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** [[TheShining "Heeeeere’s Konrad!"]]
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=174355 Big Sister]] by Academia Nut (The author of FanFic/ThousandShinji and FanFic/TheOpenDoor) is a story with a similar premise to FanFic/{{Lovehammer}}: A MagicalGirl ends up in the ''{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe before the Heresy and leaves a big mark. But the similarities end there.
When the future Primarch Vulkan arrives on Nocturne, he does not arrive alone, a teenaged girl, still recovering from crippling injuries even before somehow finding herself stranded on a DeathWorld, comes across the infant Primarch and brings him to the nearest settlement through sheer force of will.
The two grow up together as the girl recovers, eventually helping her little brother battle Dark Eldar Raiders. The girl takes the nickname of Ga’ri, meaning "Ash Maiden", a name she finds fitting, despite the sometime negative connotations that come with it. As she regains the use of her magic, Ga’ri also helps her "Little Brother" grow in mind and spirit as fast as he does in body. When The Emperor lands on Nocturne, he finds his lost son to be a very different man than even he was expecting.
When the future Primarch Vulkan arrives on Nocturne, he does not arrive alone, a teenaged girl, still recovering from crippling injuries even before somehow finding herself stranded on a DeathWorld, comes across the infant Primarch and brings him to the nearest settlement through sheer force of will.
The two grow up together as the girl recovers, eventually helping her little brother battle Dark Eldar Raiders. The girl takes the nickname of Ga’ri, meaning "Ash Maiden", a name she finds fitting, despite the sometime negative connotations that come with it. As she regains the use of her magic, Ga’ri also helps her "Little Brother" grow in mind and spirit as fast as he does in body. When The Emperor lands on Nocturne, he finds his lost son to be a very different man than even he was expecting.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=174355 Big Sister]] by Academia Nut (The author of FanFic/ThousandShinji and FanFic/TheOpenDoor) is a story with a similar premise to FanFic/{{Lovehammer}}: A MagicalGirl ends up in the ''{{Warhammer ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe before the Heresy and leaves a big mark. But the similarities end there.
there.
When the future Primarch Vulkan arrives on Nocturne, he does not arrive alone, a teenaged girl, still recovering from crippling injuries even before somehow finding herself stranded on a DeathWorld, comes across the infant Primarch and brings him to the nearest settlement through sheer force ofwill.
will.
The two grow up together as the girl recovers, eventually helping her little brother battle Dark Eldar Raiders. The girl takes the nickname of Ga’ri, meaning "Ash Maiden", a name she finds fitting, despite the sometime negative connotations that come with it. As she regains the use of her magic, Ga’ri also helps her "Little Brother" grow in mind and spirit as fast as he does in body. When The Emperor lands on Nocturne, he finds his lost son to be a very different man than even he wasexpecting.
expecting.
When the future Primarch Vulkan arrives on Nocturne, he does not arrive alone, a teenaged girl, still recovering from crippling injuries even before somehow finding herself stranded on a DeathWorld, comes across the infant Primarch and brings him to the nearest settlement through sheer force of
The two grow up together as the girl recovers, eventually helping her little brother battle Dark Eldar Raiders. The girl takes the nickname of Ga’ri, meaning "Ash Maiden", a name she finds fitting, despite the sometime negative connotations that come with it. As she regains the use of her magic, Ga’ri also helps her "Little Brother" grow in mind and spirit as fast as he does in body. When The Emperor lands on Nocturne, he finds his lost son to be a very different man than even he was
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* [[BigBrotherMentor Big Sister Mentor]]: Ga'ri. It's right there in the title.
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* [[BigBrotherMentor Big Sister Mentor]]: Ga'ri. It's right there in the title.
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* CoolBigSis: Half the point of the story is Ga'ri being this. To a ''Space Marine Primarch'', mind you.
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* CoolBigSis: Half the point of the story is Ga'ri being this. To a ''Space Marine Primarch'', mind you.
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* {{Determinator}}: Ga'ri for using all of her power to shelter the infant Vulkan [[spoiler: Despite still rehabilitating from that whole mess with the Gadget Drone]]. Also for singlehandedly recovering from the wounds and infection sustained for doing so, and finally standing up on her own two feet after the first Dark Eldar attack and literally defining the concept for Vulkan.
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* {{Determinator}}: Ga'ri for using all of her power to shelter the infant Vulkan [[spoiler: Despite still rehabilitating from that whole mess with the Gadget Drone]]. Also for singlehandedly recovering from the wounds and infection sustained for doing so, and finally standing up on her own two feet after the first Dark Eldar attack and literally defining the concept for Vulkan. Vulkan.
* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: [[IncrediblyLamePun Vulkan uses his head]] and delivers one to the Night Haunter.
* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: [[IncrediblyLamePun Vulkan uses his head]] and delivers one to the Night Haunter.
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* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: [[IncrediblyLamePun Vulkan uses his head]] and delivers one to the Night Haunter.
* MyNameIsNotDurwood: One of the reasons Ga'ri takes up the name is that it turns out that the problems certain people had in saying her name in her own series are even ''worse'' when the local tongue doesn't even have some sounds common in Japanese.
* MyNameIsNotDurwood: One of the reasons Ga'ri takes up the name is that it turns out that the problems certain people had in saying her name in her own series are even ''worse'' when the local tongue doesn't even have some sounds common in Japanese.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: "I want your sister." -{{beat}}- " “Correction, the Order ''needs'' your sister on its side."
* TheReveal: It's hinted but never outright stated until the third chapter, when [[spoiler:she pulls out Raising Heart]], that Ga’ri is [[spoiler:[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha Takamachi]]]].
* TheReveal: It's hinted but never outright stated until the third chapter, when [[spoiler:she pulls out Raising Heart]], that Ga’ri is [[spoiler:[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha Takamachi]]]].
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: Vulkan's first training with the Salamanders.
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: Vulkan's first training with the Salamanders.
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* SillyReasonForWar: A planet rebels against the Imperium because ''The Emperor's eyes are the "wrong" color''. As one Scout puts it:
--> “Please tell me that our mission will be to assassinate those idiots and I get to use the sniper rifle this time.”.
--> “Please tell me that our mission will be to assassinate those idiots and I get to use the sniper rifle this time.”.
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* SillyReasonForWar: A planet rebels against the Imperium because ''The Emperor's eyes are the "wrong" color''. As one Scout puts it:
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--> “Please tell me that our mission will be to assassinate those idiots and I get to use the sniper rifle this time.”. ”.
* ThatCameOutWrong: "I want your sister." -{{beat}}- " “Correction, the Order ''needs'' your sister on its side."
--> “Please tell me that our mission will be to assassinate those idiots and I get to use the sniper rifle this time.
* ThatCameOutWrong: "I want your sister." -{{beat}}- " “Correction, the Order ''needs'' your sister on its side."
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When the future Primarch [[{{Salamanders}} Vulkan]] Vulkan arrives on Nocturne, he does not arrive alone, a teenaged girl, still recovering from crippling injuries even before somehow finding herself stranded on a DeathWorld, comes across the infant Primarch and brings him to the nearest settlement through sheer force of will.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Vulkan and Ga’ri lead the first battle against the Dark Eldar.
** After pacifying a rebellious world, Vulkan makes a point of ignoring a sniper that ''shoots him in the head'' and continuing on with his proclimations.
*** The chapter and [[WordOfGod author]] both suggest that [[MagnificentBastard Vulkan staged the whole thing]].
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Vulkan challenging the Emperor [[spoiler:to a game of Warhammer ''30'',000: Dark Eldar vs Nocturnians]].
** The Emperor actually does pretty well up until [[spoiler: Vulkan [[DeathFromAbove Deep Strikes]] [[GameBreaker a figure of Ga’ri]]]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Vulkan's pledge to help Ga’ri regain the use of her gifts.
** After pacifying a rebellious world, Vulkan makes a point of ignoring a sniper that ''shoots him in the head'' and continuing on with his proclimations.
*** The chapter and [[WordOfGod author]] both suggest that [[MagnificentBastard Vulkan staged the whole thing]].
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Vulkan challenging the Emperor [[spoiler:to a game of Warhammer ''30'',000: Dark Eldar vs Nocturnians]].
** The Emperor actually does pretty well up until [[spoiler: Vulkan [[DeathFromAbove Deep Strikes]] [[GameBreaker a figure of Ga’ri]]]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Vulkan's pledge to help Ga’ri regain the use of her gifts.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: "I want your sister." -{{beat}}- " “Correction, the Order ''needs'' your sister on its side."
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** After killing a Dark Eldar raider: "If it bleeds, we can kill it."
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* PapaWolf: When [[spoiler: Eldar attack Nocturne]], Vulkan is [[{{Understatement}} not happy.]]
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** In a more humorous example, Ga'Ri in Vulkan and the Emperor's game. To quote the Emperor, [[spoiler: [[PrecisionFStrike "BULL! SHIT!"]] as ''half of his army is wiped out in less than thirty seconds.'']]
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When the future Primarch [[{{Salamanders}} Vulkan]] arrives on Nocturne, he does not arrive alone, a fourteen-year-old teenaged girl, still recovering from crippling injuries even before somehow finding herself stranded on a DeathWorld, comes across the infant Primarch and brings him to the nearest settlement through sheer force of will.
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* {{Determinator}}: Ga'ri for using all of her power to shelter the infant Vulkan [[spoiler: Despite still rehabilitating from that whole mess with the Gadget Drone]]. Also for singlehandedly recovering from the wounds and infection sustained for doing so, and finally standing up on her own two feet after the first Dark Eldar attack and literally defining the concept for Vulkan.
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* MyNameIsNotDurwood: One of the reasons Ga'ri takes up the name is that it turns out that the problems certain people had in saying her name in her own series are even ''worse'' when the local tongue doesn't even have some sounds common in Japanese.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Vulkan and Ga’ri lead the first [[strike:battle]] slaughter against the Dark Eldar.
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* [[spoiler: ArtifactTitle: Ga'ri disappears early after the fight with Puelammi.]]
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* CoolBigSis: Half the point of the story is Ga'ri being this. To a ''Space Marine Primarch'', mind you.
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* TheWoobie: You'll want to hug Konrad Curze.
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** Vulkan built a proto-force weapon [[Film/IronMan on Nocturne with a hand-pumped charcoal forge.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: An Avatar of Khaine appears to fight Vulkan]] and does not last very long.
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** Even if the Mon-keigh were here and had launched at the same time as us, to get through the interference in the Warp would take some sort of [[Memes/TabletopGames navigational genius]]...
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** Even "Even if the Mon-keigh were here and had launched at the same time as us, to get through the interference in the Warp would take some sort of [[Memes/TabletopGames navigational genius]]..."
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CREEEEEEEEED!!!
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* ShoutOut: Vulkan asks Jaghtai Khan "What is best in life?". [[GenghisKhan Three]] [[ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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* ShoutOut: Vulkan asks Jaghtai Jaghatai Khan "What is best in life?". [[GenghisKhan Three]] [[ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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** [[spoiler: Vulkan has a ''daughter''.]]
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** [[spoiler: Vulkan has a ''daughter''.]]
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* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: [[IncrediblyLamePun Vulkan uses his head]] and delivers one to the Night Haunter.
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* ShoutOut: Vulkan asks Jaghtai Khan "What is best in life?". [[GenghisKhan Three]] [[ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] what Khan says his original answer would have been. been.
** "Heeeeere’s ''Konrad!''"
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** After pacifying a rebellious world with only a couple hundred marines and a squad of Gae'ri, Vulkan makes a point of ignoring a sniper that ''shoots him in the head'' and continuing on with his proclimations.
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** After pacifying a rebellious world with only a couple hundred marines and a squad of Gae'ri, world, Vulkan makes a point of ignoring a sniper that ''shoots him in the head'' and continuing on with his proclimations.
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*** The chapter and [{WordOfGod author]] both suggest that [[MagnificentBastard Vulkan staged the whole thing]].
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* ShoutOut: Vulkan asks Jagthai Khan "What is best in life?". [[GenghisKhan Three]] [[ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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* ShoutOut: Vulkan asks Jagthai Jaghtai Khan "What is best in life?". [[GenghisKhan Three]] [[ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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* AmazonBrigade: The Gae'ri, a team of female psykers modeling themselves after Vulkan's sister.
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* ChasteHero: Vulkan explains to [[spoiler:Fara]] how he doesn't get love.
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* ChasteHero: Vulkan explains to [[spoiler:Fara]] how he doesn't get love. [[spoiler:subverted later when Fara offers to teach him]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Vulkan challenging the Emperor [[spoiler:to a game of Warhammer ''30'',000]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Vulkan challenging the Emperor [[spoiler:to a game of Warhammer''30'',000]]''30'',000: Dark Eldar vs Nocturnians]].
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Vulkan challenging the Emperor [[spoiler:to a game of Warhammer
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* TheReveal: It's hinted, but never outright stated until the third chapter, when [[spoiler:she pulls out Raising Heart]], that Ga’ri is [[spoiler:[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha Takamachi]]]].
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* TheReveal: It's hinted, hinted but never outright stated until the third chapter, when [[spoiler:she pulls out Raising Heart]], that Ga’ri is [[spoiler:[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha Takamachi]]]].
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* SillyReasonForWar: A planet rebels against the Imperium because ''The Emperor's eyes are the "wrong" color''. As one Scout puts it:
--> “Please tell me that our mission will be to assassinate those idiots and I get to use the sniper rifle this time.”.