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A Main/{{Grimdark}} DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterGod Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[TheTrickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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A Main/{{Grimdark}} DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it DarkFic which takes [[TricksterGod Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[TheTrickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Main/{{Understatement}} far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmonyPart1 The Return]]'' ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 of Harmony]]''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Main/{{Understatement}} [[{{Understatement}} far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmonyPart1 The Return]]'' ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 of Harmony]]''.Harmony]]'', being a flat out {{Sadist}} with the powers of a RealityWarper. He has made it his goal to make Celestia's life a living hell. It could be seen as doing to Discord what ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'' did to Pinkie Pie.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: No fucking kidding!
* DarkFic: Without a doubt.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a cruel vindictive monster and is nothing like his show counterpart.
* DarkFic: Without a doubt.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a cruel vindictive monster and is nothing like his show counterpart.
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* DeconstructionFic: This fic's portrayal of Discord is practically an entirely different character, being a flat out Sadist with the powers of a RealityWarper. He has made it his goal to make Celestia's life a living hell. It could be seen as doing to Discord what ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'' did to Pinkie Pie.
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* Main/{{Sadist}}: Discord's gone from Jerkass trickster to this. Well, in the show proper, he showed sadistic tenancies, but they were relatively bloodless, more petty bullying the Main Six into submission via deception and brainwashing. Here, he's FAR more violent and bloodthirsty, showing a hatred towards Celestia and a desire to torture her through her friends.
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* Main/{{Sadist}}: {{Sadist}}: Discord's gone from Jerkass trickster to this. Well, in the show proper, he showed sadistic tenancies, but they were relatively bloodless, more petty bullying the Main Six into submission via deception and brainwashing. Here, he's FAR more violent and bloodthirsty, showing a hatred towards Celestia and a desire to torture her through her friends.
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* DeconstructionFic: This fic's portrayal of Discord is practically an entirely different character, being a flat out Sadist with the powers of a RealityWarper. He has made it his goal to make Celestia's life a living hell. It could be seen as doing to Discord what ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'' did to Pinkie Pie.
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* DeconstructionFic: This fic's portrayal of Discord is practically an entirely different character, being a flat out Sadist with the powers of a RealityWarper. He has made it his goal to make Celestia's life a living hell. It could be seen as doing to Discord what ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'' ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'' did to Pinkie Pie.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a monster and is nothing like his show counterpart.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a cruel vindictive monster and is nothing like his show counterpart.
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* Main/{{Sadist}}: Discord's gone from Jerkass trickster to this.
* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Discord tricked Celestia into killing Selena when she was young.]]
* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Discord tricked Celestia into killing Selena when she was young.]]
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* Main/{{Sadist}}: Discord's gone from Jerkass trickster to this.
this. Well, in the show proper, he showed sadistic tenancies, but they were relatively bloodless, more petty bullying the Main Six into submission via deception and brainwashing. Here, he's FAR more violent and bloodthirsty, showing a hatred towards Celestia and a desire to torture her through her friends.
* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Discord tricked Celestia into killing her and Luna's mother Queen Selena when she was young.]]
* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Discord tricked Celestia into killing her and Luna's mother Queen Selena when she was young.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: Discord has gone from a HumanoidAbomination to this.
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* CompleteMonster: Roughly this version of Discord.
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* CompleteMonster: Roughly this version of Discord.
* Main/{{Sadist}}: Discord's gone from Jerkass trickster to this.DarkFic: Without a doubt.
* Main/{{Sadist}}: Discord's gone from Jerkass trickster to this.
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: The spell she uses to get into Rainbow Dash's head.]]
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* DarkFic: Without a doubt.
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: The spell she uses to get into Rainbow Dash's head.]]
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: The spell she uses to get into Rainbow Dash's head.]]
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A Main/{{Grimdark}} DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterGod Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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A Main/{{Grimdark}} DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterGod Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster [[TheTrickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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A Main/{{Grimdark}} DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterVillain Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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A Main/{{Grimdark}} DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterVillain [[TricksterGod Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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A [[Main/{{Grimdark}}]] DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterVillain Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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A [[Main/{{Grimdark}}]] Main/{{Grimdark}} DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterVillain Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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A [[Main/Grimdark]] DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterVillain Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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A [[Main/Grimdark]] [[Main/{{Grimdark}}]] DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterVillain Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
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* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Main/{{Understatement}} far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmonyPart1 The Return]]'' ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 of Harmony''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Main/{{Understatement}} far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmonyPart1 The Return]]'' ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 of Harmony''.Harmony]]''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Main/{{Understatement}} far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmony The Return of Harmony]]''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Main/{{Understatement}} far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmony ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmonyPart1 The Return Return]]'' ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 of Harmony]]''.Harmony''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Understatement far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmony The Return of Harmony]]''.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Understatement [[Main/{{Understatement}} far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmony The Return of Harmony]]''.
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A [[Main/Grimdark]] DeconstructionFic with a fresh hot cup of horror, it takes [[TricksterVillain Discord]], the season 2 premiere antagonist, and converts him from a rather assholish [[The Trickster Trickster]] into a full-blown sadistic NoNonsenseNemesis with far gruesomer methods of chaotic torment in store for Princess Celestia
* AdaptationalVillainy: This Discord is a [[Understatement far cry]] from his debut in ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E1TheReturnOfHarmony The Return of Harmony]]''.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld
* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a monster and is nothing like his show counterpart
* BigBad: Discord.
* DarkFic: Full stop.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a monster and is nothing like his show counterpart
* BigBad: Discord.
* DarkFic: Full stop.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld
CrapsaccharineWorld: No fucking kidding!
* CompleteMonster: Roughly this version of Discord.
* Sadist: Discord's gone from Jerkass trickster to this.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a monster and is nothing like his showcounterpart
counterpart.
*BigBad: Discord.
DeconstructionFic: This fic's portrayal of Discord is practically an entirely different character, being a flat out Sadist with the powers of a RealityWarper. He has made it his goal to make Celestia's life a living hell. It could be seen as doing to Discord what ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'' did to Pinkie Pie.
* DarkFic:Full stop.Without a doubt.
* CompleteMonster: Roughly this version of Discord.
* Sadist: Discord's gone from Jerkass trickster to this.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a monster and is nothing like his show
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* DreamWeaver: DiscordDiscord.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7407610/1/Scented-Venom Scented Venom]]'' is a fantastic, ten chapter WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3116129/SoundofRainfall Sound of Rainfall]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7407610/1/Scented-Venom Scented Venom]]'' is a fantastic, ten chapter WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3116129/SoundofRainfall Sound of Rainfall]]
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** Poor, poor Celestia.
** Poor, poor Celestia.
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* OhCrap: Discord, when Luna [[spoiler: [[AwesomeMoments sends a freakin' tsunami after him!]] ]]
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* OhCrap: Discord, when Luna [[spoiler: [[AwesomeMoments sends a freakin' tsunami after him!]] ]]him!]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a CompleteMonster and is nothing like his show counterpart
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a CompleteMonster monster and is nothing like his show counterpart
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* DarkerAndEdgier DarkerAndEdgier: Oh boy, is it ever. It is a gritty, disturbing, gory RevengeFic, flat out depicting this version of Discord as a CompleteMonster and is nothing like his show counterpart
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* BigBad: Discord.
* DarkFic: Full stop.
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* CompleteMonster: Dear God, Discord. He fucks up so many ponies without a second thought. [[spoiler: He's also the reason Nightmare Moon came to be.]]
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* BrokenAngel: Poor, poor Celestia. [[spoiler: [[IGotBetter She gets better, though.]] ]]
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* BrokenAngel: Poor, poor Celestia. [[spoiler: [[IGotBetter She gets better, though.]] ]]
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* OhCrap: Discord, when Luna [[spoiler: [[AwesomeMoments sends a freakin' ''tsunami'' after him!]] ]]
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* OhCrap: Discord, when Luna [[spoiler: [[AwesomeMoments sends a freakin' ''tsunami'' tsunami after him!]] ]]
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* BrokenAngel: Poor, poor Celestia. [[spoiler: IGotBetter She gets better, though.]]
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''Scented Venom'' is a fantastic, ten chapter WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3116129/SoundofRainfall]]
Celestia visits the statue of Discord, planning to vent her frustrations to her imprisoned enemy. Little does she know, he can hear her words and thoughts, and is more than willing to respond...
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!! This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic contains the following tropes:
* CompleteMonster: Dear God, Discord. He fucks up so many ponies without a second thought. [[spoiler: He's also the reason Nightmare Moon came to be.]]
** [[spoiler: Selena/Nightmare Moon counts, too.]]
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: The spell she uses to get into Rainbow Dash's head.]]
* Dream Weaver: Discord
* MindRape: Quite literally.
* OhCrap: Discord, when Luna [[spoiler: [[AwesomeMoments sends a freakin' ''tsunami'' after him!]] ]]
Celestia visits the statue of Discord, planning to vent her frustrations to her imprisoned enemy. Little does she know, he can hear her words and thoughts, and is more than willing to respond...
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!! This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic contains the following tropes:
* CompleteMonster: Dear God, Discord. He fucks up so many ponies without a second thought. [[spoiler: He's also the reason Nightmare Moon came to be.]]
** [[spoiler: Selena/Nightmare Moon counts, too.]]
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: The spell she uses to get into Rainbow Dash's head.]]
* Dream Weaver: Discord
* MindRape: Quite literally.
* OhCrap: Discord, when Luna [[spoiler: [[AwesomeMoments sends a freakin' ''tsunami'' after him!]] ]]