YMMV / CWCollateral: A Tale of the Resistance

• Ass Pull: The ending is more like a summary/outline of ideas than an actual chapter, and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes. The confirmation from Manajerkop that he wrote the ending to get done with the fanfic once and for all, and it is a summary, doesn't help either.
• Catharsis Factor: Seeing the Chaotic Combo getting comeuppance, especially Wild, who got killed by Simonchu, whose clone he made a trophy wife, Simonla, the clone herself, and Sandy, the daughter he turned into a killer, and Angelica, who killed Nate, Kevin's brother, so Kevin killed her on his own.
• Crosses the Line Twice: Some of the Sonee and Rosey deaths. For example, one dies from a nosebleed after seeing breasts and another is mistaken for a sandwich and eaten alive.
• Harsher in Hindsight: The Jerkops burning Chris' house down in Chapter 13 becomes this since the real life Christine Chandler suffering a housefire in January 2014, less than a year after Chapter 13 was finished.
• Nausea Fuel:
  • The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine had her fur violently ripped off and was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, Robbie was deep-fried and eaten, and Cera was infected by a self-replicating bioweapon before being shoved up Chris' asshole. No, seriously.
  • On the flipside, some scenes like the Sonees and Roseys devouring a Jerkop alive are just as gruesome, mostly to show their just as cruel deaths as deserved.

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