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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Hibiki. The first time she wore shoes was in Chapter 11, when she said that the only reason she did was because it went with the outfit she was wearing.
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* BareYourMidriff: Naturally. She has yet to wear a single outfit that covers her stomach.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Saionji, of all people, tells Hibiki, “Someone died, and all you care about is yourself!”
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* WhatTheHellHero: Saionji, of all people, tells Hibiki, “Someone "Someone died, and all you care about is yourself!”yourself!"
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'''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on Website/DeviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped-down plot of ''VisualNovel/SuperDanganRonpa2''. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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'''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on Website/DeviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped-down plot of ''VisualNovel/SuperDanganRonpa2''.''VisualNovel/Danganronpa2GoodbyeDespair''. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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ALL SPOILERS REGARDING SUPER DANGAN RONPA 2 WILL BE MARKED.
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ALL SPOILERS REGARDING SUPER DANGAN RONPA DANGANRONPA 2 GOODBYE DESPAIR WILL BE MARKED.
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-->'''Koizumi''': God, I hate men!
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Souda claims that he fell in love with Fukashigi-senapi as soon as he laid eyes on them.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Souda claims that he fell in love with Fukashigi-senapi Fukashigi-senpai as soon as he laid eyes on them.
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* BiTheWay: [[spoiler:In chapter 10, Hibiki says that she like "both boys and girls." In Kawaiiwolf's author's notes, Hibiki and Nanami are both bisexual, but Kawaiiwolf is unsure if Sonia will be this or a LipstickLesbian.]]
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* OhCrap: It's mentioned that "the chef [[AccidentalInnuendo got stiff]]" after Hibiki refutes his argument that Pekoyama killed [[spoiler:Kimmie Rin]].
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* OhCrap: It's mentioned that "the chef [[AccidentalInnuendo got stiff]]" stiff" after Hibiki refutes his argument that Pekoyama killed [[spoiler:Kimmie Rin]].
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* SailorEarth: Hibiki is the seventeenth student, which is a nono in the universe (in both games, there are only 16 students). To make matters worse, she put in ''another'' Sue, which is a [[CopyCatSue rip off of Sayaka.]]
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* SailorEarth: Hibiki is the seventeenth student, which is a nono in the universe (in both games, there are only 16 students). To make matters worse, she put in ''another'' Sue, which is a [[CopyCatSue rip off of Sayaka.]]
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* AllCaps: The author's notes. Well, the one's in the troll character.
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%% * AllCaps: The author's notes. Well, the one's in the troll character.
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* BareYourMidriff: [[MarySue Naturally]]. She has yet to wear a single outfit that covers her stomach.
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* BareYourMidriff: [[MarySue Naturally]].Naturally. She has yet to wear a single outfit that covers her stomach.
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* BreakTheCutie: The fic tries to do that in the first few chapters, but by chapter six, it quickly moves on.
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%% * BreakTheCutie: The fic tries to do that in the first few chapters, but by chapter six, it quickly moves on.
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* GratuitousJapanese: The author's notes have a ''lot'' of it, and the first line is literally in Japanese. Hibiki also called [[BitchInSheepsClothing Saionji]] {{Kawaiiko}} in Chapter Six.
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* GratuitousJapanese: GratuitousJapanese:
** The author's notes have a ''lot'' of it, and the first line is literally in Japanese. Hibiki also called [[BitchInSheepsClothing Saionji]] {{Kawaiiko}} in Chapter Six.
** The author's notes have a ''lot'' of it, and the first line is literally in Japanese. Hibiki also called [[BitchInSheepsClothing Saionji]] {{Kawaiiko}} in Chapter Six.
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* MoralDissonance[=/=]SkewedPriorities: After Monokuma tells them to commit ThePerfectCrime by killing someone and not getting caught, Hibiki's first thought was, "Kill someone? And ruin my perfect outfit?"
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* PurpleEyes: Yep, Hibiki has purple eyes, which are natural, as she points out. This may be the reason why she could see [[spoiler: Komaeda attempting to murder Twogami]], despite it being pitch black.
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* ScarsAreForever: Hibiki has three scars on her legs, but it doesn't take away from her looks.
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%% * ScarsAreForever: Hibiki has three scars on her legs, but it doesn't take away from her looks.
* SkewedPriorities: After Monokuma tells them to commit ThePerfectCrime by killing someone and not getting caught, Hibiki's first thought was, "Kill someone? And ruin my perfect outfit?"
* TechnicolorEyes: Yep, Hibiki has purple eyes, which are natural, as she points out. This may be the reason why she could see [[spoiler: Komaeda attempting to murder Twogami]], despite it being pitch black.
* TechnicolorEyes: Yep, Hibiki has purple eyes, which are natural, as she points out. This may be the reason why she could see [[spoiler: Komaeda attempting to murder Twogami]], despite it being pitch black.
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* VisualPun: Hibiki finds Souda and "Fukashigi-senpai"/[[spoiler:Gundam]] in the closet.
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* YouthfulFreckles: Hibiki has a light dusting of them.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hibiki has bright orange hair.
** MyHairCameOutGreen: Subverted. In the first chapter, she says that she dyes her hair.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hibiki has bright orange hair.
** MyHairCameOutGreen: Subverted. In the first chapter, she says that she dyes her hair.
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%% * YouthfulFreckles: Hibiki has a light dusting of them.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hibiki has bright orange hair.
** MyHairCameOutGreen: Subverted. In the first chapter, she says that she dyes her hair.them.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hibiki has bright orange hair.
** MyHairCameOutGreen: Subverted. In the first chapter, she says that she dyes her hair.
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'''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on Website/DeviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of VisualNovel/SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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'''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on Website/DeviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down stripped-down plot of VisualNovel/SuperDanganRonpa2.''VisualNovel/SuperDanganRonpa2''. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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* RedHeadedHero: Well, technically bright orange, but it still fits.
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'''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on deviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of VisualNovel/SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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'''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on deviantArt.Website/DeviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of VisualNovel/SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Twelve chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]] Margay is also trying to make a fanime, with Katie's blessings, of course. [[ApprovalOfGod Katie has expressed interest in voicing Hibiki.]]
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Twelve chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]] Margay is also trying to [[http://margay777.deviantart.com/journal/YOOOO-524948529 make a fanime, fanime]] of this fanfiction, with Katie's blessings, of course. [[ApprovalOfGod Katie has expressed interest in voicing Hibiki.]]
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Twelve chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]]
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Twelve chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]]
]] Margay is also trying to make a fanime, with Katie's blessings, of course. [[ApprovalOfGod Katie has expressed interest in voicing Hibiki.]]
She's also written a [=DR1=] fanfic called ''You Shook Me All Night Long'', which has some connection to the story. Whether or not the connection to ''[[FunWithAcronyms SiT]]'' is intentional has yet to be revealed.
For an unrelated fanfic written by the same author, check out ''Fanfic/TheSecondHandFool''.
She's also written a [=DR1=] fanfic called ''You Shook Me All Night Long'', which has some connection to the story. Whether or not the connection to ''[[FunWithAcronyms SiT]]'' is intentional has yet to be revealed.
For an unrelated fanfic written by the same author, check out ''Fanfic/TheSecondHandFool''.
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Eleven chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]]
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Eleven Twelve chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]]
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* AnimeHair: Subverted; Hibiki has her hair up in a regular ol' ponytail, and the [[IdiotHair ahoge]] she had in her first solo picture just seemed to be a stylistic choice.
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* BareYourMidriff: Hibiki, [[MarySue naturally]].
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* BareYourMidriff: Hibiki, [[MarySue naturally]].
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* AuthorAppeal: To Bare Minerals, of all things. For anyone who might not know, Bare Minerals is a brand of makeup, that's famous for selling powder foundation.
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* CostumePorn: Chapter 11 is just Hibiki changing her outfit. She even describes her bra and panties!
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Ten Eleven chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]]
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Hibiki. The first time she wore shoes was in Chapter 11, when she said that the only reason she did was because it went with the outfit she was wearing.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hibiki has bright orange hair, which she dyes
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hibiki has bright orange hair, which hair.
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** MyHairCameOutGreen: Subverted. In the first chapter, she
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-> Ohio gozaimasu. My name is Hibiki Frolo.
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-> Ohio ''Ohio gozaimasu. My name is Hibiki Frolo.
Frolo.''
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The troll author out of character is known as Katie, according to her profile. [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/journal/Chapter-Ten-is-Up-495988817 She says]] she wrote it initially because she didn't see many [=SDR2=] badfics, but continues to write it because "it's damn fun."
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* BiTheWay [[spoiler:In chapter 10, Hibiki says that she like "both boys and girls." In Kawaiiwolf's author's notes, Hibiki and Nanami are both bisexual, but Kawaiiwolf is unsure if Sonia will be this or a LipstickLesbian.]]
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* BiTheWay BiTheWay: [[spoiler:In chapter 10, Hibiki says that she like "both boys and girls." In Kawaiiwolf's author's notes, Hibiki and Nanami are both bisexual, but Kawaiiwolf is unsure if Sonia will be this or a LipstickLesbian.]]
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* BiTheWay [[spoiler:In chapter 10, Hibiki says that she like "both boys and girls." In Kawaiiwolf's author's notes, Hibiki and Nanami are both bisexual, but Kawaiiwolf is unsure if Sonia will be this or a LipstickLesbian.]]
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Nine Ten chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]]
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Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]] Eight Nine chapters are up so far, and boy, are they a doozy. A Youtuber by the name of [=Margay77=] is doing a sporking of them [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEb-B5rwUcI here.]]
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* AllCaps: The author's notes. Well, the one's in the troll character.
