Line #19 Fanfic/OutOfControl


1	A ''Manga/NegimaMagisterNegiMagi'' fanfiction collaboration story by the tropers of Ala Iridia. The story takes place after the Magic World arc where Chao has returned and helps Hakase build an even more RidiculouslyHumanRobot than Chachamaru. This has some unexpected results as class A discovers the robot and they try to look after it.
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3	Each chapter is written by a single member of the collaboration with a thousand word limit and no knowledge of what the next author will do.
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5	The story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/1/Out_of_Control here]].
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7	Please add Tropes as you see them.
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10	!!This fanfic contains examples of:
11	* ActorAllusion: Haruna gets one in chapter 21, though it may not be readily apparent. [[spoiler: Check for a certain ''other'' [[Anime/{{Witchblade}} fanservice-heavy anime]] that her English VA did.]]
12	* AdaptationalBadass: The Slime Girls are trying to invoke this in regards to themselves. Also, the [[OneSceneWonder catgirl waitress slave]].
13	** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[VideoGame/{{FZero}} Captain Shotacon]]?]]
14	* BerserkButton: Turns out Haruna has a ''major'' one: [[spoiler: do ''not'' annihilate her [[SeriousBusiness yaoi collection]], or else she'll use her Artifact to create the Anime/{{Witchblade}} and go on an AxCrazy RoaringRampageOfRevenge.]]
15	* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: [[LampshadeHanging Tit]][[InvokedTrope le]] of the chapter in which [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Ponies]] show up. This has been soundly ignored by all subsequent contributors.
16	** BrickJoke: ...until chapter 14, where a pony corpse is found, bludgeoned to death with a copy of ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga''.
17	*** Then we learn that the pony was [[spoiler:The Great and Powerful Trixie]]
18	* BigNo: When Asuna learns that she needs to rewrite one of her reports, her scream can be heard in Kyoto.
19	* BlackComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.
20	* [[spoiler: CardboardPrison: [[CrazyJealousGuy Tao Lingshen]] escapes, ''somehow''.]]
21	* [[spoiler: CharlesAtlasSuperpower and MegatonPunch: Good ''lord'', Ayaka. The aftereffects of her MegatonPunch are [[ExaggeratedTrope visible from orbit]].'']]
22	* [[spoiler: CrazyJealousGuy]]: [[spoiler: Chao's husband.]]
23	* DramaticThunder: Chao built a Dramatic Lightning ''Generator'' that's triggered by ''evil laughter''.
24	%%* EvilLaugh: [[MadScientist Chao]] is a big fan.
25	* FetchQuest: Eva sends Negi to retrieve a book hidden by Albireo.
26	%%* [[spoiler: GrandTheftMe: Chao's husband does this, along with BodySurf.]]
27	%%* HaremSeeker: The Slime Girls.
28	%%* HostileShowTakeover: One of The Slime Girls' goals.
29	* HurricaneOfPuns: [[PaperThinDisguise Captain Shotacon's]] horse is named Negi-sensei. [[DoubleEntendre We're positive you can see where this is going....]]
30	* IfICantHaveYou: [[spoiler: If Chao's husband's plan succeeds and she refuses to go back to him, she'll be turned into an ermine.]]
31	* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: The Slime Girls are attempting to kidnap people and use at least some of them as their personal harem.
32	* InTheNameOfTheMoon
33	-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys – [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]]"
34	* LastNameBasis: Chao is annoyed that she still has this with Hakase despite the fact that Hakase wants to marry her.
35	* MarryThemAll: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it]].
36	* MediumAwareness: In one chapter, Asuna explicitly refers to the story as a T rated fanfic [[ThinkOfTheCensors when it looks like Eva's about to start talking about things that belong in an M rated fanfic]].
37	** More recently, the Slime Girls seem well aware of the fact that they are in a story for the first time ...
38	* MiddleChildSyndrome: Chachamaru suffers from it in chapter 7.
39	* MurderTheHypotenuse: A goal of [[spoiler: Chao's husband.]]
40	* NoSell: Albireo claims that he can do this to Nodoka's artifact (at least for a while). [[{{Troll}} He may have been lying.]]
41	* OffscreenTeleportation: The Slime Girls apparently have the power to do this.
42	%%* RidiculouslyHumanRobot: Even more than Chachamaru!
43	* [[spoiler: RoaringRampageOfRevenge: ''Haruna''.]]
44	* SayMyName: CHAAAAAAAAOOOOO!
45	* ShoutOut: The nameless KnightTemplar ChurchMilitant {{Moral Guardian\|s}} who [[spoiler: burns Haruna's yaoi collection]] seems to be ''very'' similar to [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} Alexander Anderson]].
46	** Also, [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]..]].
47	* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: The Slime Girls want to deliberately go through an inverted version.
48	* SpotlightStealingSquad: As of the most recent chapter, the Slime Girl are getting just as much, if not more, screen time as Amalthea.
49	* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Haruna: "Give me ''some'' credit, at least. It's not like I go around molesting babies or anything."
50	** LampshadeHanging: "The way you say that gives me cause for suspicion-yo."
51	* TelescopingRobot: While normally looking completely human, Amalthea is completely stuffed with every weapon that Chao and Hakase could get their hands on.
52	* {{Twincest}}: The Narutaki twins.
53	* [[WorldOfHam World of Scenery-Chewing and]] HotBlooded: If only in the chapter written by Gundam Kaiser, almost everyone yells a lot.
54	* {{Yandere}}: [[spoiler: Chao's husband.]]

Context Fanfic / OutOfControl