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* AssPull: The ending is more like a summary/outline of ideas than an actual chapter, and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes. The confirmation from Manajerkop that he wrote the ending to get done with the fanfic once and for all doesn't help either.
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* AssPull: The ending is more like a summary/outline of ideas than an actual chapter, and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes. The confirmation from Manajerkop that he wrote the ending to get done with the fanfic once and for all all, and it ''is'' a summary, doesn't help either.
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* AssPull: The ending reads more like a summary than an actual chapter., and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes. The confirmation from Manajerkop that he wrote the ending to get done with the fanfic once and for all doesn't help either.
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* AssPull: The ending reads is more like a summary summary/outline of ideas than an actual chapter., chapter, and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes. The confirmation from Manajerkop that he wrote the ending to get done with the fanfic once and for all doesn't help either.
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* AssPull: The ending was mostly written to get the fanfic over with once and for all, and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes. In fact, the ending reads more like a summary than an actual chapter.
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* AssPull: The ending was mostly written to get the fanfic over with once and for all, reads more like a summary than an actual chapter., and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes. In fact, The confirmation from Manajerkop that he wrote the ending reads more like a summary than an actual chapter.to get done with the fanfic once and for all doesn't help either.
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* HarsherInHindsight: The Jerkops [[spoiler:burning Chris' house down becomes this since the real life Christine Chandler suffering a housefire in 2014, a few months after Chapter 13 was finished.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: The Jerkops [[spoiler:burning Chris' house down in Chapter 13 becomes this since the real life Christine Chandler suffering a housefire in January 2014, less than a few months year after Chapter 13 was finished.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: The Jerkops [[spoiler:burning Chris' house down becomes this since the real life Christine Chandler also suffered her house being burned in real life.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: The Jerkops [[spoiler:burning Chris' house down becomes this since the real life Christine Chandler also suffered her house being burned suffering a housefire in real life.2014, a few months after Chapter 13 was finished.]]
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* AssPull: The ending was mostly written to get the fanfic over with once and for all, and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes. In fact, the ending reads more like a summary than an actual chapter.
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* AssPull: The ending was mostly written to get the fanfic over with once and for all, and it really shows. There are only brief descriptions of what happened, as if Manajerkop himself wrote it using only his notes.
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** The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine had her fur violently ripped off and was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, Robbie was deep-fried and eaten, and Cera was [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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** The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine had her fur violently ripped off and was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, Robbie was deep-fried and eaten, and Cera was infected by a self-replicating bioweapon before being [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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** The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, Robbie was deep-fried and eaten, and Cera was [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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** The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine had her fur violently ripped off and was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, Robbie was deep-fried and eaten, and Cera was [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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** The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine was mutilated beyond recognition, Robbie was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, and Cera was [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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** The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine was mutilated beyond recognition, Robbie was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, Robbie was deep-fried and eaten, and Cera was [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: Some of the Sonee and Rosey deaths. For example, one dies from a nosebleed after seeing breasts and another is mistaken for a sandwich and eaten alive.
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* NauseaFuel: The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine was mutilated beyond recognition, Robbie was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, and Cera was [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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* NauseaFuel: NauseaFuel:
** The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine was mutilated beyond recognition, Robbie was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, and Cera was [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]]]
** On the flipside, some scenes like [[spoiler:the Sonees and Roseys devouring a Jerkop alive]] are just as gruesome, mostly to show their just as cruel deaths as deserved.
** The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine was mutilated beyond recognition, Robbie was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, and Cera was [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].
** On the flipside, some scenes like [[spoiler:the Sonees and Roseys devouring a Jerkop alive]] are just as gruesome, mostly to show their just as cruel deaths as deserved.
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* NauseaFuel: The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine was mutilated beyond recognition, Robbie was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, and Cera was [[shoved [[AssShove shoved up Chris' asshole.asshole]]. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: The Jerkops [[spoiler:burning Chris' house down becomes this since Chris also suffered their house being burned in real life.]]
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* NauseaFuel: The fic goes to great lengths to describe the deaths of the Sonees and Roseys that cross the PVCC in horrifically gruesome detail. Operation Hedgeclipper even features the deaths of [[spoiler:Cera, Christine, and Robbie, where Christine was mutilated beyond recognition, Robbie was placed in the washing machine and made to suffer, and Cera was [[shoved up Chris' asshole. [[SincerityMode No, seriously]].]]
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A house fire could happen to anyone, so I don't think it counts as a scandal that should be banned.
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* CatharsisFactor: Seeing the Chaotic Combo getting comeuppance, especially Wild, [[spoiler:who got killed by Simonchu, whose clone he made a trophy wife, Simonla, the clone herself, and Sandy, the daughter he turned into a killer,]] and Angelica, who [[spoiler:killed Nate, Kevin's brother, so Kevin killed her on his own.]]
* HarsherInHindsight: The Jerkops [[spoiler:burning Chris' house down becomes this since Chris also suffered their house being burned in real life.]]
* HarsherInHindsight: The Jerkops [[spoiler:burning Chris' house down becomes this since Chris also suffered their house being burned in real life.]]
