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Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards KillEmAll.)
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Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards KillEmAll.towards.)
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* CastingAShadow: Powerful Dark characters can do this. Oddly, there is no LightEmUp in this 'verse.
* DishingOutDirt: The [=StoneSorcerers=] have this ability.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Ny.
* DishingOutDirt: The [=StoneSorcerers=] have this ability.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Ny.
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* GreenThumb: K, with a dose of PlantPerson for good measure.
* [[LastOfHisKind Last Of Her Kind]]: K. Also, the forest dragon.
* LinearWarriorsQuadraticWizards: Natch.
* {{MacGuffin}}s: Plenty.
* [[LastOfHisKind Last Of Her Kind]]: K. Also, the forest dragon.
* LinearWarriorsQuadraticWizards: Natch.
* {{MacGuffin}}s: Plenty.
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* {{MacGuffin}}s:
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* PlayingWithFire: This was even a chapter heading.
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* TokenMinority: Omar and Rica.
* YouAllMeetInAnInn
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Of course, it turns out that HeartIsAnAwesomePower.
* YouAllMeetInAnInn
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Of course, it turns out that HeartIsAnAwesomePower.
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* FiveManBand: The characters can be split into two groups:
** TheHero: Lead (team 1) and Omar (team 2).
** TheLancer: Jerdan (team 1) and Rica (team 3).
** TheChick: Alli (1) and Elm (2).
** The BigGuy: Fin (1) and Skerl (2).
** TheSmartGuy: Ren (1) and Tern (2).
** SixthRanger: Ny (1) and K (2). Ny is also TokenEvilTeammate.
** TheHero: Lead (team 1) and Omar (team 2).
** TheLancer: Jerdan (team 1) and Rica (team 3).
** TheChick: Alli (1) and Elm (2).
** The BigGuy: Fin (1) and Skerl (2).
** TheSmartGuy: Ren (1) and Tern (2).
** SixthRanger: Ny (1) and K (2). Ny is also TokenEvilTeammate.
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* AnIcePerson: Averted. There are several tribes with no powers to speak of, who rely on brute force.
* BlowYouAway: Averted. See AnIcePerson, above.
* BlowYouAway: Averted. See AnIcePerson, above.
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* MakingASplash: Also averted. See, AnIcePerson, above.
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Wait, what? The plot? Wh- oh, right. It's a generic [[TheQuest quest]] fantasy with LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters. There are 12 protagonists, most (but not all) of them wielding a [[ElementalPowers power connected to one of the ten elements]]. You know, fire, rock, sand, water, air, ice, dark, plant, magic, techno. Oh, and [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway heart]], only that's not an element.
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Wait, what? The plot? Wh- oh, right. It's a generic [[TheQuest quest]] fantasy with LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters.many characters. There are 12 protagonists, most (but not all) of them wielding a [[ElementalPowers power connected to one of the ten elements]]. You know, fire, rock, sand, water, air, ice, dark, plant, magic, techno. Oh, and [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway heart]], only that's not an element.
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For other works this {{Troper}}, MaltorDrey, will never finish, see DarthWiki/TheLastHeroes and DarthWiki/FullMoonFiles.
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For other works this {{Troper}}, Troper, MaltorDrey, will never finish, see DarthWiki/TheLastHeroes and DarthWiki/FullMoonFiles.
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Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and RealityEnsues. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards KillEmAll.)
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Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and RealityEnsues.SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards KillEmAll.)
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For other works this {{Troper}}, MaltorDrey, will never finish, see DarthWiki/TheLastHeroes and DarthWiki/FullMoonFiles.
** The Golden Eye and Jerl's Locket are both {{MementoMacGuffin}}s.
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* YouAllMeetInAnInnYouAllMeetInAnInn
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Of course, it turns out that HeartIsAnAwesomePower.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Of course, it turns out that HeartIsAnAwesomePower.
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Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and RealityEnsues. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards RocksFallEveryoneDies.)
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Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and RealityEnsues. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards RocksFallEveryoneDies.KillEmAll.)
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last Of Her Kind]]: K. Also, the forest dragons.
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last Of Her Kind]]: K. Also, the forest dragons.dragon.
* LinearWarriorsQuadraticWizards: Natch.
* LinearWarriorsQuadraticWizards: Natch.
* ShipTease: When Alli and Fin first meet. Actually, Alli seems to get 'Ship Teased a lot.
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* TokenMinority: Omar and Rica.
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* TokenMinority: Omar and Rica.Rica.
* YouAllMeetInAnInn
* YouAllMeetInAnInn
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** There are eight MineralMacGuffins in total.
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** There are eight MineralMacGuffins {{MineralMacGuffin}}s in total.
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* CamelCase: The [=StoneSorcerers=], [=StoneSeekers=] and [=StoneSmiths=].
* FiveManBand: The characters can be split into two groups:
** TheHero: Lead (team 1) and Omar (team 2).
** TheLancer: Jerdan (team 1) and Rica (team 3).
** TheChick: Alli (1) and Elm (2).
** The BigGuy: Fin (1) and Skerl (2).
** TheSmartGuy: Ren (1) and Tern (2).
** SixthRanger: Ny (1) and K (2). Ny is also TokenEvilTeammate.
** TheHero: Lead (team 1) and Omar (team 2).
** TheLancer: Jerdan (team 1) and Rica (team 3).
** TheChick: Alli (1) and Elm (2).
** The BigGuy: Fin (1) and Skerl (2).
** TheSmartGuy: Ren (1) and Tern (2).
** SixthRanger: Ny (1) and K (2). Ny is also TokenEvilTeammate.
* {{MacGuffin}}s: Plenty.
** The Emerald Arrow is a FreeSamplePlotCoupon, a MineralMacGuffin, a ClingyMacGuffin and a MacGuffinTitle.
** The Dark Crystal is a MineralMacGuffin, a MacGuffinTitle and an UnholyHolySword.
** There are eight MineralMacGuffins in total.
** Every tribe holds one key artifact that is guaranteed to be a MacGuffin.
** The Emerald Arrow is a FreeSamplePlotCoupon, a MineralMacGuffin, a ClingyMacGuffin and a MacGuffinTitle.
** The Dark Crystal is a MineralMacGuffin, a MacGuffinTitle and an UnholyHolySword.
** There are eight MineralMacGuffins in total.
** Every tribe holds one key artifact that is guaranteed to be a MacGuffin.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: In-universe. There are eight kinds of dragon, plus sea serpents.
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* ShockAndAwe: Kind of. Ren has a [[ImprobableWeaponUser staff that does this.]]
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* ShockAndAwe: Kind of. Ren has a [[ImprobableWeaponUser staff that does this.]]]]
* TimeTravel: They attempt to change the past, but it only ends up as a StableTimeLoop because YouAlreadyChangedThePast.
* TokenMinority: Omar and Rica.
* TimeTravel: They attempt to change the past, but it only ends up as a StableTimeLoop because YouAlreadyChangedThePast.
* TokenMinority: Omar and Rica.
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Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and RealityEnsues. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards RocksFallEveryoneDies.)
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Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and RealityEnsues. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards RocksFallEveryoneDies.))
!! Tropes!
* AnIcePerson: Averted. There are several tribes with no powers to speak of, who rely on brute force.
* BlowYouAway: Averted. See AnIcePerson, above.
* CastingAShadow: Powerful Dark characters can do this. Oddly, there is no LightEmUp in this 'verse.
* DishingOutDirt: The [=StoneSorcerers=] have this ability.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Ny.
* ExtraOreDinary: Actually, the [=StoneSorcerers=] are more closely related to metal than stone.
* GreenThumb: K, with a dose of PlantPerson for good measure.
* [[LastOfHisKind Last Of Her Kind]]: K. Also, the forest dragons.
* MakingASplash: Also averted. See, AnIcePerson, above.
* PlantPerson: K. Although she doesn't have many plant-like characteristics, she can still talk to plants, so that makes it this trope.
* PlayingWithFire: This was even a chapter heading.
* PureEnergy / MindOverMatter: Because how can you have a fantasy kingdom without a wizard?
* ShockAndAwe: Kind of. Ren has a [[ImprobableWeaponUser staff that does this.]]
!! Tropes!
* AnIcePerson: Averted. There are several tribes with no powers to speak of, who rely on brute force.
* BlowYouAway: Averted. See AnIcePerson, above.
* CastingAShadow: Powerful Dark characters can do this. Oddly, there is no LightEmUp in this 'verse.
* DishingOutDirt: The [=StoneSorcerers=] have this ability.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Ny.
* ExtraOreDinary: Actually, the [=StoneSorcerers=] are more closely related to metal than stone.
* GreenThumb: K, with a dose of PlantPerson for good measure.
* [[LastOfHisKind Last Of Her Kind]]: K. Also, the forest dragons.
* MakingASplash: Also averted. See, AnIcePerson, above.
* PlantPerson: K. Although she doesn't have many plant-like characteristics, she can still talk to plants, so that makes it this trope.
* PlayingWithFire: This was even a chapter heading.
* PureEnergy / MindOverMatter: Because how can you have a fantasy kingdom without a wizard?
* ShockAndAwe: Kind of. Ren has a [[ImprobableWeaponUser staff that does this.]]
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This was my first major project. And when I say major, I mean [=HUGE=]. It was going to be the entire history of one fantasy kingdom. It would never end. When I grew old, I would find a young writer whom I admired, and train my padawan for the task of [[ShapedLikeItself continuing the continuity.]]
...it's currently sitting on my computer at 95 pages, all but untouched for the last three years.
Wait, what? The plot? Wh- oh, right. It's a generic [[TheQuest quest]] fantasy with LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters. There are 12 protagonists, most (but not all) of them wielding a [[ElementalPowers power connected to one of the ten elements]]. You know, fire, rock, sand, water, air, ice, dark, plant, magic, techno. Oh, and [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway heart]], only that's not an element.
Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and RealityEnsues. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards RocksFallEveryoneDies.)
...it's currently sitting on my computer at 95 pages, all but untouched for the last three years.
Wait, what? The plot? Wh- oh, right. It's a generic [[TheQuest quest]] fantasy with LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters. There are 12 protagonists, most (but not all) of them wielding a [[ElementalPowers power connected to one of the ten elements]]. You know, fire, rock, sand, water, air, ice, dark, plant, magic, techno. Oh, and [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway heart]], only that's not an element.
Nearly all of the protagonists are from different tribes connected with said powers, and the entire plot of the first book was merely setting up the YouAllMeetInAnInn scenario. But the tribes are at war, and RealityEnsues. Yes, AnyoneCanDie. (In fact, I believe it was heading towards RocksFallEveryoneDies.)
