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* CartoonDogBreed: They're a small yellow FunnyAnimal dog. They look a bit like a Golden Retriever, but their family look like other different dog breeds... and their dad is a raccoon, further muddying the waters.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: If visited in the post-game, [[spoiler:they admit to being so old that they've witnessed ''cycles'' of corruption caused by wielders not taking care of the pain in their hearts, but a combination of their own elderly forgetfulness and assuming such information was still spread at the surface led to her neglecting to mention this back when it would have been useful]].
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: If visited in the post-game, [[spoiler:they admit [[spoiler:she admits to being so old that they've she's witnessed ''cycles'' of corruption caused by wielders not taking care of the pain in their hearts, but a combination of their her own elderly forgetfulness and assuming such information was still spread at the surface led to her neglecting to mention this back when it would have been useful]].
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* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
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* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized capitalizes them regardless of their place in the sentence.
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* CoolOldGuy: Pizza notes out loud that he's much less, uh, ''intense'' than the other wielders, and he explains that the brush can be a burden when you're wielding it.
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* CoolOldGuy: Pizza notes out loud that he's much less, uh, less... ''intense'' than the other wielders, and he explains that the brush can be a burden when you're wielding it.
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* WackyMarriageProposal: More of a "Wacky Can-We-Date Proposal", but instead of addressing their SecondLove directly, [[spoiler:she has Pizza deliver a letter conveying her feelings to "the most beautiful girl in Luncheon"]].
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* WackyMarriageProposal: More of a "Wacky Can-We-Date Proposal", but instead of addressing their her SecondLove directly, [[spoiler:she has Pizza deliver a letter conveying her feelings to "the most beautiful girl in Luncheon"]].
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* CommonalityConnection: They turn out to have quite a bit in common with [[spoiler:Chicory because they both have similar thoughts concerning their inadequacies and self-worth. It's what allows Pizza to actually bond with Chicory.]]
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* MirrorCharacter: They turn out to have quite a bit in common with [[spoiler:Chicory because they both have similar thoughts concerning their inadequacies and self-worth. It's what allows Pizza to actually bond with Chicory.]]
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* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big to Pea's little.
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* BigGuyLittleGuy: The little to Ginger's big.
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* TheMentor: After [[spoiler:Pizza helps her deal with her anxiety while admitting their own]], she helps Pizza become a proper wielder.
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* TheMentor: MentorArchetype: After [[spoiler:Pizza helps her deal with her anxiety while admitting their own]], she helps Pizza become a proper wielder.
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* SternTeacher: She was one to Chicory. [[spoiler:Which unfortunately contributed to Chicory's later breakdown.]]
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* SternTeacher: She was one a strict mentor to Chicory. [[spoiler:Which Chicory, who [[spoiler:pressured her into being perfect so the latter can prove her worth as a Wielder, which unfortunately contributed to Chicory's later breakdown.]]
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* TheMentor: After [[spoiler:Pizza helps her deal with her anxiety while admitting their own]], she helps Pizza become a proper wielder.
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* TheMentor: MentorArchetype: After [[spoiler:Pizza helps her deal with her anxiety while admitting their own]], she helps Pizza become a proper wielder.
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* SternTeacher: She was one to Chicory. [[spoiler:Which unfortunately contributed to Chicory's later breakdown.]]
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* SternTeacher: She was one a strict mentor to Chicory. [[spoiler:Which Chicory, who [[spoiler:pressured her into being perfect so the latter can prove her worth as a Wielder, which unfortunately contributed to Chicory's later breakdown.]]
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: The game is as much about [[CharacterTitle Chicory]] as it is the player character.
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: The game is as much about [[CharacterTitle [[SecondaryCharacterTitle Chicory]] as it is the player character.
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* SuperDrowningSkills: Despite gaining the ability to swim through paint, they can't swim in actual bodies of water because falling into one instantly teleports them back to dry land.
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* SuperDrowningSkills: Despite gaining the ability to swim through paint, they can't swim in actual bodies of water until they unlock the ability to do so because falling into one instantly teleports them back to dry land.
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* WellDoneDaughterGirl: She dreams of becoming a tattoo artist but is afraid of disappointing her parents with it because she believes that she can't owe up to the sacrifices they've made for the family. Pizza assures her that their parents will love and support her no matter what because what matters most to them is her happiness.
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* TranslatorBuddy: They become Pizza's translator for the insects by hiding in the latter's head.
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* TranslatorBuddy: They become He becomes Pizza's translator for the insects by hiding in the latter's head.
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* WallCrawl: The fourth Brush ability they unlock allows them to swim through paint up vertical surfaces.
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* TranslatorBuddy: They become Pizza's translator for Queen Drosera by hiding in the latter's head as they explore Feast.
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* TranslatorBuddy: They become Pizza's translator for Queen Drosera the insects by hiding in the latter's head as they explore Feast.head.
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* TranslatorBuddy: They become Pizza's translator for Queen Drosera by hiding in the latter's head as they explore Feast.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Inverted as ''Little'' Sister Instinct. Upon hearing that Pizza [[spoiler:was insulted by a manifestation of Chicory's anxiety in Gulp Swamp]], she asks them if she should beat [[spoiler:Chicory]] up for it.
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* ElementalShapeshifter: The second Brush ability they get in the game. While they don't actually turn into paint, they gain the ability to swim through it as if they dissolved themself into it, allowing them to squeeze through tight spaces and burrow underground.
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* ElementalShapeshifter: The second Brush ability they get in the game. While they don't actually turn into paint, they gain the ability to swim through it as if they dissolved themself into it, allowing them to squeeze through tight spaces and burrow underground.
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* BadLiar: Their mom remarks that they're still a terrible liar even after they've long come of age.
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* AloofBigSister: Downplayed. She's spent more time working on art than Pizza, but doesn't have any bad feelings about not being the next wielder, even inviting Pizza to participate in their art classes and it's clear the two siblings are on good terms.
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* AloofBigSister: Downplayed. Downplayed younger sibling example. She's spent more time working on art than Pizza, but doesn't have any bad feelings about not being the next wielder, even inviting Pizza to participate in their art classes and it's clear the two siblings are on good terms.terms.
* BigLittleSister: Radish assumes that Clementine's older than Pizza because she's twice their height, but Pizza corrects Radish, saying that Clementine's their ''younger'' sister.
* BigLittleSister: Radish assumes that Clementine's older than Pizza because she's twice their height, but Pizza corrects Radish, saying that Clementine's their ''younger'' sister.
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* AllLowercaseLetters: Talks like this, giving them an air of nonchalance.
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* HeroWorshipper: The very first few lines of the game are Pizza praising Chicory as the best wielder yet, and how proud they are that they can work as their janitor. This leads to eagerly picking up the brush to follow in Chicory's footsteps...[[HeroicSelfDeprecation and then feeling completely inadequate in comparison]].
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* HeroWorshipper: The very first few lines of the game are Pizza praising Chicory as the best wielder yet, and how proud they are that they can work as their her janitor. This leads to eagerly picking up the brush to follow in Chicory's footsteps...[[HeroicSelfDeprecation and then feeling completely inadequate in comparison]].
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!Luncheon
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!!Luncheon
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[[folder:Pepper]]
A skunk that's a single mother. Although she's originally met in Brekkie, when she learns that Beans is taking care of her lost kid in addition to various others, she relocates to Beans's house and does what she can to help.
A skunk that's a single mother. Although she's originally met in Brekkie, when she learns that Beans is taking care of her lost kid in addition to various others, she relocates to Beans's house and does what she can to help.
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A skunk that's a single mother. Although she's originally met in Brekkie, when she learns that Beans
Pizza's #1 fan. Pops up wherever Pizza's work is
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* SecondLove: [[DisappearedDad We never meet her kid's dad]], but Pepper calls herself "jilted" before [[spoiler:asking Beans if she wants to date]].
* WackyMarriageProposal: More of a "Wacky Can-We-Date Proposal", but instead of addressing their SecondLove directly, [[spoiler:she has Pizza deliver a letter conveying her feelings to "the most beautiful girl in Luncheon"]].
* WackyMarriageProposal: More of a "Wacky Can-We-Date Proposal", but instead of addressing their SecondLove directly, [[spoiler:she has Pizza deliver a letter conveying her feelings to "the most beautiful girl in Luncheon"]].
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!Other Characters
[[folder:Artichoke]]
A gruff warthog that runs the Dinners Postal Service. Color disappearing from the world has led to a lot of mail not reaching their destinations, so they force the current wielder to deliver the mail.
[[folder:Artichoke]]
A gruff warthog that runs the Dinners Postal Service. Color disappearing from the world has led to a lot of mail not reaching their destinations, so they force the current wielder to deliver the mail.
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[[folder:Artichoke]]
A gruff warthog that runs
[[folder:Marzipan]]
The curator of the
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite his bad attitude, he does genuinely appreciate the help, and awards pieces of an official postal uniform in exchange.
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[[folder:Beetroot]]
Radish's mother, who lives at Sips River. She's fascinated by the common habit of hiding gifts for others around the world, but declines to collect any herself.
Radish's mother, who lives at Sips River. She's fascinated by the common habit of hiding gifts for others around the world, but declines to collect any herself.
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Radish's mother, who lives at Sips River. She's fascinated by
[[folder:Artichoke]]
A gruff warthog that runs the
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* HintSystem: Talking to her has her state what area currently has the most undiscovered gifts, and how many are left there, though she doesn't outright state how to collect them.
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* HintSystem: Talking to her has her state what area currently has JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite his bad attitude, he does genuinely appreciate the most undiscovered gifts, help, and how many are left there, though she doesn't outright state how to collect them.awards pieces of an official postal uniform in exchange.
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[[folder:Cardamom]]
An elderly lion living in Appie Foothills. He was formerly the wielder before Blackberry.
An elderly lion living in Appie Foothills. He was formerly the wielder before Blackberry.
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An elderly lion living
A skunk that's a single mother. Although she's originally met in
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* CoolOldGuy: Pizza notes out loud that he's much less, uh, ''intense'' than the other wielders, and he explains that the brush can be a burden when you're wielding it.
* JadedProfessional: Pizza can ask about why he chose to pass down the brush. He admits that he loved doodling, but when he became a wielder, people expected so much ''more'' from him that it quickly wore him down.
* JadedProfessional: Pizza can ask about why he chose to pass down the brush. He admits that he loved doodling, but when he became a wielder, people expected so much ''more'' from him that it quickly wore him down.
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* CoolOldGuy: SecondLove: [[DisappearedDad We never meet her kid's dad]], but Pepper calls herself "jilted" before [[spoiler:asking Beans if she wants to date]].
* WackyMarriageProposal: More of a "Wacky Can-We-Date Proposal", but instead of addressing their SecondLove directly, [[spoiler:she has Pizzanotes out loud that he's much less, uh, ''intense'' than the other wielders, and he explains that the brush can be deliver a burden when you're wielding it.
* JadedProfessional: Pizza can ask about why he choseletter conveying her feelings to pass down the brush. He admits that he loved doodling, but when he became a wielder, people expected so much ''more'' from him that it quickly wore him down."the most beautiful girl in Luncheon"]].
* WackyMarriageProposal: More of a "Wacky Can-We-Date Proposal", but instead of addressing their SecondLove directly, [[spoiler:she has Pizza
* JadedProfessional: Pizza can ask about why he chose
!!Brekkie
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[[folder:Kiwi]]
A music-loving bird from Teatime Meadows that wants to collaborate on ''songs'', and then ''wander'' around the world to spread them.
A music-loving bird from Teatime Meadows that wants to collaborate on ''songs'', and then ''wander'' around the world to spread them.
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A music-loving bird from Teatime Meadows that wants
An alpaca sunbathing at Brekkie's beach. Wants to
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* ProductionThrowback: Kiwi's basically one giant reference to ''VideoGame/{{Wandersong}}'', by the same developers.
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* ProductionThrowback: Kiwi's basically one giant reference to ''VideoGame/{{Wandersong}}'', by TrademarkFavoriteFood: "Fizz", aka soda pop.
* ShaggyDogStory: [[spoiler:When thesame developers.beach party actually happens, none of the guests bring any Fizz.]]
* ShaggyDogStory: [[spoiler:When the
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[[folder:Marzipan]]
The curator of the Elevenses Art Gallery, which showcases the work of old wielders, as well as modern reinterpretations of said work.
The curator of the Elevenses Art Gallery, which showcases the work of old wielders, as well as modern reinterpretations of said work.
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The curator of
[[folder:Prunus]]
A very small insect that acts as Grub Valley's ambassador, translating the
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[[folder:Peppermint]]
Pizza's #1 fan. Pops up wherever Pizza's work is showcased, wearing their custom outfits, and presenting Pizza with colorless "Fan Art" versions of their paintings.
Pizza's #1 fan. Pops up wherever Pizza's work is showcased, wearing their custom outfits, and presenting Pizza with colorless "Fan Art" versions of their paintings.
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Pizza's #1 fan. Pops up wherever Pizza's work is showcased, wearing their custom outfits, and presenting Pizza with colorless "Fan Art" versions
The leader of
* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: If visited in the post-game, [[spoiler:they admit to being so old that they've witnessed ''cycles'' of corruption caused by wielders not taking care of the pain in their hearts, but a combination of their own elderly forgetfulness and assuming such information was still spread at the surface led to her neglecting to mention this back when it would have been useful]].
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
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[[folder:Pomelo]]
A lemur that's roommates with Kiwi. They're interested in seeing trash from around the world, and in exchange, they give away spare instruments that Kiwi's brought home and never used.
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A lemur that's roommates with Kiwi. They're interested in seeing trash from
[[folder:Beetroot]]
Radish's mother, who lives at Sips River. She's fascinated by the common habit of hiding gifts for others around the world,
* HintSystem: Talking to her has her state what area currently has the most undiscovered gifts, and how many are left there, though she doesn't outright state how to collect them.
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[[folder:Prunus]]
A very small insect that acts as Grub Valley's ambassador, translating the bug language for Pizza in exchange for living on their head.
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A very small insect that acts as Grub Valley's ambassador, translating the bug language for Pizza in exchange for
An elderly lion living
* CoolOldGuy: Pizza notes out loud that he's much less, uh, ''intense'' than the other wielders, and he explains that the brush can be a burden when you're wielding it.
* JadedProfessional: Pizza can ask about why he chose to pass down the brush. He admits that he loved doodling, but when he became a wielder, people expected so much ''more'' from him that it quickly wore him down.
* JadedProfessional: Pizza can ask about why he chose to pass down the brush. He admits that he loved doodling, but when he became a wielder, people expected so much ''more'' from him that it quickly wore him down.
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[[folder:Queen Drosera]]
The leader of the insects living in the depths of Grub Valley.
The leader of the insects living in the depths of Grub Valley.
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The leader of
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: If visited in the post-game, [[spoiler:they admit to being so old that they've witnessed ''cycles'' of corruption caused by wielders not taking care of the pain in their hearts, but a combination of their own elderly forgetfulness and assuming such information was still spread at the surface led to her neglecting to mention this back when it would have been useful]].
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: If visited in ProductionThrowback: Kiwi's basically one giant reference to ''VideoGame/{{Wandersong}}'', by the post-game, [[spoiler:they admit to being so old that they've witnessed ''cycles'' of corruption caused by wielders not taking care of the pain in their hearts, but a combination of their own elderly forgetfulness and assuming such information was still spread at the surface led to her neglecting to mention this back when it would have been useful]].
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
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* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
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[[folder:Slushie]]
An alpaca sunbathing at Brekkie's beach. Wants to host a beach party so guests can bring Fizz, but first needs Pizza to set up some decorations.
An alpaca sunbathing at Brekkie's beach. Wants to host a beach party so guests can bring Fizz, but first needs Pizza to set up some decorations.
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An alpaca sunbathing at Brekkie's beach. Wants to host a beach party so guests can bring Fizz, but first needs Pizza to set up some decorations.
A lemur that's roommates with Kiwi. They're interested in seeing trash from around the world, and in exchange, they give away spare instruments that Kiwi's brought home and never used.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: "Fizz", aka soda pop.
* ShaggyDogStory: [[spoiler:When the beach party actually happens, none of the guests bring any Fizz.]]
* ShaggyDogStory: [[spoiler:When the beach party actually happens, none of the guests bring any Fizz.]]
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* EmpathicWeapon: It channels the negativity of its wielders, and speaks their worst fears back to them.
* FinalBoss: The last major obstacle of the story, whose defeat stops the corruption.
* FinalBoss: The last major obstacle of the story, whose defeat stops the corruption.
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* EmpathicWeapon: It channels the negativity emotions of its wielders, both positive and speaks negative. After being passed down through the ages, generations' worth of suppressed fears and doubts have warped it into an ArtifactOfDoom spreading corruption across all of Picnic and tormenting its Wielder by echoing their worst fears back to them.
* FinalBoss: The last major obstacle of thestory, whose defeat stops story. Chicory realizes that the corruption.original Brush must be destroyed to break the cycle and stop the corruption, but the Brush won't go down without a fight.
* FinalBoss: The last major obstacle of the
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The Brush itself, passed down from generations of Wielders, would usher in waves of Corruption that threaten Luncheon by tapping into the Wielder's doubts and darkness. By the end of the game, it becomes sentient and separates from Pizza, becoming the FinalBoss of the game.
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The Brush itself, passed down from generations of Wielders, would usher in waves of Corruption that threaten Luncheon by tapping into the Wielder's doubts and darkness. By the end of the game, it becomes sentient and separates from revolts against Pizza, becoming the FinalBoss of the game.
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* TrashOfTheTitans: Beans's house is one at the beginning is messy and filled with objects and things she's collected over the years. As she decides to take in more lost kids until she can locate their families, she starts cleaning up to make more space for them.
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* TrashOfTheTitans: Beans's house is one at the beginning is beginning, messy and filled with objects and things she's collected over the years. As she decides to take in more lost kids until she can locate their families, she starts cleaning up to make more space for them.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Pizza's much shorter and looks younger than their younger sister Clementine.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Pizza's much shorter and looks younger than their younger sister Clementine.
* SignificantWardrobeShift: In the climax, [[spoiler:Chicory ditches her Blackberry-esque cloak after deciding to follow her own path and helping you fight the final boss with her own brush]].
* SignificantWardrobeShift: In the climax, [[spoiler:Chicory ditches her Blackberry-esque cloak after deciding to follow her own path and helping you fight the final boss with her own brush]].
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[[folder:Prunus]]
A very small insect that acts as Grub Valley's ambassador, translating the bug language for Pizza in exchange for living on their head.
A very small insect that acts as Grub Valley's ambassador, translating the bug language for Pizza in exchange for living on their head.
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[[folder:Queen Drosera]]
The leader of the insects living in the depths of Grub Valley.
The leader of the insects living in the depths of Grub Valley.
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The leader of
A very small insect that acts as Grub Valley's ambassador, translating the
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: If visited in the post-game, [[spoiler:they admit to being so old that they've witnessed ''cycles'' of corruption caused by wielders not taking care of the pain in their hearts, but a combination of their own elderly forgetfulness and assuming such information was still spread at the surface led to her neglecting to mention this back when it would have been useful]].
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
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[[folder:Slushie]]
An alpaca sunbathing at Brekkie's beach. Wants to host a beach party so guests can bring Fizz, but first needs Pizza to set up some decorations.
An alpaca sunbathing at Brekkie's beach. Wants to host a beach party so guests can bring Fizz, but first needs Pizza to set up some decorations.
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An alpaca sunbathing at Brekkie's beach. Wants to host a beach party so guests can bring Fizz, but first needs Pizza to set up some decorations.
The leader of the insects living in the depths of Grub Valley.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: "Fizz", aka soda pop.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: "Fizz", aka soda pop.CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: If visited in the post-game, [[spoiler:they admit to being so old that they've witnessed ''cycles'' of corruption caused by wielders not taking care of the pain in their hearts, but a combination of their own elderly forgetfulness and assuming such information was still spread at the surface led to her neglecting to mention this back when it would have been useful]].
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
* CutenessProximity: Gushes over how adorable Pizza is.
* RoyalWe: She always uses "We", "Our", "Us", and always capitalized regardless of their place in the sentence.
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!!The Black Forest
[[folder:The Corruption]]
A mysterious darkness that takes the form of twisted trees and blackness. It acts as the main antagonist force of the game.
[[folder:The Corruption]]
A mysterious darkness that takes the form of twisted trees and blackness. It acts as the main antagonist force of the game.
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[[folder:The Corruption]]
A mysterious darkness that takes the form of twisted trees and blackness. It acts as the main antagonist force of the game.
An alpaca sunbathing at Brekkie's beach. Wants to host a beach party so guests can bring Fizz, but first needs Pizza to set up some decorations.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: "Fizz", aka soda pop.
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The Brush itself, passed down from generations of Wielders, would usher in waves of Corruption that threaten Luncheon by tapping into the Wielder's doubts and darkness. By the end of the game, it becomes sentient and separates from Pizza, becoming the FinalBoss of the game.
The Brush itself, passed down from generations of Wielders, would usher in waves of Corruption that threaten Luncheon by tapping into the Wielder's doubts and darkness. By the end of the game, it becomes sentient and separates from Pizza, becoming the FinalBoss of the game.
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!!The Black Forest
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The Brush itself, passed down from generations of Wielders, would usher in waves of CorruptionCorruption]]
A mysterious darkness thatthreaten Luncheon by tapping into takes the Wielder's doubts form of twisted trees and darkness. By blackness. It acts as the end of the game, it becomes sentient and separates from Pizza, becoming the FinalBoss main antagonist force of the game.
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The Brush itself, passed down from generations of Wielders, would usher in waves of Corruption
A mysterious darkness that
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[[folder:The Source '''(Unmarked Spoilers)''']]
The Brush itself, passed down from generations of Wielders, would usher in waves of Corruption that threaten Luncheon by tapping into the Wielder's doubts and darkness. By the end of the game, it becomes sentient and separates from Pizza, becoming the FinalBoss of the game.
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[[folder:The Source '''(Unmarked Spoilers)''']]
The Brush itself, passed down from generations of Wielders, would usher in waves of Corruption that threaten Luncheon by tapping into the Wielder's doubts and darkness. By the end of the game, it becomes sentient and separates from Pizza, becoming the FinalBoss of the game.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Pizza's much shorter and looks younger than their younger sister Clementine.
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Pizza's older sister, and a student at the Potluck Art Academy.
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Pizza's older younger sister, and a student at the Potluck Art Academy.
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* CoolOldGuy: Pizza notes out loud that he's much less, uh, ''intense'' than the other wielders, and he explains that the brush can be a burden when you're wielding it.
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* MomentOfWeakness: At the end of Chapter 3. [[spoiler:After the boss fight with Dark Chicory, Pizza screams at Chicory, including playing into her self-doubts and GuiltComplex. Pizza immediately recognizes that they made a mistake and tries to apologize. Too late; Chicory screams at Pizza to GetOut.]]
* NotSoDifferent: They turn out to have quite a bit in common with [[spoiler:Chicory because they both have similar thoughts concerning their inadequacies and self-worth. It's what allows Pizza to actually bond with Chicory.]]
* NotSoDifferent: They turn out to have quite a bit in common with [[spoiler:Chicory because they both have similar thoughts concerning their inadequacies and self-worth. It's what allows Pizza to actually bond with Chicory.]]
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* MomentOfWeakness: At the end of Chapter 3. [[spoiler:After the boss fight with Dark Chicory, Pizza screams at Chicory, including playing into her self-doubts and GuiltComplex. Pizza immediately recognizes that they made a mistake and tries to apologize. Too late; Chicory screams at Pizza to GetOut.]]
* NotSoDifferent:MirrorCharacter: They turn out to have quite a bit in common with [[spoiler:Chicory because they both have similar thoughts concerning their inadequacies and self-worth. It's what allows Pizza to actually bond with Chicory.]]
* NotSoDifferent: