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%%* KillEmAll: The premise of the Blitz.
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** Trevor Gates carrying out an [[spoiler: attempted rape]] in the middle of a corridor and [[WhatAnIdiot leaving his firearm unattended.]]
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** Trevor Gates carrying out an [[spoiler: attempted rape]] in the middle of a corridor and [[WhatAnIdiot leaving his firearm unattended.]]
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* IllGirl: Sadie Dechon, she also doubles as TheLoad due to any attack or surprise potentially being able to trigger an asthma attack.
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* TheLoad: [[IllGirl Sadie Dechon]] to her sister [=JoAnne=].
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* TheLoad: [[IllGirl Sadie Dechon]] Dechon to her sister [=JoAnne=].
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* BigManOnCampus: Nicholas 'Nick' Lang, although he'd rather hang out with [[HollywoodPudgy Victoria]] [[HollywoodHomely 'Vikki']] [[HollywoodNerd Shaw]].
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* BigManOnCampus: Nicholas 'Nick' Lang, although he'd rather hang out with [[HollywoodPudgy Victoria]] [[HollywoodHomely 'Vikki']] [[HollywoodNerd Shaw]].Shaw.
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1st American Blitz is a FanFiction written by Terryllennium (the pen name of Terryll Preston), an ElsewhereFic based around the universe shared by the novel, film and manga adaptions of ''Literature/BattleRoyale.''
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%%* GrayEyes: Brian Addison.
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%%* DeadlyGame: The Blitz, [[CaptainObvious in case you hadn't realised.]]
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%%* DeadlyGame: The Blitz, [[CaptainObvious in case you hadn't realised.]]
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-> "The first rule, you will all kill each other until only one remains. This is not a fantasy. This is not a lie. This is a fact and the reality you will face after you leave this room. All but one of you will die before this ends. If one of you intends to be that lone survivor, you will need to accept this fact wholeheartedly and place it at the center of everything else; before everything else. And by that, I mean your friends and family."
-->-- Omatsu Reiko, Program Supervisor
-->-- Omatsu Reiko, Program Supervisor
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->''"The first rule, you will all kill each other until only one remains. This is not a fantasy. This is not a lie. This is a fact and the reality you will face after you leave this room. All but one of you will die before this ends. If one of you intends to be that lone survivor, you will need to accept this fact wholeheartedly and place it at the center of everything else; before everything else. And by that, I mean your friends and family.
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* ActionGirl: Leslie Thurston and [[CoolBigSis JoAnne Dechon]] have shades of this, however Charlene 'Charlie' Rae Dolan is a relatively straight example.
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* ActualPacifist: Rahdi Patel.
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* AnyoneCanDie
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* BattleCouple: [[PapaWolf Jimmy Turner]] and [[FieryRedhead Leslie Thurston]].
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* ClosedCircle: The Kasanagi-Eto.
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* DeadlyGame: The Blitz, [[CaptainObvious in case you hadn't realised.]]
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* TheEveryman: Robert 'Bobby' Cheveyo.
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* {{Gorn}}: Averted. Whilst there have been some unsettling fight scenes and gruesome death, these have all been spread out over the course of nineteen chapters - This helps in making the rare occurences of bloodshed all the more chilling.
* GratuitousFrench: Averted. Despite being the finalists in a 'National French Essay Contest' none of the competitors have spoken a word of French throughout the entire story thus far.
* GrayEyes: Brian Addison.
* HairTriggerTemper: Jonathan 'Jonny' Chiang IS this trope.
** Also [[MoodSwinger Brian Addison]] when he hasn't had his medication.
* GratuitousFrench: Averted. Despite being the finalists in a 'National French Essay Contest' none of the competitors have spoken a word of French throughout the entire story thus far.
* GrayEyes: Brian Addison.
* HairTriggerTemper: Jonathan 'Jonny' Chiang IS this trope.
** Also [[MoodSwinger Brian Addison]] when he hasn't had his medication.
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* GratuitousFrench: Averted. Despite being the finalists in a 'National French Essay Contest' none of the competitors have spoken a word of French throughout the entire story thus far.
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* IceQueen: [[TheDeterminator Misty]] [[JerkJock Greer.]]
** Also [[TheBaroness Omatsu-San.]]
** Also [[TheBaroness Omatsu-San.]]
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* IRegretNothing: Averted with [[{{Jerkass}} Jonathan]] [[HairTriggerTemper 'Jonny']] Chiang who allows himself to be [[CurbstompBattle beaten up]] by a gang of guys, the ringleader of which is the older brother of a boy Jonny disabled in a fight. Normally he'd be able to take care of himself in this situation, but his guilt and regrets won't allow him.
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* JokeWeapon: 36in Axe Handle.
* KillEmAll: The premise of the Blitz.
* KillEmAll: The premise of the Blitz.
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** Averted with Leslie Thurston, who, despite being pregnant is capable of holding her own in a fight.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Robert 'Rob' [=McKean=] tries to be one of these and fails.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted. There's Robert 'Bobby' Cheveyo and Robert 'Rob' [=McKean=], although they come from different schools.
* OnlySaneMan: Rochelle Meyers.
* OnlySaneMan: Rochelle Meyers.
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* [[RecapEpisode Recap Chapter:]] Chapter 11.
* RichBitch: The defining traits of Alisia Bennetti, Brenda Hughes and Trevor Gates.
** Whilst Trevor plays the [[RichBitch Rich Bastard]] trope [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney straight]], Brenda displays HiddenDepths however it is still too early to comment on Alisia's characterization.
* RichBitch: The defining traits of Alisia Bennetti, Brenda Hughes and Trevor Gates.
** Whilst Trevor plays the [[RichBitch Rich Bastard]] trope [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney straight]], Brenda displays HiddenDepths however it is still too early to comment on Alisia's characterization.
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* [[RecapEpisode Recap Chapter:]] RecapEpisode: Chapter 11.
* %%* RichBitch: The defining traits of Alisia Bennetti, Brenda Hughes and Trevor Gates.
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* TearsOfBlood: Of the {{Squick}} variety.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: [[ActionGirl Charlene 'Charlie' Rae Dolan]] and her best friend [[ActualPacifist Rahdi Patel]].
* [[ExplosiveLeash Toxic Leash]]: The PISCES PRC-001XD.
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-->-- Jonathan 'Jonny' Chiang
* [[FiveTokenBand Twenty-Nine Token Band]]:If a group shot of all of the competitors were to be taken, the racial and political diversity could possibly rival that of [[Series/{{Glee}} New Directions]].
** No words on any handicapped characters yet.
* TheVoiceless: Robert 'Bobby' Cheveyo. Whilst he's been playing this trope straight so far, it isn't yet known how much longer it will last for.
* [[FiveTokenBand Twenty-Nine Token Band]]:If a group shot of all of the competitors were to be taken, the racial and political diversity could possibly rival that of [[Series/{{Glee}} New Directions]].
** No words on any handicapped characters yet.
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-->-- Jonathan 'Jonny' Chiang
* [[FiveTokenBand Twenty-Nine Token Band]]:If a group shot of all of the competitors were to be taken, the racial and political diversity could possibly rival that of [[Series/{{Glee}} New Directions]].
** No words on any handicapped characters yet.
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* [[FiveTokenBand Twenty-Nine Token Band]]:If a group shot of all of the competitors were to be taken, the racial and political diversity could possibly rival that of [[Series/{{Glee}} New Directions]].
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* {{Badass}}: Jonathan 'Jonny' Chiang is mentioned to have taken out up to three seniors in a single fight, as well as beating up numerous other high schoolers.
** And a [[spoiler: bullet in the thigh]] doesn't stop him from [[CurbstompBattle Curbstomping]] [[TheChewtoy Eduardo 'Eddy' Escobar.]]
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** The father of [[{{Badass}} Jonathan]] [[HairTriggerTemper 'Jonny']] [[{{Jerkass}} Chiang]] throws money at problems caused by his sons constant fighting.
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* IRegretNothing: Averted with [[{{Jerkass}} Jonathan]] [[HairTriggerTemper 'Jonny']] [[{{Badass}} Chiang]] who allows himself to be [[CurbstompBattle beaten up]] by a gang of guys, the ringleader of which is the older brother of a boy Jonny disabled in a fight. Normally he'd be able to take care of himself in this situation, but his guilt and regrets won't allow him.
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* IRegretNothing: Averted with [[{{Jerkass}} Jonathan]] [[HairTriggerTemper 'Jonny']] [[{{Badass}} Chiang]] Chiang who allows himself to be [[CurbstompBattle beaten up]] by a gang of guys, the ringleader of which is the older brother of a boy Jonny disabled in a fight. Normally he'd be able to take care of himself in this situation, but his guilt and regrets won't allow him.
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** [[BlondGuysAreEvil Trevor]] [[SmugSnake Gates]] uses bribes to stay out of trouble with the law as well as hush money to shut the mouths of [[spoiler: girls he has raped]].
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** [[BlondGuysAreEvil Trevor]] [[SmugSnake Trevor Gates]] uses bribes to stay out of trouble with the law as well as hush money to shut the mouths of [[spoiler: girls he has raped]].
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* BlondesAreEvil / BlondGuysAreEvil: Trevor Gates, also the CurtainsMatchTheWindow.
** [[IceQueen Misty]] [[JerkJock Greer]] certainly has no qualms about following the rules of the [[DeadlyGame Blitz.]]
** [[IceQueen Misty]] [[JerkJock Greer]] certainly has no qualms about following the rules of the [[DeadlyGame Blitz.]]
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* JapaneseHonorifics: Omatsu-San uses these when talking to the competitors, and states that she'd like them to do the same in return.
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* [[FiveTokenBand Twenty-Nine Token Band]]:If a group shot of all of the competitors were to be taken, the racial and political diversity could possibly rival that of [[{{Glee}} New Directions]].
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* [[FiveTokenBand Twenty-Nine Token Band]]:If a group shot of all of the competitors were to be taken, the racial and political diversity could possibly rival that of [[{{Glee}} [[Series/{{Glee}} New Directions]].
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The Messiah has been disambiguated between Messianic Archetype and All Loving Hero. Bad examples and ZCE are being removed; if you disagree, please readd with sufficient context.
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* TheMessiah: [[ClassRepresentative Wendy]] [[WideEyedIdealist Prince]] hopes to become one of these.
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* PoisonIsCorrosive: When a collar detonates the subsequent death of the student can easily be described as a toned down version of what happens to a [[EvilDead deadite]] once the [[ArtifactOfDoom Necronomicon Ex-Mortis]] is destroyed.
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* PoisonIsCorrosive: When a collar detonates the subsequent death of the student can easily be described as a toned down version of what happens to a [[EvilDead [[Franchise/EvilDead deadite]] once the [[ArtifactOfDoom Necronomicon Ex-Mortis]] is destroyed.
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* BodyHorror: The detonation of a PISCES PRC-001XD is this or [[BloodyHilarious Bloody Hilarity.]]
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* DragonLady: Omatsu Reiko's role as TheBaroness might overlap into this.
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* RuleOfFunny: Alisia Benetti's attempt to wield a pair of designer pump sandals as an ImprovisedWeapon is either this, or depressing [[CurbStompBattle foreshadowing.]]
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* ColdSniper / TheArcher: [[ActionGirl Charlene 'Charlie' Rae Dolan]] is being crafted into one of these.
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* ColdSniper / TheArcher: ColdSniper: [[ActionGirl Charlene 'Charlie' Rae Dolan]] is being crafted into one of these.
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** TLiterature/heHungerGames: Charlene 'Charlie' Rae Dolan shares a number of simularities with Katniss Everdeen.
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** TLiterature/heHungerGames: Literature/TheHungerGames: Charlene 'Charlie' Rae Dolan shares a number of simularities with Katniss Everdeen.
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** TheHungerGames: Charlene 'Charlie' Rae Dolan shares a number of simularities with Katniss Everdeen.
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** TheHungerGames: TLiterature/heHungerGames: Charlene 'Charlie' Rae Dolan shares a number of simularities with Katniss Everdeen.
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** ''BattleRoyale'': The more obvious ones being Wendy Prince and Trevor Gates being based off of Yukie Utsumi and Kazushi Niida respectively.
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** ''BattleRoyale'': ''Literature/BattleRoyale'': The more obvious ones being Wendy Prince and Trevor Gates being based off of Yukie Utsumi and Kazushi Niida respectively.
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1st American Blitz is a FanFiction written by Terryllennium (the pen name of Terryll Preston), an ElsewhereFic based around the universe shared by the novel, film and manga adaptions of BattleRoyale.
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1st American Blitz is a FanFiction written by Terryllennium (the pen name of Terryll Preston), an ElsewhereFic based around the universe shared by the novel, film and manga adaptions of BattleRoyale.
''Literature/BattleRoyale.''
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** BattleRoyale: The more obvious ones being Wendy Prince and Trevor Gates being based off of Yukie Utsumi and Kazushi Niida respectively.
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** BattleRoyale: ''BattleRoyale'': The more obvious ones being Wendy Prince and Trevor Gates being based off of Yukie Utsumi and Kazushi Niida respectively.
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Nightmare Fuel Unleaded is going to be cut
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The author achieves deep and rich characterization through the use of the ADayInTheLimelight method, making each chapter resolve around a certain student and their experiences within the game. It should be noted that this story is not for everyone, containing scenes of violence, death, sex, rape, foul language, drug references as well as numerous characters with politically incorrect stances. Whilst there hasn't been much bloodshed through the story so far, any deathscene is a combination of NauseaFuel and NightmareFuelUnleaded. Viewer discretion is strongly advised.
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The author achieves deep and rich characterization through the use of the ADayInTheLimelight method, making each chapter resolve around a certain student and their experiences within the game. It should be noted that this story is not for everyone, containing scenes of violence, death, sex, rape, foul language, drug references as well as numerous characters with politically incorrect stances. Whilst there hasn't been much bloodshed through the story so far, any deathscene is a combination of NauseaFuel and NightmareFuelUnleaded.NightmareFuel. Viewer discretion is strongly advised.
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Whilst a work in progress, the 1st American Blitz is currently 22 chapters long and has a word count of 116,282 making it a potential DoorStopper. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4220141/1/1st_American_Blitz here]].
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Whilst a work in progress, the 1st American Blitz is currently 22 25 chapters long and has a word count of 116,282 149,923 making it a potential DoorStopper. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4220141/1/1st_American_Blitz here]].