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''[[http://www.fimfetch.net/story/99797/the-conversion-bureau-a-kinder-world The Conversion Bureau: A Kinder World]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic [[HateFic written in response to]] ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureauTheOtherSideOfTheSpectrum'', in an attempt to write an "Anti Conversion Bureau" story without being, in the author's opinion, unreadably terrible.
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* BalefulPolymorph: Canon Twilight reluctantly transforms [[spoiler:Carpenter]] into a pony after he's mortally wounded to save his life. [[DrivenToSuicide He doesn't take it well.]]
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* ForcedTransformation: Canon Twilight reluctantly transforms [[spoiler:Carpenter]] into a pony after he's mortally wounded to save his life. [[DrivenToSuicide He doesn't take it well.]]
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* AssimilationPlot: Dark Celestia's game plan.
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* InterruptedSuicide: Fluttershy and Carpenter.
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* NoSell: Palladion (or any of Ma's children) vs. Ponification Serum.
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* TranshumanTreachery: Some of the dark! ponies didn't need to be brainwashed.
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* TranshumanTreachery: Some of the dark! ponies dark!ponies didn't need to be brainwashed.
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* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture
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* BalefulPolymorph: Canon Twilight reluctantly transforms [[spoiler:Carpenter]] into a pony after he's mortally wounded to save his life. [[DrivenToSuicide He doesn't take it well]].
* BigDamnHeroes: Richard's first act of kindness directed at ponies involves [[spoiler:saving Applebloom from a Manticore]].
* BigDamnHeroes: Richard's first act of kindness directed at ponies involves [[spoiler:saving Applebloom from a Manticore]].
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* BalefulPolymorph: Canon Twilight reluctantly transforms [[spoiler:Carpenter]] into a pony after he's mortally wounded to save his life. [[DrivenToSuicide He doesn't take it well]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: Richard's first act of kindness directed at ponies involves [[spoiler:saving Applebloom from aManticore]].Manticore.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: Richard's first act of kindness directed at ponies involves [[spoiler:saving Applebloom from a
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* UnfortunateNames: Commander Tulip. It's not detrimental to [[TheCaptain his overall]] characterization though.
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Thing is, he did it to stop Princess Celestia, but [[MirrorUniverse not the Celestia we know and love]], and his first reaction to seeing the rest of the ponies is, understandably, to beat the crap out of them and run. After demonstrating an unwillingness to [[spoiler:[[ALighterShadeOfGrey let Applebloom die]] at the paws of a manticore]], he becomes reluctantly trusting of the new ponies, and convinced to have an audience with Princess Luna.
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Thing is, he did it to stop Princess Celestia, but [[MirrorUniverse not the Celestia we know and love]], and his first reaction to seeing the rest of the ponies is, understandably, to beat the crap out of them and run. After demonstrating an unwillingness to [[spoiler:[[ALighterShadeOfGrey let Applebloom die]] at the paws of a manticore]], he He becomes reluctantly trusting of the new ponies, and convinced to have an audience with Princess Luna.
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* PunnyName: Specialist Kay Oss. Kay. Oss. He advocates brutal murder first and foremost. His sanity is all that stops him screaming about [[Characters/Warhammer40000ForcesOfChaos skulls for the skull throne]].
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* PunnyName: Specialist Kay Oss. Kay. Oss. He advocates brutal murder first and foremost. His sanity is all that stops him screaming about [[Characters/Warhammer40000ForcesOfChaos skulls Blood for the skull throne]].Blood God]].
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* UnfortunateNames: Commander Tulip. It's not detrimental to [[TheCaptain his overall]] [[{{Badass}} characterization]] though.
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* UnfortunateNames: Commander Tulip. It's not detrimental to [[TheCaptain his overall]] [[{{Badass}} characterization]] characterization though.
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* DeadFic: Has become this, with the author having lost interest in the story.
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Thing is, he did it to stop Princess Celestia, but [[MirrorUniverse not the Celestia we know and love]], and his first reaction to seeing the rest of the ponies is, understandably, to beat the crap out of them and run. After demonstrating an unwillingness to [[spoiler:[[ALighterShadeOfGrey let Applebloom die]] at the paws of a manticore]], He becomes reluctantly trusting of the new ponies, and convinced to have an audience with Princess Luna.
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Thing is, he did it to stop Princess Celestia, but [[MirrorUniverse not the Celestia we know and love]], and his first reaction to seeing the rest of the ponies is, understandably, to beat the crap out of them and run. After demonstrating an unwillingness to [[spoiler:[[ALighterShadeOfGrey let Applebloom die]] at the paws of a manticore]], He he becomes reluctantly trusting of the new ponies, and convinced to have an audience with Princess Luna.
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* FailOSuckyname: Commander Tulip. It's not detrimental to [[TheCaptain his overall]] [[{{Badass}} characterization]] though.
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* UnfortunateNames: Commander Tulip. It's not detrimental to [[TheCaptain his overall]] [[{{Badass}} characterization]] though.
