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* AxeCrazy: AxCrazy: Raziel [[spoiler: when under the effects of Manus]] is a raging berserker who tears opponents apart, oftentimes with his bare hands. Even without it he's prone to violence and sees no issue with killing people in gory ways.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8623261/1/Twisted-Reflections Twisted Reflections]]'' is a crossover fanfiction between ''VideoGame/DarkSouls'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero'' by vendetta543.
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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: Henrietta is forced to become a colder and much more ruthless figure in order to see her country through treacherous nobles, a war and [[spoiler: the coming end of the cycle.]]
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* ToughLeaderFacade: Henrietta is forced to become a colder and much more ruthless figure in order to see her country through treacherous nobles, a war and [[spoiler: the coming end of the cycle.]]
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* GagBoobs: Tiffania, though they aren't focused on like in canon.
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* IllGirl: Cattleya, as per canon. [[spoiler: Revealed to be caused by her being a Firekeeper and her Humanity overflowing and warping her body as a result. Raziel fixes this and helps her make a bonfire to control it.]]
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* EternalRecurrence: As established in DarkSoulsII, the conflict between the Light and the Dark has repeated continuously with growing implications that Tristain is only the latest in a long line of said cycle. [[spoiler: The latter half of the story deals with the characters trying to find a way to end, or at least survive, this cycle.]]
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* EternalRecurrence: As established in DarkSoulsII, ''VideoGame/DarkSoulsII'', the conflict between the Light and the Dark has repeated continuously with growing implications that Tristain is only the latest in a long line of said cycle. [[spoiler: The latter half of the story deals with the characters trying to find a way to end, or at least survive, this cycle.]]
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* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Manus]] brutally killing a Daughter of Chaos then deliberately letting her little brother suffer, which eventually leads to the creation of the [[DarkSouls Ceaseless Discharge.]]
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* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Manus]] brutally killing a Daughter of Chaos then deliberately letting her little brother suffer, which eventually leads to the creation of the [[DarkSouls [[VideoGame/DarkSoulsI Ceaseless Discharge.]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil: [[Raziel and Alsanna, despite being shards of Manus. Especially prominent for the latter since she shows none of Raziel's tendencies towards violence.]]
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* NiceGirl: Estelle is one of the most genuinely kind-hearted characters, not possessing any hidden malicious or cynical side like many of the other seemingly kind characters. Henrietta and Daphne count as well, despite the latter being a [[TheDreaded Vampire]].
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* NiceGirl: Estelle is one of the most genuinely kind-hearted characters, not possessing any hidden malicious or cynical side like many of the other seemingly kind characters. Henrietta Tiffania and Daphne count as well, despite the latter being a [[TheDreaded Vampire]].
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* VillainProtagonist: [[spoiler: Manus] in the flashback chapters. Dips into EvilVsEvil given that [[spoiler: the Gods and their allies, most notably Seath]], are just as bad, if not worse, than him.
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* VillainProtagonist: [[spoiler: Manus] Manus]] in the flashback chapters. Dips into EvilVsEvil given that [[spoiler: the Gods and their allies, most notably Seath]], are just as bad, if not worse, than him.
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* TheAlcoholic: Henrietta ends up as this the longer the story goes on.
* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: After Saxe-Gotha, [[spoiler: Raziel]] loses [[spoiler: his]] memories and shows that, without the trauma and memories, all that's left is a sweet and naive person who doesn't want to hurt anyone.
* AmnesiacsAreInnocent: After Saxe-Gotha, [[spoiler: Raziel]] loses [[spoiler: his]] memories and shows that, without the trauma and memories, all that's left is a sweet and naive person who doesn't want to hurt anyone.
* AxeCrazy: Raziel [[spoiler: when under the effects of Manus]] is a raging berserker who tears opponents apart, oftentimes with his bare hands. Even without it he's prone to violence and sees no issue with killing people in gory ways.
* BestFriendsInLaw: [[spoiler: Louise seems keen on the idea of being this with Raziel once she finds out about his and Cattleya's relationship.]]
* BestFriendsInLaw: [[spoiler: Louise seems keen on the idea of being this with Raziel once she finds out about his and Cattleya's relationship.]]
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted for Montmorency when she puts Guiche under a love potion, Raziel bluntly calls out Montmorency for forcing a love potion on Guiche and how much of a violation it was to brainwash him into loving only her.
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: Raziel starts out the story without even a name and what little personality is seen shows him to be much more naive and forgiving, a far cry from the violent, ruthless {{jerkass}} he's portrayed as later.
** Julio is portrayed as much more sinister in his first appearances, deliberately goading Raziel to losing control for his own amusement. This goes away later and Raziel never refers to it again despite his dislike of him.
* DemotedToExtra: Guiche, Siesta and Kirche, who were prominent in the early chapters, fade into the background after the war with Albion.
* DidNotGetTheGuy: Despite their numerous amounts of ShipTease, [[spoiler: Raziel and Siesta's romantic relationship fizzles out due to various reasons and he ends up with Cattleya instead]]
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted for Montmorency when she puts Guiche under a love potion, Raziel bluntly calls out Montmorency for forcing a love potion on Guiche and how much of a violation it was to brainwash him into loving only her. He even refers to it as rape.
* DudeLooksLikeALady: Raziel [[spoiler: after being brought back after the battle in Saxe-Gotha]] appears to be an androgynous teenager. [[spoiler: Derflinger argues that it's due to him being a Child of the Dark given that the other Manus shards are all female.]]
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: The first 8 chapters have the CharacterizationMarchesOn example above along with Raziel, rather bizarrely, referring to game mechanics such as stating that a tray he picks up enhances his dexterity. This was dropped later.
* EasilyForgiven: Despite going along with the impostor Wales, which directly leads to the death of the knights sent to rescue her, Henrietta faces no punishment and is treated as a friend who made a mistake by Louise. {{Averted}} by Raziel who despises her for this and calls her out at every possible opportunity.
* EternalRecurrence: As established in DarkSoulsII, the conflict between the Light and the Dark has repeated continuously with growing implications that Tristain is only the latest in a long line of said cycle. [[spoiler: The latter half of the story deals with the characters trying to find a way to end, or at least survive, this cycle.]]
* EtTuBrute: Raziel's reaction when he finds [[spoiler: Tabitha]] working alongside the people who kidnapped [[spoiler: Louise.]]
** Julio is portrayed as much more sinister in his first appearances, deliberately goading Raziel to losing control for his own amusement. This goes away later and Raziel never refers to it again despite his dislike of him.
* DemotedToExtra: Guiche, Siesta and Kirche, who were prominent in the early chapters, fade into the background after the war with Albion.
* DidNotGetTheGuy: Despite their numerous amounts of ShipTease, [[spoiler: Raziel and Siesta's romantic relationship fizzles out due to various reasons and he ends up with Cattleya instead]]
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted for Montmorency when she puts Guiche under a love potion, Raziel bluntly calls out Montmorency for forcing a love potion on Guiche and how much of a violation it was to brainwash him into loving only her. He even refers to it as rape.
* DudeLooksLikeALady: Raziel [[spoiler: after being brought back after the battle in Saxe-Gotha]] appears to be an androgynous teenager. [[spoiler: Derflinger argues that it's due to him being a Child of the Dark given that the other Manus shards are all female.]]
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: The first 8 chapters have the CharacterizationMarchesOn example above along with Raziel, rather bizarrely, referring to game mechanics such as stating that a tray he picks up enhances his dexterity. This was dropped later.
* EasilyForgiven: Despite going along with the impostor Wales, which directly leads to the death of the knights sent to rescue her, Henrietta faces no punishment and is treated as a friend who made a mistake by Louise. {{Averted}} by Raziel who despises her for this and calls her out at every possible opportunity.
* EternalRecurrence: As established in DarkSoulsII, the conflict between the Light and the Dark has repeated continuously with growing implications that Tristain is only the latest in a long line of said cycle. [[spoiler: The latter half of the story deals with the characters trying to find a way to end, or at least survive, this cycle.]]
* EtTuBrute: Raziel's reaction when he finds [[spoiler: Tabitha]] working alongside the people who kidnapped [[spoiler: Louise.]]
* GagBoobs: Tiffania, though they aren't focused on like in canon.
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* Jerkass: Too many to list due to the world's increasingly bleak chances of survival hardening most of the cast, Louise is a notable case as she's the only main character to grow out of being a jerkass instead of growing into one.
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* Jerkass: IllGirl: Cattleya, as per canon. [[spoiler: Revealed to be caused by her being a Firekeeper and her Humanity overflowing and warping her body as a result. Raziel fixes this and helps her make a bonfire to control it.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: Too many to list due to the world's increasingly bleak chances of survival hardening most of thecast, cast. Louise is a notable case as she's the only main character to grow out of being a jerkass instead of growing into one.one.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite the above many characters do attempt to do the right thing, or at least have good intentions. Raziel, being the protagonist, is the most prominent example.
* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Manus]] brutally killing a Daughter of Chaos then deliberately letting her little brother suffer, which eventually leads to the creation of the [[DarkSouls Ceaseless Discharge.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: Too many to list due to the world's increasingly bleak chances of survival hardening most of the
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite the above many characters do attempt to do the right thing, or at least have good intentions. Raziel, being the protagonist, is the most prominent example.
* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Manus]] brutally killing a Daughter of Chaos then deliberately letting her little brother suffer, which eventually leads to the creation of the [[DarkSouls Ceaseless Discharge.]]
* LikesOlderWomen: Raziel is shown to be attracted to both Henrietta and Louise's mothers, both of whom have to be at least in their mid 40's, though this is complicated on whether one counts his years spent in the Kiln or not. [[spoiler: Cattleya and his relationship with her]] may or may not count as well. At the very least she appears to be older than he is.
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Raziel and Louise act as such to one another at their lowest points, [[spoiler: especially when Raziel is corrupted by Manus. Louise is one of - if not the only - person shown to be capable of snapping him back to sanity.]]
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Raziel and Louise act as such to one another at their lowest points, [[spoiler: especially when Raziel is corrupted by Manus. Louise is one of - if not the only - person shown to be capable of snapping him back to sanity.]]
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* NiceGuy: Estelle is one of the most genuinely kind-hearted characters, not possessing any hidden malicious or cynical side like many of the other seemingly kind characters.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones that were being held prisoner and experimented on against Raziel's advice as she had promised one of their dying soldiers that had shared information to free his family. [[spoiler: This unfortunately backfires and they start slaughtering nearby villages shortly after being freed.]]
* ObliviousToLove: Raziel is completely oblivious to Siesta's obvious attraction and attempts to start a relationship with him.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones that were being held prisoner and experimented on against Raziel's advice as she had promised one of their dying soldiers that had shared information to free his family. [[spoiler: This unfortunately backfires and they start slaughtering nearby villages shortly after being freed.]]
* ObliviousToLove: Raziel is completely oblivious to Siesta's obvious attraction and attempts to start a relationship with him.
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* NiceGuy: MuggingTheMonster: Various characters taunt and/or attack Raziel not knowing he's an extremely hardy and vicious Undead.
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characters. Henrietta and Daphne count as well, despite the latter being a [[TheDreaded Vampire]].
** Other examples include Cattleya and Siesta, though they both have cynical sides underneath.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones trapped alongside other Firstborns that were being held prisoner and experimentedon against on. This despite Raziel's advice as she had promised one of their dying soldiers that had shared information to free his family. [[spoiler: This It unfortunately backfires and they start slaughtering the other Firstborns slaughter nearby villages shortly after being freed.]]
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Raziel seems to be a fan of this when not cutting people apart with Derflinger. [[spoiler: Sheffield]] ends up on one such case and it ends with her skull being shattered.
* ObliviousToLove: Raziel is completely oblivious to Siesta's obvious attraction and attempts to start a relationship with him. {{Justified}} considering he came from [[NoHuggingNoKissing Lordran]] where even platonic relationships tend to be rare and strained. He's also an Undead, which only complicates things further.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Raziel, despite his young appearance, is at least over a 100 years old given the time he spent in the Kiln. [[spoiler: Becomes even worse after the war with Albion where he's described as appearing 14 or 15 at most.]]
* NiceGirl: Estelle is one of the most genuinely kind-hearted characters, not possessing any hidden malicious or cynical side like many of the other seemingly kind
** Other examples include Cattleya and Siesta, though they both have cynical sides underneath.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones trapped alongside other Firstborns that were being held prisoner and experimented
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Raziel seems to be a fan of this when not cutting people apart with Derflinger. [[spoiler: Sheffield]] ends up on one such case and it ends with her skull being shattered.
* ObliviousToLove: Raziel is completely oblivious to Siesta's obvious attraction and attempts to start a relationship with him. {{Justified}} considering he came from [[NoHuggingNoKissing Lordran]] where even platonic relationships tend to be rare and strained. He's also an Undead, which only complicates things further.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Raziel, despite his young appearance, is at least over a 100 years old given the time he spent in the Kiln. [[spoiler: Becomes even worse after the war with Albion where he's described as appearing 14 or 15 at most.]]
* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler: Raziel and Cattleya.]]
* RomanticFalseLead: Siesta, ultimately.
* RunningGag: Early on Raziel had a bad habit of stalking Sylphid in order to cut off her tail for a weapon. Oddly enough, when he and Tabitha kill a fully grown fire dragon he doesn't do the same.
* RomanticFalseLead: Siesta, ultimately.
* RunningGag: Early on Raziel had a bad habit of stalking Sylphid in order to cut off her tail for a weapon. Oddly enough, when he and Tabitha kill a fully grown fire dragon he doesn't do the same.
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* StepfordSmiler: Cattleya's revealed to be hiding a lot of resentment and anger despite her normal behavior. She tells Raziel that she puts up a front in order to avoid worrying her siblings and parents.
* StrongerThanTheyLook: Raziel, Daphne and Amethyst are capable of feats of strength despite what their slender and wiry builds suggest. Estelle as well with [[spoiler: the past Karin]] wondering outright how she's capable of using a bow despite her emaciated appearance.
* SweetPollyOliver: [[spoiler: Past!Karin]] very poorly disguised herself as a male when becoming a Knight but still ends up shocked when Estelle sees through it withease.ease.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Raziel with Henrietta and [[spoiler: Ciaran]]. While their goals align it's clear that none of them are exactly fond of the other and only work together due to necessity.
* TheStoic: Raziel and Tabitha. Henrietta tries to be this later but breaks down in private due to stress.
* StrongerThanTheyLook: Raziel, Daphne and Amethyst are capable of feats of strength despite what their slender and wiry builds suggest. Estelle as well with [[spoiler: the past Karin]] wondering outright how she's capable of using a bow despite her emaciated appearance.
* SweetPollyOliver: [[spoiler: Past!Karin]] very poorly disguised herself as a male when becoming a Knight but still ends up shocked when Estelle sees through it with
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Raziel with Henrietta and [[spoiler: Ciaran]]. While their goals align it's clear that none of them are exactly fond of the other and only work together due to necessity.
* TheStoic: Raziel and Tabitha. Henrietta tries to be this later but breaks down in private due to stress.
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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: Henrietta is forced to become a colder and much more ruthless figure in order to see her country through treacherous nobles, a war and [[spoiler: the coming end of the cycle.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass: Raziel and Henrietta. For the first few chapters they start off relatively naive and well-meaning but [[TraumaCongaLine various events]] and (in Raziel's case) recovering memories eventually harden them to much harder, ruthless characters.
* TookALevelInKindness: Louise generally becomes much more pleasant the longer the story goes, in direct contrast to how her friends develop.
* UndyingLoyalty: Raziel and Louise for each other. It becomes clear the longer the story goes on that they consider the other family and are perfectly willing to die for one another. Louise has this for Henrietta as well, much to Raziel's annoyance.
* VillainProtagonist: [[spoiler: Manus] in the flashback chapters. Dips into EvilVsEvil given that [[spoiler: the Gods and their allies, most notably Seath]], are just as bad, if not worse, than him.
* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: Henrietta is forced to become a colder and much more ruthless figure in order to see her country through treacherous nobles, a war and [[spoiler: the coming end of the cycle.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass: Raziel and Henrietta. For the first few chapters they start off relatively naive and well-meaning but [[TraumaCongaLine various events]] and (in Raziel's case) recovering memories eventually harden them to much harder, ruthless characters.
* TookALevelInKindness: Louise generally becomes much more pleasant the longer the story goes, in direct contrast to how her friends develop.
* UndyingLoyalty: Raziel and Louise for each other. It becomes clear the longer the story goes on that they consider the other family and are perfectly willing to die for one another. Louise has this for Henrietta as well, much to Raziel's annoyance.
* VillainProtagonist: [[spoiler: Manus] in the flashback chapters. Dips into EvilVsEvil given that [[spoiler: the Gods and their allies, most notably Seath]], are just as bad, if not worse, than him.
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* BodyHorror: Raziel is a frequent victim of this because of his ability to endure and heal from severe damage that would kill most people thanks to his Undead state. The most notable instance of this is in the opening chapter where he appears as a charred corpse due to taking Gwyn's place in the Kiln of the First Flame.
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* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raziel and a currently unspecified woman]].
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* AmnesiacHero: Raizel doesn't even remember what his name was when he was first summoned by Louise, which is shown to be caused the trauma from burning alive in the Kiln for countless years.
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* LovePotion: Montmorency creates a love potion to force Guiche to stop his unfaithful womanizing ways, it backfires when he becomes obsessed with her to the point of [[AttemptedRape trying to force himself on her]]. Raziel accidental drinks the same love potion and becomes obsessed with Louise but restrains himself enough to avoid such behaviour.
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* LovePotion: Montmorency creates a love potion to force Guiche to stop his unfaithful womanizing ways, it backfires when he becomes obsessed with her to the point of [[AttemptedRape trying to force himself on her]]. Raizel accidental drinks the same love potion and becomes obsessed with Louise but restrains himself enough to avoid such behaviour.
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* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizel and a currently unspecified woman]].
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times by Raizel to prove he's and an Undead.
* SexForSolace: [[spoiler: After Louise's kidnapping by King Joseph, Raizel and Cattleya end up sleeping together in a way of coping with their mutual grief]].
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizel and a currently unspecified woman]].
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times by Raizel to prove he's and an Undead.
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* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their past lives, which includes Raizel's Raziel's memories as Manus, Henrietta's memories as Gwynevere, and Julio's memories as Gwyn.]]
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter ofRaizel Raziel and a currently unspecified woman]].
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times byRaizel Raziel to prove he's and an Undead.
* SexForSolace: [[spoiler: After Louise's kidnapping by King Joseph,Raizel Raziel and Cattleya end up sleeping together in a way of coping with their mutual grief]].
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times by
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* VoluntaryVampireVictim: Raizel allows [[Spoiler: Daphne]] to feed off his blood out of practicality while travelling together to get home.
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* TheHedonist: King Joseph cares for nothing but his own sadistic amusement and doesn't even give much care to his country or daughter. Manus was also revealed to be hedonistic during his time as a human but not to the extent of Joseph.
* VoluntaryVampireVictim:Raizel Raziel allows [[Spoiler: Daphne]] to feed off his blood out of practicality while travelling together to get home.
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** [[Spoiler: Ciaran's]] hatred of humans hasn't vanished even after years of living within human settlements.
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** [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Ciaran's]] hatred of humans hasn't vanished even after years of living within human settlements. settlements.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Raizel bluntly calls out Montmorency on forcing a love potion on Guiche and how of a violation it was to him.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Raizel bluntly calls out Montmorency on forcing a love potion on Guiche and how of a violation it was to him.
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* LovePotion: Montmorency creates a love potion to force Guiche to stop his unfaithful womanizing ways, it backfires when he becomes obsessed with her to the point of [[AttemptedRape trying to force himself on her]]. Raizel accidental drinks the same love potion and becomes obsessed with Louise but restrains himself enough to avoid such behaviour.
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* ObliviousToLove: Raziel is completely oblivious to Siesta's obvious attraction and attempts to start a relationship with him.
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* FantasticRacism: Just like in canon, the majority of people in Halkeginia consider nearly everything that isn't a human or familiar to be heresy. The non-humans living in Halkeginia live in constant fear and discrimination as a result.
** [[Spoiler: Ciaran's]] hatred of humans hasn't vanished even after years of living within human settlements.
* ForTheEvulz: King Joseph proves to be one of the most monstrous villains, while the other villains have their own objectives for justifying their actions Joseph is in it purely for his own sadistic amusement and nothing else.
** [[Spoiler: Ciaran's]] hatred of humans hasn't vanished even after years of living within human settlements.
* ForTheEvulz: King Joseph proves to be one of the most monstrous villains, while the other villains have their own objectives for justifying their actions Joseph is in it purely for his own sadistic amusement and nothing else.
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* Jerkass: Too many to list due to the world's increasingly bleak chances of survival, Louise is a notable case as she's the only main character to grow out of being a jerkass instead of growing into one.
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* AmnesiacHero: Raizen doesn't even remember what his name was when he was first summoned by Louise, which is shown to be caused the trauma from burning alive in the Kiln for countless years.
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* AmnesiacHero: Raizen Raizel doesn't even remember what his name was when he was first summoned by Louise, which is shown to be caused the trauma from burning alive in the Kiln for countless years.
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* BodyHorror: Raizen is a frequent victim of this because of his ability to endure and heal from severe damage that would kill most people thanks to his Undead state. The most notable instance of this is in the opening chapter where he appears as a charred corpse due to taking Gwyn's place in the Kiln of the First Flame.
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* AndIMustScream: Raziel spends an entire century burning alive in the Kiln of the First Flame before being summoned by Louise.
* BodyHorror:Raizen Raizel is a frequent victim of this because of his ability to endure and heal from severe damage that would kill most people thanks to his Undead state. The most notable instance of this is in the opening chapter where he appears as a charred corpse due to taking Gwyn's place in the Kiln of the First Flame.
* BodyHorror:
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones that were being held prisoner and experimented on as she promised one of their dying soldiers who had given her information, [[spoiler: only for them to start slaughtering nearby villages in return.]]
* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their past lives, which includes Raizen's memories as Manus, Henrietta's memories as Gwynevere, and Julio's memories as Gwyn.]]
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizen and a currently unspecified woman]].
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times by Raizen to prove he's and an Undead.
* SexForSolace: [[spoiler: After Louise's kidnapping by King Joseph, Raizen and Cattleya end up sleeping together in a way of coping with their mutual grief]].
* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their past lives, which includes Raizen's memories as Manus, Henrietta's memories as Gwynevere, and Julio's memories as Gwyn.]]
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizen and a currently unspecified woman]].
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times by Raizen to prove he's and an Undead.
* SexForSolace: [[spoiler: After Louise's kidnapping by King Joseph, Raizen and Cattleya end up sleeping together in a way of coping with their mutual grief]].
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* Jerkass: Too many to list due to the world's increasingly bleak chances of survival, Louise is a notable case as she's the only main character to grow out of being a jerkass instead of growing into one.
* NiceGuy: Estelle is one of the most genuinely kind-hearted characters, not possessing any hidden malicious or cynical side like many of the other seemingly kind characters.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones that were being held prisoner and experimented on against Raziel's advice as she had promised one of their dying soldierswho that had given her information, shared information to free his family. [[spoiler: only for them to This unfortunately backfires and they start slaughtering nearby villages in return.shortly after being freed.]]
* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their past lives, which includesRaizen's Raizel's memories as Manus, Henrietta's memories as Gwynevere, and Julio's memories as Gwyn.]]
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter ofRaizen Raizel and a currently unspecified woman]].
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times byRaizen Raizel to prove he's and an Undead.
* SexForSolace: [[spoiler: After Louise's kidnapping by King Joseph,Raizen Raizel and Cattleya end up sleeping together in a way of coping with their mutual grief]].grief]].
* SweetPollyOliver: [[spoiler: Past!Karin]] poorly disguised herself as a male when becoming a Knight but still ends up shocked when Estelle sees through it with ease.
* VoluntaryVampireVictim: Raizel allows [[Spoiler: Daphne]] to feed off his blood out of practicality while travelling together to get home.
* NiceGuy: Estelle is one of the most genuinely kind-hearted characters, not possessing any hidden malicious or cynical side like many of the other seemingly kind characters.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones that were being held prisoner and experimented on against Raziel's advice as she had promised one of their dying soldiers
* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their past lives, which includes
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times by
* SexForSolace: [[spoiler: After Louise's kidnapping by King Joseph,
* SweetPollyOliver: [[spoiler: Past!Karin]] poorly disguised herself as a male when becoming a Knight but still ends up shocked when Estelle sees through it with ease.
* VoluntaryVampireVictim: Raizel allows [[Spoiler: Daphne]] to feed off his blood out of practicality while travelling together to get home.
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* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their past lives, which includes Raizen's memories as Manus, Henrietta's memories as Gwynevere, and Julio's memories as Gwyn.
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* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their past lives, which includes Raizen's memories as Manus, Henrietta's memories as Gwynevere, and Julio's memories as Gwyn. ]]
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Soon events spiral out of control forcing the two very different individuals to band together in order to survive the horrors that await them.
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* GodTest: Karin asks [[spoiler: past self what her sister had said to her the last time they had talked before she left for her knighthood in order to prove her identity as her past self]].
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizen and a currently unspecified woman]].
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizen and a currently unspecified woman]].
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* GodTest: Karin asks [[spoiler: her past self what her sister had said to her the last time they had talked before she left for her knighthood in order to prove verify her identity identity]].
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones that were being held prisoner and experimented on as she promised one of their dying soldiers who had given her information, [[spoiler: only for them to start slaughtering nearby villages in return.]]
* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their pastself]].lives, which includes Raizen's memories as Manus, Henrietta's memories as Gwynevere, and Julio's memories as Gwyn.
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizen and a currently unspecifiedwoman]].woman]].
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times by Raizen to prove he's and an Undead.
* SexForSolace: [[spoiler: After Louise's kidnapping by King Joseph, Raizen and Cattleya end up sleeping together in a way of coping with their mutual grief]].
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Louise frees the captive Winged Ones that were being held prisoner and experimented on as she promised one of their dying soldiers who had given her information, [[spoiler: only for them to start slaughtering nearby villages in return.]]
* PastLifeMemories: The characters who are revealed to be [[spoiler: reincarnations eventually remember the memories of their past
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizen and a currently unspecified
* SelfHarm: Done multiple times by Raizen to prove he's and an Undead.
* SexForSolace: [[spoiler: After Louise's kidnapping by King Joseph, Raizen and Cattleya end up sleeping together in a way of coping with their mutual grief]].
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The story starts with Louise summoning the [[PlayerCharacter Chosen Undead]], who first appears as a charred corpse after [[FateWorseThanDeath years of burning alive in the kiln]] [[HeroicSacrifice to prolong the First Flame]].
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The story starts with Louise summoning the [[PlayerCharacter Chosen Undead]], Undead]] as her familiar, who first appears as a charred corpse after [[FateWorseThanDeath years of burning alive in the kiln]] Kiln]] [[HeroicSacrifice to prolong the First Flame]].
Flame]].
Soon events spiral out of control forcing the two very different individuals to band together in order to survive the horrors that await them.
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* AmnesiacHero: Raizen doesn't even remember what his name was when he was first summoned by Louise, which is shown to be caused the trauma from burning alive in the Kiln for countless years.
** Taken even further when it's revealed that he's [[spoiler: a fragment of Manus who's forgotten his past life]] and again when [[spoiler: Derflinger seals away his memories after he starts rampaging as an Abyss Beast]].
* BodyHorror: Raizen is a frequent victim of this because of his ability to endure and heal from severe damage that would kill most people thanks to his Undead state. The most notable instance of this is in the opening chapter where he appears as a charred corpse due to taking Gwyn's place in the Kiln of the First Flame.
* GodTest: Karin asks [[spoiler: past self what her sister had said to her the last time they had talked before she left for her knighthood in order to prove her identity as her past self]].
* KidFromTheFuture: [[spoiler: Estelle is revealed to be the future daughter of Raizen and a currently unspecified woman]].
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Flame]].
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The story starts with Louise summoning the [[PlayerCharacter Chosen Undead]], who first appears as a charred corpse after [[FateWorseThanDeath years of burning in the kiln to keep the First Flame alive.
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->''She was a failure of a Mage, unable to cast even the simplest of spells. He was an Undead, a monster used as a pawn in battle he could never understand. They had nothing in common, and yet fate saw it fit to bind the two souls together.''
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8623261/1/Twisted-Reflections Twisted Reflections]]'' is a crossover fanfiction between ''VideoGame/DarkSouls'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' by vendetta543.
The story starts with Louise summoning the [[PlayerCharacter Chosen Undead]], who first appears as a charred corpse after [[FateWorseThanDeath years of burning in the kiln to keep the First Flame alive.
!!This series contains examples of:
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8623261/1/Twisted-Reflections Twisted Reflections]]'' is a crossover fanfiction between ''VideoGame/DarkSouls'' and ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' by vendetta543.
The story starts with Louise summoning the [[PlayerCharacter Chosen Undead]], who first appears as a charred corpse after [[FateWorseThanDeath years of burning in the kiln to keep the First Flame alive.
!!This series contains examples of:
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