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* AmbiguousDisorder: Konrad is a full-blown mess, no buts about this. The thing is, it's hard to identify what's caused by his WildChild status, what's caused by genuine mental illness and what's caused by daemons piggybacking on his visions to mindrape him. The result is a rather childish man with bipolar tendences and a slight hint of multiple personalities.
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* FailedFutureForecast: Konrad Curze is left perplexed when it turns out Vulkan is able to completely defy his visions of death and despair. While he's briefly left paralyzed by [[HopeIsScary the hope]] it is possible [[ScrewDestiny to destroy the future his visions predict]], Vulkan convinces him to take arms and fight the future.
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* ThreadOfProphecySevered: Konrad Curze is left perplexed when it turns out Vulkan is able to completely defy his visions of death and despair. While he's briefly left paralyzed by [[HopeIsScary the hope]] it is possible [[ScrewDestiny to destroy the future his visions predict]], Vulkan convinces him to take arms and fight the future.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Konrad is a full-blown mess, no buts about this. The thing is, it's hard to identify what's caused by his WildChild status, what's caused by genuine mental illness and what's caused by daemons piggybacking on his visions to mindrape him. The result is a rather childish man with bipolar tendences and a slight hint of multiple personalities.
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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:even ''Ga’ri'' ([[HesJustHiding maybe]])!]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:even [[spoiler:Even ''Ga’ri'' ([[HesJustHiding maybe]])!]]
* BigLittleBrother: In spite of Vulkan's accelerated growth which means he quickly becomes biologically older of several decades and towering over her, he still calls Ga'ri his big sister.
** [[spoiler:This is also the way Teruel thinks of himself compared to his Primarch's nineteen-months-old daughter. As he explains it, he was her dad much longer than his.]]
** [[spoiler:This is also the way Teruel thinks of himself compared to his Primarch's nineteen-months-old daughter. As he explains it, he was her dad much longer than his.]]
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* ChasteHero: Vulkan explains to [[spoiler:Fara]] how he doesn't get love. [[spoiler:subverted later when Fara offers to teach him... and apparently succeeds, as his daughter is living proof of.]]
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* ChasteHero: Vulkan explains to [[spoiler:Fara]] how he doesn't get love. [[spoiler:subverted [[spoiler:Subverted later when Fara offers to teach him... and apparently succeeds, as his daughter is living proof of.]]]]
** Vulkan later speculates the Emperor deliberately tweaked the Primarchs to be this, ensuring there wouldn't be a proliferation of transhumans.
** Vulkan later speculates the Emperor deliberately tweaked the Primarchs to be this, ensuring there wouldn't be a proliferation of transhumans.
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* FantasticRacism: Vulkan really, ''really'' '''HATES''' the Eldar and wants for their race to be utterly destroyed. [[spoiler:Not only they murdered his pregnant wife, they tried to skin his newborn daughter alive and he barely was there in time to rescue her.]]
* GenderIsNoObject: After hearing she was quite skilled ''for a girl'' her whole life, Fara was genuinely floored by Vulkan seeing her as a gifted smith first and foremost.
* GenderIsNoObject: After hearing she was quite skilled ''for a girl'' her whole life, Fara was genuinely floored by Vulkan seeing her as a gifted smith first and foremost.
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* WarriorPoet: Jaghatai Khan is actually quite the philosopher, under his barbarian demeanour and attire.
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* FailedFutureForecast: Konrad Curze is left perplexed when it turns out Vulkan is able to completely defy his visions of death and despair. While he's briefly left paralyzed by [[HopeIsScary the hope]] it is possible [[ScrewDestiny to destroy the future his visions predict]], Vulkan convinces him to take arms and fight the future.
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* MoodWhiplash: When the Mysterious Stranger [[spoiler: The Emperor in Disguise]] asks for Vulkan's loyalty, Vulkan claims that there will be a series of Trials. Now, for the Emperor, this sort of thing is fairly common when meeting new sons- after all, Leman Russ challenged him to drinking and fighting. The atmosphere is fairly serious... and then Vulkan calls out for board games to be brought to him. The Stranger is visibly confused.
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* {{Determinator}}: Ga'ri for using all of her power to shelter the infant Vulkan [[spoiler: Despite still rehabilitating from that whole mess with the Gadget Drone]]. Also for singlehandedly recovering from the wounds and infection sustained for doing so, and finally standing up on her own two feet after the first Dark Eldar attack and literally defining the concept for Vulkan.
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* {{Determinator}}: Ga'ri for using all of her power to shelter the infant Vulkan [[spoiler: Despite despite still rehabilitating recovering from that whole mess with the Gadget Drone]]. Also for singlehandedly recovering from the wounds and infection sustained for doing so, and finally standing up on her own two feet after the first Dark Eldar attack and literally defining the concept for Vulkan.
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* BigBrotherMentor: Ga'ri. It's right there in the title.
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* BigBrotherMentor: BigSisterMentor: Ga'ri. It's right there in the title.
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** [[spoiler:The Emperor secretly gathering samples of Ga’ri's DNA]]
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** See also the Reveals below
** Puelammi [[spoiler: getting possessed]]
** See also the Reveals below
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** [[spoiler:The Emperor secretly gathering samples of Ga’ri's DNA]]
DNA.]]
** Puelammi [[spoiler: gettingpossessed]]
possessed]].
** See alsothe Reveals belowTheReveal below.
** Puelammi [[spoiler: getting
** See also
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** Vulkan asks Jaghatai Khan "What is best in life?". [[UsefulNotes/GenghisKhan Three]] ''[[Literature/ConanTheBarbarian guesses]]'' what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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** Vulkan asks Jaghatai Khan "What is best in life?". [[UsefulNotes/GenghisKhan Three]] ''[[Literature/ConanTheBarbarian ''[[Franchise/ConanTheBarbarian guesses]]'' what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=174355 Big Sister]] by Academia Nut (author of ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'') is a story with a similar premise to FanFic/{{Lovehammer}}: A MagicalGirl ends up in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe before the Heresy and leaves a big mark. But the similarities end there.
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It can be read [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=174355 here]].
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* [[spoiler: ArtifactTitle: Ga'ri disappears early after the fight with Puelammi.]]
* [[BigBrotherMentor Big Sister Mentor]]: Ga'ri. It's right there in the title.
* [[BigBrotherMentor Big Sister Mentor]]: Ga'ri. It's right there in the title.
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* [[spoiler: ArtifactTitle: Ga'ri [[spoiler:Ga'ri disappears early after the fight with Puelammi.]]
*[[BigBrotherMentor Big Sister Mentor]]: BigBrotherMentor: Ga'ri. It's right there in the title.
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: An Avatar of Khaine appears to fight Vulkan]] and does not last very long.
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* CurbStompBattle: CurbStompBattle:
** [[spoiler: An Avatar of Khaine appears to fight Vulkan]] and does not last very long.
** [[spoiler: An Avatar of Khaine appears to fight Vulkan]] and does not last very long.
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** [[spoiler:The Emperor secretly gathering samples of Ga’ri's DNA]]
** [[spoiler:The Emperor secretly gathering samples of Ga’ri's DNA]]
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* TheReveal: It's hinted but never outright stated until the third chapter, when [[spoiler:she pulls out Raising Heart]], that Ga’ri is [[spoiler:[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha Takamachi]]]].
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* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** It's hinted but never outright stated until the third chapter, when [[spoiler:she pulls out Raising Heart]], that Ga’ri is[[spoiler:[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha [[spoiler:[[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Nanoha Takamachi]]]].
** It's hinted but never outright stated until the third chapter, when [[spoiler:she pulls out Raising Heart]], that Ga’ri is
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* ShoutOut: Vulkan asks Jaghatai Khan "What is best in life?". [[UsefulNotes/GenghisKhan Three]] [[Literature/ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Vulkan asks Jaghatai Khan "What is best in life?". [[UsefulNotes/GenghisKhan Three]][[Literature/ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] ''[[Literature/ConanTheBarbarian guesses]]'' what Khan says his original answer would have been.
** Vulkan asks Jaghatai Khan "What is best in life?". [[UsefulNotes/GenghisKhan Three]]
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** [[spoiler:“And if he too is a threat?” Teruel asked “Then the galaxy can burn,” Vulkan stated.]]
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* DeadFic: The story has not been updated since late 2010.
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* ShoutOut: Vulkan asks Jaghatai Khan "What is best in life?". [[GenghisKhan Three]] [[ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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* ShoutOut: Vulkan asks Jaghatai Khan "What is best in life?". [[GenghisKhan [[UsefulNotes/GenghisKhan Three]] [[ConanTheBarbarian [[Literature/ConanTheBarbarian guesses]] what Khan says his original answer would have been.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=174355 Big Sister]] by Academia Nut (The author of FanFic/ThousandShinji and FanFic/TheOpenDoor) is a story with a similar premise to FanFic/{{Lovehammer}}: A MagicalGirl ends up in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe before the Heresy and leaves a big mark. But the similarities end there.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=174355 Big Sister]] by Academia Nut (The author (author of FanFic/ThousandShinji and FanFic/TheOpenDoor) ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'') is a story with a similar premise to FanFic/{{Lovehammer}}: A MagicalGirl ends up in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' universe before the Heresy and leaves a big mark. But the similarities end there.
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* ChasteHero: Vulkan explains to [[spoiler:Fara]] how he doesn't get love. [[spoiler:subverted later when Fara offers to teach him]]
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* ChasteHero: Vulkan explains to [[spoiler:Fara]] how he doesn't get love. [[spoiler:subverted later when Fara offers to teach him]]him... and apparently succeeds, as his daughter is living proof of.]]
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* {{Deconstruction}}: Vulkan basically tells the Emperor that choosing to follow someone because they beat you in one contest is not very smart; that one test is hardly the be-all and end-all of the qualities that make a ruler great.
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* WhamLine: We get this said by Vulkan when asked by Teruel if the Emprah doesnt take well to Vulkan [[spoiler: having a daughter]]
**[[spoiler:“And if he too is a threat?” Teruel asked “Then the galaxy can burn,” Vulkan stated.]]
**[[spoiler:“And if he too is a threat?” Teruel asked “Then the galaxy can burn,” Vulkan stated.]]
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* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: [[IncrediblyLamePun Vulkan uses his head]] and delivers one to the Night Haunter.
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* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: [[IncrediblyLamePun Vulkan uses his head]] head and delivers one to the Night Haunter.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: One of the reasons Ga'ri takes up the name is that it turns out that the problems certain people had in saying her name in her own series are even ''worse'' when the local tongue doesn't even have some sounds common in Japanese.
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* MyNameIsNotDurwood: One of the reasons Ga'ri takes up the name is that it turns out that the problems certain people had in saying her name in her own series are even ''worse'' when the local tongue doesn't even have some sounds common in Japanese.
