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* TheWoobie: Awng may be badly acted, but he's a ten year old kid who's completely in over his head, isn't entirely sure how to act, and has was saddled with bad material too.on top of everything else.
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** Katara [[BerserkButton does not take it well]] when Sockson, ''[[BrotherSisterIncest the live action version of her brother,]]'' starts coming onto her with bad pickup lines.
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** Katara [[BerserkButton does not [[ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels does]] ''[[ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels not]]'' [[ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels take it well]] when Sockson, ''[[BrotherSisterIncest the live action version of her brother,]]'' starts coming onto her with bad pickup lines.
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* {{Wangst}}: Most of the movie-based characters, at least when they’re not in {{Dull Surprise}} mode. But special mention must go to [[ProneToTears always-on-the-verge-of-tears Katarola,]] [[NoSocialSkills angry-all-the-time-for-no-reason Sockson,]] and of course, [[EmoTeen emotionally-tortured Z-Patel.]]
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* {{Wangst}}: Most of the movie-based characters, at least when they’re not in {{Dull Surprise}} DullSurprise mode. But special mention must go to [[ProneToTears always-on-the-verge-of-tears Katarola,]] [[NoSocialSkills angry-all-the-time-for-no-reason Sockson,]] and of course, [[EmoTeen emotionally-tortured Z-Patel.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: Many of the jokes made at Shyamalan's expense become far less funny when one learns most of the problems with the film adaptation were the result of ExecutiveMeddling from Paramount. While Shyamalan is far from innocent, he had little creative control over the final product and shouldered all the blame when the film tanked.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Many of the jokes made at Shyamalan's expense become became far less funny when one learns it came out that most of the problems with the film adaptation were the result of ExecutiveMeddling from Paramount. While Shyamalan is far from innocent, he had little creative control over the final product and shouldered all the blame when the film tanked.
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*** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] later by Zuko, who [[spoiler: has a small breakdown and [[INeedAFreakingDrink goes on a cactus-juice binge]] after discovering that he is, in fact, a cartoon character and not a real person.]]
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* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]] Aang's entire reasoning for why [[TheChosenOne Awng]] has to save the Movie!Universe instead of him is because "no matter how Lord Shyamalan ruined the movie and the Movie Characters, he can't ever take anything away from ''us.'' We're all fine just the way we are." Sokka agrees that they ''are'' pretty awesome.
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%%* TheScrappy: Katarola.
** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
*** Mostly averted by Eeroh though, who Iroh finds spot on, save his dreadlocks and thinner build.
** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
*** Mostly averted by Eeroh though, who Iroh finds spot on, save his dreadlocks and thinner build.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: Many of the jokes made at Shyamalan's expense become far less funny when one learns most of the problems with the film adaptation were the result of ExecutiveMeddling from Paramount. While Shyamalan is far from innocent, he had little creative control over the final product and shouldered all the blame when the film tanked.
* HarsherInHindsight: Many of the jokes made at Shyamalan's expense become far less funny when one learns most of the problems with the film adaptation were the result of ExecutiveMeddling from Paramount. While Shyamalan is far from innocent, he had little creative control over the final product and shouldered all the blame when the film tanked.
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* HilariousInHindsight: At the end, [[spoiler:Awng takes away Lord Shyamalan's credibility as a writer, ensuring that the film's sequels will never be made. Shymalan would eventually manage to undergo a CareerResurrection with ''Series/WaywardPines'' and ''Film/TheVisit''.]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: At the end, [[spoiler:Awng takes away Lord Shyamalan's credibility as a writer, ensuring that the film's sequels will never be made. Shymalan Awng then suggests that Shyamalan rethink his life, and maybe go back to film school, start over, and make better movies in the future. Shyamalan would eventually manage to undergo a sort of CareerResurrection with ''Series/WaywardPines'' and ''Film/TheVisit''.]]
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* HamAndCheese: Movie!Zhao, big time. '''Did he tell you about the Secret Spirit Library he found??!?!!1!?'''
* [[Harsher in Hindsight]]: Many of the jokes made at Shyamalan’s expense become far less funny when one learns most of the problems with the film adaptation were the result of executive meddling from Paramount. While Shyamalan is far from innocent, he had little creative control over the final product and shouldered all the blame with the film’s disastrous reception. Even later admitting that he was not happy with his experience on this film.
** Also [[spoiler: [[Creator/MNightShyamalan Lord Shyamalan,]] after his [[VillainousBreakdown Villainous Breakdown]].]]
** Z-Patel definitely has his moments, too. Much to Zuko's annoyance.
* [[Harsher in Hindsight]]: Many of the jokes made at Shyamalan’s expense become far less funny when one learns most of the problems with the film adaptation were the result of executive meddling from Paramount. While Shyamalan is far from innocent, he had little creative control over the final product and shouldered all the blame with the film’s disastrous reception. Even later admitting that he was not happy with his experience on this film.
** Also [[spoiler: [[Creator/MNightShyamalan Lord Shyamalan,]] after his [[VillainousBreakdown Villainous Breakdown]].]]
** Z-Patel definitely has his moments, too. Much to Zuko's annoyance.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: Many of the jokes made at Shyamalan's expense become far less funny when one learns most of the problems with the film adaptation were the result of ExecutiveMeddling from Paramount. While Shyamalan is far from innocent, he had little creative control over the final product and shouldered all the blame when the film tanked.
* HamAndCheese: Movie!Zhao, big time. '''Did he tell you about the Secret Spirit Library hefound??!?!!1!?'''
found??!?!!1!?'''
*[[Harsher in Hindsight]]: Many of HilariousInHindsight: At the jokes made at Shyamalan’s expense become far less funny when one learns most of end, [[spoiler:Awng takes away Lord Shyamalan's credibility as a writer, ensuring that the problems film's sequels will never be made. Shymalan would eventually manage to undergo a CareerResurrection with the film adaptation were the result of executive meddling from Paramount. While Shyamalan is far from innocent, he had little creative control over the final product ''Series/WaywardPines'' and shouldered all the blame with the film’s disastrous reception. Even later admitting that he was not happy with his experience on this film.
** Also [[spoiler: [[Creator/MNightShyamalan Lord Shyamalan,]] after his [[VillainousBreakdown Villainous Breakdown]].]]
** Z-Patel definitely has his moments, too. Much to Zuko's annoyance.''Film/TheVisit''.]]
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** Also [[spoiler: [[Creator/MNightShyamalan Lord Shyamalan,]] after his [[VillainousBreakdown Villainous Breakdown]].]]
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* {{Wangst}}: again, most of the Movie!Characters, at least when they’re not in {{Dull Surprise}} mode. But special mention must go to [[FragileFlower always-on-the-verge-of-tears Katarola,]] [[NoSocialSkills angry-all-the-time-for-no-reason Sockson,]] and of course, [[EmoTeen emotionally-tortured Z-Patel.]]
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* {{Wangst}}: again, most Most of the Movie!Characters, movie-based characters, at least when they’re not in {{Dull Surprise}} mode. But special mention must go to [[FragileFlower [[ProneToTears always-on-the-verge-of-tears Katarola,]] [[NoSocialSkills angry-all-the-time-for-no-reason Sockson,]] and of course, [[EmoTeen emotionally-tortured Z-Patel.]]
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* TheScrappy: Katarola.
** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
*** Mostly averted by Eeroh though, who Iroh finds spot on, save his dreadlocks and thinner build.
** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
*** Mostly averted by Eeroh though, who Iroh finds spot on, save his dreadlocks and thinner build.
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* TheScrappy: Katarola.
** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
*** Mostly averted by Eeroh though, who Iroh finds spot on, save his dreadlocks and thinner build.
** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
*** Mostly averted by Eeroh though, who Iroh finds spot on, save his dreadlocks and thinner build.
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** In a similar vein, Aang is squicked out by [[spoiler: Katarola's sudden attempt to make out with him,]] questioning how it's even possible since [[MindScrew he's animated and she's not.]]
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** In a similar vein, Aang is squicked out by [[spoiler: Katarola's [[spoiler:Katarola's sudden attempt to make out with him,]] questioning how it's even possible since [[MindScrew he's animated and she's not.]]]]
*** It does lead to a fun little bit where Katara squeezes and fusses over him while he's shivering from squick...
--->'''Aang''': I... I just feel so... ''Violated!''
***...and later a bit of smugness when he realizes that he had [[spoiler:[[TwinThreesomeFantasy two Kataras]] fighting over him]].
--->'''Aang''': ...''Flameo!''
*** It does lead to a fun little bit where Katara squeezes and fusses over him while he's shivering from squick...
--->'''Aang''': I... I just feel so... ''Violated!''
***...and later a bit of smugness when he realizes that he had [[spoiler:[[TwinThreesomeFantasy two Kataras]] fighting over him]].
--->'''Aang''': ...''Flameo!''
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* TheWoobie: Awng may be badly acted, but he's a ten year old kid that's completely over his head, is not entirely sure how to act, and has bad material too.
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** The part where [[spoiler: four anonymous Waterbenders appear out of nowhere, kill Zhao, and then decide to go out for sushi]]. That this actually happened in the movie (minus the sushi part) just makes it even better.
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** The part where [[spoiler: four anonymous Waterbenders appear out of nowhere, kill Zhao, and then decide to go out for sushi]]. That [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qrMbEFRUYDk this actually happened in the movie (minus the sushi part) part)]] just makes it even better.
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* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]] Aang's entire reasoning for why [[TheChosenOne Awng]] has to save the Movie!Universe instead of him is because "no matter how Lord Shyamalan ruined the movie and the Movie Characters, he can't ever take anything away from ''us.'' We're all fine just the way we are." Sokka agrees that they ''are'' pretty awesome.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Although the entire fic is chock full of random, the part where [[spoiler: four anonymous Waterbenders appear out of nowhere, kill Zhao, and then decide to go out for sushi]] is especially baffling. That this actually happened in the movie (minus the sushi part) just makes it even better.
** And in the next chapter, [[spoiler: Zhao's corpse]] has mysteriously vanished. [[{{Handwave}} Presumably because the Author didn't want to deal with it.]]
* HamAndCheese: Movie!Zhao, big time. '''Did he tell you about the Secret Spirit Library he found??!?!!1?'''
** Also [[spoiler: [[MNightShyamalan Lord Shyamalan,]] after his {{Villainous Breakdown.}}]]
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** Katarola and Z-Patel just stopping in the middle of their big fight, realizing that they're attracted to each other, and suddenly making out. They continue to make out in the background while the rest of the characters just move on with the story, doing their best to ignore them.
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** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except perhaps for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
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* [[AngstWhatAngst Aangst? What Aangst?]]: A couple of examples:
** At one point, Aang briefly starts to have an existential crisis about whether or not any of them, as fictional characters, actually have any volition at all, or whether they're all just puppets being controlled by the author... But both he and Katara quickly {{handwave}} the question.
--->'''Katara''': I know it's tempting, but you can't get into a deep philosophical ramble about the meaning of life right now. [[RuleOfFunny This is supposed to be a funny story!]]
--->'''Aang''': Oh. Oh yeah. Heh heh... ''Existentialism.''
*** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] later by Zuko, who [[spoiler: has a small breakdown and [[INeedAFreakingDrink goes on a cactus-juice binge]] after discovering that he is, in fact, a cartoon character and not a real person.]]
** When Awng discovers Movie!Zutara, he gets over it remarkably quickly, saying that Katarola was too needy for him anyway.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Although the entire fic is chock full of random, the part where [[spoiler: four anonymous Waterbenders appear out of nowhere, kill Zhao, and then decide to go out for sushi]] is especially baffling. That this actually happened in the movie (minus the sushi part) just makes it even better.
** And in the next chapter, [[spoiler: Zhao's corpse]] has mysteriously vanished. [[{{Handwave}} Presumably because the Author didn't want to deal with it.]]
* HamAndCheese: Movie!Zhao, big time. '''Did he tell you about the Secret Spirit Library he found??!?!!1?'''
** Also [[spoiler: [[MNightShyamalan Lord Shyamalan,]] after his {{Villainous Breakdown.}}]]
** Z-Patel definitely has his moments, too. Much to Zuko's annoyance.
* {{Squick}}: Katara [[BerserkButton does not take it well]] when Sockson, [[BrotherSisterIncest ''the live action version of her brother,'']] starts coming onto her with bad pickup lines.
** In a similar vein, Aang is squicked out by [[spoiler: Katarola's sudden attempt to make out with him,]] questioning how it's even possible since [[MindScrew he's animated and she's not.]]
** Most of the Animated!Characters are pretty weirded out by Movie!Zutara.
* TheScrappy: Katarola.
** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except perhaps for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
* {{Wangst}}: again, most of the Movie!Characters, at least when they’re not in {{Dull Surprise}} mode. But special mention must go to [[FragileFlower always-on-the-verge-of-tears Katarola,]] [[NoSocialSkills angry-all-the-time-for-no-reason Sockson,]] and of course, [[EmoTeen emotionally-tortured Z-Patel.]]
-’’’Z-Patel’’’: You just don't understand! I did ''not'' throw a tantrum! I'm a tragic character with lots of issues!
** At one point, Aang briefly starts to have an existential crisis about whether or not any of them, as fictional characters, actually have any volition at all, or whether they're all just puppets being controlled by the author... But both he and Katara quickly {{handwave}} the question.
--->'''Katara''': I know it's tempting, but you can't get into a deep philosophical ramble about the meaning of life right now. [[RuleOfFunny This is supposed to be a funny story!]]
--->'''Aang''': Oh. Oh yeah. Heh heh... ''Existentialism.''
*** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] later by Zuko, who [[spoiler: has a small breakdown and [[INeedAFreakingDrink goes on a cactus-juice binge]] after discovering that he is, in fact, a cartoon character and not a real person.]]
** When Awng discovers Movie!Zutara, he gets over it remarkably quickly, saying that Katarola was too needy for him anyway.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Although the entire fic is chock full of random, the part where [[spoiler: four anonymous Waterbenders appear out of nowhere, kill Zhao, and then decide to go out for sushi]] is especially baffling. That this actually happened in the movie (minus the sushi part) just makes it even better.
** And in the next chapter, [[spoiler: Zhao's corpse]] has mysteriously vanished. [[{{Handwave}} Presumably because the Author didn't want to deal with it.]]
* HamAndCheese: Movie!Zhao, big time. '''Did he tell you about the Secret Spirit Library he found??!?!!1?'''
** Also [[spoiler: [[MNightShyamalan Lord Shyamalan,]] after his {{Villainous Breakdown.}}]]
** Z-Patel definitely has his moments, too. Much to Zuko's annoyance.
* {{Squick}}: Katara [[BerserkButton does not take it well]] when Sockson, [[BrotherSisterIncest ''the live action version of her brother,'']] starts coming onto her with bad pickup lines.
** In a similar vein, Aang is squicked out by [[spoiler: Katarola's sudden attempt to make out with him,]] questioning how it's even possible since [[MindScrew he's animated and she's not.]]
** Most of the Animated!Characters are pretty weirded out by Movie!Zutara.
* TheScrappy: Katarola.
** Most of the Movie!Characters, really. Except perhaps for Yue, and Awng at the end of the fic.
* {{Wangst}}: again, most of the Movie!Characters, at least when they’re not in {{Dull Surprise}} mode. But special mention must go to [[FragileFlower always-on-the-verge-of-tears Katarola,]] [[NoSocialSkills angry-all-the-time-for-no-reason Sockson,]] and of course, [[EmoTeen emotionally-tortured Z-Patel.]]
-’’’Z-Patel’’’: You just don't understand! I did ''not'' throw a tantrum! I'm a tragic character with lots of issues!