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--> '''Bookman''': "OhCrap, I'm going to be out by [[BeyondTheImpossible 2000 dollars]]."
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--> '''Bookman''': "OhCrap, I'm going to be out by [[BeyondTheImpossible ''[[BeyondTheImpossible 2000 dollars]].dollars]]''."
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* In episode 9 of Perfect Order when Scarecrow is talking about Koko we see a picture from his file on her, she's sticking her tongue out and winking at the camera.
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* In episode 9 of Perfect Order when Scarecrow is talking about Koko we see a picture from his file on her, she's sticking her tongue out and winking at the camera.camera.
* In Episode 10 of Perfect Order, when Bookman uses a Global Hawk UAV to... spy on the onsen built at Dr. Miami's factory.
** And later, when Bookman meets Koko, she tells them that lunch is on Bookman. Bookman's [[ThisIsGonnaSuck reaction]] says it all:
--> '''Bookman''': "OhCrap, I'm going to be out by [[BeyondTheImpossible 2000 dollars]]."
* In Episode 10 of Perfect Order, when Bookman uses a Global Hawk UAV to... spy on the onsen built at Dr. Miami's factory.
** And later, when Bookman meets Koko, she tells them that lunch is on Bookman. Bookman's [[ThisIsGonnaSuck reaction]] says it all:
--> '''Bookman''': "OhCrap, I'm going to be out by [[BeyondTheImpossible 2000 dollars]]."
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* In episode 9 of Perfect Order when Scarecrow is talking about Koko we see a picture from his file on her, she's sticking her tongue out.
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* In episode 9 of Perfect Order when Scarecrow is talking about Koko we see a picture from his file on her, she's sticking her tongue out.out and winking at the camera.
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* When Dr Minami finds out the reason that there is tension between Karen and Jonah is because the last time they met Jonah tried to kill Karen, she responds by commenting appreciatively on how tough Karen is.
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* When Dr Minami finds out the reason that there is tension between Karen and Jonah is because the last time they met Jonah tried to kill Karen, she responds by commenting appreciatively on how tough Karen is.is.
* In episode 9 of Perfect Order when Scarecrow is talking about Koko we see a picture from his file on her, she's sticking her tongue out.
* In episode 9 of Perfect Order when Scarecrow is talking about Koko we see a picture from his file on her, she's sticking her tongue out.
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** Not even a minute before that, while they're talking, we have a shot of Koko sleepwalking, looking for the bathroom apparently. At one point she pauses in front of the couch where Valmet is sleeping... Then immediately flops down on her stomach, painfully waking her up.
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* During a business dinner between Currie and Dr. Miami, Milde gets more and more worked up, until eventually she starts a fistfight with Karen. Currie and Dr. Miami calmly continue their discussion while the two women beat the tar outta each other just off screen.
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* During a business dinner between Currie and Dr. Miami, Milde gets more and more worked up, until eventually she starts a fistfight with Karen. Currie and Dr. Miami calmly continue their discussion while the two women beat the tar outta each other just off screen.screen.
* When Dr Minami finds out the reason that there is tension between Karen and Jonah is because the last time they met Jonah tried to kill Karen, she responds by commenting appreciatively on how tough Karen is.
* When Dr Minami finds out the reason that there is tension between Karen and Jonah is because the last time they met Jonah tried to kill Karen, she responds by commenting appreciatively on how tough Karen is.
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* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about and seeing Willie's [[MadBomber specialty]], much to Willie's dismay.
* During a business dinner between Currie and Dr. Miami, Milde gets more and more worked up, until eventually she starts a fistfight with Karen. Currie and Dr. Miami calmly continue their discussion while the two women beat the tar outta each other.
* During a business dinner between Currie and Dr. Miami, Milde gets more and more worked up, until eventually she starts a fistfight with Karen. Currie and Dr. Miami calmly continue their discussion while the two women beat the tar outta each other.
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* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about and seeing Willie's Wiley's [[MadBomber specialty]], much to Willie's Wiley's dismay.
* During a business dinner between Currie and Dr. Miami, Milde gets more and more worked up, until eventually she starts a fistfight with Karen. Currie and Dr. Miami calmly continue their discussion while the two women beat the tar outta eachother.other just off screen.
* During a business dinner between Currie and Dr. Miami, Milde gets more and more worked up, until eventually she starts a fistfight with Karen. Currie and Dr. Miami calmly continue their discussion while the two women beat the tar outta each
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* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about and seeing Willie's [[MadBomber specialty]], much to Willie's dismay.
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* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about and seeing Willie's [[MadBomber specialty]], much to Willie's dismay.dismay.
* During a business dinner between Currie and Dr. Miami, Milde gets more and more worked up, until eventually she starts a fistfight with Karen. Currie and Dr. Miami calmly continue their discussion while the two women beat the tar outta each other.
* During a business dinner between Currie and Dr. Miami, Milde gets more and more worked up, until eventually she starts a fistfight with Karen. Currie and Dr. Miami calmly continue their discussion while the two women beat the tar outta each other.
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* Jonah getting sleepy with Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's infodump explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
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* Jonah getting sleepy with Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy and Jonah outright falling asleep standing up while listening to Tojo's infodump explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
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* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about and seeing Willie's [[MadBomber specialty]]. Much to Willie's dismay.
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* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about and seeing Willie's [[MadBomber specialty]]. Much specialty]], much to Willie's dismay.
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* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's infodump explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
** Correction: Jonah did fall asleep.
** Correction: Jonah did fall asleep.
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* Jonah, Jonah getting sleepy with Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's infodump explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
** Correction: Jonah did fall asleep.Unit.
** Correction: Jonah did fall asleep.
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* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about Willie [[MadBomber speciality]]. Much to his dismay.
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* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about Willie and seeing Willie's [[MadBomber speciality]]. specialty]]. Much to his Willie's dismay.
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* Koko's drunk beatdown on Tojo over concerns that Hinoki might recruit Tojo to form a reformed SR Unit.
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** Correction: Jonah did fall asleep.
* Koko's drunk beatdown on Tojo over concerns that Hinoki might recruit Tojo to form a reformed SRUnit.Unit.
* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about Willie [[MadBomber speciality]]. Much to his dismay.
* Koko's drunk beatdown on Tojo over concerns that Hinoki might recruit Tojo to form a reformed SR
* Jonah getting really scared after hearing about Willie [[MadBomber speciality]]. Much to his dismay.
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* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's infodump explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
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* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's infodump explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
* Koko's drunk beatdown on Tojo over concerns that Hinoki might recruit Tojo to form a reformed SR Unit.
* Koko's drunk beatdown on Tojo over concerns that Hinoki might recruit Tojo to form a reformed SR Unit.
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* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's [[infodump explanation to the origins]] of the [=SR=] Unit.
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* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's [[infodump infodump explanation to the origins]] origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
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* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
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* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's [[infodump explanation to the origins origins]] of the [=SR=] Unit.
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* Doctor Miami recruiting Karen to be her secretary.
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* Doctor Miami recruiting Karen to be her secretary.secretary.
* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
* Jonah, Valmet and Lutz getting sleepy while listening to Tojo's explanation to the origins of the [=SR=] Unit.
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* Valmet skipping R across the water like a stone after he tried to feel her up. Made especially amusing by Tojo and Lutz's commentary.
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* Valmet skipping R across the water like a stone after he tried to feel her up. Made especially amusing by Tojo and Lutz's commentary.commentary.
* Doctor Miami recruiting Karen to be her secretary.
* Doctor Miami recruiting Karen to be her secretary.
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* The music snippet during the next episode previews; [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30V6CAIMwiw “Her name is Koko. She is loco. I said ‘Oh no!’”]]
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* The music snippet during the next episode previews; previews: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30V6CAIMwiw “Her name is Koko. She is loco. I said ‘Oh no!’”]]
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30V6CAIMwiw “Her name is Koko. She is loco. I said ‘Oh no!’”]]
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* The music snippet during the next episode previews; [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30V6CAIMwiw “Her name is Koko. She is loco. I said ‘Oh no!’”]]
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* When going to see an Army Colonel to convince him to cancel the order for 15 Hind-Ds, Valmet is frantic and worried about Koko's safety, after Tojo reveals that the rival arms dealer is a former intelligence officer with his own mercs. Tojo is nonplussed.
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* When going to see an Army Colonel to convince him to cancel the order for 15 Hind-Ds, Valmet is frantic and worried about Koko's safety, safety after Tojo reveals that the rival arms dealer is a former intelligence officer with his own mercs. Tojo is nonplussed.
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* Jonah comes to call Valmet for breakfast... and she tosses him a rubber knife and "suggests" they spar for warming up (this is after Valmet's been doing handstands and several hundred one-arm pushups at high speed). Jonah's [[ThisIsGonnaSuck reaction]] says it all, and that's ''before'' Valmet hilariously curbstomps him, while lecturing on the mistakes he's making. It ends with a worn out Jonah tossed over Valmet's shoulder, with her casually carrying him to breakfast and continuing her lecture.
* Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.
* Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.
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* Jonah comes to call Valmet for breakfast... breakfast, and she tosses him a rubber knife and "suggests" they spar for warming as a warm up (this is after Valmet's been doing handstands and several hundred one-arm pushups at high speed). Jonah's [[ThisIsGonnaSuck reaction]] says it all, and that's ''before'' Valmet hilariously curbstomps him, while lecturing on the mistakes he's making. It ends with a worn out Jonah tossed over Valmet's shoulder, with her casually carrying him to breakfast and continuing her lecture.
*Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks A bullet being detected in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.Jonah's butt while going through airport security and the resulting events.
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* Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.
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* Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.
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* Koko's unusual pose upon finding out that another arms dealer is out outmaneuvering her in London. Her team certainly found it amusing.
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* Koko's unusual pose upon finding out that another arms dealer is out outmaneuvering her in London. Her team certainly found it amusing.
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* Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.
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* Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.too.
* Koko's unusual pose upon finding out that another arms dealer is out outmaneuvering her in London. Her team certainly found it amusing.
* Valmet skipping R across the water like a stone after he tried to feel her up. Made especially amusing by Tojo and Lutz's commentary.
* Koko's unusual pose upon finding out that another arms dealer is out outmaneuvering her in London. Her team certainly found it amusing.
* Valmet skipping R across the water like a stone after he tried to feel her up. Made especially amusing by Tojo and Lutz's commentary.
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* Jonah comes to call Valmet for breakfast... and she tosses him a rubber knife and "suggests" they spar for warming up (this is after Valmet's been doing handstands and several hundred one-arm pushups at high speed). Jonah's [[ThisIsGonnaSuck reaction]] says it all, and that's ''before'' Valmet hilariously curbstomps him, while lecturing on the mistakes he's making. It ends with a worn out Jonah tossed over Valmet's shoulder, with her casually carrying him to breakfast and continuing her lecture.
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* Jonah comes to call Valmet for breakfast... and she tosses him a rubber knife and "suggests" they spar for warming up (this is after Valmet's been doing handstands and several hundred one-arm pushups at high speed). Jonah's [[ThisIsGonnaSuck reaction]] says it all, and that's ''before'' Valmet hilariously curbstomps him, while lecturing on the mistakes he's making. It ends with a worn out Jonah tossed over Valmet's shoulder, with her casually carrying him to breakfast and continuing her lecture.lecture.
* Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.
* Valmet nearly crushing a man's cheeks in Heathrow Airport. Also is a [=CMOA=] too.
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* The absentmindedness of Dr Miami and the exasperation of Mokoena trying to keep up with her.
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* The absentmindedness of Dr Miami and the exasperation of Mokoena trying to keep up with her.her.
* Jonah comes to call Valmet for breakfast... and she tosses him a rubber knife and "suggests" they spar for warming up (this is after Valmet's been doing handstands and several hundred one-arm pushups at high speed). Jonah's [[ThisIsGonnaSuck reaction]] says it all, and that's ''before'' Valmet hilariously curbstomps him, while lecturing on the mistakes he's making. It ends with a worn out Jonah tossed over Valmet's shoulder, with her casually carrying him to breakfast and continuing her lecture.
* Jonah comes to call Valmet for breakfast... and she tosses him a rubber knife and "suggests" they spar for warming up (this is after Valmet's been doing handstands and several hundred one-arm pushups at high speed). Jonah's [[ThisIsGonnaSuck reaction]] says it all, and that's ''before'' Valmet hilariously curbstomps him, while lecturing on the mistakes he's making. It ends with a worn out Jonah tossed over Valmet's shoulder, with her casually carrying him to breakfast and continuing her lecture.
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* Miami and Mokoena. Period.
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--->'''Valmet:''' I'd [[CombatPragmatist leave you and run]]. *laughs girlishly*
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--->'''Valmet:''' I'd [[CombatPragmatist leave you and run]]. *laughs girlishly*girlishly*
* Miami and Mokoena. Period.
* Miami and Mokoena. Period.
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--->'''Tojo:''' "Seriously? What if we're up against [[{{Commando}} Colonel Matrix]]?
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--->'''Tojo:''' "Seriously? What if we're up against [[{{Commando}} [[Film/{{Commando}} Colonel Matrix]]?
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--->'''Tojo:''' "Seriously? What if we're up against [[Commando Colonel Matrix]]?
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--->'''Tojo:''' "Seriously? What if we're up against [[Commando [[{{Commando}} Colonel Matrix]]?
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30V6CAIMwiw “Her name is Koko. She is loco. I said ‘Oh no!’”]]
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30V6CAIMwiw “Her name is Koko. She is loco. I said ‘Oh no!’”]]no!’”]]
* On guard duty, Lehm is talking with Jonah, and is about to explain why an unrivaled, fearless soldier like him is doing with a girl like Koko, and as he's building up to his punchline of her skills, they run into a sleepwalking Koko. Lehm's train of thought is derailed.
* When going to see an Army Colonel to convince him to cancel the order for 15 Hind-Ds, Valmet is frantic and worried about Koko's safety, after Tojo reveals that the rival arms dealer is a former intelligence officer with his own mercs. Tojo is nonplussed.
--->'''Tojo:''' "Hey, what about protecting me?"
--->'''Valmet:''' "No. My life is only for Koko."
--->'''Tojo:''' "Seriously? What if we're up against [[Commando Colonel Matrix]]?
--->'''Valmet:''' I'd [[CombatPragmatist leave you and run]]. *laughs girlishly*
* On guard duty, Lehm is talking with Jonah, and is about to explain why an unrivaled, fearless soldier like him is doing with a girl like Koko, and as he's building up to his punchline of her skills, they run into a sleepwalking Koko. Lehm's train of thought is derailed.
* When going to see an Army Colonel to convince him to cancel the order for 15 Hind-Ds, Valmet is frantic and worried about Koko's safety, after Tojo reveals that the rival arms dealer is a former intelligence officer with his own mercs. Tojo is nonplussed.
--->'''Tojo:''' "Hey, what about protecting me?"
--->'''Valmet:''' "No. My life is only for Koko."
--->'''Tojo:''' "Seriously? What if we're up against [[Commando Colonel Matrix]]?
--->'''Valmet:''' I'd [[CombatPragmatist leave you and run]]. *laughs girlishly*
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