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RamenChef Since: Dec, 2017 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#1: Mar 21st 2019 at 5:27:29 PM

I like this image for the villain drawing on the left, but it's a bit text-heavy. Any ideas for how this could be improved? Say, involving Show, Don't Tell?

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#2: Mar 21st 2019 at 9:14:19 PM

Opened...not really seeing an issue with it.

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bitemytail Since: Dec, 2011
#5: Mar 21st 2019 at 9:32:22 PM

Weak Keep Until Better Image Suggested, I guess.

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#6: Mar 21st 2019 at 11:25:10 PM

I'll go with a weak keep.

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Morgenthaler Since: Feb, 2016
#7: Mar 21st 2019 at 11:45:00 PM

Keep Until Better Image Suggested.

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#8: Mar 22nd 2019 at 2:14:18 AM

Keep

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DRCEQ Since: Oct, 2009
#9: Mar 22nd 2019 at 3:56:46 AM

From a meta standpoint, the whole point of the trope is that the villain has no objectively strong defining motivations for villainy. I don't know how to demonstrate this unless we find a webcomic of some sort that lampshades the situation of a character being evil for "reasons."

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#10: Mar 22nd 2019 at 9:00:39 AM

The image itself is fine, it describes the trope very well. GDV is basically "a villain that exists for the plot, is evil for the sake of it"

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#11: Mar 22nd 2019 at 10:00:42 AM

Keep.

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#12: Mar 22nd 2019 at 9:34:06 PM

Definite consensus to keep the current; the tag is updated. Locking up.

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