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* ShoutOut: When Cherri questions how Holy Diver is back after being taken to heaven by Exterminators, Poker Face asks if he was supposed to go to [[Recap/SouthParkS4E9DoTheHandicappedGoToHell Detroit]].

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* ShoutOut: When Cherri questions how Holy Diver is back after being taken to heaven by Exterminators, Exorcists, Poker Face asks if he was supposed to go to [[Recap/SouthParkS4E9DoTheHandicappedGoToHell Detroit]].
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* AffablyEvil: Most of HOLY DIVER's crew have an airy sort of good humor about them, but Moonshine (Impostor Captain Tenille) is easily the most outright jovial. Be it his good relations with Cherri Bomb or his politeness towards Charlie, even when killing people he strives to be friendly.

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* AffablyEvil: Most of HOLY DIVER's crew have an airy sort of good humor about them, but Moonshine (Impostor Captain Tenille) Tennille) is easily the most outright jovial. Be it his good relations with Cherri Bomb or his politeness towards Charlie, even when killing people he strives to be friendly.
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* TurtlePower: Sheer Heart Attack is now a skeletal tortoise as opposed to an RC Tank with a skull on its front. Its still exactly as fast as it was in life.
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* YoureJustJealous: Husk is convinced this is why Vaggie is annoyed with Charlie spending so much time with Kira. While it's definitely a factor, Vaggie is more concerned about Kira being a serial killer who fetishized his victims' hands, due to [[FreudianExcuse losing her fellow prostitute friends in life to murderous Johns while living in fear of the same happening to her]].

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* YoureJustJealous: Husk is convinced this is why Vaggie is annoyed with Charlie spending so much time with Kira. While it's definitely a factor, Vaggie is more concerned about Kira being a serial killer who fetishized his victims' hands, due to [[FreudianExcuse losing her fellow prostitute friends in life to murderous Johns while living in fear of the same happening to her]].her]].
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.


* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Kira announces at dinner that he killed 48 women (and 40-50 other collateral killings) and kept the hands as girlfriends. This doesn't come off as the shocking reveal he thought it would because everyone there is in Hell, no one is surprised by violence or depravity. Charlie just thinks he's admitting it as part of his goal for redemption.
** Early in the story, Kira continues to maintain the quiet lifestyle he had in the living world in Hell. Keeping to himself, paying his bills, dressing like he did when he was alive, going to work, using his human name and not engaging in crimes or vices thinking it will make him as unnoticeable in death as it did in life. His neighbors find his "normal" behavior extremely abnormal because they're in Hell. He's there because he's unquestionably evil in some way and did something horrible while he was alive... but refuses to ''act like it'', which the demons take as him saying he's better than them, which they find highly insulting.
** Charlie has Angel Dust attempt to go full cold turkey with his drug addiction. It causes him to go full-on jittery and paranoid like a real life junkie would being denied their fix.
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* BaitAndSwitch: After Chapter 12 ends with [[spoiler: HOLY DIVER giving The World to God Given and a mission to abduct Kira and Charlie]], Chapter 13 begins describing four demons with a mission, presumably HOLY DIVER's QuirkyMinibossSquad, approaching the Hotel. [[spoiler: Turns out they're just [[Franchise/{{Hellraiser}} Cenobites]] trying to spread the gospel of Leviathan]].

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* BaitAndSwitch: After Chapter 12 ends with [[spoiler: HOLY [[spoiler:HOLY DIVER giving The World to God Given and a mission to abduct Kira and Charlie]], Chapter 13 begins describing four demons with a mission, presumably HOLY DIVER's QuirkyMinibossSquad, approaching the Hotel. [[spoiler: Turns [[spoiler:Turns out they're just [[Franchise/{{Hellraiser}} Cenobites]] trying to spread the gospel of Leviathan]].Leviathan.]]



** God Given (AKA Donatello Versus) has essentially the same powers as he did on earth, but since this is Hell he can [[spoiler:freely summon an army of exorcists to do his bidding, making him one of the most outright deadly demons in Hell]].

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** God Given (AKA Donatello Versus) has essentially the same powers as he did on earth, but since this is Hell he can [[spoiler:freely summon an army of exorcists Exorcists to do his bidding, making him one of the most outright deadly demons in Hell]].



* HorrifyingTheHorror: Kira is this to much of Hell due to his abilities and anonymity, but even he regards Cherri Bomb with a healthy amount of respect, referring her as 'the scary one with the eye'. [[DownplayedTrope Though that doesn't stop him]] from threatening to give her a "new and intimate understanding of what it means to explode" if she ever tries anything as brash as [[spoiler: drugging him]] again.

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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Kira is this to much of Hell due to his abilities and anonymity, but even he regards Cherri Bomb with a healthy amount of respect, referring her as 'the scary one with the eye'. [[DownplayedTrope Though that doesn't stop him]] from threatening to give her a "new and intimate understanding of what it means to explode" if she ever tries anything as brash as [[spoiler: drugging [[spoiler:drugging him]] again.



** Donatello Versus/God Given's powers now allow him to create constructs based on memories, rather than just outright replays. This does away with his previous weakness of recreating the circumstances of the original survivors, but people can conduct actions and receive results that were not part of the original memory[[labelnote:*]]For example, if he once again conjured the plane crash memory he used against Jolyne, doing what she did and sitting in the seats of the original survivors would not guarantee safety, the victim could hypothetically stop the crash altogether.[[/labelnote]]. So while [[spoiler:finding the right hiding place can't be used to avoid the Exorcists he creates, the constructs ''can'' be fought like normal, allowing the gang to survive until Kira kills God Given.]].

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** Donatello Versus/God Given's powers now allow him to create constructs based on memories, rather than just outright replays. This does away with his previous weakness of recreating the circumstances of the original survivors, but people can conduct actions and receive results that were not part of the original memory[[labelnote:*]]For example, if he once again conjured the plane crash memory he used against Jolyne, doing what she did and sitting in the seats of the original survivors would not guarantee safety, the victim could hypothetically stop the crash altogether.[[/labelnote]]. So while [[spoiler:finding the right hiding place can't be used to avoid the Exorcists he creates, the constructs ''can'' be fought like normal, allowing the gang to survive until Kira kills God Given.]].Given]].



* PhysicalGod: Charlie turns out to be this. When forced to fight, she proves to be possibly ''the'' physically strongest character in the setting. She ''is'' Lucifer's daughter, after all. [[spoiler: Holy Diver is worryingly implied to be on a [[WorldsStrongestMan level beyond even that]] when he effortlessly freezes her in place during the final chapter]].
* PreMortemOneLiner: After a few failed attempts with other enemies, Kira lands on an effectively laconic one for [[spoiler: God Given.]]
-->[[spoiler: '''God Given''']]: Look at you! Your guts are practically hanging out! What could you possibly do?!

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* PhysicalGod: Charlie turns out to be this. When forced to fight, she proves to be possibly ''the'' physically strongest character in the setting. She ''is'' Lucifer's daughter, after all. [[spoiler: Holy [[spoiler:Holy Diver is worryingly implied to be on a [[WorldsStrongestMan level beyond even that]] when he effortlessly freezes her in place during the final chapter]].
* PreMortemOneLiner: After a few failed attempts with other enemies, Kira lands on an effectively laconic one for [[spoiler: God Given.]]
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Given''']]: Look at you! Your guts are practically hanging out! What could you possibly do?!



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Kira ends up delivering a rather piercing one to [[spoiler:HOLY DIVER]] at the end. The end of it is particularly brutal, as Kira gleefully punches his target's hidden BerserkButton regarding their [[spoiler: daddy issues with Dario Brando]]:

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Kira ends up delivering a rather piercing one to [[spoiler:HOLY DIVER]] at the end. The end of it is particularly brutal, as Kira gleefully punches his target's hidden BerserkButton regarding their [[spoiler: daddy [[spoiler:daddy issues with Dario Brando]]:



* ShowWithinAShow: ''It's Dahm Good'' is mentioned several times during the story, most memorably with Dahmer saying "With a positive mental attitude and a sharp knife, [[{{Squick}} any sidewalk can be your grocery store.]]"

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* ShowWithinAShow: ''It's Dahm Good'' is mentioned several times during the story, most memorably with Dahmer saying "With a positive mental attitude and a sharp knife, [[{{Squick}} any sidewalk can be your grocery store.]]"store]]."



---> No matter the situation, Angel took care to look exactly how he wanted, and even when disheveled and degraded he strove to look his best. Kira could respect that. [[StealthInsult Almost enough to not be completely disgusted.]]

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---> No --->No matter the situation, Angel took care to look exactly how he wanted, and even when disheveled and degraded he strove to look his best. Kira could respect that. [[StealthInsult Almost enough to not be completely disgusted.]]disgusted]].

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* IronicHell: Hazbin Hotel's chaotic, rough, and degenerate setting is pretty much exactly this for Kira, who's now living in exactly the type of environment he hates most and has no real chance to live the peaceful life he wants most.

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* IronicHell: Hazbin Hotel's ''Hazbin Hotel'''s chaotic, rough, and degenerate setting is pretty much exactly this for Kira, who's now living in exactly the type of environment he hates most and has no real chance to live the peaceful life he wants most.most. If he attempts to fade into the background by being unremarkable, he's ''extremely'' noticeable by anyone living near him and will inevitably annoyed by his neighbors.



** Kira announces at dinner that he killed 48 women ([[InferredHolocaust and 40-50 other collateral killings]]) and kept the hands as girlfriends. This doesn't come off as the shocking reveal he thought it would because everyone there is in Hell, no one is surprised. Charlie just thinks he's admitting it as part of his goal for redemption.
** Early in the story, Kira continues to maintain the quiet lifestyle he had in the living world in Hell. Keeping to himself, paying his bills, dressing like he did when he was alive, going to work, using his human name and not engaging in crimes or vices thinking it will make him as unnoticeable in death as it did in life. His neighbors find his "normal" behavior extremely abnormal because they're in Hell. He's there because he's evil and did something horrible while he was alive, but refuses to act like it, which the demons take as him saying he's better than them, which they find highly insulting.
** Charlie has Angel Dust attempt to go full cold turkey with his drug addiction. It causes him to go full-on jittery and paranoid like a real life junkie would.
* TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse: Inverted. Kira trying to maintain the lifestyle he had on Earth by doing the exact same things he did to go unnoticed while alive makes him stick out like a sore thumb in Hell.

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** Kira announces at dinner that he killed 48 women ([[InferredHolocaust and (and 40-50 other collateral killings]]) killings) and kept the hands as girlfriends. This doesn't come off as the shocking reveal he thought it would because everyone there is in Hell, no one is surprised.surprised by violence or depravity. Charlie just thinks he's admitting it as part of his goal for redemption.
** Early in the story, Kira continues to maintain the quiet lifestyle he had in the living world in Hell. Keeping to himself, paying his bills, dressing like he did when he was alive, going to work, using his human name and not engaging in crimes or vices thinking it will make him as unnoticeable in death as it did in life. His neighbors find his "normal" behavior extremely abnormal because they're in Hell. He's there because he's unquestionably evil in some way and did something horrible while he was alive, alive... but refuses to act ''act like it, it'', which the demons take as him saying he's better than them, which they find highly insulting.
** Charlie has Angel Dust attempt to go full cold turkey with his drug addiction. It causes him to go full-on jittery and paranoid like a real life junkie would.
would being denied their fix.
* TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse: TheyLookJustLikeEveryoneElse:
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Inverted. Kira trying to maintain the lifestyle he had on Earth by doing the exact same things he did to go unnoticed while alive makes him stick out like a sore thumb in Hell.

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* DetachmentCombat: Bug Boogie, formerly Gray Fly, has a head made of an entire stag beetle that can detach from his body and attack like his original Stand.



** Kira's persona of Mr. Clean is seen as this: a demon no-one's ever met, but is credited with making his Boss's enemies disappear by the thousand. Upon learning of this, Angel is terrified, pondering how easy it would be for a nobody like Kira [[ParanoiaFuel to touch a doorknob, or pose a mailman or delivery boy, or even just brush by someone on the street, and vaporize them completely]]. Mr. Clean was essentially the Boogeyman of Hell.

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** Kira's persona of Mr. Clean is seen as this: a demon no-one's ever met, but is credited with making his Boss's enemies disappear by the thousand. Upon learning of this, Angel is terrified, pondering how easy it would be for a nobody like Kira [[ParanoiaFuel to touch a doorknob, or pose a mailman or delivery boy, or even just brush by someone on the street, and vaporize them completely]]. Not to mention his ability to use Bites the Dust to scout out a given location to make his definitive move. Mr. Clean was essentially the Boogeyman of Hell.



** Being frozen in pants-wetting terror in the presence of HOLY DIVER is considered to be an acceptable response, though he considers it impolite to continue to do so.

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** Being frozen in pants-wetting terror in the presence of HOLY DIVER is considered to be an acceptable response, though he considers it impolite to continue to do so.so when he wants a conversation.


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* InsistentTerminology: The boss's name is "HOLY DIVER", case sensitive, and he does ''not'' allow it any other way. Even if people addressing him just say it aloud, he can tell if they're not using all-capital letters, or even if they catch and correct themselves as Husk finds out.


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* VaderBreath: HOLY DIVER has this as a result of taking on traits of The World. His breathing relies primarily on the tank on his back, and it makes a pronounced hiss and click as the air cycles through the tank.
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* TurtlePower: Sheer Heart Attack is now a skeletal tortoise as opposed to an RC Tank with a skull on its front. Its still exactly as fast as it was in life.
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* CharacterDevelopment: All the hotel staff, [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg save]] [[AbsenteeActor Nifty]], grow significantly as people.

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* CharacterDevelopment: All the hotel staff, [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg save]] [[AbsenteeActor save Nifty]], grow significantly as people.
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* AbsenteeActor: Niffty is on paid leave while the story takes place.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13268205/1/A-Peaceful-Afterlife A Peaceful Afterlife]]'' is a FusionFic of ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' by Creator/{{WriteAnon}}.

[[Manga/DiamondIsUnbreakable Yoshikage Kira]] winds up in hell and, unsurprisingly, doesn't much care for it. With his new home totally incompatible with his preferred lifestyle, Kira is left with few options. But news of a hotel, one that redeems sinners, promises an alternative.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13268205/1/A-Peaceful-Afterlife A Peaceful Afterlife]]'' is a FusionFic of ''WebAnimation/HazbinHotel'' and ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureDiamondIsUnbreakable'' by Creator/{{WriteAnon}}.

[[Manga/DiamondIsUnbreakable [[Characters/JojosBizarreAdventureYoshikageKira Yoshikage Kira]] winds up in hell and, unsurprisingly, doesn't much care for it. With his new home totally incompatible with his preferred lifestyle, Kira is left with few options. But news of a hotel, one that redeems sinners, promises an alternative.
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** ''No matter the situation, Angel took care to look exactly how he wanted, and even when disheveled and degraded he strove to look his best. Kira could respect that. [[StealthInsult Almost enough to not be completely disgusted.]]''

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** ''No ---> No matter the situation, Angel took care to look exactly how he wanted, and even when disheveled and degraded he strove to look his best. Kira could respect that. [[StealthInsult Almost enough to not be completely disgusted.]]'']]
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Kira is this to much of Hell due to his abilities and anonymity, but even he regards Cherri Bomb with a healthy amount of respect, referring her as 'the scary one with the eye'.

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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Kira is this to much of Hell due to his abilities and anonymity, but even he regards Cherri Bomb with a healthy amount of respect, referring her as 'the scary one with the eye'. [[DownplayedTrope Though that doesn't stop him]] from threatening to give her a "new and intimate understanding of what it means to explode" if she ever tries anything as brash as [[spoiler: drugging him]] again.



* PhysicalGod: Charlie turns out to be this. When forced to fight, she proves to be possibly ''the'' physically strongest character in the setting. She ''is'' Lucifer's daughter, after all. [[spoiler: Holy Diver is worryingly implied to be on a [[WorldStrongestMan level beyond even that]] when he effortlessly freezes her in place during the final chapter]].

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* PhysicalGod: Charlie turns out to be this. When forced to fight, she proves to be possibly ''the'' physically strongest character in the setting. She ''is'' Lucifer's daughter, after all. [[spoiler: Holy Diver is worryingly implied to be on a [[WorldStrongestMan [[WorldsStrongestMan level beyond even that]] when he effortlessly freezes her in place during the final chapter]].
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Kira is this to much of Hell due to his abilities and anonymity, but even he regards Cherri Bomb with a healthy amount of respect, referring her as 'the scary one with they eye'.

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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Kira is this to much of Hell due to his abilities and anonymity, but even he regards Cherri Bomb with a healthy amount of respect, referring her as 'the scary one with they the eye'.
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** Kira and Alastor express a mutual example in the latter's one scene, both fully aware of the other's reputation. It leads to one of the most casual conversations Kira has had since coming to Hell.
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* PhysicalGod: Charlie turns out to be this. When forced to fight, she proves to be possibly ''the'' physically strongest character in the setting. She ''is'' Lucifer's daughter, after all. [[spoiler: Holy Diver is worryingly implied to be on a [[WorldStrongestMan level beyond even that]] when he effortlessly freezes her in place during hte final chapter]].

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* PhysicalGod: Charlie turns out to be this. When forced to fight, she proves to be possibly ''the'' physically strongest character in the setting. She ''is'' Lucifer's daughter, after all. [[spoiler: Holy Diver is worryingly implied to be on a [[WorldStrongestMan level beyond even that]] when he effortlessly freezes her in place during hte the final chapter]].
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* PhysicalGod: Charlie turns out to be this. When forced to fight, she proves to be possibly ''the'' physically strongest character in the setting. She ''is'' Lucifer's daughter, after all.

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* PhysicalGod: Charlie turns out to be this. When forced to fight, she proves to be possibly ''the'' physically strongest character in the setting. She ''is'' Lucifer's daughter, after all. [[spoiler: Holy Diver is worryingly implied to be on a [[WorldStrongestMan level beyond even that]] when he effortlessly freezes her in place during hte final chapter]].

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Kira ends up delivering a rather piercing one to [[spoiler:HOLY DIVER]] at the end. The end of it is particularly brutal, as Kira gleefully punches his target's hidden BerserkButton regarding their [[spoiler: daddy issues with Dario Brando]]:
-->'''Kira''': [[spoiler:You may not have found your mother, '''''Dio,''''' but at least you can live the rest of your afterlife knowing you made your daddy so '''''proud!''''']]



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Kira ends up delivering a rather piercing one to [[spoiler:HOLY DIVER]] at the end. The end of it is particularly brutal, as Kira gleefully punches his target's hidden BerserkButton regarding their [[spoiler: daddy issues with Dario Brando]]:
-->'''Kira''': [[spoiler:You may not have found your mother, '''''Dio,''''' but at least you can live the rest of your afterlife knowing you made your daddy so '''''proud!''''']]
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** In a later chapter, Kira and Angel Dust are playing a game that's ''heavily'' implied to be ''VideoGame/Doom2016.''
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: After Kira confesses to being a serial killer at dinner, Charlie asks him he ever sought help. Kira simply states there's no helping it, and that it's in his nature, to which Charlie asks if he ever tried. This actually makes Kira consider why he came to the hotel in the first place and decide that, yes, he would like to (It also stops him from detonating the bomb he put in Charlie's meal).

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: After Kira confesses to being a serial killer at dinner, Charlie asks him he ever sought help. Kira simply states there's no helping it, and that it's in his nature, to which Charlie asks if he ever tried. This actually makes Kira consider why he came to the hotel in the first place and decide that, yes, he would like to (It also stops him from detonating Bites the bomb Dust, which he put in Charlie's meal).implanted on Charlie just before his confession).
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* DramaPreservingHandicap: Kira loses his left hand in his first fight with HOLY DIVER'S crew. While it does grow back eventually, it's not fully healed by the time the gang raids the hotel, leaving him unable to use Sheer Heart Attack against them.
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* MoralityChain: Kira and Angel end up as one for each other when Kira chaperones the latter to a bar to meet Cherri. Angel actually intervenes to stop Kira from murdering a violent patron, who himself only turned violent because Angel resisted the temptation to take some cocaine he was gifting him.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Kira may be bisexual, as he does seem receptive to some of Angel's advances. What makes it unclear is the blurred line between Kira's sex drive and urge to kill, and the fact that the furthest they got was when Kira was very drunk, drugged, and sexually frustrated.


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* MortonsFork: At the end of the story, Kira reveals that HOLY DIVER has been subjected to one: [[spoiler:either his mother is in heaven and he can never see her again, or she is in hell with him, meaning she is not as pure and good as he remembers her as. Kira heavily implies it is the former]].
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Another story by the same author, ''FanFic/HelluvaJob'', is set in the same universe, and there's a sequel focusing on Vinegar Doppio, called ''Fanfic/OnlyTheResults'', currently in progress.

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Another story by the same author, ''FanFic/HelluvaJob'', is set in the same universe, and there's a sequel focusing on Vinegar Doppio, called ''Fanfic/OnlyTheResults'', currently in progress.
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* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Adult cartoon source material aside, the fanfic largely indulges in the sense of humor from ''Hazbin Hotel's'' pilot episode, with Kira as a magnificent StraightMan to everyone else's eccentricity. [[BigBad HOLY DIVER,]] however, is a bona-fide KnightOfCerberus whose every scene is [[TheDreaded dripping with fear and tension]]. Husk's flashback to his first encounter with him at a poker game spells out how terrified he is of the guy (keep in mind he was able to [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu casually mouth off at Alastor]] in the pilot for comparison).

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* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Adult cartoon source material aside, the fanfic largely indulges in the sense of humor from ''Hazbin Hotel's'' pilot episode, with Kira as a magnificent StraightMan to everyone else's eccentricity. [[BigBad HOLY DIVER,]] however, is a bona-fide KnightOfCerberus KnightOfCerebus whose every scene is [[TheDreaded dripping with fear and tension]]. Husk's flashback to his first encounter with him at a poker game spells out how terrified he is of the guy (keep in mind he was able to [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu casually mouth off at Alastor]] in the pilot for comparison).
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* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Adult cartoon source material aside, the fanfic largely indulges in the sense of humor from ''Hazbin Hotel's'' pilot episode, with Kira as a magnificent StraightMan to everyone else's eccentricity. [[BigBad HOLY DIVER,]] however, is a bona-fide KnightOfCerberus whose every scene is [[TheDreaded dripping with fear and tension]]. Husk's flashback to his first encounter with him at a poker game spells out how terrified he is of the guy (keep in mind he was able to [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu casually mouth off at Alastor]] in the pilot for comparison).
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: When God Given arrives at the hotel to capture Charlie and Kira, he finds that Kira offered to stay behind to distract the Stand Users while Charlie and the rest of the staff/guests escaped. Rather than believe [[CharacterDevelopment Kira had a change of heart]], God Given assumes that Kira did it simply to ''spite'' him, since showing up with only one of his intended targets would shame God Given in the eyes of HOLY DIVER.

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: When God Given arrives at the hotel to capture Charlie and Kira, he finds that Kira offered to stay behind to distract the Stand Users while Charlie and the rest of the staff/guests escaped. Rather than believe [[CharacterDevelopment Kira had a change of heart]], heart]] and is providing a distraction for people he cares for, God Given assumes that Kira did it simply to ''spite'' him, since showing up with only one of his intended targets would shame God Given in the eyes of HOLY DIVER.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: When God Given arrives at the hotel to capture Charlie and Kira, he finds that Kira offered to stay behind to distract the Stand Users while Charlie and the rest of the staff/guests escaped. Rather than believe [[CharacterDevelopment Kira had a change of heart]], God Given assumes that Kira did it simply to ''spite'' him, since showing up with only one of his intended targets would shame God Given in the eyes of HOLY DIVER.

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