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* BiggerBad: Tzeentch and the other Chaos Gods have effortlessly beaten Angra Mainyu out of this spot.
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** Surprisingly enough, [[CompleteMonster Zouken]]. The man is '''terrified''' of Rider's 'enforcers' who chase from the Matou Estate, and is appalled by the other Servants.
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** Surprisingly enough, [[CompleteMonster Zouken]].Zouken. The man is '''terrified''' of Rider's 'enforcers' who chase from the Matou Estate, and is appalled by the other Servants.
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* BigBadWannabe: Gilgamesh still thinks that he's a threat, he's sort of delusionaly adorable that way.
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* BigBadWannabe: Gilgamesh still thinks that he's a threat, he's threat despite everyone outclassing him by ridiculous margins. He's sort of delusionaly adorable that way.
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* BrokenMasquerade: Thanks to all of the Servants coming down with a massive case of "I Don't Give a Damn" the Holy Grail War has gone public.
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* BrokenMasquerade: Thanks to all of the Servants coming down with bringing in a massive case of "I Don't Give don't give a Damn" damn", the Holy Grail War has gone public.
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** Surprisingly enough, Zouken. The man is '''terrified''' of Rider's 'enforcers' who chase from the Matou Estate, and is appalled by the other Servants.
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** Surprisingly enough, Zouken.[[CompleteMonster Zouken]]. The man is '''terrified''' of Rider's 'enforcers' who chase from the Matou Estate, and is appalled by the other Servants.
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** Zouken Matou; Assassin aka [[spoiler: the Swarmlord]] immediately kills the moment it's summoned.
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** Zouken Matou; Matou. Assassin aka [[spoiler: the Swarmlord]] immediately kills him the moment it's summoned.
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* KarmaHoudini: If there's one thing the Church and the Mages Association can agree on, it's that Zelretch has gotten away with far to much bullshit for far too long.
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* KarmaHoudini: If there's one thing the Church and the Mages Association can agree on, it's that Zelretch [[ItAmusedMe Zelretch]] has gotten away with far to much bullshit for far too long.
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** Lancer believes Kirei to be this to him.
** Saber later sees Lorgar in Shirou.
** Lancer believes Kirei to be this to him.
** Saber later sees Lorgar in Shirou.
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* {{Squee}}: Archer aka [[spoiler: Ghazghkull Thraka]] has one when he sees Taiga's bike, [[{{MemeticMutation}} which is painted red.]]
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** Rider is a Dark Eldar, with all that implies, but even he refrains from telling Sakura what he did to his former mentor's corpse, saying she is too young to hear.
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** Subverted in the case of Sabre and Shiro. While he's taken Shiro under his wing, being who he is, he's not really evil.
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** Subverted in the case of Sabre Saber and Shiro. While he's taken Shiro under his wing, being who he is, he's not really evil.
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* OurElvesAreBetter: Shinji mocks Sakura for summoning an elf; Rider promptly makes sure that [[FateWorseThanDeath Shinji learns]] that the Dark Eldar are not to be casually messed with.
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* OurElvesAreBetter: OurElvesAreDifferent: Shinji mocks Sakura for summoning an elf; Rider promptly makes sure that [[FateWorseThanDeath Shinji learns]] that the Dark Eldar are not to be casually messed with.
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* BerserkButton: Archer is furious when Rider uses his 'black hole in a box' to stop his city-sized 'krooz missile'.
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* BerserkButton: Archer is furious when Rider uses his 'black "black hole in a box' box" to stop his city-sized 'krooz missile'."krooz missile".
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** Lancer aka Trazyn the Infinite, who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a "welcoming gift" immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
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** Lancer Lancer, aka Trazyn the Infinite, who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a "welcoming gift" immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The Chaos Gods who twist reality and routinely decide the fates of billions on a whim... and occasionally play Dungeons and Dragons.
* AssholeVictim: Shinji Matou; he sneers at Sakura for summoning an 'elf', but [[{{HoistByHisOwnPetard}} Rider quickly and brutally asserts his superiority.]]
* AssholeVictim: Shinji Matou; he sneers at Sakura for summoning an 'elf', but [[{{HoistByHisOwnPetard}} Rider quickly and brutally asserts his superiority.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The Chaos Gods who twist reality and routinely decide the fates of billions on a whim... and occasionally play Dungeons ''Dungeons and Dragons.
Dragons''.
* AssholeVictim: Shinji Matou; he sneers at Sakura for summoning an'elf', "elf", but [[{{HoistByHisOwnPetard}} [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Rider quickly and brutally asserts his superiority.]]superiority]].
* AssholeVictim: Shinji Matou; he sneers at Sakura for summoning an
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* BehindAStick: One omake has Ursukar E. Creed summoned as the servant Rider. His [[TabletopGames/MemeticMutation memetic]] 'Tactical Genius' rule (he can scout one unit per game- fanon interpretation is basically him pulling this trope) promptly gets put into play.
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* BehindAStick: One omake has Ursukar E. Creed summoned as the servant Rider. His [[TabletopGames/MemeticMutation [[Memes/TabletopGames memetic]] 'Tactical Genius' "Tactical Genius" rule (he can scout one unit per game- game -- fanon interpretation is basically him pulling this trope) promptly gets put into play.
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** Lancer aka Trazyn the Infinite, who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a 'welcoming gift' immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
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** Lancer aka Trazyn the Infinite, who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a 'welcoming gift' "welcoming gift" immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
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'''Berserker''' (Master: Illya): Kharn the Betrayer. A champion of [[WarGod Khorne]], known for being so AxCrazy his fellow ax crazies don't want to get anywhere near him (his title is 'the betrayer' for a reason).
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'''Berserker''' (Master: Illya): Kharn the Betrayer. A champion of [[WarGod Khorne]], known for being so AxCrazy his fellow ax crazies don't want to get anywhere near him (his title is 'the betrayer' "the betrayer" for a reason).
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'''Rider''' (Master: Sakura): Asdrubael Vect, leader of the Dark Eldar. OurElvesAreDifferent… ''[[ColdBloodedTorture very]]'' [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder different]].
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'''Rider''' (Master: Sakura): Asdrubael Vect, leader of the Dark Eldar. OurElvesAreDifferent… OurElvesAreDifferent... ''[[ColdBloodedTorture very]]'' [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder different]].
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'''Saber''' (Master- Shirou): The God-Emperor of Mankind. The strongest Servant in the game, but is hampered by Shirou being kinda incompetent and two of his Noble Phantasms being unusable in normal combat.
'''Archer''' (Master- Rin): Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka. The most powerful Ork Warboss in the 41st century.
'''Lancer''' (Master- Kirei): Trayzn the Infinte. A Necron Lord known for his love of history and penchant for collecting valuable artifacts.
'''Berserker''' (Master- Illya): Kharn the Betrayer. A champion of [[WarGod Khorne]], known for being so AxCrazy his fellow ax crazies don't want to get anywhere near him (his title is 'the betrayer' for a reason).
'''Archer''' (Master- Rin): Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka. The most powerful Ork Warboss in the 41st century.
'''Lancer''' (Master- Kirei): Trayzn the Infinte. A Necron Lord known for his love of history and penchant for collecting valuable artifacts.
'''Berserker''' (Master- Illya): Kharn the Betrayer. A champion of [[WarGod Khorne]], known for being so AxCrazy his fellow ax crazies don't want to get anywhere near him (his title is 'the betrayer' for a reason).
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'''Saber''' (Master- (Master: Shirou): The God-Emperor of Mankind. The strongest Servant in the game, but is hampered by Shirou being kinda incompetent and two of his Noble Phantasms being unusable in normal combat.
'''Archer'''(Master- (Master: Rin): Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka. The most powerful Ork Warboss in the 41st century.
'''Lancer'''(Master- (Master: Kirei): Trayzn the Infinte. A Necron Lord known for his love of history and penchant for collecting valuable artifacts.
'''Berserker'''(Master- (Master: Illya): Kharn the Betrayer. A champion of [[WarGod Khorne]], known for being so AxCrazy his fellow ax crazies don't want to get anywhere near him (his title is 'the betrayer' for a reason).
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'''Rider''' (Master- Sakura): Asdrubael Vect, leader of the Dark Eldar. OurElvesAreDifferent… ''[[ColdBloodedTorture very]]'' [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder different]].
'''Assassin''' (Master- Kariya): The Tyranid Swarmlord. A special bioform and the most dangerous Hive Tyrant in the biofleets. Technically its original master was Zouken Matou, but it killed him and reformed Kariya from genetic data to be its new master.
'''Avenger''' (Master- Ahriman): Abbadon the Despoiler, influential Chaos warlord and leader of the Black Crusades. Also known as [[MemeticMutation Failbaddon the Harmless]] after screwing up a campaign.
'''Assassin''' (Master- Kariya): The Tyranid Swarmlord. A special bioform and the most dangerous Hive Tyrant in the biofleets. Technically its original master was Zouken Matou, but it killed him and reformed Kariya from genetic data to be its new master.
'''Avenger''' (Master- Ahriman): Abbadon the Despoiler, influential Chaos warlord and leader of the Black Crusades. Also known as [[MemeticMutation Failbaddon the Harmless]] after screwing up a campaign.
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'''Rider''' (Master- (Master: Sakura): Asdrubael Vect, leader of the Dark Eldar. OurElvesAreDifferent… ''[[ColdBloodedTorture very]]'' [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder different]].
'''Assassin'''(Master- (Master: Kariya): The Tyranid Swarmlord. A special bioform and the most dangerous Hive Tyrant in the biofleets. Technically its original master was Zouken Matou, but it killed him and reformed Kariya from genetic data to be its new master.
'''Avenger'''(Master- (Master: Ahriman): Abbadon the Despoiler, influential Chaos warlord and leader of the Black Crusades. Also known as [[MemeticMutation Failbaddon the Harmless]] after screwing up a campaign.
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* AffablyEvil: Lancer aka Trazyn the Infinite, who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a 'welcoming gift' immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
** Rider aka Asdrubael Vect also counts, graciously thanking Sakura for freeing his soul and promising her victory.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The Chaos Gods who twist reality and routinely decide the fates of billions on a whim...and occasionally play Dungeons and Dragons.
** Rider aka Asdrubael Vect also counts, graciously thanking Sakura for freeing his soul and promising her victory.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The Chaos Gods who twist reality and routinely decide the fates of billions on a whim...and occasionally play Dungeons and Dragons.
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* AffablyEvil: AffablyEvil:
** Lancer aka Trazyn the Infinite, who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a 'welcoming gift' immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
**Rider Rider, aka Asdrubael Vect Vect, also counts, graciously thanking Sakura for freeing his soul and promising her victory.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The Chaos Gods who twist reality and routinely decide the fates of billions on a whim... and occasionally play Dungeons and Dragons.
** Lancer aka Trazyn the Infinite, who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a 'welcoming gift' immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The Chaos Gods who twist reality and routinely decide the fates of billions on a whim... and occasionally play Dungeons and Dragons.
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* BadassBoast: Kirei.
-->''"I am a good exorcist."''
-->''"I am a good exorcist."''
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* BadassBoast: BadassBoast:
** Kirei.
-->''"I --->''"I am a good exorcist."''
** Kirei.
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-->''"I am Trazyn the Infinite, the Keeper of History. I was old when the ancestors of your kind were nothing but mindless bacteria. I witnessed the fall of empires, the death of stars, and wars beyond your primitive understanding. Before me, you are but a name on a tombstone, Ahzek Ahriman, and your threats dust in the winds of the cosmos."''
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-->''"...the Einzbern Berserker collected skulls for trophies...Kotomine's Lancer was fond of stuffing magi...the Caster dabbled in demonology...Tohsaka's Archer was a monster, and utterly insane..."''
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* EvilMentor: Rider for some reason (probably the fact that Dark Eldar women don't come in any flavors other than TheVamp) thinks Sakura is a manipulative femme fatale, and has taken on the task of being a mentor for her. The interactions are rather hilarious to say the least.
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* EvilMentor: Rider EvilMentor:
** Rider, for some reason (probably the fact that Dark Eldar women don't come in any flavors other thanTheVamp) TheVamp), thinks that Sakura is a manipulative femme fatale, and has taken on the task of being a mentor for her. The interactions are rather hilarious to say the least.
** Rider, for some reason (probably the fact that Dark Eldar women don't come in any flavors other than
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Zouken Matou; Assassin aka [[spoiler: the Swarmlord]] immediately kills the moment it's summoned.
** Ahriman probably regrets summoning [[spoiler:Abaddon]] after the latter [[spoiler:blew up his own HQ with his Noble Phantasm.]]
** Ahriman probably regrets summoning [[spoiler:Abaddon]] after the latter [[spoiler:blew up his own HQ with his Noble Phantasm.]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: HoistByHisOwnPetard:
** Zouken Matou; Assassin aka [[spoiler: the Swarmlord]] immediately kills the moment it's summoned.
** Ahriman probably regrets summoning [[spoiler:Abaddon]] after the latter [[spoiler:blew up his own HQ with his NoblePhantasm.]]Phantasm]].
** Zouken Matou; Assassin aka [[spoiler: the Swarmlord]] immediately kills the moment it's summoned.
** Ahriman probably regrets summoning [[spoiler:Abaddon]] after the latter [[spoiler:blew up his own HQ with his Noble
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* MindRape: Saber inflicts this on Gilgamesh. [[{{MadeofIron}} He survives...]]
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* MindRape: Saber inflicts this on Gilgamesh. [[{{MadeofIron}} [[MadeOfIron He survives...survives.]]
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* MuggingTheMonster: Played with; the only reason Lorelei and her counterpart from the Church don't go physical on Zelretch for starting the mess is the man's own godlike power as the Second Magician.
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* MuggingTheMonster: MuggingTheMonster:
** Played with; the only reason Lorelei and her counterpart from the Church don't go physical on Zelretch for starting the mess is the man's own godlike power as the Second Magician.
** Played with; the only reason Lorelei and her counterpart from the Church don't go physical on Zelretch for starting the mess is the man's own godlike power as the Second Magician.
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-->''"...at my peak I could summon armies and reshape the fabric of the universe itself...but as I am now, I have to focus on spells I could normally complete with my eyes closed...this Holy Grail will be worth the humiliation...a god I shall become!"''
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-->''"...at my peak I could summon armies and reshape the fabric of the universe itself... but as I am now, I have to focus on spells I could normally complete with my eyes closed...closed... this Holy Grail will be worth the humiliation...humiliation... a god I shall become!"''
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* NotSoDifferent: Lancer believes Kirei to be this to him.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferent:
** Lancer believes Kirei to be this to him.
** Lancer believes Kirei to be this to him.
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Played with; Archer accuses the Grail of being junk for not allowing his arch-nemesis to be summoned.
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou:
** Played with; Archer accuses the Grail of being junk for not allowing his arch-nemesis to be summoned.
** Played with; Archer accuses the Grail of being junk for not allowing his arch-nemesis to be summoned.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9319582/1/Property-Damage Property Damage]]'' is a crossover fan fiction between ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' and ''Franchise/FateStayNight''. A bored Zelretch tweaks the limiters of the Greater Grail, ensuring the summoning of powerful Heroic Spirits from the [[{{CrapsackWorld}} grim and dark future]] of the 41st Millennium. Hilarity and awesome ensues.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9319582/1/Property-Damage Property Damage]]'' is a crossover fan fiction between ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' and ''Franchise/FateStayNight''.''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''. A bored Zelretch tweaks the limiters of the Greater Grail, ensuring the summoning of powerful Heroic Spirits from the [[{{CrapsackWorld}} grim and dark future]] of the 41st Millennium. Hilarity and awesome ensues.
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* BornUnlucky: Avenger. His Luck stat is -EX, i.e. ReadingsAreOffTheScale ''in the negatives''.
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, Abbadon lost his final Black Crusade because the Imperium launched an [[EarthShatteringKaboom Exterminatus]] on Cadia... due to a paperwork error.
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'''Assassin''' (Master- Kariya): The Tyranid Swarmlord. A special bioform and the most dangerous Hive Tyrant in the biofleets.
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biofleets. Technically its original master was Zouken Matou, but it killed him and reformed Kariya from genetic data to be its new master.
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* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Lancer's species, the Necrons, are basically humanoid Daleks (and are called out as such), but Lancer doesn't share their [[OmnicidalManiac omnicidal mania]]- after all, exterminating everyone in the galaxy would leave him with nothing better than rocks to collect.
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'''Rider''' (Master- Sakura): Asdrubael Vect, leader of the Dark Eldar. OurElvesAreDifferent… ''[[ColdBloodedTorture very]]'' [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder different''.
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'''Rider''' (Master- Sakura): Asdrubael Vect, leader of the Dark Eldar. OurElvesAreDifferent… ''[[ColdBloodedTorture very]]'' [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder different''.
different]].
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The list of spirits is as follows:
'''Saber''' (Master- Shirou): The God-Emperor of Mankind. The strongest Servant in the game, but is hampered by Shirou being kinda incompetent and two of his Noble Phantasms being unusable in normal combat.
'''Archer''' (Master- Rin): Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka. The most powerful Ork Warboss in the 41st century.
'''Lancer''' (Master- Kirei): Trayzn the Infinte. A Necron Lord known for his love of history and penchant for collecting valuable artifacts.
'''Berserker''' (Master- Illya): Kharn the Betrayer. A champion of [[WarGod Khorne]], known for being so AxCrazy his fellow ax crazies don't want to get anywhere near him (his title is 'the betrayer' for a reason).
'''Caster''': Ahzek Ahriman, a sorcerer of the Thousand Sons traitor marine legion. Doubles as Avenger's Master.
'''Rider''' (Master- Sakura): Asdrubael Vect, leader of the Dark Eldar. OurElvesAreDifferent… ''[[ColdBloodedTorture very]]'' [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder different''.
'''Assassin''' (Master- Kariya): The Tyranid Swarmlord. A special bioform and the most dangerous Hive Tyrant in the biofleets.
'''Avenger''' (Master- Ahriman): Abbadon the Despoiler, influential Chaos warlord and leader of the Black Crusades. Also known as [[MemeticMutation Failbaddon the Harmless]] after screwing up a campaign.
'''Saber''' (Master- Shirou): The God-Emperor of Mankind. The strongest Servant in the game, but is hampered by Shirou being kinda incompetent and two of his Noble Phantasms being unusable in normal combat.
'''Archer''' (Master- Rin): Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka. The most powerful Ork Warboss in the 41st century.
'''Lancer''' (Master- Kirei): Trayzn the Infinte. A Necron Lord known for his love of history and penchant for collecting valuable artifacts.
'''Berserker''' (Master- Illya): Kharn the Betrayer. A champion of [[WarGod Khorne]], known for being so AxCrazy his fellow ax crazies don't want to get anywhere near him (his title is 'the betrayer' for a reason).
'''Caster''': Ahzek Ahriman, a sorcerer of the Thousand Sons traitor marine legion. Doubles as Avenger's Master.
'''Rider''' (Master- Sakura): Asdrubael Vect, leader of the Dark Eldar. OurElvesAreDifferent… ''[[ColdBloodedTorture very]]'' [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder different''.
'''Assassin''' (Master- Kariya): The Tyranid Swarmlord. A special bioform and the most dangerous Hive Tyrant in the biofleets.
'''Avenger''' (Master- Ahriman): Abbadon the Despoiler, influential Chaos warlord and leader of the Black Crusades. Also known as [[MemeticMutation Failbaddon the Harmless]] after screwing up a campaign.
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* AffablyEvil: Lancer aka [[spoiler: Trazyn the Infinite]], who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a 'welcoming gift' immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
** Rider aka [[spoiler: Asdrubael Vect]] also counts, graciously thanking Sakura for freeing his soul and promising her victory.
** Rider aka [[spoiler: Asdrubael Vect]] also counts, graciously thanking Sakura for freeing his soul and promising her victory.
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* AffablyEvil: Lancer aka [[spoiler: Trazyn the Infinite]], Infinite, who politely greets and thanks Kirei for providing him with a 'welcoming gift' immediately after his summoning. He stays polite and affable throughout the story thus far, and even lets people take pictures of him while claiming he's a cosplayer.
** Rider aka[[spoiler: Asdrubael Vect]] Vect also counts, graciously thanking Sakura for freeing his soul and promising her victory.
** Rider aka
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** Shinji disrespects [[MuggingTheMonster Asdrubael Vect]]. The next we hear of him, he's been flayed alive (and kept alive) while Vect drinks his tears. [[AssholeVictim Nobody really cares.]]
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** Shinji disrespects [[MuggingTheMonster Asdrubael Vect]]. The next we hear Vect]] (Leader of him, the Dark Eldar, a faction ''specializing'' in torture). Vect promptly makes Shinji his playtoy. His fate is left mostly unelaborated, but apparently he's been flayed alive (and kept alive) while learned the painful way that it ''is'' possible to live without your skin, and Vect drinks his tears. [[AssholeVictim Nobody really cares.]]tears at one point.
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* AdaptionalHeroism: Saber, after certain canon revelations. His alignment is given as LawfulGood and he genuinely cares about Shirou, [[spoiler: while the canon Emperor has been stated to be incapable of caring for individual humans (albeit by a potentially UnreliableNarrator)]].
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* AdaptionalHeroism: AdaptationalHeroism: Saber, after certain canon revelations. His alignment is given as LawfulGood and he genuinely cares about Shirou, [[spoiler: while the canon Emperor has been stated to be incapable of caring for individual humans (albeit by a potentially UnreliableNarrator)]].