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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"

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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys [[AndZoidberg [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"MOVES!]]"



* MarryThemAll: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it.]]

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* MarryThemAll: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it.]]it]].



* ShoutOut: The nameless KnightTemplar ChurchMilitant [[MoralGuardians Moral Guardian]] who [[spoiler: burns Haruna's yaoi collection]] seems to be ''very'' similar to [[{{Hellsing}} Alexander Anderson]].
** Also, [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]

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* ShoutOut: The nameless KnightTemplar ChurchMilitant [[MoralGuardians Moral Guardian]] {{Moral Guardian|s}} who [[spoiler: burns Haruna's yaoi collection]] seems to be ''very'' similar to [[{{Hellsing}} [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} Alexander Anderson]].
** Also, [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]Witchblade]]..]].


** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[VideoGame/{{F-Zero}} Captain Shotacon]]?]]

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** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[VideoGame/{{F-Zero}} [[VideoGame/{{FZero}} Captain Shotacon]]?]]



-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"

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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] boys [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"


* GenreSavvy: The Slime Girls are. They are trying (and failing) to be DangerouslyGenreSavvy.


A ''MahouSenseiNegima'' fanfiction collaboration story by the tropers of Ala Iridia. The story takes place after the Magic World arc where Chao has returned and helps Hakase build an even more RidiculouslyHumanRobot than Chachamaru. This has some unexpected results as class A discovers the robot and they try to look after it.

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A ''MahouSenseiNegima'' ''Manga/MahouSenseiNegima'' fanfiction collaboration story by the tropers of Ala Iridia. The story takes place after the Magic World arc where Chao has returned and helps Hakase build an even more RidiculouslyHumanRobot than Chachamaru. This has some unexpected results as class A discovers the robot and they try to look after it.


* ActorAllusion[=/=]HeyItsThatVoice: Haruna gets one in chapter 21, though it may not be readily apparent. [[spoiler: Check for a certain ''other'' [[Anime/{{Witchblade}} fanservice-heavy anime]] that her English VA did.]]

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* ActorAllusion[=/=]HeyItsThatVoice: ActorAllusion: Haruna gets one in chapter 21, though it may not be readily apparent. [[spoiler: Check for a certain ''other'' [[Anime/{{Witchblade}} fanservice-heavy anime]] that her English VA did.]]


** Also, [[SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]

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** Also, [[SuperSmashBros [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]


* MediumAwareness: In one chapter, Asuna explicitly refers to the story as a T rated fanfic when it looks like Eva's about to start talking about things that belong in an M rated fanfic.

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* MarryThemAll: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it.]]
* MediumAwareness: In one chapter, Asuna explicitly refers to the story as a T rated fanfic [[ThinkOfTheCensors when it looks like Eva's about to start talking about things that belong in an M rated fanfic.fanfic]].



* TenchiSolution: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it.]]


* BlackComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.



* DeadBabyComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.

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* SayMyName: CHAAAAAAAAOOOOO!

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* HurricaneOfPuns: [[PaperThinDisguise Captain Shotacon's]] horse is named Negi-sensei. [[DoubleEntendre We're positive you can see]] [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar where this is going....]]

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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Haruna: "Give me ''some'' credit, at least. It's not like I go around molesting babies or anything."
** LampshadeHanging: "The way you say that gives me cause for suspicion-yo."


The story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/1/Out_of_Control here]].

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The story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/1/Out_of_Control here]].
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** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[FZero Captain Shotacon]]?]]

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** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[FZero [[VideoGame/{{F-Zero}} Captain Shotacon]]?]]



* DeadBabyComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.



* DeadBabyComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.



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* [[CardboardPrison: [[CrazyJealousGuy Tao Lingshen]] escapes, ''somehow''.]]

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* [[CardboardPrison: [[spoiler: CardboardPrison: [[CrazyJealousGuy Tao Lingshen]] escapes, ''somehow''.]]



-->[[spoiler '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"

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-->[[spoiler -->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"



* [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge: ''Haruna''.]]

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* [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: RoaringRampageOfRevenge: ''Haruna''.]]

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* ActorAllusion[=/=]HeyItsThatVoice: Haruna gets one in chapter 21, though it may not be readily apparent. [[spoiler: Check for a certain ''other'' [[Anime/{{Witchblade}} fanservice-heavy anime]] that her English VA did.]]


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** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[FZero Captain Shotacon]]?]]
* BerserkButton: Turns out Haruna has a ''major'' one: [[spoiler: do ''not'' annihilate her [[SeriousBusiness yaoi collection]], or else she'll use her Artifact to create the Anime/{{Witchblade}} and go on an AxeCrazy RoaringRampageOfRevenge.]]


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* [[CardboardPrison: [[CrazyJealousGuy Tao Lingshen]] escapes, ''somehow''.]]
* [[spoiler: CharlesAtlasSuperpower and MegatonPunch: Good ''lord'', Ayaka. The aftereffects of her MegatonPunch are [[ExaggeratedTrope visible from orbit]].'']]


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* InTheNameOfTheMoon
-->[[spoiler '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"


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* [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge: ''Haruna''.]]
* ShoutOut: The nameless KnightTemplar ChurchMilitant [[MoralGuardians Moral Guardian]] who [[spoiler: burns Haruna's yaoi collection]] seems to be ''very'' similar to [[{{Hellsing}} Alexander Anderson]].
** Also, [[SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]


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* [[WorldOfHam World of Scenery-Chewing and]] HotBlooded: If only in the chapter written by Gundam Kaiser, almost everyone yells a lot.

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