The current does seem a bit texty...not where I can look at the other suggestions right now.
1 is just ok, I can't tell how 2 is an analogy at all, but the third suggestion is great.
1.3 works.
she/her | TRS needs your help! | Contributor of Trope Report1.3's better than the current, definitely.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"1.3 is great...I'd love to get the fifth panel in for the reaction, but that's probably not feasible.
edited 9th Mar '16 8:23:17 PM by Willbyr
1.3 is good.
If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?Another vote or two for 1.3 and we can run with it.
Another vote.
(Annoyed grunt)Cool, let's make it happen.
Thanks. Caption?
Continue the dialogue?
"I'm just saying, I mean it's so dry and hot there that..."
edited 14th Mar '16 8:03:12 PM by HeraldAlberich
I dunno, that feels like it's heading into Don't Explain the Joke territory.
"But that leaves you with nothing to do once it's dried."
Check out my fanfiction!I can live with that.
Good point.
Sure.
^^^ Ok.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"16 works. It's added and tagged; locking up.
There's a lot of text, which is really hard to follow, and is only tangentially related to the image it's showing. The other Webcomic options might work better. [1], [2] or panels 1+4 of this.
edited 4th Feb '16 9:10:17 PM by Adept