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The story sometimes has cheesy writing and contains a lot of homage from StarWars, but as a whole, is a wonderful story and should tug at your heartstrings and/or tear ducts at ''least'' once.
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The story sometimes has cheesy writing and contains a lot of homage from StarWars, Franchise/StarWars, but as a whole, is a wonderful story and should tug at your heartstrings and/or tear ducts at ''least'' once.
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* TheWikiRule: [[http://thebitternesstrilogy.wikia.com/wiki/The_Bitterness_Trilogy_Wiki It has its own wiki]].
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The first story, entitled '''The Bitterness of Phineas Flynn''', opens with a usual day on the job, the boys go on a mission to stop Doof, his minion Platyborg show up, etc., etc. Unfortunately, Doofenshmirtz had plans on revenge that day and was prepared for them. After being knocked of a high platform, [[spoiler:Ferb dies [[DiedInYourArmsTonight in Phineas's arms]],]] and Phineas swears to avenge him.
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The first story, entitled '''The Bitterness of Phineas Flynn''', opens with a usual day on the job, the boys go on a mission to stop Doof, his minion Platyborg show up, etc., etc. Unfortunately, Doofenshmirtz had plans on revenge that day and was prepared for them. After being knocked of a high platform, [[spoiler:Ferb dies [[DiedInYourArmsTonight in Phineas's arms]],]] and Phineas swears to avenge him.
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The second story, '''The Bitterness of Candace Flynn''', though significantly shorter, is just as good, if not better than the first. It opens with a FlashBack to a the day tho boy's parents and sister get captured by Doofenshmirtz's minions. We get no indication as to where the parents are, but we ''do'' know that Candace joins the dark side. Back in present day, [[StrictlyFormula on another usual day on the job]], [[spoiler:the boys discover Candace has become fully evil.]] And everything just gets cooler from there.
The third and final story, '''The Bitterness of the Empire''', concludes the series with a bang. A new character, Phineas's [[LongLostRelative long-lost uncle]], Phineas Phoebus Flynn, is introduced, battles are fought, tears are shed, lives are lost ([[spoiler:Though, thankfully, none of them are characters we know]]), and Phineas [[spoiler:[[DrivenToSuicide tries to commit suicide]] ]]. Yeah, you heard me right. We won't tell you why, though.
The third and final story, '''The Bitterness of the Empire''', concludes the series with a bang. A new character, Phineas's [[LongLostRelative long-lost uncle]], Phineas Phoebus Flynn, is introduced, battles are fought, tears are shed, lives are lost ([[spoiler:Though, thankfully, none of them are characters we know]]), and Phineas [[spoiler:[[DrivenToSuicide tries to commit suicide]] ]]. Yeah, you heard me right. We won't tell you why, though.
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The second story, '''The Bitterness of Candace Flynn''', though significantly shorter, is just as good, if not better than the first. It opens with a FlashBack to a the day tho boy's parents and sister get captured by Doofenshmirtz's minions. We get no indication as to where the parents are, but we ''do'' know that Candace joins the dark side. Back in present day, [[StrictlyFormula on another usual day on the job]], [[spoiler:the boys discover Candace has become fully evil.]] And everything just gets cooler from there.
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The third and final story, '''The Bitterness of the Empire''', concludes the series with a bang. A new character, Phineas's [[LongLostRelative long-lost uncle]], Phineas Phoebus Flynn, is introduced, battles are fought, tears are shed, and lives arelost ([[spoiler:Though, thankfully, none of them are characters we know]]), and Phineas [[spoiler:[[DrivenToSuicide tries to commit suicide]] ]]. Yeah, you heard me right. We won't tell you why, though.
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The third and final story, '''The Bitterness of the Empire''', concludes the series with a bang. A new character, Phineas's [[LongLostRelative long-lost uncle]], Phineas Phoebus Flynn, is introduced, battles are fought, tears are shed, and lives are
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** Another line ("Minions, assemble!") is from [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe Despicable Me]].
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** Another line ("Minions, assemble!") is from [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe Despicable Me]].''Franchise/DespicableMe''.
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The third and final story, '''The Bitterness of the Empire''', concludes the series with a bang. A new character, Phineas's [[LongLostRelative long-lost uncle]], [[NamesTheSame Phineas Phoebus Flynn]], is introduced, battles are fought, tears are shed, lives are lost ([[spoiler:Though, thankfully, none of them are characters we know]]), and Phineas [[spoiler:[[DrivenToSuicide tries to commit suicide]] ]]. Yeah, you heard me right. We won't tell you why, though.
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The third and final story, '''The Bitterness of the Empire''', concludes the series with a bang. A new character, Phineas's [[LongLostRelative long-lost uncle]], [[NamesTheSame Phineas Phoebus Flynn]], Flynn, is introduced, battles are fought, tears are shed, lives are lost ([[spoiler:Though, thankfully, none of them are characters we know]]), and Phineas [[spoiler:[[DrivenToSuicide tries to commit suicide]] ]]. Yeah, you heard me right. We won't tell you why, though.
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* NamesTheSame: Phineas Phoebus Flynn
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* FamousLastWords: "[[TearJerker Goodbye, brother.]]"
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The story sometimes has cheesy writing and contains a lot of homage from StarWars, but as a whole, is a wonderful story and should tug at your heartstrings and/or tear ducts at ''least'' once. And it has an {{Aesop}} that [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped may actually be useful to you]].
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The story sometimes has cheesy writing and contains a lot of homage from StarWars, but as a whole, is a wonderful story and should tug at your heartstrings and/or tear ducts at ''least'' once. And it has an {{Aesop}} that [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped may actually be useful to you]].
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** The scene with [[spoiler: Ferb's ghost]] is based on [[Disney/TheLionKing a scene in Lion King]].
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** The scene with [[spoiler: Ferb's ghost]] is based on [[Disney/TheLionKing [[WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994 a scene in Lion King]].
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** One of the lines in the last story ("Judge me now for who I am--or am I to be blamed for crimes I didn't commit?") is a slightly altered line from [[Disney/TheLionKingIISimbasPride Lion King 2]].
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** One of the lines in the last story ("Judge me now for who I am--or am I to be blamed for crimes I didn't commit?") is a slightly altered line from [[Disney/TheLionKingIISimbasPride [[WesternAnimation/TheLionKingIISimbasPride Lion King 2]].
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''The Bitterness Trilogy'' a collection of ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb'' fics. As the title suggests, they are very dark, but not quite serious enough to be considered {{DarkFic}}s, since they are scattered with many a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming. The stories follow a plot revolving around pre-release interpretations of the [[AnotherDimension alternate dimensional]] versions of the characters from [[TheMovie Phineas and Ferb Across the Second Dimenion]].
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''The Bitterness Trilogy'' a collection of ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb'' fics. As the title suggests, they are very dark, but not quite serious enough to be considered {{DarkFic}}s, since they are scattered with many a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.{{Dark Fic}}s. The stories follow a plot revolving around pre-release interpretations of the [[AnotherDimension alternate dimensional]] versions of the characters from [[TheMovie Phineas and Ferb Across the Second Dimenion]].
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* TearsOfJoy: [[spoiler: When Ferb is [[BackFromTheDead resurrected]] and [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming he reunites with his family]].]]
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---> "You underestimate the power of love," said Phineas. "[[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming We still love you, Sis. No matter what, we always will]]."
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---> "You underestimate the power of love," said Phineas. "[[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming We "We still love you, Sis. No matter what, we always will]].will."
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** Another line ("Minions, assemble!") is from [[Film/DespicableMe Despicable Me]].
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'''The Bitterness Trilogy''' a collection of ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb'' fics. As the title suggests, they are very dark, but not quite serious enough to be considered {{DarkFic}}s, since they are scattered with many a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming. The stories follow a plot revolving around pre-release interpretations of the [[AnotherDimension alternate dimensional]] versions of the characters from [[TheMovie Phineas and Ferb Across the Second Dimenion]].
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The second story, '''The Bitterness of Candace Flynn''', though significantly shorter, is just as good, if not better than the first. It opens with a FlashBack to a the day tho boy's parents and sister get captured by Doofenshmirtz's minions. We get no indication as to where the parents are, but we ''do'' know that Candace joins the dark side. Back in present day, [[StrictlyFormula on another usual day on the job]], [[spoiler:the boys discover Candace has become fully evil.]] [[ItGetsBetter And everything just gets cooler from there]].
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The second story, '''The Bitterness of Candace Flynn''', though significantly shorter, is just as good, if not better than the first. It opens with a FlashBack to a the day tho boy's parents and sister get captured by Doofenshmirtz's minions. We get no indication as to where the parents are, but we ''do'' know that Candace joins the dark side. Back in present day, [[StrictlyFormula on another usual day on the job]], [[spoiler:the boys discover Candace has become fully evil.]] [[ItGetsBetter And everything just gets cooler from there]].
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'''The Bitterness Trilogy''' a collection of ''PhineasAndFerb'' ''WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb'' fics. As the title suggests, they are very dark, but not quite serious enough to be considered {{DarkFic}}s, since they are scattered with many a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming. The stories follow a plot revolving around pre-release interpretations of the [[AnotherDimension alternate dimensional]] versions of the characters from [[TheMovie Phineas and Ferb Across the Second Dimenion]].
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* SharedUniverse: Due to Jessie's existence, apparently with FirstContactAGeminiStory.
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* BigNo: Three. Two by Phineas, one by [[FanFic/FirstContactAGeminiStory Jessie]].
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* BigNo: Three. Two by Phineas, one by [[FanFic/FirstContactAGeminiStory Jessie]].Jessie.
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* ShoutOut: The series contains several references to other media:
** The first story was slightly inspired by [[Film/RevengeoftheSith Revenge of the Sith]].
** The first chapter in the first story mentions that Ferb fell for three seconds, referencing the "three seconds deep" gag from [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb its source material]] in a bit of [[BlackComedy black comedy]].
** "[[PunctuatedForEmphasis THIS.]] [[Film/ThreeHundred IS.]] [[NarmCharm DANVILLE!]]"
** The scene with [[spoiler: Ferb's ghost]] is based on [[Disney/TheLionKing a scene in Lion King]].
** Chapter 1's title in the second story is named after a lyric in "Fight Inside" by [[Music/Red Red]].
** [[WesternAnimation/ACharlieBrownChristmas "I'll give you two reasons!" Heinz said angrily. "1...2..." he added, holding up two fingers.]]
** [[spoiler: Candace's [[HeelFaceTurn Heel Face Turn]] ]] was based on a scene in [[Film/ReturnOfTheJedi yet another Star Wars film]].
** One of the lines in the last story ("Judge me now for who I am--or am I to be blamed for crimes I didn't commit?") is a slightly altered line from [[Disney/TheLionKingIISimbasPride Lion King 2]].
** Another line ("Minions, assemble!") is from [[Film/DespicableMe Despicable Me]].
** The first story was slightly inspired by [[Film/RevengeoftheSith Revenge of the Sith]].
** The first chapter in the first story mentions that Ferb fell for three seconds, referencing the "three seconds deep" gag from [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb its source material]] in a bit of [[BlackComedy black comedy]].
** "[[PunctuatedForEmphasis THIS.]] [[Film/ThreeHundred IS.]] [[NarmCharm DANVILLE!]]"
** The scene with [[spoiler: Ferb's ghost]] is based on [[Disney/TheLionKing a scene in Lion King]].
** Chapter 1's title in the second story is named after a lyric in "Fight Inside" by [[Music/Red Red]].
** [[WesternAnimation/ACharlieBrownChristmas "I'll give you two reasons!" Heinz said angrily. "1...2..." he added, holding up two fingers.]]
** [[spoiler: Candace's [[HeelFaceTurn Heel Face Turn]] ]] was based on a scene in [[Film/ReturnOfTheJedi yet another Star Wars film]].
** One of the lines in the last story ("Judge me now for who I am--or am I to be blamed for crimes I didn't commit?") is a slightly altered line from [[Disney/TheLionKingIISimbasPride Lion King 2]].
** Another line ("Minions, assemble!") is from [[Film/DespicableMe Despicable Me]].
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* CreatorBacklash: The author is actually embarrassed by this series now, and wonders why it was so popular in the first place.
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* CreatorBacklash: The author is actually embarrassed by this series now, and wonders why it was so popular in the first place.
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* CreatorBacklash: The author is actually embarrassed by this series now, and wonders why it was so popular in the first place.
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* KillTheCutie: [[spoiler: Ferb]] suffers from this trope, causing Phineas to go insane.
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* KillTheCutie: [[spoiler: Ferb]] suffers from this trope, causing Phineas to go insane.
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I\'m pretty sure this counts.
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* KillTheCutie: [[spoiler: Ferb]] suffers from this trope, causing Phineas to go insane.
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Fixing a typo and adding some clarification. I couldn\'t figure out how to link the trope, though...
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* LongLostRelative: It's never mentiond in the story, but Phineas Phoebus Flynn is Phineas's long-lost uncle.
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* LongLostRelative: It's never mentiond mentioned in the story, but Word of God states that Phineas Phoebus Flynn is Phineas's long-lost uncle.
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[[BetterThanItSounds It's better than it just sounded]]. The story sometimes has cheesy writing and contains a lot of homage from StarWars, but as a whole, is a wonderful story and should tug at your heartstrings and/or tear ducts at ''least'' once. And it has an {{Aesop}} that [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped may actually be useful to you]].
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* ThisIsSparta: This hilarious {{Shout Out}}:
--> "Ridiculous?!" Phineas responded furiously. "This is Danville!"
--> "Ridiculous?!" Phineas responded furiously. "This is Danville!"
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** Also happens when [[spoiler:Ferb save Phineas from killing himself]].
* DarkFic: [[Spoiler: Phineas's attempted suicides]] officially makes this the darkest story of the three.
* DarkFic: [[Spoiler: Phineas's attempted suicides]] officially makes this the darkest story of the three.
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** Also happens when [[spoiler:Ferb save saves Phineas from killing himself]].
* DarkFic:[[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Phineas's attempted suicides]] officially makes this the darkest story of the three.
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'''The Bitterness Trilogy''' a collection of ''PhineasAndFerb'' fics. As the title suggests, they are very dark, but not quite serious enough to be considered DarkFics, {{DarkFic}}s, since they are scattered with many a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming. The stories follow a plot revolving around pre-release interpretations of the [[AnotherDimension alternate dimensional]] versions of the characters from [[TheMovie Phineas and Ferb Across the Second Dimenion]].