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Thnikkafan ? from Faroe Islands (not really) Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: I made a point to burn all of the photographs
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#51: Apr 27th 2011 at 5:32:10 AM

I like these pages, and they are fun. However, some of them seem completely unnecessary.

I agree with Laculus. I think that Deadpool, The Joker, Doctor Doom, and maybe Lex Luthor should have their own pages. Sinestro and Thanos should not. Mostly because non-comic fans have actually heard of the first four.

Anyone who assigns themselves loads of character tropes is someone to be worried about.
nobrandhero No-Brand Hero from The Internet Since: May, 2010
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#52: Apr 28th 2011 at 12:27:21 PM

Just followed the link to the discussion for the Dr. Doom page, mainly because I was hoping the discussion would be telling me that first-person pages were being done away with. If I wanted to read your fanfic, I'd be reading your fanfic, not TV Tropes. They just come off as stilted and jarring in tonal shift at best, outright useless at worst. Too many of the tropes listed on these pages don't even bother with examples, instead just being the character nattering on about how awesome they are.

I have to say that there have been multiple times when I have seen the Dr. Doom page potholed where I went "Oh man! I haven't ever read the Doom page, this is gonna be great!" only to get to the page and remember why I've never read it.

In short, man, I hate those first person pages ;)

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Caswin Since: Jan, 2001
#53: Apr 29th 2011 at 2:15:18 PM

I respectfully disagree. When I discovered them, these pages quickly became one of my favorite parts of the wiki, and broad statements about "fixing" them (as opposed to changing them back or deleting them, which I can understand) and their implicit stupid, broken uselessness irk me. Since they've come this far, I would suggest the alternate Self-Demonstrating Article approach, but in any case, to be even shorter, I like these pages.

edited 29th Apr '11 2:16:47 PM by Caswin

Iaculus Pronounced YAK-you-luss from England Since: May, 2010
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#54: Apr 30th 2011 at 3:23:42 PM

[up][up][up]Multi-franchise characters should have trope pages because they don't fit into a single work, overarching work. For instance, The Joker is not just a Batman villain, just as Doctor Doom is not just a Fantastic Four villain. Sinestro, meanwhile, is a near-exclusive Green Lantern villain, only venturing outside that work in the sorts of Crisis Crossover where everyone is doing it. Thanos might deserve his own page, assuming that he doesn't have a single, overarching parent series.

However, first-person articles should only be used where they actually add something to the page - to, again, use one of my favourite examples, the Doctor Doom page is particularly fun because of the guy's unique brand of hamminess that makes him an ideal narrator for an article all about him (and it's amusingly in-character for him to be doing it, too - no mere nebbish 'troper' is worthy of cataloguing the mighty deeds of DOOM). Otherwise, it's a bit pointless. I mean, we don't do the Batman page in first-person, do we?

edited 30th Apr '11 3:24:10 PM by Iaculus

What's precedent ever done for us?
shimaspawn from Here and Now Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: In your bunk
#55: Apr 30th 2011 at 3:33:38 PM

If you look at The Joker you'll notice that it's also largely a list of works that he appears in. This is because comic books are hard to list as works at times and it's often easier to organize them by the characters they centre around simply because there are fewer characters than titles. It's like cataloguing books by series.

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suedenim Teutonic Tomboy T-Girl from Jet Dream HQ Since: Oct, 2009
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#56: Apr 30th 2011 at 3:37:55 PM

Personally, I think Doom is the exception that tests the rule. Most of these pages don't work, in one way or another, but Doctor Doom does, because he has a perfect combination of traits:

  • Distinctive character voice that's easy to imitate.
  • It's fun to imitate that voice, and a great source of comedy gold.
  • Consistent character voice. Pretty much EVERY writer writes him the same way, and the few exceptions REALLY stand out.

I don't really think even "breaking the fourth wall" has any relevance. Doom seldom if ever breaks the fourth wall, though he does talk in third person. Deadpool does, but I still don't think he's good for the first-person approach, because his shtick is basically throwing out non-sequiturs. Easy enough to do that, but not so conducive to imparting information.

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PDown It's easy, mmkay? Since: Jan, 2012
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#57: Apr 30th 2011 at 6:41:05 PM

@Thnikkafan: You do know that Theres No Such Thing As Notability, right?

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Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#58: Apr 30th 2011 at 6:47:22 PM

That's not what No Such Thing As Notability means. It means that we aren't going to cut an example because the work it's from isn't "notable" enough.

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MisterBibs Since: Jan, 2001
#59: May 1st 2011 at 2:17:23 AM

I'm going to be contrarian and assert that the Sinestro one is the only article that works. Deadpool is crazy, Doom is egotistically bombastic. Those don't work as a trope page. Sinestro's "This is the truth, accept it" tone works.

Treguard Since: Jan, 2001
#60: May 3rd 2011 at 10:50:37 PM

This is starting to go down a "Want to be excessively serious" path. Leave 'em alone. They're fun and funny.

dontcallmewave Brony? Moi? surely you jest! from My home Since: Nov, 2013
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#61: May 4th 2011 at 3:53:35 AM

There is a difference between "funny" and "childish".

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Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#62: May 4th 2011 at 6:45:22 AM

And it's very much a subjective difference. Don't try to make this into a fight over where that line is for someone else.

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dontcallmewave Brony? Moi? surely you jest! from My home Since: Nov, 2013
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#63: May 4th 2011 at 11:40:36 AM

Since no one else seems to be doing it, I will try to make a Crowner, What are the options again?

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dontcallmewave Brony? Moi? surely you jest! from My home Since: Nov, 2013
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#64: May 4th 2011 at 11:53:33 AM

Er... How do you make a crowner?

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myhandsomevolcano Since: Dec, 1969
#65: May 5th 2011 at 1:04:00 PM

Can't you just make 2 copies of the page? I hate these types of articles myself, but if others really love prattling on about their fanfiction right in the Wiki, let them. However, give people like me the ability to see a less annoying page. Perhaps link to the "Normal" article first with an option to switch to the "in-character" version...?

feotakahari Fuzzy Orange Doomsayer from Looking out at the city Since: Sep, 2009
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#66: May 5th 2011 at 5:05:51 PM

Alcatraz Series: Unsuitable or not? (I'd argue "unsuitable," on the grounds that I have a harder time understanding the page when it's written like this.)

edited 5th May '11 5:06:18 PM by feotakahari

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Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#67: May 5th 2011 at 5:46:34 PM

We have the Self-Demonstrating namespace. The self-demonstrating versions can be moved there and clear, easily readable versions put in whatever namespace the page should be in (Comic, Main, whatever)

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WaxingName from Everywhere Since: Oct, 2010
#68: May 9th 2011 at 9:06:55 AM

What about G La DOS? She's no comic book villain, and she's pretty much limited to her home series. Also she both has her own page and a section on the Portal character page. Does she do frequent fourth-wall referencing? (never played Portal)

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#69: May 9th 2011 at 9:12:59 AM

No, and I don't like that G La DOS has a page at all, even if it's Just for Fun. About the only reason it was done is because her name is a Wiki Word and thus caused a bunch of redlinks. I'm all for cutting it.

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troacctid "µ." from California Since: Apr, 2010
#70: May 9th 2011 at 3:44:03 PM

She did a lot of fourth wall stuff recently with the Potato Fools' Day ARG, jumping into a bunch of other games (Bit Trip Beat, Defense Grid The Awakening, etc.) and messing with them in various ways.

Rhymes with "Protracted."
Seonor Since: Mar, 2013
#71: May 10th 2011 at 5:06:19 AM

Another vote to keep them from me. Move them to another namespace if we have to.

punkreader Since: Dec, 1969
#72: May 10th 2011 at 5:21:12 AM

I agree: the First-Person pages seem...incongruous, to me, when compared to the general accepted style for other articles on the Wiki.

But how are Third-Person pages a problem?

It (writing that way) seems to be an outlet for tongue-in-cheek humor when it comes to certain pages (Contributor pages and Unpublished Works pages specifically). I use it liberally on my own Unpublished Works page, and I personally find it easier to be more objective writing that way than in first-person.

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#73: May 10th 2011 at 8:32:51 PM

She did a lot of fourth wall stuff recently with the Potato Fools' Day ARG, jumping into a bunch of other games (Bit Trip Beat, Defense Grid: The Awakening, etc.) and messing with them in various ways.
I suppose this could be grounds for allowing a character page for her.

I didn't write any of that.
dontcallmewave Brony? Moi? surely you jest! from My home Since: Nov, 2013
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#74: May 10th 2011 at 8:36:34 PM

Actually it isnt. Grounds for creating a character page would be the character having been around for a very long time and having been featured in multiple forms of media.G La DOS has neither.

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PDown It's easy, mmkay? Since: Jan, 2012
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#75: May 10th 2011 at 8:50:54 PM

Regardless of accidental wiki-working, G La DOS is a very popular character, at least in geek circles. And let's face it, TV Tropes basically is a geek circle made of other geek circles.

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