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->''"You better get going... I heard it's suppose to rain soon."''
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->''"You better get going... I heard it's suppose supposed to rain soon."''
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%%* DarkSkinnedBlond
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%%* RapunzelHair
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* MulticoloredHair: Blonde hair with black roots.
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* BackFromTheDead
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* BackFromTheDead: Quite literally.
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* SmartPeopleWearGlasses: They are a hacker after all.
* WheelchairWoobie
** DontYouDarePityMe
---> '''Pollmos:''' Oh, you wanna FIGHT me? Does it look like I can fight? I'm in a wheelchair, for god's sake.
---> '''Kayrie:''' Well, uh-
---> '''Pollmos:''' Haha, I'm just messin' with you. Of course I can fight! I'll take on all three of you by myself.
* WheelchairWoobie
** DontYouDarePityMe
---> '''Pollmos:''' Oh, you wanna FIGHT me? Does it look like I can fight? I'm in a wheelchair, for god's sake.
---> '''Kayrie:''' Well, uh-
---> '''Pollmos:''' Haha, I'm just messin' with you. Of course I can fight! I'll take on all three of you by myself.
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* SmartPeopleWearGlasses: They are a hacker after all.
* WheelchairWoobie
**DontYouDarePityMe
---> --> '''Pollmos:''' Oh, you wanna FIGHT me? Does it look like I can fight? I'm in a wheelchair, for god's sake.
--->sake.\\
'''Kayrie:''' Well,uh-
--->uh-\\
'''Pollmos:''' Haha, I'm just messin' with you. Of course I can fight! I'll take on all three of you by myself.
%%* SmartPeopleWearGlasses: They are a hacker after all.
%%* WheelchairWoobie
* WheelchairWoobie
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'''Kayrie:''' Well,
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'''Pollmos:''' Haha, I'm just messin' with you. Of course I can fight! I'll take on all three of you by myself.
%%* SmartPeopleWearGlasses: They are a hacker after all.
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* HealerSignsOnEarly
* MysticalWhiteHair
* MysticalWhiteHair
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* FamousLastWords: [[spoiler: "''Thank... you. You did something... I couldn't bring... myself to.''"]]
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* FamousLastWords: [[spoiler: After killing Madia, the MC asks for one last question before she fades away. If it's possible to spare the bosses, and Madia responds with: "''Jeruth always pondered the same thing... And I pray that someday... you will find a way.''"]]
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* HairDecorations
** FlowerInHerHair
** FlowerInHerHair
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The page for the video game itself can be found [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/MurderTypo here]].
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* FinalSpeech: [[spoiler: "''Sivvia... I hope she knows... that I did this for her...''"
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* FinalSpeech: [[spoiler: "''Sivvia... I hope she knows... that I did this for her...''"''"]]
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* BeneathNotice: [[spoiler: Zerrin is alive in Session Violet and undercover, according to Zura.]]
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* MurderIsTheBestSolution: If the player decides to fight her, it will lead to her death if they succeed. [[spoiler: She doesn't give any EXP, thus fighting her is almost pointless and cruel.]]
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An unexpected mini-boss on Floor 2. [[spoiler: Selas is repeated- in name, again on Floor 5. They used to be the fourth member of Team RPG and affiliated with the Mustangs before their death in the Rebellion. Their sudden appearance in Floor 2 is unknown.]]
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An unexpected mini-boss on Floor 2. [[spoiler: Selas is repeated- in name, again on Floor 5. They used to be the fourth member of Team RPG RPGS and affiliated with the Mustangs before their death in the Rebellion. Their sudden appearance in Floor 2 is unknown.]]
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A hacker who shows up in a wheelchair. They have electrical based attacks. They're apart of Team RPG, who appears in Floor 5 with the rest of their team [[spoiler: to find the owner of the core they found, which belongs to Zura.]] They are the one of the mini-bosses who do not die with their defeat.
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A hacker who shows up in a wheelchair. They have electrical based attacks. They're apart of Team RPG, RPGS, who appears in Floor 5 with the rest of their team [[spoiler: to find the owner of the core they found, which belongs to Zura.]] They are the one of the mini-bosses who do not die with their defeat.
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An odd, absent minded fighter who has attack based type with heavy hits. He's apart of Team RPG, who appears on the fifth floor after Pollmos. They fight the MC's party after being told Zura is the boss of the floor.
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An odd, absent minded fighter who has attack based type with heavy hits. He's apart of Team RPG, RPGS, who appears on the fifth floor after Pollmos. They fight the MC's party after being told Zura is the boss of the floor.
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The leader of Team RPG, a team of rebels who left their homes to explore the Session. Though it is told they have accomplished nothing by doing this. Ghaund is a little slow, and makes ice puns when unnecessary.
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The leader of Team RPG, RPGS, a team of rebels who left their homes to explore the Session. Though it is told they have accomplished nothing by doing this. Ghaund is a little slow, and makes ice puns when unnecessary.
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* HeroKiller: He murders Maeryn and becomes a God. [[spoilers: It is said the MC must kill him, as he still lingers in the Session.]]
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* HeroKiller: He murders Maeryn and becomes a God. [[spoilers: [[spoiler: It is said the MC must kill him, as he still lingers in the Session.]]
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* HeroKiller: He murders Maeryn and becomes a God. [[spoilers: It is said the MC must kill him, as he still lingers in the Session.]]
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* FamousLastWords: [[spoiler: After killing Madia, the MC asks for one last question before she fades away. If it's possible to spare the bosses, and Madia responds with: "''Jeruth always pondered the same thing... And I pray that someday... you will find a way.''"]]
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->''"You have to keep moving forward."''
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* FinalSpeech: [[spoiler: "''Sivvia... I hope she knows... that I did this for her...''"
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* DyingDeclarationOfHate: [[spoiler: I'm sure she forgave you, but I won't! I-I-I swear I'll... I'll..."]]
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* DyingDeclarationOfHate: [[spoiler: I'm "''I'm sure she forgave you, but I won't! I-I-I swear I'll... I'll..."]]''"]]
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* FamousLastWords: [[spoiler: "Thank... you. You did something... I couldn't bring... myself to."
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* FamousLastWords: [[spoiler: "Thank..."''Thank... you. You did something... I couldn't bring... myself to."''"]]
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* DyingDeclarationOfHate: [[spoiler: I'm sure she forgave you, but I won't! I-I-I swear I'll... I'll..."]]
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* FamousLastWords: [[spoiler: "Thank... you. You did something... I couldn't bring... myself to."
**ItHasBeenAnHonor
**ItHasBeenAnHonor
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->''"This place is disgustingly humid, and water conducts electricity, after all.''
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->''"This place is disgustingly humid, and water conducts electricity, after all.''
"''
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->''"My, uh, my name's Kayrie! I'm a traveler! .I've been to every Floor across the Session."''
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->''"My, uh, my name's Kayrie! I'm a traveler! .traveler! I've been to every Floor across the Session."''
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->''"quotes"''
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---> '''Pollmos:''' Oh, you wanna FIGHT me? Does it look like I can fight? I'm in a wheelchair.
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---> '''Pollmos:''' Oh, you wanna FIGHT me? Does it look like I can fight? I'm in a wheelchair.wheelchair, for god's sake.
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---> '''Pollmos:''' Haha, I'm just messin' with you. Of course I can fight! I'll take on all of you.
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---> '''Pollmos:''' Haha, I'm just messin' with you. Of course I can fight! I'll take on all three of you.
you by myself.
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->''"They were a baggageless warrior. -Madia"''
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->''"They were a baggageless warrior. -Madia"''\n"''
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->''"And the whereabouts of Jen, along to Rhi, are both shrouded in mystery. -Madia"''
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->''"And the whereabouts of Jen, along to Rhi, are both shrouded in mystery. -Madia"''\n"''
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->''"He resided on Floor 7, a place known for its high crime rates. That alone should tell the type of person he was. -Madia"''
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->''"He resided on Floor 7, a place known for its high crime rates. That alone should tell the type of person he was. -Madia"''"''
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->''"He was the leader of a gang called The Mustangs. -Madia"''
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->''"He was the leader of a gang called The Mustangs. -Madia"''\n"''
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The Previous MC of Session Gold. [[spoiler: It turns out they were murdered by Zerrin once they got to the tenth floor.]]
The Previous MC of Session Gold. [[spoiler: It turns out they were murdered by Zerrin once they got to the tenth floor.]]
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The Previous MC of Session Gold. Described by Madia as a selfless hero, who abstained from gender or romance. [[spoiler: It turns out they were murdered by Zerrin once they got to the tenth floor.]]
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!!!Maeryn's previous party members
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!!!Maeryn's previous party team members
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Description
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Jen is described as a shy girl with no home, and one of the first to join Maeryn's team. Rhi was a punkish biker, but her fate remains unknown. It is said Jen trained for nine months to beat Zerrin, and to become strong enough to kill a God. Whether she did so or not remains unknown.
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A gang called the Mustangs, known for their powers, body counts and for overall, being awful people. They lived on Floor 7, and Zerrin was the leader of them. The rest of the members are unknown by name.
A gang called the Mustangs, known for their powers, body counts and for overall, being awful people. They lived on Floor 7, and Zerrin was the leader of them. The rest of the members are unknown by name.
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A gang called the Mustangs, known for their matchless powers, body counts and for overall, being awful people. They lived on Floor 7, and Zerrin was the leader of them. The rest of the members are unknown by name.
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!!!!!![[caption-width-right:104:Click [[labelnote:here]][[/labelnote]]to see her battle sprite.]]
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!!!!!![[caption-width-right:104:Click [[labelnote:here]][[/labelnote]]to [[labelnote:here]]http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/zura.png[[/labelnote]]to see her battle sprite.]]
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!!!!!![[caption-width-right:104:Click [[labelnote:here]][[/labelnote]]to see her battle sprite.]]
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!!!!!![[caption-width-right:104:Click [[labelnote:here]][[/labelnote]]to [[labelnote:here]]http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/urban.png[[/labelnote]]to see her battle sprite.]]
