, including the censored episode.

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* TamerAndChaster: A kind of BadExportForYou and ToneShift is the English adaptation of the anime in which Creator/CartoonNetwork toned down the anime in its exhibition, including the DigitalBikini added to Melfina in the first episodes, episodes (and even digital shorts on Gene in one specific), Fred's mannerisms were toned down and the HotSpringsEpisode wasn't even broadcast. All of this was subverted with the DVD releases, that have all the original scenes available, including the censored episode.
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* FantasticFirearms: Gene Starwind and Ron MacDougal wield MagiTek caster guns, which fire spells contained in shells. Unfortunately ammo is rare and expensive and the three most powerful shells drain the wielder's life force when fired. The casters themselves resemble a bulbous pistol (Gene's) and a priest's staff (Ron's), and have glowing turbines that give off a lightshow when fired to give the viewer the idea that these aren't using gunpowder to fire.
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* TheUnseen: The Tendo King, enigmatic ManBehindTheMan with Tao magic ability implied by [[BigBad Hazanko]] to be god-like. The Tenpa Emperor takes this UpToEleven with [[InformedAbility implied]] power far exceeding that.

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* TheUnseen: The Tendo King, enigmatic ManBehindTheMan with Tao magic ability implied by [[BigBad Hazanko]] to be god-like. The Tenpa Emperor takes this UpToEleven up a notch with [[InformedAbility implied]] power far exceeding that.
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* AdultFear: Harry's stalking of Melfina gradually moves in frightening resemblance of the two being in an abusive relationship.
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* KingOfThieves: [[BigBad Lord Hazanko]] of the "108 stars" branch of the [[SpacePirate Kei Pirate Guild]]. The Tendo King of the guild itself, and the Tenpa Emperor.

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* KingOfThieves: [[BigBad Lord Hazanko]] of the "108 stars" branch of the [[SpacePirate [[SpacePirates Kei Pirate Guild]]. The Tendo King of the guild itself, and the Tenpa Emperor.



* {{Space Is an Ocean}}: A major theme given by the opening narration at the beginning of each episode. Also physics.
* {{Space Is Noisy}}: In almost any space scene in the anime. Most likely related to the fact that space is also an ocean.

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* {{Space Is an Ocean}}: SpaceIsAnOcean: A major theme given by the opening narration at the beginning of each episode. Also physics.
* {{Space Is Noisy}}: SpaceIsNoisy: In almost any space scene in the anime. Most likely related to the fact that space is also an ocean.
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* UnanthropomorphicTransformation: Aisha Clan-Clan, and in fact all of her species the Ctarl-Ctarl, are nigh-invincible humanoid alien cat people. If an opponent proves able to fight them in this form, and there happens to be a moon present, they're capable to transforming into an even more fearsome giant cat form equipped with fangs and claws to rend said opponent to pieces, as Jukai and Iraga of the Anten Seven found out first hand.
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* CastFromHitPoints: The all-but-mythical Caster Shells #4, #9 and #13 are so potent that, to be triggered, they require a sacrifice of LifeForce from their user, alongside the mana already sealed into them. Just using them isn't inherently deadly, a person can recover from the drain given time and rest, but using three in a row would drain so much LifeForce as to be fatal to the average user. [[spoiler:Luckily, Gene is far from the average man, and has the strength to withstand using three in relatively quick succession.]]

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* CastFromHitPoints: The all-but-mythical Caster Shells #4, #9 and #13 are so potent that, to be triggered, they require a sacrifice of LifeForce LifeEnergy from their user, alongside the mana already sealed into them. Just using them isn't inherently deadly, a person can recover from the drain given time and rest, but using three in a row would drain so much LifeForce LifeEnergy as to be fatal to the average user. [[spoiler:Luckily, Gene is far from the average man, and has the strength to withstand using three in relatively quick succession.]]
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** And then he eventually runs into opponents who also have Caster Guns of their own and has to use it multiple times in a row.
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* FunnyBackgroundEvent: During a mid-season shootout at a fancy restaurant, two patrons who can only be described as TheMenInBlack are [[SecurityCling clinging to each other in terror]].
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* MagicalWeapon: In antique times of the series timeline, there were magic users as well special weapons created to shoot magic as if were bullets (called as "Caster shells") that were able to nullify, block and even destroy other magic. In the actual era, these weapons are considered antique and scarce, being few people in the universe who still keep or use them. [[HeroProtagonist Gene Starwind]] and one of the [[SiblingsInCrime MacDougall brothers]] are the only characters who wield them, with Gene using his [[IconicItem Caster Gun]] efectively against the Tao Magic of the [[SpacePirates Kei Pirate Guild]].

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* DiegeticSoundtrackUsage:
** "Through the Night" plays from the ad ship the Outlaw Star is hired to tow in episode 14.
** Then in episode 21, Melfina sings one of the ending themes. ([[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bz1508RBx2w "Hiru no Tsuki"]], officially translated as "Daytime Moon".)



* ThemeTuneCameo:
** "Through the Night" plays from the ad ship the Outlaw Star is hired to tow in episode 14.
** Then in episode 21, Melfina sings one of the ending themes. ([[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bz1508RBx2w "Hiru no Tsuki"]], officially translated as "Daytime Moon".)
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This is only the beginning of his problems, as between trying to scrape together enough cash to pay for his new ship's upkeep, he has to contend with both the Space Forces and pirates trying to get the ship back as they all race against each other to reach the mysterious "Galactic Leyline". Helping Gene are his young partner Jim Hawking, the exotic but hot-tempered CatFolk alien Aisha Clan-Clan, the sword-wielding assassin Twilight Suzuka, the somewhat incoherent shipboard AI Gilliam, and others who come and go from the plot. If you like "pulp"-era science fiction, you'll like this show.

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This is only the beginning of his problems, as between trying to scrape together enough cash to pay for his new ship's upkeep, he has to contend with both the Space Forces and pirates trying to get the ship back as they all race against each other to reach the mysterious "Galactic Leyline". Helping Gene are his young partner Jim Hawking, the exotic but hot-tempered CatFolk alien Aisha Clan-Clan, the sword-wielding assassin Twilight Suzuka, the somewhat incoherent shipboard AI Gilliam, and others who come and go from the plot. If you like "pulp"-era science fiction, you'll like this show.
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* HappyEndingOverride: The crew never gets out of BrokeEpisode territory and in the epilogue for the final episode, [[spoiler:Gene ends up having to serve time for the crimes he committed escaping pirates at the beginning of the series. He only gets off lightly because it also exposed officials who were bribed by the pirates.]]



* RealityEnsues: The crew never gets out of BrokeEpisode territory and in the epilogue for the final episode, [[spoiler:Gene ends up having to serve time for the crimes he committed escaping pirates at the beginning of the series. He only gets off lightly because it also exposed officials who were bribed by the pirates.]]
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* EldritchLocation: The Galactic Leyline [[MindScrew doesn't really play by the laws of physics]], or [[TimeyWimeyBall spacetime]], [[PocketDimension dimensions]], [[GravityScrew gravity]], etc... It's basically every Eldritch Location from fiction rolled up into one, with the added bonus of it looking like a glittering, gold-plated version of Hell.

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* EldritchLocation: The Galactic Leyline [[MindScrew doesn't really play by the laws of physics]], or [[TimeyWimeyBall spacetime]], [[PocketDimension dimensions]], [[GravityScrew gravity]], etc... It's basically every Eldritch Location from fiction rolled up into one, with the added bonus of it looking like a glittering, gold-plated version of Hell. The best Melfina can come up with to describe it is, "a machine god."

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