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* StephenUlyssesPerhero - Naturally, Ulysses Perhero.
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* StephenUlyssesPerhero StevenUlyssesPerhero - Naturally, Ulysses Perhero.
* BystanderSyndrome - The attitude of the general population towards demons in Demonic Symphony, and oh boy does it backfire.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem - The attitude of the general population towards demons in Demonic Symphony, and oh boy does it backfire
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''"Exploiting werewolf law in a life or death situation against opponents with everything to gain." He chuckled and offered his hand, "I?m in."''
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''"Exploiting werewolf law in a life or death situation against opponents with everything to gain." He chuckled and offered his hand, "I?m "I'm in."''
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* EnthusiasmVersusStoicism - It definitely wouldn?t stretch credibility to see this as the relationship between Greg and Tony Tony. Look at the start of [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/2009/04/15/the-wolfs-will-scene-004/ this]] scene to see what I mean.
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* EnthusiasmVersusStoicism - It definitely wouldn?t wouldn't stretch credibility to see this as the relationship between Greg and Tony Tony. Look at the start of [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/2009/04/15/the-wolfs-will-scene-004/ this]] scene to see what I mean.
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* TaughtByExperience - Given as a reason for Derek?s [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/2009/04/15/demonic-symphony-scene-029/ continued survival]]
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* TaughtByExperience - Given as a reason for Derek?s Derek's [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/2009/04/15/demonic-symphony-scene-029/ continued survival]]
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There are two Novels on the website at the moment; serialising daily, plus a Twitterbook also serialising daily.
* [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/the-wolfs-will/ The Wolf's Will:]] A newspaper editor attempts to exploit werewolf law for profit; he knows what he's letting himself in for, his travelling companions really don't.
* [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/demonic-symphony/ Demonic Symphony:]] Two underprepared Demon Hunters find themselves way in over their heads; many ugly cars are wrecked.
* [[http://twitter.com/Ulysses_Perhero The ongoing adventures of Ulysses Perhero:]] A casual Twitterbook about a HeroicSociopath
* [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/the-wolfs-will/ The Wolf's Will:]] A newspaper editor attempts to exploit werewolf law for profit; he knows what he's letting himself in for, his travelling companions really don't.
* [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/demonic-symphony/ Demonic Symphony:]] Two underprepared Demon Hunters find themselves way in over their heads; many ugly cars are wrecked.
* [[http://twitter.com/Ulysses_Perhero The ongoing adventures of Ulysses Perhero:]] A casual Twitterbook about a HeroicSociopath
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There are two Novels on the website at the moment; serialising serializing daily, plus a Twitterbook also serialising serializing daily.
* [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/the-wolfs-will/ The Wolf's Will:]] A newspaper editor attempts to exploit werewolf law for profit; he knows what he's letting himself in for, histravelling traveling companions really don't.
* [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/demonic-symphony/ Demonic Symphony:]] Twounderprepared under-prepared Demon Hunters find themselves way in over their heads; many ugly cars are wrecked.
* [[http://twitter.com/Ulysses_Perhero The ongoing adventures of Ulysses Perhero:]] A casual Twitterbook about aHeroicSociopath
HeroicComedicSociopath
* [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/the-wolfs-will/ The Wolf's Will:]] A newspaper editor attempts to exploit werewolf law for profit; he knows what he's letting himself in for, his
* [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/demonic-symphony/ Demonic Symphony:]] Two
* [[http://twitter.com/Ulysses_Perhero The ongoing adventures of Ulysses Perhero:]] A casual Twitterbook about a
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* SignificantAnagram - [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/2009/04/15/the-wolfs-will-scene-009/ Mr. Ian Woon]] is an anagram of NaNoWriMo, this also counts as a ShoutOut
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* SignificantAnagram - [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/2009/04/15/the-wolfs-will-scene-009/ Mr. Ian Woon]] is an anagram of NaNoWriMo, [=NaNoWriMo=], this also counts as a ShoutOut
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* NaNoWriMo - [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/the-wolfs-will/ The Wolf's Will]] was written as part of this
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* NaNoWriMo UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo - [[http://becomingabetterwriter.wordpress.com/becoming-a-better-writer/the-wolfs-will/ The Wolf's Will]] was written as part of this
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It's possible to see the quality of the writing improve not only between books but actually within the books themselves. That said, while there are definitely some nice touches, this is definitely a case of YourMileageMayVary.
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It's possible to see the quality of the writing improve not only between books but actually within the books themselves. That said, while there are definitely some nice touches, this is definitely a case of YourMileageMayVary.
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