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* DarkSecret: What happened at Carhaiz. The Rebellion's propaganda is that Phobos' forces were creating a new weapon, and they valiantly destroyed it. In truth, [[spoiler:Carhaiz was the nobility's attempt to create a society for the smallfolk free of being controlled by either Phobos or the rebels, who viewed such a hope as a detriment to their goals, so they slaughtered the village.]]

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** The first epilogue chapter reveals that a thousand years ago, something was done on Meridian to secure peace that was so terrible, only the council of Kandrakar and the Escanor Queens have been allowed to know about it, all of whom have treated it in a IDidWhatIHadToDo sort of way. [[spoiler: Jonathan Ludmoore learned of this and was banished to Earth, under a curse that kept him from speaking of it to anyone, in order to keep him quiet. This is the origin of his family's grudge against Kandrakar.
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* DealWithTheDevil: As shown in the Ludmoore family's OriginsEpisode, [[spoiler: Jonathan Ludmoore's reaction to being banished to Earth by the Oracle was to cut a deal with Mab, [[LastOfHisKind last of a bloodline]] of shapeshifters that Kandrakar drove off of Meridian -- she agreed to marry his son and pass her powers down through his descendants, in order to grant them a chance for eventual revenge against Kandrakar.]]



** As we see in the first epilogue chapter's OriginsEpisode about the Ludmoore family, [[spoiler: Jonathan Ludmoore was cursed to be unable to speak of the DarkSecret he learned without the person he speaks it to instantly dying. However, that's only if he ''speaks'' it; writing it down for someone to read is another matter]].



* LongGame: The Ludmoore family has been plotting against Meridian for a long time.

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* LongGame: The Ludmoore family has been plotting against Meridian for two hundred years, ever since [[spoiler: their ancestor Jonathan Ludmoore was banished to Earth for learning a long time.DarkSecret that Kandrakar and the Escanor family wanted to keep buried]].
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* SpiritualAntithesis: According to the author of ''Fanfic/JWITCHSeason1'', his story was inspired by ''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters''. Both stories are similar, with them both being ''WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures''/ ''WesternAnimation/{{WITCH}}'' crossovers where the characters are put in more realistic situations. However, both stories go in different directions at multiple points.
** Both stories are {{Fusion Fic}}s, but ''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'' is more of a [[MergedReality literal example]] where the Book of Ages fuses the two shows' realities together, while ''J-WITCH Season 1'''s world is shown to have always been as it is.
** ''J-WITCH Season 1'' is mostly LighterAndSofter, though at some times showing dark and realistic moments. Meanwhile, ''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'' is completely DarkerAndEdgier, with more dark moments as the characters deal with [[WarIsHell the horrors of war]] and [[TheseHandsHaveKilled killing]].
** In ''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'', Prince Phobos was given AdaptationalVillainy, having murdered his parents, and is a selfish power-hungry tyrant, while in ''J-WITCH Season 1'' he's given AdaptationalHeroism, genuinely caring for his sister, being a KnightTemplar at worst, and was actually framed for his parents' murder.
** The nobility of Meridian had a big role in ''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'', while in ''J-WITCH Season 1'' no nobility was shown, because according to the author, there is no nobility in Meridian in his story.
** Irma Lair and Jade Chan start a [[AdaptationalSexuality relationship]] in ''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'', while they stay just friends in ''J-WITCH Season 1''.
** Jade gets [[AdaptationalBadass different powers]] in each story. In ''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'', she [[spoiler: becomes a [[CanisMajor wolf]] Shapeshifter and gains BloodMagic]], which is fitting the overall darker tone. In ''J-WITCH Season 1'', she instead [[spoiler: becomes a [[SixthRanger sixth Guardian]]]], which is TruerToTheText.
** The ending to both stories' Season 1 storyline contrasts each other with a similar but different event that [[ForWantOfANail will fundamentally change their Season 2]]. The end of this story in ''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'' featured [[spoiler: the death of Phobos]] while the ended of ''J-WITCH Season 1'' has [[spoiler: the death of Cedric]].

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* AntiMagic: The Ben Shui Chosen One can cancel out Chi Magic in the surrounding area.

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* {{Doorstopper}}: As of this writing, this story is over 657,000 words long.

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** In Chapter 29, Mariko and Liam show up to claim [[spoiler: Ikazuki's mask]] from the heroes. Since they're disguising their identities won't properly explain themselves, the heroes assume that they're villains who want [[spoiler: the mask]] for themselves, when they really want to destroy it. This leads to a brief fight, that ends when Mariko's disguise is knocked off and she and Liam flee.

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** In Chapter 29, Mariko and Liam show up to claim [[spoiler: Ikazuki's mask]] from the heroes. Since they're disguising their identities and won't properly explain themselves, the heroes assume that they're villains who want [[spoiler: the mask]] for themselves, when they really want to destroy it. This leads to a brief fight, that ends when Mariko's disguise is knocked off and she and Liam flee.

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* AbsenceOfEvidence: [[spoiler: Captain Black and Agent Tag realize that Harold Hale's established backstory is fake, because no one recalls having known him during the time he claims he was at school, nor does anyone who should have known his parents remember ever meeting them either.]]



** [[spoiler:Lothar loses the lower half of his left leg during the FinalBattle between the Rebellion and Phobos' forces.]]



* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler: After waking from his Oni Mask-induced coma, Aldarn leaves the Rebellion to [[WalkingTheEarth wander Meridian]] in order to try and learn to let go of his hatred for the nobles.]]



** At one point during the big fight in Chapter 32, Will jabs her thumb into Phobos' eye. It doesn't destroy the eye, but does make it bleed.

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* FacialHorror: After Phobos [[spoiler: kills Uncle]], Jade slashes his face, destroying his left eye, removing his nose, and taking a chunk out of his right cheek.


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* KeystoneArmy: [[spoiler: When the stolen Heart of Meridian is returned to Elyon, the Whisperer army that Phobos conjured with it all disintegrate.]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Count Cornelius and Uncle]] die during the FinalBattle of the Rebellion, while [[spoiler: Phobos]] dies of his injuries shortly after.


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** [[spoiler: After Phobos is defeated, the Guard all lay down their weapons and surrender to the Rebellion.]]


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* SequelHook: The story's version of Season 1 ends with various loose threads: [[spoiler: Captain Black beginning a secret investigation into the Dark Hand's infiltration of Section 13, the Dark Hand preparing some kind of magical WMD, Nerissa and Ludmoore both plotting the next steps in their respective plans, the Cavalcade of Horrors and their Master preparing for the culmination of their own plan, and a grieving Jade leaving Earth for Meridian.]]


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** [[spoiler: Phobos' death]] is a downplayed example for Nerissa, as it catches her off guard, but she quickly reevaluates her plans for the Knights of Vengeance by [[spoiler: driving them to avenge Phobos instead of freeing him]].


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* VengeanceDenied: Jade wants to kill Phobos for [[spoiler: killing Uncle]], but is prevented from doing so by the {{realpolitik}} of the Rebellion's post-victory plans. [[spoiler: And then he dies of his injuries before she can get at him.]]
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* FascistButInefficient: This is what has become of Prince Phobos' regime, in that he's too self centered to realize that the people rebelling against him have justified reasons to, and that the nobility and his own men are attempting to distance whatever authority they can get away from him. His guards even make it a point to protect the people first and not him. That being said, there are still good people in his army who will fight the rebels, who have committed crimes that must be punished.
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* NotSoSimilar: Yan Lin eventually realizes that for all her worries about Will and Jade being NotSoDifferent from Nerissa, they still have their compassion, which Nerissa lost.

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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: The Tracker is ''pissed'' when the heroes manage to defeat [[spoiler: Ikazuki]] before he can.



* RealityEnsues:
** WarIsHell is in full effect, and it's made clear that people on both sides of the fight ''have'' died.
** There are good and bad people on both sides of the fight.
** Jade encounters a soldier she attacked when sneaking into Torus Finley, and the PTSD from it, and well as injuries that weren't treated as well as she thought, have left him a shell of his former self.
** Phobos' tendencies towards being a BadBoss really come back to bite him on the ass, eventually turning ''his entire court'' against him. Even those who don't start actively plotting against him, like Lothar, end up distancing themselves from him, instead becoming as focused on protecting the civilian population from his cruelty as they are on fighting the Rebellion.
** As Servantis reveals in Chapter 13, during her reign Queen Weira did something unheard of -- she gave some commoners, some village chiefs and mayors, rule over the others. It wasn't an overly complicated idea; just give the commoners an authority of their own in order to make them feel empowered and take some responsibilities from the nobles, an intermediary between them and the smallfolk. Servantis even admits that it wasn't that bad an idea in principle, but then goes on to explain that suddenly being given all that power corrupted some of the selected leaders, leading to them staging a small revolution and killing some nobles before being put down. Afterwards, the smallfolk blamed the nobles just for defending themselves, which only heightened tensions more.
** After fleeing from her calling out, Elyon has to stop several times on her way back to the capital, both from the simple fact that she only recently developed her flying abilities and has some trouble maintaining control, as well as having only a vague idea of where she has to go.
** [[spoiler: Phobos agrees to let Elyon see her imprisoned adoptive parents in part because he's confident that he can just put a spell on them so they say whatever he wants them to.]]
** While her initial reaction is to cling to denial and flee, having time to think about [[spoiler: Alchemy]] and the others said about her selfishness and Phobos' evil means that it actually starts to get through to her.



* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** WarIsHell is in full effect, and it's made clear that people on both sides of the fight ''have'' died.
** There are good and bad people on both sides of the fight.
** Jade encounters a soldier she attacked when sneaking into Torus Finley, and the PTSD from it, and well as injuries that weren't treated as well as she thought, have left him a shell of his former self.
** Phobos' tendencies towards being a BadBoss really come back to bite him on the ass, eventually turning ''his entire court'' against him. Even those who don't start actively plotting against him, like Lothar, end up distancing themselves from him, instead becoming as focused on protecting the civilian population from his cruelty as they are on fighting the Rebellion.
** As Servantis reveals in Chapter 13, during her reign Queen Weira did something unheard of -- she gave some commoners, some village chiefs and mayors, rule over the others. It wasn't an overly complicated idea; just give the commoners an authority of their own in order to make them feel empowered and take some responsibilities from the nobles, an intermediary between them and the smallfolk. Servantis even admits that it wasn't that bad an idea in principle, but then goes on to explain that suddenly being given all that power corrupted some of the selected leaders, leading to them staging a small revolution and killing some nobles before being put down. Afterwards, the smallfolk blamed the nobles just for defending themselves, which only heightened tensions more.
** After fleeing from her calling out, Elyon has to stop several times on her way back to the capital, both from the simple fact that she only recently developed her flying abilities and has some trouble maintaining control, as well as having only a vague idea of where she has to go.
** [[spoiler: Phobos agrees to let Elyon see her imprisoned adoptive parents in part because he's confident that he can just put a spell on them so they say whatever he wants them to.]]
** While her initial reaction is to cling to denial and flee, having time to think about [[spoiler: Alchemy]] and the others said about her selfishness and Phobos' evil means that it actually starts to get through to her.



* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: The Tracker is ''pissed'' when the heroes manage to defeat [[spoiler: Ikazuki]] before he can.

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* HatedByAll: Phobos, with everyone -- the Rebellion, the commoners, and even his own minions -- all hating him.



* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Phobos, with everyone -- the Rebellion, the commoners, and even his own minions -- all hating him.

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** At one point during the big fight in Chapter 32, Will jabs her thumb into Phobos' eye. It doesn't destroy the eye, but does make it bleed.



* FamilyThemeNaming: All the Ludmoore brothers have names that start with a "C". It also turns out that their father did, too.

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* HeroKiller: [[spoiler: Phobos kills Uncle in Chapter 32.]]

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* HomeFieldAdvantage: A Heart's power is apparently significantly enhanced when the bearer of the Heart is on its native world.



** [[spoiler:In the original comics the Whisperers were humanoid {{Mooks}} created by Phobos, Caleb being one that developed free will. Once Phobos gets the power of the Heart of Meridian, he turns the Whisperers into humanoid beings with BarbieDollAnatomy and [[{{Narcissist}} his face]].]]



* RealityWarper: [[spoiler:As Phobos shows once he gets Elyon's power]], when on the world their Heart is from, the bearer of a Heart can create, reshape, and destroy matter, twist gavity, warp space, and stop time.



* Chapter 32: [[spoiler: Phobos transforms the Whisperers into new {{Mooks}} and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness unleashes them on the Guards]], leading to an EnemyMine between them and the Rebellion. Drake/Cyrus shapeshifts into his Beast form to join the fight. Nerissa intervenes to take Roberta out of the fight. Caleb overuses the Sword of Thanatos for the fight, and is fully corrupted by it. And the chapter ends with [[HeroKiller Phobos killing Uncle]].]]

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** [[spoiler:Uncle's arm is vaporized by his final attack on Phobos.]]



* ColonyDrop: In Chapter 32, [[spoiler: Phobos drags a meteor out of space to drop on the capital; while the Guardians are distracted trying to break it up, he takes advantage to attack them. This leaves the remaining meteor pieces big enough to still devastate the city.]]



** In Chapter 32, [[spoiler: a newly Heart-empowered Phobos decides he [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness doesn't need the Guards anymore]], so transforms the Whisperers into humanoid {{Mooks}} and has them attack Lothar's men]].



** In Chapter 32, [[spoiler: the Rebellion and Guard team up against the transformed Whisperers (and Phobos, by extension)]].



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* NotSoInvincibleAfterAll: After [[spoiler: stealing Elyon's powers]], Phobos seems unstoppable. However, as the narration notes, all that power doesn't stop him from being made from flesh and bone that can still be injured by the Guardians if they actually manage to land blows.



** The Lurdens flee the castle upon feeling [[spoiler: the shockwaves from Phobos stealing Elyon's powers]], while Frost likewise takes off after the chaos of [[spoiler: the Guard fighting Phobos' Whisperers]] becomes too much for him.



* VillainousBreakdown: As noted elsewhere, Phobos was already insane by the time the story started, but he was at least functional. Following [[spoiler: Wong's failed coup]], however, he completely loses it, to the point he appears to be hearing voices.

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* VillainousBreakdown: As noted elsewhere, Phobos was already insane by the time the story started, but he was at least functional. Following [[spoiler: Wong's failed coup]], however, he completely loses it, to the point he appears to be starts hearing voices.voices. Even then, he manages to maintain some semblance of self-control, until [[spoiler: stealing the Heart of Meridian]], at which point that all goes out the window and leaves him a raving lunatic.


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* LightIsNotGood: [[spoiler:After Phobos steals Elyon's powers, he's glowing so brightly that it's almost blinding, yet he's still pure evil.]]
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* {{Doorstopper}}: As of this writing, this story is almost 630,000 words long.

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* AgonyOfTheFeet: Count Cornelius loses half his foot during the Battle of the Meridian Plains.



* EliteMooks: The heavily armed and armored knights known as "Shields" who serve as Viscount Servantis' chief soldiers.

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** Archduchess Sebille's personal cadre of swordsmen from Blackrock Island. Will notes that while other Meridian warriors train only enough to have a worthwhile skill, this group has dedicated their lives to combat.



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* {{Fingore}}: Vathek loses several fingers during the Battle of the Meridian Plains.



* AGodAmI: Phobos declares himself a god in Chapter 31 [[spoiler: after stealing Elyon's power]]. To be fair, [[PhysicalGod he's got reason to]].
** [[spoiler:Nerissa expresses a desire to become a goddess and rule over the Known Worlds.]]

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** Archduchess Sebille's sword skills and sheer strength allows her to go up against Will and Jade at the same time.



* YouCantThwartStageOne: Apparently [[spoiler:Nimue]] has fought groups trying to unseal Nihila over twenty times throughout the past 600 years, and every time the incantation is completed and the sorceress unsealed before being defeated and sealed again.
** [[spoiler:The heroes are unable to stop Phobos from stealing Elyon's powers]].
* YouExclamation: Tristan in Chapter 26, when he finds several of the Chan Clan and Guardians in Elyon's bedroom.

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** [[spoiler:The heroes are unable to stop Phobos from stealing Elyon's powers]].
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* YouExclamation: Tristan in Chapter 26, when he finds several of the Chan Clan and Guardians in Elyon's bedroom. And then again when he encounters [[spoiler: Julian]] in the castle in Chapter 31.
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* BrandishmentBluff: [[spoiler:After the Nobles surrender, Jade demonstrates the ability to use her BloodMagic to affect ''their'' blood, even while still in their bodies, causing them extreme pain, because she tricked them into ingesting it. She then tells them that if they step out of line after Phobos is defeated, she can kill them wherever they are. In reality, she doesn't have ''nearly'' that large a range with it, but they don't realize it or wish to try and call her bluff.]]


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** [[spoiler:Caleb forbade Julian from participating in Rebellion activities, but he follows the group heading to the castle for the final battle against Phobos's forces because not a single one of them was technically a Rebellion member.]]


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** [[spoiler:Archduchess Sebille considers Will this after she surrenders, vowing to make sure that history remembers the Heart Keeper's name after she made them yield twice in a single day, if just to serve as a warning to Kandrakar's might.]]


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* AndThenWhat: His conversation with Servantis in Chapter 13 leads Caleb to realize that he has no idea what would happen if the Rebellion wins the war, since Elyon isn't around to stick in charge.

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** Jackie asks this of Tristan in Chapter 31 regarding his vendetta against the Rebellion for what happened at Carhaiz, pointing out that sooner or later he's going to run out of legitimately guilty people and start harming the innocent. [[spoiler: This is enough to talk Tristan down.]]



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** After winning the Battle of the Meridian Plains, [[spoiler: the Rebellion allows the remaining noble leaders to live, as the new regime will need them to maintain order in their territories]].



* CavalryBetrayal: During the Battle of the Meridian Plains, [[spoiler: Viceroy Khenel's cavalry forces arrive, but rather than supporting his supposed allies in the nobility, attacks them for the Rebellion]].



* AGodAmI: Phobos declares himself a god in Chapter 31 [[spoiler: after stealing Elyon's power]]. To be fair, [[PhysicalGod he's got reason to]].



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** In Chapter 31, [[spoiler: Elyon's is horrified when she realizes that Phobos is indeed the monster she was warned about, and that she was indeed wrong to leave Earth for him]].



* SuperweaponSurprise: [[spoiler: The rebels buy guns from Ludmoore, giving them an edge at Torus Filney.]]

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* WhamLine: Near the end of Chapter 21, Alborn and Miriadel are locked up in Cavigor's lowest level, and realize there's someone else in the cell opposite theirs. After a few minutes of conversation, he gives his name: [[spoiler:Drago]].

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''Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'' is a ''WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures''/''WesternAnimation/{{WITCH}}'' crossover fic by [=wondertown9=].

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''Guardians, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12386253/1/Guardians-Wizards-and-Kung-Fu-fighters Guardians, Wizards, and Kung-Fu Fighters'' Fighters]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures''/''WesternAnimation/{{WITCH}}'' crossover fic by [=wondertown9=].



It is ongoing, and can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12386253/1/Guardians-Wizards-and-Kung-Fu-fighters here]].



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** When the girls are making a snowman, Jade specifically says that she's not going to call it "[[Disney/{{Frozen}} Olaf]]".

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** Tharquin is a racial purist intent on [[FinalSolution wiping out shapeshifters]]. Every scene with him in it only serves to establish him as a nasty piece of work.
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* MomentOfWeakness: What led to the events at Carhaiz: [[spoiler: Julian recognized that the village's neutrality could set a precedent for others to do the same, undermining the Rebellion's efforts. So when some of his men suggest destroying the village, he lets them convince him to do so, leading to the destruction of Carhaiz and murder of its population, to Julian's horror and regret.]]


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* SmallRoleBigImpact: A minor background character, who shows up in a single flashback and isn't even named, ends up shaping a lot of the backstory. [[spoiler: One of Julian's men convinces him to destroy Carhaiz, which leads to Julian being captured, Caleb having the responsibility of leading the Rebellion forced onto him, and laying the groundwork for Tristan becoming a servant of Phobos.]]
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* GreyingMorality: One of the goals of the story is to do this for both shows.

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* GreyingMorality: GrayingMorality: One of the goals of the story is to do this for both shows.
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* TheMagicComesBack: The Heart of Earth has been absent for a long time, and even before that magic was on the downswing on Earth. But now magic is returning to the planet, multiple factions are experimenting with {{Magitek}}, and [[spoiler: the Dark Hand is manipulating governments to take up magic]].

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* TheMagicComesBack: The Heart of Earth has been absent for a long time, and even before that magic was on the downswing on Earth. But now magic is returning to the planet, it's implied that the Heart has found a new host, multiple factions are experimenting with {{Magitek}}, and [[spoiler: the Dark Hand is manipulating governments to take up magic]].
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* {{Doorstopper}}: As of this writing, this story is almost 630,000 words long.

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* AllTherapistsAreMuggles: When Alchemy suggests that Hay Lin see a therapist about her nightmares from the Torus Filney battle, Cornelia points out that they can't exactly tell them about the magic stuff without sounding insane or breaking the secrecy of magic.

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* AllTherapistsAreMuggles: When Alchemy [[spoiler: Alchemy]] suggests that Hay Lin see a therapist about her nightmares from the Torus Filney battle, Cornelia points out that they can't exactly tell them about the magic stuff without sounding insane or breaking the secrecy of magic.



* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: The Cavalcade of Horrors prevent Tarakudo from killing [[spoiler:Nimue]] because their master's plan requires her to still be alive for now. And he's given a warning that the same applies to Jade.

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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: CantKillYouStillNeedYou:
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The Cavalcade of Horrors prevent Tarakudo from killing [[spoiler:Nimue]] because their master's plan requires her to still be alive for now. And he's given a warning that the same applies to Jade.Jade.
** [[spoiler: Cedric's intel is the main reason that the Rebellion keeps him alive after his capture]].



** [[spoiler: Cedric's intel is the main reason that the Rebellion keeps him alive after his capture]].



** Caleb can't help but laugh at the bitter irony that he spent years hating Raythor for killing his father, when it turns out that Raythor actually gave the orders to ''spare'' Julian when he was captured.



* TheMagicComesBack: The Heart of Earth has been absent for a long time, and even before that magic was on the downswing on Earth. But now magic is returning to the planet, multiple factions are experimenting with {{Magitek}}, and [[spoiler: The Dark Hand is manipulating governments to take up magic]].

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* TheMagicComesBack: The Heart of Earth has been absent for a long time, and even before that magic was on the downswing on Earth. But now magic is returning to the planet, multiple factions are experimenting with {{Magitek}}, and [[spoiler: The the Dark Hand is manipulating governments to take up magic]].


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** As shown in flashback, [[spoiler: this was Julian's reaction when the raid on Carhaiz he ordered turned into a mindless slaughter]].


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* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Hay Lin has a recurring dream about various bizarre figures (representing the villains in the GambitPileup) fighting over the right to feast on a woman (representing Meridian). [[spoiler: The Master of the Cavalcade eventually intervenes to stop these dreams, before she sees something she shouldn't.]]

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* AllTherapistsAreMuggles: When Alchemy suggests that Hay Lin see a therapist about her nightmares from the Torus Filney battle, Cornelia points out that they can't exactly tell them about the magic stuff without sounding insane or breaking the secrecy of magic.



** Chapter 30, similarly, follows up on some previous events, and while some serious plot points get addressed, it's mainly about giving the characters room to breathe before the three-part climax of the first "season" of the story.



* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: Caleb calls Julian out about Carhaiz and the other failures of the Rebellion in chapter 30]].



** [[spoiler: Cedric's intel is the main reason that the Rebellion keeps him alive after his capture]].



** Irma makes a "joke" about using training, in the form of shooting water balls at Jade, as an excuse to see her in a wet t-shirt.



** [[spoiler: Julian ''did'' order the attack on Carhaiz, but it wasn't his idea, and he actually fought his ''own men'' when they defied his orders and started slaughtering civilians]].



* IDontWantToRuinOurFriendship: [[spoiler: Jade brings the possibility of this up when she and Irma ''finally'' admit that they like each other, and they ultimately decide to stay as friends until the war is over and take things slowly]].



* TheMagicComesBack: The Heart of Earth has been absent for a long time, and even before that magic was on the downswing on Earth. But now magic is returning to the planet, multiple factions are experimenting with {{Magitek}}, and [[spoiler: The Dark Hand is manipulating governments to take up magic]].



* MagiTek: Chapter 27 reveals that the Dark Hand has developed laser guns powered by Celtic rune stones.

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* MagiTek: Chapter 27 reveals that the Dark Hand has developed laser guns powered by Celtic rune stones. In chapter 30, Section 13 has made progress in reverse-engineering them and applying the principle to other technology, and it's stated that they could have near limitless clean energy via this method.



** There's been hints of chemistry between Jade and Irma as well.

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** There's been hints of chemistry between Jade and Irma as well. [[spoiler: They eventually admit that they like each other, but decide to wait until after the war to do anything serious]].
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* HotSkittyOnWailordAction: [[spoiler: When Jade learns that Drago is Shendu's son, this is her reaction once she realizes that his mother must have been human, and his dad the twenty-foot or so Demon Sorcerer. Cornelia has a similar reaction when Jade clues her in on Drago's identity.]]

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* HotSkittyOnWailordAction: [[spoiler: When Jade learns that Drago is Shendu's son, this is her she has a disgusted reaction once she realizes that his mother must have been human, and his dad the twenty-foot or so Demon Sorcerer. Cornelia has a similar reaction when Jade clues her in on Drago's identity.]]
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-->''"Why are we demons called demons? Because in a one on one battle, a regular human cannot hope to defeat one of us, and as such demons are demons and humans are humans. Then, how do you refer to a human that can kill demons? As a saint, a hero, an angel, a god? Perhaps, that human has just become a stronger demon."''

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-->''"Why --->''"Why are we demons called demons? Because in a one on one battle, a regular human cannot hope to defeat one of us, and as such demons are demons and humans are humans. Then, how do you refer to a human that can kill demons? As a saint, a hero, an angel, a god? Perhaps, that human has just become a stronger demon."''



--> '''Lothar''': [[spoiler:Each guard in the palace, take them out to the city; reinforce the patrols that take care of thieving and crime, and leave them there. If the Capital is attacked, tell them to fight to the end. If the Castle is attacked...tell them to ignore it. The prince won't care for us? Fine, I won't care for him. Our duty is to Meridian and the Crown, and whatever is in that throne room, it's not part of this world and it doesn't deserve a crown. I'm done putting the lives of good men, men with families...at risk just to satisfy a self-entitled brat.]]

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--> ---> '''Lothar''': [[spoiler:Each guard in the palace, take them out to the city; reinforce the patrols that take care of thieving and crime, and leave them there. If the Capital is attacked, tell them to fight to the end. If the Castle is attacked...tell them to ignore it. The prince won't care for us? Fine, I won't care for him. Our duty is to Meridian and the Crown, and whatever is in that throne room, it's not part of this world and it doesn't deserve a crown. I'm done putting the lives of good men, men with families...at risk just to satisfy a self-entitled brat.]]



-->[[spoiler:'''Harold''']]: Do you think I have never met with men like you before? Men that only see one side of the coin, thinking that life is some kind of heroic tale and that everyone in it can be reduced to a stereotype. Do you know why I was able to take you here so easily? Because you didn’t imagine that someone that has a family like you, that has daughters and loves them as much as you love that niece, could be related to something as the Dark Hand. Because men like you can only think in black and white.

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-->[[spoiler:'''Harold''']]: --->[[spoiler:'''Harold''']]: Do you think I have never met with men like you before? Men that only see one side of the coin, thinking that life is some kind of heroic tale and that everyone in it can be reduced to a stereotype. Do you know why I was able to take you here so easily? Because you didn’t imagine that someone that has a family like you, that has daughters and loves them as much as you love that niece, could be related to something as the Dark Hand. Because men like you can only think in black and white.



-->[[spoiler:'''Alchemy''']]: I said that if you think that, you're just ''selfish''. I came here to talk to you, to understand why you did what you did, disappearing overnight and leaving for another world. And what's the big reason? You want to be special. You want to be a Princess. That's it. Do you know that the reason Cornelia acted so pettily all those years was because she felt she needed to be perfect 24/7? Do you know her father was [[spoiler: part of a criminal organization]]? Do you know how guilty she feels for what's happened with you? Do you know that all those times she couldn't be with us, she was fighting, ''risking her life'' in this war? And that's ''just'' Cornelia. The girls have seen innocent people die before their very eyes! Will's been forced to do a bunch of horrible things to make the Rebellion win battles! Jade's [[spoiler: got a bunch of scars on her back from some madman trying to kill her]], for the love of God! Do you know how much all of our friends have been through while we were safe on Earth?! No, of course you don't. Because you're happy here, playing Princess and getting the attention you think you always deserved. That's being ''selfish'', Elyon. And I'm not going to bite my tongue and don't call it what it is.

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-->[[spoiler:'''Alchemy''']]: --->[[spoiler:'''Alchemy''']]: I said that if you think that, you're just ''selfish''. I came here to talk to you, to understand why you did what you did, disappearing overnight and leaving for another world. And what's the big reason? You want to be special. You want to be a Princess. That's it. Do you know that the reason Cornelia acted so pettily all those years was because she felt she needed to be perfect 24/7? Do you know her father was [[spoiler: part of a criminal organization]]? Do you know how guilty she feels for what's happened with you? Do you know that all those times she couldn't be with us, she was fighting, ''risking her life'' in this war? And that's ''just'' Cornelia. The girls have seen innocent people die before their very eyes! Will's been forced to do a bunch of horrible things to make the Rebellion win battles! Jade's [[spoiler: got a bunch of scars on her back from some madman trying to kill her]], for the love of God! Do you know how much all of our friends have been through while we were safe on Earth?! No, of course you don't. Because you're happy here, playing Princess and getting the attention you think you always deserved. That's being ''selfish'', Elyon. And I'm not going to bite my tongue and don't call it what it is.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: Elyon certainly seems to believe so, especially when she gets to be one and have all the perks that come with the role.
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** Shapeshifters have a notable HealingFactoru, ''especially'' reptiliam ones like Cedric, who can heal from wounds almost istantly.
** [[spoiler: Uncle's plan during his duel with Ikazuki is to use the Horse Talisman's healing powers to keep up with the Oni]].

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** Shapeshifters have a notable HealingFactoru, HealingFactor, ''especially'' reptiliam reptilian ones like Cedric, who can heal from wounds almost istantly.
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** [[spoiler: Uncle's plan during his duel with Ikazuki is to use the Horse Talisman's healing powers to keep up with the Oni]].Oni.]]

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