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* NorseMythology - Aside from the deities being based on Norse gods, the character in the second of the two folk stories is renamed [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garmr Garm]], after the hound which guards the gates of Hel. Garm is destroyed during Ragnorok [[spoiler:which parallels Alyosha's death during the civil war of later books]].
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* BigBadassWolf - Woolf and Dobrovolsky both have trouble controlling their tempers. Woolf, living in a rougher, dirtier world openly fights with the paupers. Dobrovolsky has to learn - with the help of Trowes and Keaton, and the sensory deprivation "tranquilising" techniques used at Osbourne - to master his own fits of rage. Both nearly lose their positions in society because of their openness about their conditions.
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* SavageWolves- Woolf and Dobrovolsky both have trouble controlling their tempers. Woolf, living in a rougher, dirtier world openly fights with the paupers. Dobrovolsky has to learn - with the help of Trowes and Keaton, and the sensory deprivation "tranquilising" techniques used at Osbourne - to master his own fits of rage. Both nearly lose their positions in society because of their openness about their conditions.
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* NamesToRunAwayFrom - by the end of the book, virtually anyone with an animal name is suspect - and that goes double for anyone named after a predator.
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* NamesToRunAwayFrom NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast - by the end of the book, virtually anyone with an animal name is suspect - and that goes double for anyone named after a predator.
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** [[IncrediblyLamePun Shackle]][[{{Lampshaded}} ton]]. Yes, the clue is in the name, mentioned in the conversation Falls has with his nurse about Piech's own name [[spoiler:which is a little too close for the Salvat word for dog, ''pies'', for comfort]]. And no, it doesn't refer to his imprisonment in Ozzie.
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** [[IncrediblyLamePun Shackle]][[{{Lampshaded}} ton]].[[PunnyName Shackleton]]. Yes, the clue is in the name, mentioned in the conversation Falls has with his nurse about Piech's own name [[spoiler:which is a little too close for the Salvat word for dog, ''pies'', for comfort]]. And no, it doesn't refer to his imprisonment in Ozzie.
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* PsychoPsychologist - the edifices established in ''{{DarthWiki/Ludlin}}'' are somewhat demolished. Despite being played straight in the first book, this trope is averted with Herbert Keaton. Unlike Falls, he knows what he's doing not to be so rabid about his investigations. Seymour thinks he's soft on his patients, which isn't saying that much, but it's true that because of the small capacity of Osbourne House, he works hard to keep the workhouses from committing all but the most insane of patients. He cares, in his pseudo-Victorian way, about the welfare of his patients and their ability not just to enter Ozzie's care but also leave it. [[spoiler:In the case of Alice Gander, though, he - or possibly another Osbourne House doctor - showed little mercy.]] He has the good grace to feel sorry for [[IncrediblyLamePun Shackleton (think about it)]], who compounded his condition with depression and drug abuse until he had to be committed permanently.
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* PsychoPsychologist - the edifices established in ''{{DarthWiki/Ludlin}}'' are somewhat demolished. Despite being played straight in the first book, this trope is averted with Herbert Keaton. Unlike Falls, he knows what he's doing not to be so rabid about his investigations. Seymour thinks he's soft on his patients, which isn't saying that much, but it's true that because of the small capacity of Osbourne House, he works hard to keep the workhouses from committing all but the most insane of patients. He cares, in his pseudo-Victorian way, about the welfare of his patients and their ability not just to enter Ozzie's care but also leave it. [[spoiler:In the case of Alice Gander, though, he - or possibly another Osbourne House doctor - showed little mercy.]] He has the good grace to feel sorry for [[IncrediblyLamePun Shackleton (think about it)]], [[PunnyName Shackleton]], who compounded his condition with depression and drug abuse until he had to be committed permanently.
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* BearsAreBadNews - Medvedev has scared the Empire out of its collective reason. After [[spoiler:the Shackleton affair]], even a man named Hase - hare - commits suicide after people realize what is going on with people with animal names.
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* EverythingsWorseWithBears - Medvedev has scared the Empire out of its collective reason. After [[spoiler:the Shackleton affair]], even a man named Hase - hare - commits suicide after people realise what is going on with people with animal names.
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* RefugeInVulgarity - like most novels or media set in institutions, the vulgar bits are played up to the author's heart's content. It's a staple of the genre - even master of the genre AleksandrSolzhenitsyn's novels weren't immune.
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Novel by {{Tropers/Crowqueen}}, part of ''{{DarthWiki/The Nine Lives of Michal Piech}}'' and the second of three books detailing Michal's life at the Lowe Road workhouse - and now elsewhere. Named after a Russian fairy tale, ''[[http://russian-crafts.com/tales/fox_wolf.html Sister Fox and Brother Wolf]]'' (warning - poor English rendering), and incorporating plot based on the Marie de France lay of ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bisclavret Bisclavret]]'' and several of Aesop's fables. The later novel ''{{DarthWiki/Giedre}}'' is subtitled ''Sister Fox''.
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Novel by {{Tropers/Crowqueen}}, part of ''{{DarthWiki/The Nine Lives of Michal Piech}}'' and the second of three books detailing Michal's life at the Lowe Road workhouse - and now elsewhere. Named after a Russian fairy tale, ''[[http://russian-crafts.com/tales/fox_wolf.html Sister Fox and Brother Wolf]]'' (warning - poor English rendering), and incorporating plot based on the Marie de France lay of ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bisclavret Bisclavret]]'' ''Literature/{{Bisclavret}}'' and several of Aesop's fables.AesopsFables. The later novel ''{{DarthWiki/Giedre}}'' is subtitled ''Sister Fox''.
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* ItsForABook - Botham asks to see the scars on Michal's backside after he's been beaten by Seymour. It's supposedly for his book on the workhouse experience ([[http://www.workhouses.org.uk/IndoorPaupers/ which did actually exist]] in RealLife), but Michal tells him to get in trouble and be beaten himself, as he doesn't want a large man with an excuse to look at his bottom.
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* LockedInTheDungeon -
** Michal, twice, at the beginning and end of the book. Scarily enough, this was a RealLife punishment in similar institutions.
** The lunatic ward at Osbourne House is a very good approximation of this, particularly for Alexei, who is completely sane at the time he goes in there and used to an active life of quite considerable stimulation, both at work and at leisure.
** Michal, twice, at the beginning and end of the book. Scarily enough, this was a RealLife punishment in similar institutions.
** The lunatic ward at Osbourne House is a very good approximation of this, particularly for Alexei, who is completely sane at the time he goes in there and used to an active life of quite considerable stimulation, both at work and at leisure.
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* StronglyWordedLetter - is it a subversion if it actually works? Kumarin and Botham write a letter about conditions at Lowe Road to journalist Gustave Peterson. Michal drafts it, but declines to add his name because of a ban on him writing anything without the supervision of Seymour and Falls. Peterson jokes about it appearing to be a letter from a lawyer trying to extract money out of someone. But he does deliver an ultimatum to Russell and Saunders to try and fix the main problem - or he will write his own hatchet job on them in the main Breston newspaper. TakeThat!
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A ten-panel cartoon version appeared in the magazine of the Basingstoke sci-fi club Genesis. It is a summary of a distorted version of the novel where [[spoiler:Alexei dies]]. The tropes specific to this cartoon are in a section on their own.
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A ten-panel cartoon version appeared in the magazine of the Basingstoke sci-fi club Genesis.[[http://www.genesis-sf.org.uk/ Genesis]]. It is a summary of a distorted version of the novel where [[spoiler:Alexei dies]]. The tropes specific to this cartoon are in a section on their own.
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* FetusTerrible - Alexei's legacy...
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* XanatosGambit - [[spoiler:Although Seymour's original plan for Alexei fails, he still gains a loyal supporter and patron, and the respect and friendship of two powerful trade families.]]
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* XanatosGambit - [[spoiler:Although Seymour's original plan {{plan}} for Alexei fails, he still gains a loyal supporter and patron, and the respect and friendship of two powerful trade families.]]
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* GambitRoulette - in-universe example. Seymour ''knows'' he is leaving a lot of elements in his plan to get rid of Alyosha to chance. But the way his mind works, and his success with Michal out of sheer opportunism, is making him greedy enough to at least try.
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* XanatosRoulette - in-universe example. Seymour ''knows'' he is leaving a lot of elements in his plan to get rid of Alyosha to chance. But the way his mind works, and his success with Michal out of sheer opportunism, is making him greedy enough to at least try.
* XanatosSpeedChess - some of Seymour's plans depend on him spotting an opportunity and taking it, and moving on to the next avenue once one is closed off.
* XanatosSpeedChess - some of Seymour's plans depend on him spotting an opportunity and taking it, and moving on to the next avenue once one is closed off.
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* TalkativeLoon - Woolf in hospital. He's upset about what he has been exposed to in the mental hygiene ward and can't help rambling on about it even when [[spoiler:Russell is trying to get him to focus on getting his keys back from stores]].
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* InstantSedation - invoked twice to the same character. [[spoiler:Once - Alexei in the nip when Frinton tries to rob him and Voronov. Second time - in Ozzie, where the court has ruled that he should be transferred to the lunatic ward and they have to get him there without him transforming out of fear.]]
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* NamesToRunAwayFrom - by the end of the book, virtually anyone with an animal name is suspect - and that goes double for anyone named after a predator.
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* PosterGalleryBedroom - Woolf and his pictures from the illustrated papers. They are mostly pin-ups.
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* CityOfWeirdos - you can find anything in Lockley; even stray wolves don't raise an eyebrow...
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* DreamingTheTruth - Carrie has a dream about [[spoiler:a wolf, leading Greta to subtly spin it towards identifying Alexei's secret.]]
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* DreamingTheTruth - Carrie has a dream about [[spoiler:a wolf, leading Greta to subtly spin it towards identifying Alexei's secret.]] ]]
* EndingMemorialService - Michal gives Wojtek one alone at the beginning of the book, because no-one else has.
* EndingMemorialService - Michal gives Wojtek one alone at the beginning of the book, because no-one else has.
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* NurseRatched - Grainger, notorious for his treatment of Shackleton and threatened periodically with disciplinary action by Keaton, [[spoiler:eventually gets his hands on Alexei]]...
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* NurseRatched - a male variant on this psychiatric orderly trope. Grainger, notorious for his treatment of Shackleton and threatened periodically with disciplinary action by Keaton, [[spoiler:eventually gets his hands on Alexei]]...
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* TheNurseRatched - Grainger, notorious for his treatment of Shackleton and threatened periodically with disciplinary action by Keaton, [[spoiler:eventually gets his hands on Alexei]]...
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* TheNurseRatched NurseRatched - Grainger, notorious for his treatment of Shackleton and threatened periodically with disciplinary action by Keaton, [[spoiler:eventually gets his hands on Alexei]]...
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* NurseRatchet - Grainger, notorious for his treatment of Shackleton and threatened periodically with disciplinary action by Keaton, [[spoiler:eventually gets his hands on Alexei]]...
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* NurseRatchet TheNurseRatched - Grainger, notorious for his treatment of Shackleton and threatened periodically with disciplinary action by Keaton, [[spoiler:eventually gets his hands on Alexei]]...
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* NurseRatchet - Grainger, notorious for his treatment of Shackleton and threatened periodically with disciplinary action by Keaton, [[spoiler:eventually gets his hands on Alexei]]...
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* TheOphelia - Ingrid - we even meet her picking flowers in the grounds of Ozzie. Carrie, to a certain level, is regarded as such by her male friends and relatives, but [[spoiler:Alexei's own confinement propels her back to reality and finds her the occupation she needs to regain control over her grief for Michal]].
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* DerailingLoveInterests - [[spoiler:Hilda and Michal. There had to be some sort of contrivance here; perhaps it was orchestrated by Seymour, but perhaps it really was only a flash in the pan. Or perhaps she really didn't love him as much as he loved her.]]
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* DepravedHomosexual - Ellis. Some of the things Yuri talks about in the first scene are pretty lurid, and he's no shrinking violet either. It's not altogether certain that it happened quite like that, but Ellis, [[AnythingThatMoves bisexual to the last]], doesn't deny it either. [[spoiler:The climax happens because Michal turns down Yuri's offensive advances.]] Averted with Silnov; it is an incidental part of his character, but it's implied when Mlynarczyk is talking to Michal [[spoiler:[[BiTheWay who]] admits to feelings for Tyne after his death]] that this element has been used by the press to question the liberal attitudes toward it as evidenced by the supposedly heinous crimes committed by "homosexual" Boris Silnov.
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* DepravedHomosexual - Ellis. Some of the things Yuri talks about in the first scene are pretty lurid, and he's no shrinking violet either. It's not altogether certain that it happened quite like that, but Ellis, [[AnythingThatMoves bisexual to the last]], doesn't deny it either. [[spoiler:The climax happens because Michal turns down Yuri's offensive advances.]] Averted with Silnov; it is an incidental part of his character, but it's implied when Mlynarczyk is talking to Michal [[spoiler:[[BiTheWay who]] admits to feelings for Tyne after his death]] that this element has been used by the press to question the liberal attitudes toward it as evidenced by the supposedly heinous crimes committed by "homosexual" Boris Silnov. Silnov.
* DreamingTheTruth - Carrie has a dream about [[spoiler:a wolf, leading Greta to subtly spin it towards identifying Alexei's secret.]]
* DreamingTheTruth - Carrie has a dream about [[spoiler:a wolf, leading Greta to subtly spin it towards identifying Alexei's secret.]]
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* InsaneEqualsViolent - what most people think is the case, and one of the reasons for the asylums being scary in popular imagination if not so bad in reality. In Michal's case, Seymour is constantly trying to push him over the edge so the courts will lock him up as a dangerous lunatic; but Michal's insanity, and that of some of the actual patients at Osbourne House is of the quiet, depressed and ditzy kind - all the better for slow rehabilitation or care, but not so great for having an excuse to lock someone up permanently.
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** ''The snips'' - a haircut. [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean Not that kind of snip.]]
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** ''The snips'' - a haircut. [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean Not that kind of snip.]]
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* AMinorKidroduction - Ladziukas' plot thread begins by showing him actually contract BrainFever; then there is a twenty-year TimeSkip to where he is in the asylum.
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* AMinorKidroduction - Ladziukas' plot thread begins by showing him actually contract BrainFever; then there is a twenty-year TimeSkip to where he is in the asylum.present day and his present and unpleasant situation in Dembomiersk asylum as a ward of the courts.