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** Izuku's surname wasn't originally Midoriya in this story and he changed it while trying to cover his tracks; [[spoiler: it was [[RelatedInAdaptation Shimura]]]]. Furthermore, instead of Deku, he chooses [[MeaningfulName Lotus]] as his Hero Name.
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** Izuku's surname wasn't originally Midoriya in this story and he changed it while trying to cover his tracks; [[spoiler: it was [[RelatedInAdaptation [[RelatedInTheAdaptation Shimura]]]]. Furthermore, instead of Deku, he chooses [[MeaningfulName Lotus]] as his Hero Name.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: After Izuku makes the new for helping take down Stain, Bakugou yells at him for fighting a serial killer the moment he takes his eyes off the boy.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: After Izuku makes the new news for helping take down Stain, Bakugou yells at him for fighting a serial killer the moment he takes his eyes off the boy.
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*** [[spoiler:After learning how much of a {{Jerkass}} Sir Nighteye was to Izuku, Inko proceeded to give the Hero an ArmorPiercingSlap that forces him to sit down from the pain.]]
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*** [[spoiler:After learning how much of a {{Jerkass}} Sir Nighteye was to Izuku, Inko proceeded to give the Hero an ArmorPiercingSlap a slap that forces him to sit down from the pain.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:In the original plans for the fic before it was dropped, ''Hawks'' would have been killed by All For One during an attempt to rescue Izuku from him, having his [[TorsoWithAView chest blown open]] while trying to protect Mirko.]]
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* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:In the original plans for the fic before its abandonment, the fic would end with Izuku and Inko taking on Nana's name "Shimura" instead of "Midoriya", representing how they no longer have to run and are finally free from All For One.]]
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Even though Inko knows her husband's minions are all villains, she still feels guilty working against them since she remembers being friends with them before she and Izuku fled.
** Sir Nighteye's and Gran Torino's tormenting of Izuku in hopes of proving he's All For One's son is noticed by the rest of Sir Nighteye's agency. And since they haven't been told why the two are constantly beating up the new intern, they're all seriously concerned with the pair's actions. [[spoiler: When All Might finds out from Mirio, he has Sir's teaching license revoked, and Mirio transfers to a different agency]].
** All Might explicitly says that Nighteye and Gran Torino's "investigation" of Izuku would never hold up in court, as they are mostly working off suspicion and are attempting to beat the truth out of a suspect, which is illegal.
** Even though Inko knows her husband's minions are all villains, she still feels guilty working against them since she remembers being friends with them before she and Izuku fled.
** Sir Nighteye's and Gran Torino's tormenting of Izuku in hopes of proving he's All For One's son is noticed by the rest of Sir Nighteye's agency. And since they haven't been told why the two are constantly beating up the new intern, they're all seriously concerned with the pair's actions. [[spoiler: When All Might finds out from Mirio, he has Sir's teaching license revoked, and Mirio transfers to a different agency]].
** All Might explicitly says that Nighteye and Gran Torino's "investigation" of Izuku would never hold up in court, as they are mostly working off suspicion and are attempting to beat the truth out of a suspect, which is illegal.
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* PragmaticVillainy: [[spoiler:All for One calls out Overhaul for [[ColdBloodedTorture torturing Eri]] to get her blood and cells needed for his Quirk-erasing bullets and {{abusi|veParents}}ing her in general, citing a more practical way to get her genetic material as well as pointing out that someone with a Quirk as powerful as Eri's should be trained to use it more efficiently.]]
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* PragmaticVillainy: [[spoiler:All for One calls out Overhaul for [[ColdBloodedTorture torturing Eri]] to get her blood and cells needed for his Quirk-erasing bullets and {{abusi|veParents}}ing {{abusi|veParents}}ng her in general, citing a more practical way to get her genetic material as well as pointing out that someone with a Quirk as powerful as Eri's should be trained to use it more efficiently.]]
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* SuperweaponSurprise: [[spoiler:During the fight between All Might and All for One, Izuku jumps in and uses the one Quirk All For One doesn't know he has: Overhaul.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:All Might gives one to Sir Nighteye and Gran Torino for beating a child just because he resembles All For One]].
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* WhatTheHellHero: WhatTheHellHero:
** [[spoiler:All Might gives one to Sir Nighteye and Gran Torino for beating a child just because he resembles All ForOne]].One]].
** In the notes about the planned future events (before the fic became cancelled), this happens three times:
*** [[spoiler:Bakugo calls out the teachers for not saying anything in defense of Izuku (who is being accused of being a villain by other heroes on TV), because it doesn't matter if they are planning to rescue Izuku, staying silent is as good as saying they agree with the accusations.]]
*** [[spoiler:When All Might and Gran Torino learn that Inko is Nana Shimura's daughter, they react quite quickly. Inko acidly replies that they sure changed their tune after finding out she is related to a former hero.]]
*** [[spoiler:After learning how much of a {{Jerkass}} Sir Nighteye was to Izuku, Inko proceeded to give the Hero an ArmorPiercingSlap that forces him to sit down from the pain.]]
** [[spoiler:All Might gives one to Sir Nighteye and Gran Torino for beating a child just because he resembles All For
** In the notes about the planned future events (before the fic became cancelled), this happens three times:
*** [[spoiler:Bakugo calls out the teachers for not saying anything in defense of Izuku (who is being accused of being a villain by other heroes on TV), because it doesn't matter if they are planning to rescue Izuku, staying silent is as good as saying they agree with the accusations.]]
*** [[spoiler:When All Might and Gran Torino learn that Inko is Nana Shimura's daughter, they react quite quickly. Inko acidly replies that they sure changed their tune after finding out she is related to a former hero.]]
*** [[spoiler:After learning how much of a {{Jerkass}} Sir Nighteye was to Izuku, Inko proceeded to give the Hero an ArmorPiercingSlap that forces him to sit down from the pain.]]
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: [[spoiler:Mirio reassures Izuku that he'll be a magnificent hero after learning the broad strokes of why Izuku has multiple Quirks]].
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: [[spoiler:Mirio reassures Izuku that he'll be a magnificent hero after learning the broad strokes of why Izuku has multiple Quirks]].Quirks.]]
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* RealityEnsues:
** Even though Inko knows her husband's minions are all villains, she still feels guilty working against them since she remembers being friends with them before she and Izuku fled.
** Sir Nighteye's and Gran Torino's tormenting of Izuku in hopes of proving he's All For One's son is noticed by the rest of Sir Nighteye's agency. And since they haven't been told why the two are constantly beating up the new intern, they're all seriously concerned with the pair's actions. [[spoiler: When All Might finds out from Mirio, he has Sir's teaching license revoked, and Mirio transfers to a different agency]].
** All Might explicitly says that Nighteye and Gran Torino's "investigation" of Izuku would never hold up in court, as they are mostly working off suspicion and are attempting to beat the truth out of a suspect, which is illegal.
** Even though Inko knows her husband's minions are all villains, she still feels guilty working against them since she remembers being friends with them before she and Izuku fled.
** Sir Nighteye's and Gran Torino's tormenting of Izuku in hopes of proving he's All For One's son is noticed by the rest of Sir Nighteye's agency. And since they haven't been told why the two are constantly beating up the new intern, they're all seriously concerned with the pair's actions. [[spoiler: When All Might finds out from Mirio, he has Sir's teaching license revoked, and Mirio transfers to a different agency]].
** All Might explicitly says that Nighteye and Gran Torino's "investigation" of Izuku would never hold up in court, as they are mostly working off suspicion and are attempting to beat the truth out of a suspect, which is illegal.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Even though Inko knows her husband's minions are all villains, she still feels guilty working against them since she remembers being friends with them before she and Izuku fled.
** Sir Nighteye's and Gran Torino's tormenting of Izuku in hopes of proving he's All For One's son is noticed by the rest of Sir Nighteye's agency. And since they haven't been told why the two are constantly beating up the new intern, they're all seriously concerned with the pair's actions. [[spoiler: When All Might finds out from Mirio, he has Sir's teaching license revoked, and Mirio transfers to a different agency]].
** All Might explicitly says that Nighteye and Gran Torino's "investigation" of Izuku would never hold up in court, as they are mostly working off suspicion and are attempting to beat the truth out of a suspect, which is illegal.
** Even though Inko knows her husband's minions are all villains, she still feels guilty working against them since she remembers being friends with them before she and Izuku fled.
** Sir Nighteye's and Gran Torino's tormenting of Izuku in hopes of proving he's All For One's son is noticed by the rest of Sir Nighteye's agency. And since they haven't been told why the two are constantly beating up the new intern, they're all seriously concerned with the pair's actions. [[spoiler: When All Might finds out from Mirio, he has Sir's teaching license revoked, and Mirio transfers to a different agency]].
** All Might explicitly says that Nighteye and Gran Torino's "investigation" of Izuku would never hold up in court, as they are mostly working off suspicion and are attempting to beat the truth out of a suspect, which is illegal.
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Was abandoned March 2021, not 2020
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As of March 2020, the fic has been officially abandoned by the author. However, [=HLine=] did post the outline they had planned for the rest of the fic so that readers would not be completely left hanging, which can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13933635/chapters/74882106 here]].
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As of March 2020, 2021, the fic has been officially abandoned by the author. However, [=HLine=] did post the outline they had planned for the rest of the fic so that readers would not be completely left hanging, which can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13933635/chapters/74882106 here]].
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As of March 2020, the fic has been officially abandoned by the author. However, [=HLine=] did post the outline they had planned for the rest of the fic so that readers would not be completely left hanging, which can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13933635/chapters/74882106 here]].
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Hiashi since [[CompositeCharacter he’s All For One in this story]].
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Hiashi Hisashi since [[CompositeCharacter he’s All For One in this story]].
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* AdaptationNameChange: Izuku's surname wasn't originally Midoriya in this story and he changed it while trying to cover his tracks; [[spoiler: it was [[RelatedInAdaptation Shimura]]]]. Furthermore, instead of Deku, he chooses [[MeaningfulName Lotus]] as his Hero Name.
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* AdaptationNameChange: AdaptationNameChange:
** Izuku's surname wasn't originally Midoriya in this story and he changed it while trying to cover his tracks; [[spoiler: it was [[RelatedInAdaptation Shimura]]]]. Furthermore, instead of Deku, he chooses [[MeaningfulName Lotus]] as his Hero Name.
** Izuku's surname wasn't originally Midoriya in this story and he changed it while trying to cover his tracks; [[spoiler: it was [[RelatedInAdaptation Shimura]]]]. Furthermore, instead of Deku, he chooses [[MeaningfulName Lotus]] as his Hero Name.
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* BadDreams: Izuku has a particularly bad one the night before the USJ incident. He dreams of a happy afternoon spent with his father that segues into horror as he realizes that his father is cannibalizing a corpse. He notes that these dreams are greatly exaggerated, as he's never had to consume more than a few strands of hair or a few drops of blood to obtain a Quirk, but they underscore Izuku's self-loathing and shame over his past.
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* Foreshadowing: Bakugou, upon reuniting with Izuku at U.A., criticizes him for having disappeared and [[spoiler: changing his surname to “Midoriya” from “Shimura.”]]
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: Bakugou, upon reuniting with Izuku at U.A., criticizes him for having disappeared and [[spoiler: changing his surname to “Midoriya” from “Shimura.”]]
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* EvilIsPetty: [[spoiler: It’s not enough that All for One killed Nana Shimura; he also ends up courting and marrying her daughter. Though his exact motives for doing so aren’t clear, it’s at least partially this trope.]]
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* Foreshadowing: Bakugou, upon reuniting with Izuku at U.A., criticizes him for having disappeared and [[spoiler: changing his surname to “Midoriya” from “Shimura.”]]
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* HonoraryUncle: Tomura considers Inko his "auntie". [[spoiler:Turns out, it's [[RelatedInTheAdaptation not just honorary]].]]
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* AdaptationNameChange: Izuku's surname wasn't originally Midoriya in this story and he changed it while trying to cover his tracks [[spoiler: it was [[RelatedInAdaptation Shimura]]]]. Furthermore, instead of Deku, he chooses [[MeaningfulName Lotus]] as his Hero Name.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Izuku's surname wasn't originally Midoriya in this story and he changed it while trying to cover his tracks tracks; [[spoiler: it was [[RelatedInAdaptation Shimura]]]]. Furthermore, instead of Deku, he chooses [[MeaningfulName Lotus]] as his Hero Name.
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