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* BigNo: Jiraiya and Prince Gecko each deliver one in Chapter 6.
* BishieSparkle: Emeraldia, in chapter one. It's never mentioned again.
* BishieSparkle: Emeraldia, in chapter one. It's never mentioned again.
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* KillItWithWater: How Emeraldia defeats Gaara.
* MeaningfulFuneral: One is held for Might Guy.
* MeaningfulFuneral: One is held for Might Guy.
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* ParodySue: Emeraldia, certainly.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin
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* NiceHat: Gaara has a hat with him before he fights Emeraldia. It's green.
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* RapunzelHair: Emeraldia's "wast" length hair.
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* SoBeautifulItsACurse: Averted at first, which is odd considering the nature of the [[MarySue main character]] and the [[TrollFic story]]. Then Chapter 10 has Sasuke thinking this about himself.
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* SoBeautifulItsACurse: Averted at first, which is odd considering the nature of the [[MarySue main character]] character and the [[TrollFic story]]. Then Chapter 10 has Sasuke thinking this about himself.
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The story centres around [[MarySue Emeraldia Brightmoon]] who is said in a prophecy from Toad God is the only [[RougeAnglesOfSatin kunoch able to defet the Acutesushi]]. It gets worse from there. The plot, if there even is one, is mostly a RandomEventsPlot.
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The story centres around [[MarySue Emeraldia Brightmoon]] Brightmoon, who is said in a prophecy from Toad God is the only [[RougeAnglesOfSatin kunoch able to defet the Acutesushi]]. It gets worse from there. The plot, if there even is one, is mostly a RandomEventsPlot.
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* FreudianSlip: Any time "[[MarySue Sue]]" slips in, especially when Tsunade is talking to Emeraldia.
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* FreudianSlip: Any time "[[MarySue Sue]]" "Sue" slips in, especially when Tsunade is talking to Emeraldia.
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** Almost certainly. The character of Mary Sue speaking in perfect English and ''not'' being a MarySue despite being called Mary Sue indicates that the author knows what a Mary Sue is, therefore is almost definitely writing a parody.
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** Almost certainly. The character of Mary Sue speaking in perfect English and ''not'' being a MarySue that despite being called Mary Sue "Mary Sue" indicates that the author knows "knows" what a Mary Sue is, they are, therefore is almost definitely writing a parody.
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Frickin' Laser Beams entry amended in accordance with this Trope Repair Shop Thread
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.* EnergyWeapon:
** Both Dye and Sasori's puppet have the ability to shoot them.
** Itachi can shoot them from... his floor.
** Both Dye and Sasori's puppet have the ability to shoot them.
** Itachi can shoot them from... his floor.
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* FrickinLaserBeams:
** Both Dye and Sasori's puppet have the ability to shoot them.
** Itachi can shoot them from... his floor.
** Both Dye and Sasori's puppet have the ability to shoot them.
** Itachi can shoot them from... his floor.
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''Nareto: The Scret Of Shiobi'' is a FanFic by rosehokagegirlx47. It was originally posted on Fanfiction.net, but has since been taken down. Prior to that, it proved itself to be the MyImmortal of ''Manga/{{Naruto}}''. The fic ''was'' reposted, with further adventures for Emeraldia and friends, but was taken down again within mere days. You can read the whole thing [[https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7jNVBoDqsoja3lIcjRONUQwUWc/edit?usp=sharing here]].
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''Nareto: The Scret Of Shiobi'' is a FanFic by rosehokagegirlx47. It was originally posted on Fanfiction.net, but has since been taken down. Prior to that, it proved itself to be the MyImmortal ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' of ''Manga/{{Naruto}}''. The fic ''was'' reposted, with further adventures for Emeraldia and friends, but was taken down again within mere days. You can read the whole thing [[https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7jNVBoDqsoja3lIcjRONUQwUWc/edit?usp=sharing here]].
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Compare FanFic/MyImmortal and FanFic/StarkitsProphecy. Not to be confused with ''FanFic/NarutoTheSecretSongsOfTheNinja''.
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Compare FanFic/MyImmortal ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' and FanFic/StarkitsProphecy.''FanFic/StarkitsProphecy''. Not to be confused with ''FanFic/NarutoTheSecretSongsOfTheNinja''.
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** Gaara is almost never spelled correctly. The worst offender is probably in Chapter Fib when it's spelled as ''[[SuperMarioBros Mario]]''.
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** Gaara is almost never spelled correctly. The worst offender is probably in Chapter Fib when it's spelled as ''[[SuperMarioBros ''[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]]''.
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** And some of the spelling mistakes are just too perfect to be accidental. "Loin" instead of "lion" is almost acceptable, but "Acutesushi"? That could've been the Cupertino Effect if not for the fact that it's Acutesushi and not Acute Sushi. And the addition of completely random characters from other fandoms and a few real life people in the most recent chapters ([[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]], [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xemnas]], [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo Kurosaki]], the Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles, AdolfHitler, ComicBook/IronMan, Creator/TomHanks...)
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** And some of the spelling mistakes are just too perfect to be accidental. "Loin" instead of "lion" is almost acceptable, but "Acutesushi"? That could've been the Cupertino Effect if not for the fact that it's Acutesushi and not Acute Sushi. And the addition of completely random characters from other fandoms and a few real life people in the most recent chapters ([[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]], [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xemnas]], [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo Kurosaki]], the Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles, AdolfHitler, UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler, ComicBook/IronMan, Creator/TomHanks...)
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** Sasuke's name goes through a variety of ridiculous spellings like "Sa
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** Sasuke's name goes through a variety of ridiculous spellings like "Sa"Saske" and "Wasuke".
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* NiceHat: Gaara has a hat with him before he fights Emeraldia. It's green.
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''Nareto: The Scret Of Shiobi'' is a FanFic by rosehokagegirlx47. It was originally posted on Fanfiction.net, but has since been taken down. Prior to that, it proved itself to be the MyImmortal of ''Manga/{{Naruto}}''. The fic ''was'' reposted, with further adventures for Emeraldia and friends, but was taken down again within mere days.
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''Nareto: The Scret Of Shiobi'' is a FanFic by rosehokagegirlx47. It was originally posted on Fanfiction.net, but has since been taken down. Prior to that, it proved itself to be the MyImmortal of ''Manga/{{Naruto}}''. The fic ''was'' reposted, with further adventures for Emeraldia and friends, but was taken down again within mere days. \n You can read the whole thing [[https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7jNVBoDqsoja3lIcjRONUQwUWc/edit?usp=sharing here]].
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Compare FanFic/MyImmortal and FanFic/StarkitsProphecy. Not to be confused with ''NarutoTheSecretSongsOfTheNinja''.
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Compare FanFic/MyImmortal and FanFic/StarkitsProphecy. Not to be confused with ''NarutoTheSecretSongsOfTheNinja''.''FanFic/NarutoTheSecretSongsOfTheNinja''.
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Compare FanFic/MyImmortal and FanFic/StarkitsProphecy.
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Compare FanFic/MyImmortal and FanFic/StarkitsProphecy. Not to be confused with ''NarutoTheSecretSongsOfTheNinja''.
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** A gender-bent Mello from ''Manga/DeathNote'' makes an appearance, having once lived at "Wham Hose" until "Korey" burned it down. "[[TomHanks Tom Henks]]", ComicBook/IronMan, and "[[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Ful Meatl Alchromust]]" are in Konan's [[ArmiesAreEvil evil army]].
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** A gender-bent Mello from ''Manga/DeathNote'' makes an appearance, having once lived at "Wham Hose" until "Korey" burned it down. "[[TomHanks "[[Creator/TomHanks Tom Henks]]", ComicBook/IronMan, and "[[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Ful Meatl Alchromust]]" are in Konan's [[ArmiesAreEvil evil army]].
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** And some of the spelling mistakes are just too perfect to be accidental. "Loin" instead of "lion" is almost acceptable, but "Acutesushi"? That could've been the Cupertino Effect if not for the fact that it's Acutesushi and not Acute Sushi. And the addition of completely random characters from other fandoms and a few real life people in the most recent chapters ([[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]], [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xemnas]], [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo Kurosaki]], the Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles, AdolfHitler, ComicBook/IronMan, TomHanks...)
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** And some of the spelling mistakes are just too perfect to be accidental. "Loin" instead of "lion" is almost acceptable, but "Acutesushi"? That could've been the Cupertino Effect if not for the fact that it's Acutesushi and not Acute Sushi. And the addition of completely random characters from other fandoms and a few real life people in the most recent chapters ([[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]], [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xemnas]], [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo Kurosaki]], the Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles, AdolfHitler, ComicBook/IronMan, TomHanks...Creator/TomHanks...)
